ff: pyar....... hota kya hain? update pg. 3, 1/27

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Posted: 16 years ago
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im starting a new ff, this one is different from my other one (i actually have a name for this one😆)
its about two people (shubh and aastha) who have to get married becasue of some circumstances. they don't love each other, they don't even know each other.
this is a ff of their journey together will they fall in love?
to find out read pyar....... hota kya hain?
shubh ranawat- 26 years ol. he is a very strict businessman, he beilieves that love doesn't exist because of his brother's failure in nlove. he used to be a very fun guy, but his mother's death caused him to lose his smile. he has to get married becasue of some circumstances, loves his brother and father a lot
aastha joshi- 25 years old. she is a very independent person. she had to get a job right after she finished college and took the first job she could find, because her father was diagnosed with cancer. she loves her father and sister dearly, she doesn't really think about herself becasue her father and sister mean the world to her. she works for vanraj
mahi joshi- 22 years old- aastha's younger sister, wants to help her sister with the responsibilities of the house but aastha wants mahi to continue college and be sucessful.
prenendu joshi- aastha and mahi's father, wants to see his daughter aastha settled before he dies, and he knows that she will take care of mahi
vanraj ranawat- very nice father. looking for the perfect girl for his son, shubh. he wants a girl who will make his son believe in love
swayam ranawat- 28 years old- he was betrayed in love by payal, he trys to act like he is happy around his family, but absolutly refuses to get married and his father understands what his son is going through so he doesn't pressurize him
shabd ranawat- 24 years old. he is the youngest of the ranawats and his family means everything to him he is helping his father look for a girl for shubh. he is very fun-loving, nice, cute, loves to play pranks, but very good
so what do you guys think?
this post took me a long time to make
i had to try 4 times to make this, because i accidently hit back and everything was erased so i had given up but i tried 1 last time and i was sucessful!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#2
this seems very interesting,
and this one has a name.....lolz
😆
i like it
it has a different feelin to it........

can't wait for the first part

⭐️
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-luv esha!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shubh_astha4eva

this seems very interesting,
and this one has a name.....lolz
😆 i know huh, but i suck at titles even when im writing an essay
i like it
it has a different feelin to it........

can't wait for the first part

⭐️
⭐️
-luv esha!

😳

i think ill update the first part tmrw

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Posted: 16 years ago
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FANTASTIC YAAR.PLZ CONTINUE SOON.THIS FF IS 2 NICE.PLZ PM ME WHEN U UPDATE.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Happy Thanksgiving everyone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So I was kicked out of the kitchen by all of my aunts, and since I have nothing to do, I thought I'd update

So it starts off with a girl walking inside a big building, she makes her way up to her office.

Van: good morning Aastha

A: good morning sir

Van: so what's on the agenda for today

A: well u have a few meetings, and that's about it

Van: well that's good, my son Shabd is going to come by today, so can u let me know when he comes

A: of course sir

--------------------- a little while later-----------------------

We see a man walking into vanraj's office, he goes up to Aastha

Guy: hi

Aastha: hello, do u have a meeting?

Guy: well I didn't think that I'd need a meeting to see my own father

A: oh im so sorry sir, u can go right on in

Guy: thanks, by the way im shabd, not sir I feel old if u call me that

A: right sir, I mean Shabd

After meeting Aastha Shabd starts to think of something'''..

Sha: hey dad what's going on

V: arre Shabd, come in

Shabd walks in and sits down

V: so how do u think we should start looking for a match for Shubh

Shabd: no need to look dad, I found the perfect girl for bhaiya

V: what who?

Sha: don't worry dad, u know her

V: who is it

Sha: come here

They walk over to the window of the office, and look out and Shabd points to Aastha

Sha: dad I think she would be perfect for bhaiya

V: ya son, I think ur absolutely right. Aastha beti is a very good girl, she is very cultured and very caring

Sha: yea and she's perfect for my brother

V: thik hai, I will talk to her father

Sha: all right dad, im gonna go, see u at home

V: k beta, u made my job very easy thanks

Sha: no problem dad

Shabd walks out of the office and stops by Aastha's desk

Sha: bye

Aastha: good bye Shabd

Sha: good u remembered

Aastha smiles: of course, I wouldn't want to make u feel old by calling u sir, waise u can call me Aastha

Shabd: ya sure, bye (thinks: no I think ill be calling u something else)

--------------------- a little while later----------------------

V: Aastha u can take the rest of the day off

Aas: wow thanks sir, but what about all the work

V: don't worry beti, its ok, come ill drop u off

A: no sir that's all right

V: no not at all, I need to speak to ur father

A: my father? But why?

V: don't worry, nothings wrong, lets go

Aastha is worried, but she doesn't say anything and they reach her house

A: papa? Where are u?

Aastha's dad comes out

A: papa meet my boss

P: Namaste

V: Namaste

P: Aastha apne boss ke liye chai bana lo

A: ji papa

V: wo, main aap se yaha apki beti ka haath mangne aaya hoon apne bte Shubh ke liye

P: j-j-ji?

V: ji mujhe Aastha beti bohat pasand hai aur mujhe lagta hai ki woh mere bte ke liye bilkul sayi choice hai

P: ji lekin dehej''.

V: ji nahi, there will be no dehej, hume sirf aapki beti chaiye

P: Well I don't mind, but I want to ask to Aastha first

V: no problem, kal aap mujhe bata dena

Aastha comes with chai

V:ji aab mein chalta hoon

P: think hai main aapko kaal baata do ga

V leaves

P: Aastha beti I need to talk to u

A; ji pap

P: beti vanraj-ji apne bte ke liye tumara haath magne aaye the

A: kya

P: yes beti and I think that u should say yes, woh bohut ache hain aur tum bhi wahan bohut kush raho gi

A: but papa, what about u and mahi

P: don't worry about us, im going to die soon aur mahi apna kyal rakh sakti hai

A: nahi papa main mahi ko akela mahi chordungi

P: Aastha tume meri kasam tum is rishte se inkar nahi karogi

A (crying): thik hai papa, and she goes to her room

p is happy because he knows that his daughter will be happy and will be settled down

the next day:

P calls V and tells him that Aastha has agreed

V: that's great, ill tell Shubh and we will come over for the ring ceremony tomorrow

P: but that's way to soon

V: don't worry, I want my son to get married fast

They hang up and vanraj goes to talk to Shubh

V: Shubh I have fixed ur marriage

Shu: dad u must be joking

V: no son I am serious

Shu: but dad I don't want to get married

V: dekho Shubh, it is my wish that u start living ur life again, and im sure this marriage will help u

Shu: but dad'''.

V: u will listen to me Shubh, I have already agreed to this marriage and im sure that ur mother would've wanted this for u, if not for me then do it for ur mother

Shu: thik hai dad

V: ok then be ready tmrw at 12, for the engagement

S: fine dad

The next day

Shubh and his family arrive at aastha's house (the ceremony was only going to be with the two families)

Aastha comes down looking very radiant, but Shubh barely notices her

They exchange rings, and are officially engaged

Both are sitting next to each other, but not talking because neither want to get married

Sha: hey bhabhi u are sitting here

A: looks confused because no one has called her bhabhi before

Sha: come on bhabhi lets dance

A smiles: nahi mujhe dance nehi karna aatha

Mahi comes over and sits next to Aastha

M: what lies, u dance very well

A: haan Mahi but I don't feel like dancing

M: fine di, I wont pesture u anymore, jiju why don't u come and dance with us

Shu: no im fine, u guys go

Sha: understand mahi-ji my brother wants to be alone with bhabhi, (winks) right bhai

Shu: no its nothing like that

M: don't worry jiju we understand

And Mahi and Shabd leave , and Aastha and Shubh are just sitting there awkwardly again

Pretty soon Shubh and his family leave and Aastha retires to her room, but before sleeping she starts to think about Shubh and how it didn't seem like he wanted to get married either, she decides that she should tell him tomorrow that she's only doing this for her father

*************note *************

the wedding is going to go by really fast, because its not really going to be about the wedding

love

raji
Edited by rkath - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: anaswara

FANTASTIC YAAR.PLZ CONTINUE SOON.THIS FF IS 2 NICE.PLZ PM ME WHEN U UPDATE.

hey thanks for the comment
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Posted: 16 years ago
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the next day aastha still goes to work and vanraj sees her
v: beti what r u doing here?
a: sir this is where i work
v: dekho aastha beti, now u r getting married so u don't have to work anymore, and it not sir, u can call me papa
a: lekin papa, i want to work after marriage, i have to look after my sister and my father
v: wow beti, im impressed, even after marriage u won't forget about ur sister, but instead of working for me i want u to work for shubh
a: lekin papa???
v: dekho beti, i have agreed to allow u to work, but i want u to work with shubh, so that the two of u can stay together
a: ji papa
v: beti tell ur father that im coming over today with the pandit to fix a date for the wedding
a: ji
(there is a knock at the door)
v: come in
shabd: hey dad what's up
v: wow shabd tum aur office mein?
shabd: don't get to excited dad, i just came here to visit my bhabhi
a: hi shabd, kaise ho?
shabd: great bhabhi
v: thik hai now that u're here can u take aastha to shubh's cabin and tell him that now aastha will work with him
shabd: great idea dad, of course i will
shabd: after u ma'am
a: thanks
while walking:
a: shabd, how come u don't come to the office to help ur dad and ur brothers
shabd: come on bhabhi, i dont like all this work stuff
a: dekho shabd i wont tell u what to do with ur life, but wouldn't ur dad be happy if his son was to take his responsibility
shabd: i'll think about it bhabhi, look here's bhai's cabin, let's go in
shabd: hey bro what's going on
shu: arre shabd, ur in the office?
shabd: why i cant come?
shu: of course u can in fact i think u should join with us
shabd: woh bhai, im not here to join , i just wanted to show my bhabhi her new work place
shu: what?
shabd: ya dad has decided that bhabhi will work with u now
shabd: bhabi come inside
aastha slowly walks in her payal making a nice tinkling sound
shabd: k then ill leave, bye bro, bye bhabhi
a: bye shabd
shu: bye
shabd leaves and there is an awkward silence between shubh and aastha
shubh: umm why don't u take the day off today and then ill have something for u to do tomorrow
a: ji thik hai
shubh:(thinking if he should tell her that he doesn't really want to get married)
shubh: woh aastha, umm i wanted to tell u something
a: ji
shubh: its about our wedding, umm.... the thing is that....
the phone rings
shubh: hello
shubh: ok ill be there immediately
he hangs up
shubh: i've gotta go, ill see u tmrw
a: ji bye
later that day
the pandit looks over the horoscopes of aastha and shubh
pandit: shaadi ka mahahurat parso ke liye bahut accha hai
pre: lekin itni jaldi
pandit: aisa mahurat phir nahi aayega
v: if its that good then i think that we should fix the wedding for the day
pre: jiase app thik samjhe
v: thik hai tho kaal sangeet, mehendhi, aur haldi ki rasam hogi, aur parso shaadi
pre: ji thik hai
mahi and aastha hear this from upstairs and mahi is very excited, but also sad that her sister will leave her
mahi: di aap mujhe visit karenge na
a: of course, how can i not come and visit u?
mahi puts her head on aastha's lap
mahi: di im really going to miss u
a: i am going to miss u too (starts to get tears in her eyes)
mahi: no crying di
a smiles: thik hai, no crying today
mahi: come lets go shopping, i have to buy something to wear for the wedding, and u have to go and choose a sherwani for jiju
a: what r u talking about?
mahi: ya di, shabd and i decided that jiju will choose ur wedding outfit and u will coose jiju's
a: what, and u didn't say anything to me
mahi: o come on di, i told u now right so come on, we have to meet shabd and jiju at the mall
a: thik hai chal
mahi: come on di at least dress up a little, ur going to go n meet jiju
a: come on mahi u know i don't like stuff like this, so then just come on
mahi: fine di
im ending there
next update wil be the wedding, but what will happen during the suhaag raat
read to find out
if anyone wants me to send them a pm. plzz tell me and i will
luv raji
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey I luved it!

This ff ha a different touch

And I like it!

Continue plz!

Luv esha

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Posted: 16 years ago
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okay im very very very sorry

i know u must be mad, but i promise to update some time this week, and during winter bresk
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Posted: 16 years ago
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(Ok so I know they were headed to the mall, but I don't know what to write so I guess we can call it a blooper!!)

---------------------the wedding day---------------------

Shubh is standing in his room getting dressed, and Shabd comes in

Sha: hey bro, ready??

Shu: almost

Sha: wow I had heard that women take long to get ready for their wedding, but now I am seeing a guy take this long, I think that u might have broken the record for the men.

Shu: shut up Shabd, warna ek dhoonga

Sha: I was just joking, but I guess u should take this time to get dressed, after all u don't get married every day

Shu: look Shabd u know that I don't want to get married, but because of dad''''''.

Sha: look bro, I know that bhahbi will change ur mind about marriage, just give it a chance

Shu: look Shabd'''.let's just forget it, r u ready

Sha: (thinks: don't worry bhai, im going to make sure that u n bhahbi r together, and that's a promise) smiles: ya let's go

They go downstairs, and they see that Shubh's chachi and chachu are there

Sha: hey sexy, I didn't think u would make it

Chachi: tujhe maaroongi, is that how u talk to elders

Sha: who's the elder here, waise I think that there is a bhudha standing behind u

Chachu: hey mere hi saamne ur flirting with my wife!!

Sha: look, the bhudha is talking

Chachu: Shabd!!!

Sha: ok ok sorry, but when did u arrive, and where's my sweet lil' sis

Divya: right here bhai, look they've made me the bag carrier

Sha: hey come give me a hug

(they hug)

Shu: hey what about me

Div: who can forget u bhaiyu, but u defiantly forgot me huh, u didn't even invite me to ur engagement

Shu: im sorry lil sis

Div: its ok, waise where swayam bhaiya and thauji

Swa: right here

So everyone meets each other and they get ready to leave

(divya is divyanka tripathi from dulhaan)

(I don't know who is the chachu and chachi, but if u need to paint a pic ill find someone soon)

The bharat leaves from the house

Div: so Shabd who is bhaiyu marrying

Sha: don't wprry u'll meet her soon and I know ull love her, sfter all it was my choice

Div: great now im regretting it

Sha: hey!!!

Div: just kidding

So they reach aastha's house

Everyone is introduced to prenendu and Mahi

Div: can I go and see my bhabhi

M: sure u can come with me

Chachi: mujhe bhi aana hai

M: ji chaliye

They go into aastha's room

Div: aww she's so pretty, man Shabd was right, I guess the duffer is good at something

Chachi: Divya!

Div: what, its true, ok baba sorry

Aastha is confused: ji aap?

Chachi: main Shubh ki chachi aur yeh meri beti

Aastha gets up and touches chachi's feet

Chachi: jeeti raho, here these are bhabhi's kangans and she wanted me to give them to her bahu, im sure if she had been here today, she would've been delighted to see her son getting married, im glad that my Shubh is marrying such a sweet girl

Aastha: ji thanks

Div: mama don't get so emotional now, let's go downstairs

----------------a little later-----------------

Pandit: kanya ko buliyeh

Mahi and Divya bring Aastha down and Shubh looks back at her and can't stop staring because she looks divine, he soon snaps out of it, but is confused as to what was happening to him

The wedding rituals happen, and soon they are pronounced husband and wife

Then its time for the bidaai

P: beta meri beti ka dehyan rak na, she is very dear to me, please if she does anything wrong don't hold it against her

Shu: don't worry papa

Sha: ya don't worry uncle, we'll take extra care of my bhabhi

Aastha: (crying) Mahi tum aapna kyal rakna, and make sure papa takes his medicine on time

M: (crying) don't worry di, ill take care here, u take care of urself and don't forget me

Aastha: how could i?

Div: bhabhi chalien?

M: bye di, see u tmrw

Aastha: bye Mahi

They leave and reach the ranawat house

Chachi does the aarthi of Shubh and Aastha, then Aastha knocks over the rice kalash, and dips her feet in the red water thing (sorry I don't know the name of it), and she walks into her new house

Now Divya and Shabd take over

Div: ok so now we r going to play some games, bhabhi u sit here, and bhaiyu u sit across from bhabhi

Shu: come on Divya im tired

Div: bhaiyu please, I know what u want, but first u have to play some games after all u have the rest of the night to urself (winks) right shabd

(when she says that both Shubh and Aastha get awkward, because they haven't told each other that they didn't want to get married)

Sha: of course

div: ok so im dropping this ring in the milk and whoever finds it first will be the ruler of the house

Aastha and Shubh look for it and their hands touch, both look up at each other and pull their hands away, Aastha finally finds the ring and everyone cheers

Sha: aww u lost bro, that's too bad

Chachi: ok it very late, let's let them go in their room

Divya takes Aastha up to the room and seats her down on the bed

Div: have fun bhabhi (winks and leaves the room)

Meanwhile Aastha is feeling nervous; now what do I do, I have to tell Shubh that i didn't want to get married

Shubh walks into the room and he sees Aastha sitting on the bed

He sighs, and Aastha looks up at him

Aastha: woh mujhe aapse'.k-kuch b-baat karne th-thi

Shu: I need to say something to

Aastha: go ahead

Shubh: look Aastha I know u must expect a lot from someone that u just married, and I know what I am going to say to u might be some thing that u don't want to hear on ur wedding night, but I have to tell u that I didn't want to get married, I did it for dad's happiness and for my mother. My dad wanted me to be happy and im grateful for that, but I don't think I was ready for marriage. I know u must be mad, as to why I didn't tell u before, but im really sorry

Aastha: I understand, in fact I feel the exact same way, I only got married to make my dad happy

Shubh: thanks u made me feel a lot better, how about we get some sleep now

Aastha: but how? I mean''''.

Shubh: don't worry u can take the bed and ill take the couch

Aastha: no its ur room, ill take the couch

Shubh: no Aastha please, u take the bed

Aastha: ok

That's all for now, I know everyone must be pissed at me, but ive been very busy, but I will update more often thanks to winter break, and anyways I cant stand what's happening in the show right now I just hate it

I will be updating my other ff tomorrow morning

Love raji

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