FF- A Tear in the Wind, Ch 19 & Epilogue pg 44 - Page 35

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Tin,
Really realistic story, I liked more as read it each day. Compromise is what makes us more strong and compassionate with other people, so I think some compromises are worth making...thanks for writing this story, to you and your team!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hay tin'
Yesterday i ahd guessed u would end the story tomorrow and same thing happened but doesnt matter as u will write another one. HEe he
THank u very much
everyday i learn new thing fron ur stories that what life is?
thank u
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey great end....i luved the story!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Beautiful ending.............👏
Ehsaas...........nice nice..............😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Tiny,
In my last comment I said I really didn't like this JW with all his compromises, especially since it always seemed to be at Bani's expense.
But his explanation that Pia got the hand me down man made me sad for Pia - what a shock. She was a good character in this story and it made me realize that through no deed of her own she was married to a man who didn't love her. I didn't even see it from that point of view before.
It made me see this whole story in a different light of how easy it is to be manipulated by those you love and to compromise your own happiness for those you love. I'm sorry that it ended so soon,
Congratulations to you and your wonderful team. Looking forward to your next ff.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Tiny,

Great update!! 👏👏I don't have any problem with the ending n I liked it! First of all if I was Bani I wouldn't have married him….. if you love a person n if that person is giving you wrong signals( I mean he also gives you an impression he has feelings for you) then marries someone , I'll surely get hurt n then forget everything n move on with my life but if his wife dies n if I'm asked to marry him again n look after his child, its my choice to marry him or not….If he doesn't care about my feelings why should I care?....I simply reject it…let him find someone else for his child….This is my POV…. according to Bani he married pia(for whatever reasons) n moved on, that means he didn't have any feelings for her when he married pia….. So what is the meaning of marrying such a person after his wife's death? She didn't know why he married pia….I agree, we all are human n make mistakes…here he is not wrong in marrying pia since jb haven't expressed their love before his marriage to pia, their love was not so deep n he was not committed to bani, so I'm not blaming him for marrying pia but he could've explained everything to her before getting married to bani……Anyway here, JB are married, consummated their marriage, cleared up their problems n love each other, I think this is the best ending to this story…..…In real life, we don't always get what we want, so there is nothing wrong in compromising for your loved ones n moving on ….Here, if Bani can forgive n love him, then we don't have any problems…..let them live happily…thanks to you n your team for writing this story! I enjoyed reading it! Hope you start another one…

Ammu.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Ammukutty

Tiny,

Great update!! 👏👏I don't have any problem with the ending n I liked it! First of all if I was Bani I wouldn't have married him?.. if you love a person n if that person is giving you wrong signals( I mean he also gives you an impression he has feelings for you) then marries someone , I'll surely get hurt n then forget everything n move on with my life but if his wife dies n if I'm asked to marry him again n look after his child, its my choice to marry him or not?.If he doesn't care about my feelings why should I care?....I simply reject it?let him find someone else for his child?.This is my POV?. according to Bani he married pia(for whatever reasons) n moved on, that means he didn't have any feelings for her when he married pia?.. So what is the meaning of marrying such a person after his wife's death? She didn't know why he married pia?.I agree, we all are human n make mistakes?here he is not wrong in marrying pia since jb haven't expressed their love before his marriage to pia, their love was not so deep n he was not committed to bani, so I'm not blaming him for marrying pia but he could've explained everything to her before getting married to bani??Anyway here, JB are married, consummated their marriage, cleared up their problems n love each other, I think this is the best ending to this story?..?In real life, we don't always get what we want, so there is nothing wrong in compromising for your loved ones n moving on ?.Here, if Bani can forgive n love him, then we don't have any problems?..let them live happily?thanks to you n your team for writing this story! I enjoyed reading it! Hope you start another one?

Ammu.

Dear Ammu,
Given a choice, I would also not have married a person like that!! Definitely not.... I agree with you totally. Bani knew why Jai Walia married Pia - for money it was obvious and she was upset as he was giving some other signals to her before he got committed to Pia....Bani did not want to marry him, she was forced to marry him. Then she thought about divorce and many other things....My story starts from that point..., we think something and end up doing something else, our confusion, compromise, adjustment and love....Tin
Edited by tintiny - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Dear Tiny,

Thanks for the reply…I appreciate your POV… since I grew up in a diff atmosphere with freedom n support from my parents, I didn't look at things this way….You are probably right ….women in those circumstances might behaved the way you've described Bani in your story....

Keep writing…As usual, look forward to your stories…

Ammu.

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