~~RM ff Jeenay Kay Ishaarey Mil Gaye~~

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Intro: this is a story set in modern day Mumbai where Rahul and Muskaan are not at all strangers to one another in fact life has always worked out so that they always end up running in to each other. Rahul and Muski first met on a flight to Switzerland at the time they had just finished their MBBS and both of them had decided to take a euro trip with their respective best friends'

FLASHBACK

Muski looking out the airplane's window scared as anything since one of her worst fears was flying as this was her first time her best friend Ridihima or Ridzi was right next to her to make sure her very own Punjabi kudi wouldn't go and create a scene in front of everyone yet again and prevent the flight to take off'

Muski: Ridz.. main' papaji' mujhay toh bahut daar lag raha hain'
Ridz: Muski chill yaar' toh bhi na'

Muski: arrey yaar toh nahi shamjhay gee' main na' bahut dartey hoon iss plane shalane say'

Ridz: Lakin kyun?

Muski: Oye! Who maine final destination dekhe thi na who plane jab crash hota hain na toh.. Hai rabba' sab khatam'

Ridz: Muski who toh sirf aik movie thi yaar' aur who sab kuch saach nahi hota..

Muski: Lakin ridz main kehrahi hoona' (verge of crying)

Ridz: Muski jaa toh aisa kar restroom mein ja kar fresh hoja' shayad tension kam hojai.

Muski: Haan yeh theek hain.. (gets up worried but then decides to be calm about it)

*** As our muski was on her way to chill couple of seats behind hers were a group of cute and eligible bachelors who were ready to take on the adventure and thrill of their lives since they were always busy in MBBS and studies they never really had the chance to get out of India but finally they had graduated and with their respective titles as Dr. Rahul, Dr.Armaan, Dr. Atul, and two go alongers who were just there Prem and Raj***

Armaan: Yaar yeh atul ko kya hogaya hain.. he is like randomly chanting something..

Rahul: Oye huye! Phir shuru hogaya yeh'

Armaan: Oh acha shamajh gaya' 'his prayers' hahahhahah

Rahul: hey.. SHHHhh woh sun lay gay na toh puri flight tujhay 'reasoning' deta rahey ga.

Prem: Armaan yaar hum ja kaha rahey hain?

Armaan: (looks at rahul who looks at atul who looks at Raj who looks at armaan)' umm I guess jahan yeh zindagi lay jai' dost but worry not we'll have fun..

Rahul: yeah fun' guys we have got everything na? passports and tickets and connecting flight info.. by the way yeh Raj ko kya hua hain? (inquires as he sees him searching 4 some1)

Raj: Abey rahul main yahi hoon (still looking ahaead) aur mujhay kuch hua nahi hain who I was Checking koi kudi dekhey toh safar acha ghuzarta'

Armaan: acha'. Toh who hain na humarey peechay'

*** all the guys turn around anxiously to see 'WHO' is it and see an old lady with a puppy in her hand saying 'choochiikoo sweetu'''

Raj, Karan, & Rahul: ARMAAN!!! Paka mat'.

Rahul: ok guys all settle.. oh ghawd main apna lap top bag air hostess cabin main choor aya hoon I'll be right back'

*** seat # 24A and seat #40C both were taken by two complete strangers but at this time they were both empty as respective passengers were about to meet that one person who many never ever be a stranger to one another' muski walking towards R.R and Rahul towards the cabin And suddenly there is a crash'. No not a plane crash but a Rahul muski Clash .. and even GOD knew as the plane experienced Turbulence that they are bound to create trouble from then on every time they met sorry 'clash' everyone knew it was no ordinary meeting'***

Muski: Haiyo Rabba'

Rahul: Oh! Woah iam really very sorry' I had no clue

Muski: Oye dekh kar nahi chal sakta' aik toh takkar mardey aur phir uppar say sorry bol kar achaey baaney ki koshish kar rahey hoon'

Rahul: Dekhay.. na toh maine takkar jaan kar maari hain aur na mujhay acha baaney ki koshish karni ki zaroorat hain because iam acha so plz madam mind it ..

Muski: Oye.. mind karegi meri Patiala ki Shaahi Joti'aur yeh naatak band karo aur mujhay raasta doon jaaney kay liye' saara din nahi hain meray pass.

Rahul: Oh plz' (he moves aside and shows her the way)

Muski; (to herself) Pata nahi kya samajh ta hai apney app ko.. yeh boys hootey hee aissay hain..

Rahul: (moving ahead to himself) Uff, kuch zayada he nahi hain yeh Ms. Over' aur Patiala.. and shahi Joti wow' this plane has some interesting people' Rahul ab chal'

*** As muski came back to her respective seat ridz was shocked to see her angry all her nervousness and fear was gone replaced by her famous Punjabi galiyyan and mumbling**

Muski: Khota' ulla da phatta.. sari shirt kharab kardi'

Ridz: Muski kya hua' why are you so angry?

Muski: oye! Toh jaanti nahi iss flight main kaisey kaisey loog hain maine kaha than a I hate planes.

Ridz: Bas Muski chill acha dekh Switzerland a tour brochure itni haseen jaga hain na yeh.

Muski: haan.. yaar.. wow yeh toh bahut he sundar hain

*** Here Muski and Ridz were enjoying and planning ahead about their vacation and there rahul had just reached his respective seat in quite a pissed off mood which caused his best buddy to inquire***

Armaan: hey rahooll.meray yar meray doost (tries to hug him but sees his mood and backs off)

Rahul: Paka mat' armaan ajj iss flight mein jaisey loog hain na.. I have had it

Atul: Kyun yaar kya hua? Is there any problem main help karo?

Rahul: nahi Atul its all ok' app plz just go back to sleep

Atul: You sure na. if you need me I am right here

**Armaan and rahul both look at eachother try and hold their laughter back until atul goes back to sleep**

Armaan: Yeh bhi na'

Rahul: Sala' 'if u need me'' hahhahha

*** Rest of the entire time during the flight both guys and gals were anxious to get to Switzerland and so the flight went on smoothly or atleast until rahul and muskaan reached the airport and missed the respective train that was supposed to take them to the nearest tour lodge where all of their friends had now gone without realizing that they are leaving two of their good friends behind**

Muski: Oye haio rabba' yeh kya hua.. ridzi, angie, aur sapna, aur mahi sab chal diye.. main kya karoongi akelay iss pardes mein.. papa jeee' mujhay bachana' choorogii nahi apni 'best friends' ko' Chal muskaan abb sambhaal apna samaan aur cha ab shayad tujhay akelay hee Switzerland dekhna parey'

*** Same station' but different side**

Rahul: what the hell man! Armaaan ko toh main chooro ga nahi yeh bhi koi baat hain' aii toh saath ghoomey thay abb mujhay ghumaa kar pata nahi kha chal diya.. aur who atul ka bacha.. isski toh' khair let it be rahul toh kahein bhi ho mast rehta hain' so lets go rahull'

*** Rahula and Muski both picked their bags up and were just about to figure out what to do next they yet again clashed in to each other' and this time our Mr. cool dude Rahul falls right on top of our Punjabi Kudi' ***

Muski: Ahhhh!!!

Rahul: Oh'..ahh

Muski: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH'. Get up.. uthoo.. off..

Rahul: (Closed his ears) haan main.. woh (people without realizing keep on walking causing rahul to stay down everytime he tries to get up he ends up falling down')

Muski: Help' someone' Yeh kya haina' Musibaat.. uthoo.. AHHHHHHHHH

Rahul: (Finally gets a chance to move but muski still screaming he puts his hand over her mouth brings her back to senses) dekho' ok' finally.. I am up.. I am'(he gets cut off before he even has the chance to apologize)

Muski: Oye toh shamjh ta kya hain apney app ko' you first class kay third class passenger tumhi thay na flight mein..dekho yeh tumhara mumbai nahi jhan jab dil kiya apni marzi thoop di' hum bhar hain Mumbai say toh tum apni yeh harkatey band karo aur agar zayada kuch kiya na toh yeh Patiala ki joti kabhi bhi kahein bhi uttar kar sheeday tumharey muoo per'.

Rahul: ok listen'you whatever your name is apni yeh conclusion meray barey mein especially merey baarey main toh change karoo kyunki nahe mein koi third class wait first class whatever it was ka passenger ho na he tum mera kuch bigaar sakti hoon'alright' and plz just stay the heck away from me'. Gahhh girls'Rahul walks off

Muski: (shouts at him) Haan Haan jaa ' teray ko kis ki zaroorat hain.. pata nahi khan say aya hain aur kya samajhta hain apney app ko'Hmmph! Bara ayya'

*** Couple of hours later' its dark and Muski is really tensed she is sitting outside the airport she has no clued how to get a taxi because they speak in some different language and every time she tries to say something people can't understand her' she is sitting there when suddenly couple of drunk guys walk towards her with of course bad intentions they start to bother her snatch her bag and stuff***

Muski: no! plz can I have it back'

Guy 1: come get it' babes..

Guy 2: yeah'

Muski: hai rabba.. abbkya karo main toh'(she starts to run in fearbut guys r still running behind her.. she bumps into someon yet again'and it's Rahul)

Rahul: (he understands what's going on says something in their language that means) Wifey.. you are here just because we had a fight doesn't mean you have to go back come on lets go..

(looks at the guy with Muski's bag) 'Oh hey yeah thanks I can have that back thanks again'(he gets the bag back and the guys go away while muskaan still hanging on to rahul and is a bit confused as she has no clue what he said and how come they gave them her bag back)

Rahul: (looks at muski and his jacket which she was holding on to way too tight) ahem' my jacket.. plz.. (she lets go and he starts to brush it off)

Muski: Who.. umm

Rahul: Thanks ki koi zaroorat nahi' it's..

Muski: Tumne kya kaha use jo ussney mera bag tumhey diya?

Rahul: (shocked and is thinking kya ladki hain main samjha thanks bole gii.. anyways) ummm.. maine kaha kay iss bag mein bomb hain aur' aur.. tum.. tum.. aik..

Muski: Main kya haan?

Rahul: Kuch nahi meri' maaa

Muski: Maa nahi Muskaan' hi I am muskaan, muskaan Chadda

Rahul: Hi I am bond, James Bond' HAHHHA' just kidding I am Rahul Garewal

Muski: hmm' theekh hain' woh thanks... tumne job hi kaha.. thanks

Rahul: Yeah no problem' waisey why were you..

Muski: Oye? Tujhey isse kya meri problem hain na'

Rahul: OK'wow main toh bas' anyways.. I guess I'll go now

*** Rahul picks his bag and is leaving just then muski realizes that if he leaves she won't ever be able to get back to her friends or anywhere for that matter she decides to stop him***

Muski: Oye! Rukh' I mean aik min (gathers her luggage which is really over)

Rahul: mujh se baat kar rahi hain app? (turns around in disbelief)

Muski: (Catches up to him almost breathless) nahi terey bhoot say'

Rahul: WELL then OK' (he keeps on moving)

Muski: Suno' I need help dekh nahi rahey meri halat buri horahi hain itna saara samaan

Rahul: oh ok'(picks up one of her bags) now ab bato what is your deal?

Muski: bas who hua yun kay.. meri doost aur main MMBS kay baad na chuttiyaan maanaey Switzerland jaarahey thay aur abb yhaan agaye hain and so what happened kay hum airport par kahein ghum hogaye aur who sab mujhay peechay choor kar khud pata nahi kehtay chal diye' mujhay bas first tour lodge tak jana hain' phir tum jaa saktey hoon'

Rahul: OH.. toh yeh khani hain'

Muski: Khani? Oye! Main tussi khani shani nahi suna rahi thi main waqi mein phass gai hoon aur mijhay koi zaroorat nahi hian tumhay koi khani sunasay ki' apney app ko zayada smart nahi shamajh na? shamjhay?

Rahul: Uff phir shuru hogai (muski keeps on arguing and rahul keeps on walking)

Muski: Aur tum?

Rahul: Main.. well I am no different than you' merey saath bhi kuch aisa he hua hain airport per main thoda peechay rah gaya aur doost agey nikal gaye.. waisey I am a doctor too, khan say phara hain?

Muski: Maine Mumbai University say lakin tujhay isse kya doctor hain iss ka yeh matlab nahi biodata jaan ley'

Rahul: Sorry.. main to sirf' never mind I guess you are right what would I care

Muski: (thinks to herself) kuch zayada bol diya shayad'

** Finally they reach a decent hotel and Rahul gets two rooms one for her and one for him he makes sure she gets to her room then goes back to his when muski stops him***

Muski: Suno tumharey paisey main lodge ja kar day doongi acha' aur'

Rahul: (This time he blurts it out) Your Welcome

Muski: Hain' 'WELCOME' kiss liye oye.. jaake soo ja aur yeh ehsan na jaata.. shamja..

Rahul: Yeah ok' whatever' jake suujaa PLZ..

*** Rahul and Muskaan both in their rooms thinking they will finally meet each other's friends and everything could be settled by tomorrow with these thoughts both slept safe and sound, until next morning when rahul was brutally awaked by Muski**

Muski: Oye khotey Darwazaa khool' 10 bajj rahey hain phirsay train miss karney hain kya?

Rahul:' Kuan hain' (yawning looks at the clock) abbey yaar.. late oh no!!

Muski: Darwazaa Khoooooool'

Rahul: Uff yeh khan see subha subha (Opens the door) aiiye..

Muski: Oye! Toh abhi tak tayaar nahi hua.. itni deer hogai hain aur toh hain kay ja jaldi kar

Rahul: yes mam..

***muski flips through some random magazines and rahul's goes in to change but forgets his shirt outside and does'nt know that muski would be right outside so he walks out in a towel ***

Muski: AHHHHHHH!! Khotey yeh kya

Rahul: what? Meir shirt bhar thi.. tum kya samjhi

Muski: main jo samjhi tujhay bataney kay liye waqt nahi hain abb chaley..

*** Both are out in the cold waiting for a lift back to station as they know it is far they start walking**

Muski: Bas abb bas' main thak gayi..

Rahul: Bas itni si deer mein jawab deh diya Tumhari Patiala ki joti nay.. (laughs)

Muski: (Angry run to him and point her finger to his face) dekho tum meri Patiala ki joti mein kuch nahi jaantey aur waisey bhi tumhay kaisey pata kaisay chala? Haan?

Rahul: Mujhay' bas yunhi tum pechaly 24 ghantoon mein atleast 24 baar mujhay dhamkey day chiuki hoon kay tum mujhay ussi say mar denay wali hoon'

Muski: Acha' kaha hoga.. whatever

Rahul: Ajeeb pagal ladki hain yeh kehti kuch hain karti kuch.. anyways'

Muski: (Spots a tour lodge bus) Rahul dekh yeh bus toh lodge ja rahi hain na..

Rahul: (looks at it and smiles) haan chal (he offer her hands to muski and she is confused but accepts it and they both run hand in hand towards the bus) Rukooo' Stop.. Stop Stop

*** They finally get inside the bus and make sure that this bus is going to the lodge**

Muski: Oye toh kya Olympics mein bhaagta hain kya (out of breath)

Rahul: (laughs) nahi lakin lagta hain to kabhi nahi bhagi

Muski: chup kar'

Rahul: yeh lo (offers her water)

Muski: nahi chaiyay

Rahul: Fines (Starts drinking it muski watche sits about to finish)

Muski: (snatches the water from rahul) ab kuch mujhay peenay daga ya khud hi

Rahul: (Rolls his eyes) ya whatever

***They reach the lodge and can see from far that their friends are already there, as they get off the bus both guys and gals approach them seeing muskaan girls run to her and guys to Rahul**

Ridz Hugs muski: Khan thi? Pata hain teri paji ko phone kay to itni excuses bani pari uff?

Anjie: yeah muski mujhayt pretend karana para key main tum hon? How do you speak Punjabi?

Sapna: ok guyz lets have her rest thank gai hogi

Ridz, Angie, and Sapna: yeah muskaan to inder ajaa jaldi say hum wahi hain

Muski: haan apna bad lay loon.. I'll just come

Rahul reaches his friends

Armaan: Oye! Tu khan tha aur yeh item

Atul: yaar toh theekh to hain?

Prem: yeah man we were worried..

Rahul: yeah right' guys tum loog kidhar chaley jaatey hoon huh? Phone tha lakin not even one call' dost kehtay hoon.. barey aii

Raj: Guys lets go rahul must be tired chal rahul samaan laykay inder ajaa

Rahul: Yeah guys I'll catch up

Armaan: haan who toh tujhay karna parey ga.. uss kudi kay baarey mein bhi..

**Both rahul and muski are on the bus they take their luggage and get off exchange formal smiles while trying to get the words right to say good bye**

Muski: so'

Rahul: yeah so

Muski: Thank you.. for everything

Rahul: Yeah ur welcome but I thought tum thank you kehti nahi hoon?

Muski: haan kehti toh nahi hoon lakin ajj keh diya tu zayada free mat hoon..

Rahul: (laughs) it was nice meeting you miss Patiala

Muski: kabhi ana Patiala.. toh tumhey batao gii lakin tum kyun aoogay ab hum kabhi nahi milney waaley

Rahul: umm.. pata nahi.. lakin yeh zindagi bahut lambi hain aur humarey pass waqt bahut zayada iss liye hum tum phir milenge..

*** Both shake hands and walk the opposite ways without turning back, they were there to enjoy with their friends and they did have the dream vacation but while having the time of their life they never thought of each other yet remembered one another and who knows after living this dream they might be together again.. kyunki yeh zindagi bahut lambi hain'***


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2

Jeenay Kay Ishaarey Mil gaye

*** 2 years later in Mumbai at a medical conference where India's most prominent Dr. Shashank Gupta is speaking and is out for a mission that requires him to find six best interns to intern at Sanjeevani and of course Muskaan, Ridhimaa, Anjali, Rahul, Armaan, and Atul are present in hopes of getting in to Sanjeevani. It's after the lecture when Muskaan hyper tensed gets up and starts to walk towards the list which has been posted couple of mins a go that has the names of the six lucky interns her friends had already rushed into the crowd but she is still trying to figure out if she should or should'nt**

Muski: Oye papaji… kya karao? Mera selection… nahi muskaan mushkil hain..( looks at the crowd and people) ufff kya hoga… main toh kabhi bhi nahi dekh pao gii(Walks in circles looking tensed)

Ridzi: Hey muskaan…Good news mera aur anjie ka selection hogaya. (HUGS)

Muski: (hugs her back but still tensed) acha angie kahan hain? Congratz bol na tha

Ridzi: Pata nahi.. main dekhti hoon, lakin tuney check kiya… tera naam?

Muski: nahi main who bas..

Ridzi: Oh ho.. Muski ja check kar main ajie ko dhoondti hoon ghum na ho ja.. (rushes to crowd)

Muski: Babaji… plz … iss bar.. meri sun layna… (eyes closed prays)

*** on the other hand Armaan and Atul are telling Rahul the same good news about them being selected and rahul who has his doubts is still standing at a distance and has not yet checked the list as well***

Atul: Yaar mujhay toh yakeen he nahi hota.. I mean main… wow….

Armaan: haan Champ…I can't believe it either… lakin kitna acha hogana we can all chill

Abey oye rahul tera kya hua? Check ki list

Rahul: nahi yaar yeh loog hatey toh na…(nervous and anxious tone)

Armaan: loog ya daar…

Atul: daar? Rahul tu daar raha hain yaar… koi baat nahi main ho na.. merey saath chal

( holds on to his arms sympathetically)

Rahul: Abey nahi yaar… main khud jao ga… lagta hain ab loog kuch hatey hain (looks forward)

Armaan: acha toh theek hain jaldi kar waisey he yeh jaga bahut boring hain.. lets go Champ

*** Both Armaan and Atul pat Rahul on the back and leave saying we'll be right outside now rahul is standing and thinking…***

Rahul: Chal rahul abb toh tu jaan lay apni kismet… dekhna na toh hain.. tu dekh le… uppar waley kuch acha he sooch kar rakhna merey liye (looks up and prays as well)

( Starts to walk towards the Bulletin Board)

*** Both Rahul and Muskaan walk towards the list and now are in front of it they stand and stare with confused expression and slowly start to scroll through it with their eyes… Muski points her finger to it and is searching down and rahul is just following it since he is so nervous he does'nt want to be the one to do the scrolling***

Muski: (to herself) Haiyo rabba! yeh list hain toh sirf chey namoon ki lakin bahut lambi….

Rahul: ( to himself) pata nahi mera naam hain bhi ya…

**Both muskaan and rahul have read their names and turn to each other stare and involuntary HUG… as if they have just won the hardest battle of all times***

Muski: Oye ajj main itni khush hoon itni khus ho kay kya bato

Rahul: Yeah main bhi… jaisey mera sapna pura hogaya hoon..

Muski: jaisey ajj yeh duniya meri hoon

Rahul: jaisey ajj mera din hooon.. meri zindagi mujh ko milli hoon

Muski: Jaisey.. (realizes that she is hugging someone that she doesn't know)

Rahul: (also finally gets over the moment and realizes the same)

Muski: (coming back to herself she pulls out of his arms) I.. am.. (looks at him and remembers)

Rahul: I am… (looks at her and remembers)

Muski: Arey… tum…tum yahan?

Rahul: You… tum yahan kaisey?

** Bulletin board near them falls down and they both look at it in confused expression**

Muski: (Laughs) yeh toh hona he tha

Rahul: haan kyunki jab bhi hum tum miltey hain kuch na kuch toh hata he hain…

Muski: Rahul right?

Rahul: haan naam tu suna he hoga… (show's off laughs)

Muski: Oye bas bas.. zayada free shree honey ki koi zaroorat nahi..

Rahuk: haan haan janta hoon teri Patiala ki shai joti

Muski: Tujhay yaad hain...? (is surprised how he remembers even she had forgotten)

Rahul: (surprised himself at how he seemed as if he knew her since forever) Haan who aisay he...

Muski: "Okay" rahein de… tub hi sanjeevaani join kar raha hain?

Rahul: Haan soocha tha kay main aur Sanjeevani do alag alag duniyaan hain…

Muski: maine bhi kuch aisa he soocha tha lakin chooda yaar zindagi hain kabhi apni kabhi kisski

Rahul: Tumharey kehnay ka matlab hain kay zindagi kabhi achi toh kabhi kachi pakki…

Muski: Haan haan wohi kuch… acha chal… chood… baad mein miltey hain..

Rahul: Baad mein kyun?

Muski: Oye kal shal orientation kay liye Sanjeevani mein.. tu kitna bhuudu hain… (knocks his forehead)

Rahul: Huh? Haan… yeah ok lakin tu rehti kahan….

Muski: Chal chal (sees ridzi and angie calling her from distance) mujhay jaana hain…

Rahul: Ok… bye (he stands there in a dazed sort of manner just watching her go)

*** next morning it's interns first day at Sanjevaani and all are excited and nervous as well. They all wake up and everyone seems to look for the best outfit, nice shirts, and matching accessories, ridz picks out a pink churidar while angie a pair of her fav jeans and cute top, Muski is more of a kurti jeans girl and her Patiala jewelry which suits her well… guys well they have their wardrobe Armi in jeans and contrasting double shirt looking cool in aqua blue Atul too has picked out a nice t shirt and pants to wear on his first day and Rahul who woke up late and had 5 mins to get ready threw on his jeans and his chocolate brown t shirt which looks pretty good for a five min to get ready type of a person… they all reach Sanjeevani and are now are in Locker room after a brief intro to each other they all get called to report to the nurse station***

Muski: Chalo… chalein… shruu hui nayi zindagi…

Atul: Haan yaaro chalo chalein.. hummm tummm

Armaan: ok guys lets roll and see what's next (looks at Ridz who thinks that he is a bit too much)

Ridz: Apke baad… (Annoyed expression)

Angie: this is gonna be a good day

Rahul: Sighs and walks off last

** Senior Doctor introduces everyone and says***

Dr. Kirti: Good morning interns… iam Dr kirti and app sab ko welcome karti hoon I'll be assigning you duty jiski app sab ko puri responsibility denay hogii…is that clear

ALL INTERNS: yes mam..

Dr kirti: so lets get started.. Dr. Armaan and Dr. Ridihima you guys pediatric ward Dr. Anjali and Dr. Atul OT assistant and Dr. Muskaan and Dr. Rahuk come with me I have an special assignment for you…

*** All intern gives up a thumbs up to one another and go on to their respective work place while muskaan and rahul are now following Dr.kirti to her cabin***

Dr Kirti: So Dr. Rahul and Dr. Muskaan app doono ko ajj hee sanjeevani choor kar jana ho ga

(Muski and rahul look at each other with "what did we do" looks)

Dr kirti: Interns don't worry appko medical camp per post kiya gaya haaan jahan they need two interns and other interns will be joining you soon app dono abhi he nikaly gay shimla is far and I expect you guys to reach there by night and this time app ko car sanjeevani de raha hain lakin driver ajj nahi aaya hain so you are on your own is that ok?

Rahul: yes… yes mam its fine

Dr kirti: Good… wahan pooch kar call kardegeyay ga (she leaves)

Rahul: Oye tujhsy kya hua hain.. aisey chup kyun hain

Muski: who yeh Dr kuch zayada he nahi lagrahi I mean awwaz dekhe hain aisey jaisy mereay papaji gussa kar rahey hoon… aur ankhein toh jaisey abhi kahlay mujhay

Rahul: (laughs) acha toh yeh sab note kasr rahi thi…

Muski: Nahi main toh ussey gapay lara rahu thi khotey

Rahul: Abey phir shuru hogai abb chal… jaldi nikalna hain

Muski: tujhay driving shriving to atti hain na…

Rahul: nahi.. main palne mein ata jata hoon.. abb chal late horaha hain

*** Both muskaan and rahul are now in the car and as rahul pushes the play button on this CD played to chill with some of his fav songs which include olden collection of olden times and muski makes a face looking back and forth from dc player to rahul's face until he finally notices**

Rahul: Arey babre tu toh churail nikali nhia nahi… bhootni (laughs)

Muski: Oye khutay main job hi hoon yujhay kya hua hain 14th century ki dukhi aatma…hehehhe

Rahul: Plz muskaan meray musiq collection per mat jaa…

Muski: nahi jaarahi bas yeh CD change kar rahi hoon..

Rahul: (stops the car and is about to stop muski when he touches her hand and feels something)

** Muski drops the CD and rahul realizes that he has been holding on to her hand for a while and so Muski feels awkward and she knows that she feels something as well but Rahul moves his hand quickly**

Rahul: Umm.. fine.. Ms.Patiala lakin lets make this work..

Muski: abb kya problem hain? (fixing her self)

Rahul: Addey raastey merey gaaney aadey raastey teray…

Muski: Haan haan dekhegay...

*** Puts on Yeh Ishq hai.. and sings along and does her very cute dance moves…and rahul watches in amazement as he has never met someone so happy and gallant so energetic soo refreshing… he stares at her for quite a while… and she notices and says…***

Muski: Oye Gaari rook.. abhi…

Rahul: (ConfuseD) Kyun kya hua..

Muski: Kaha na bas rook.. rahul stop the car…

Rahul: Ok fine.. (Thinks to himself kahein ussney dekh toh nahi liya kay main.. naraaz toh nahi)

Muski: (walks out of the car and streches) Oye.. rahul.. main gaadi mein behthay behtay bore hogai thi toh... iss liye

Rahul: (TO HIMSELF) tHANK GHAWD..main shamjha...

Muski: Oye chal toh whaan kharey kharey kya doosra India baana nay wala hain

Rahul: Nahi.. huh? kya..

Muski: (Laughs seeing hime soo confused) chal bhook lagi hain kuch khatey hain...

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PART 3

"Jeenay Kay Ishaarey Mill Gaye"

*** Muskaan points out a little dhaba and observes the cute little village type place while Rahul starts to check the car up since it's been running for so long**

Muskaan: (approaches the man cooking at the dhaba): Uncle ji saariyakaal

Uncleji: Jeetay rahey puttar.. ki haal chaal.. tussi barey kamzoor lagrahey hoon… kuch khavao gay..?

Muskaan: Jee uncle jee bhuk shuk toh lagi hai barey zooro kii… aur khusboo bhi changii aarahi hain…

Uncleji: (laughs) haanji puttar garam garam parhatey sharatey bana raha hoon.. kitney doon..

Muskaan: hmm.. wah uncle jee… bas aikk wada pahrata… (then remembers rahul) aisa karey doo wadey parahatey day de..

Uncle: puttar bari zayada bhook shook lagi hain?

Muskaan: Nahi who uncle jii main.. (thinks what should she call rahul).. maina apne "driver" kay liye bhi khana shana lay he layti hoon..

Uncleji: samjha puttar toh bhet yahi main abhi pharatey day saag vich lata hoon

**Muski turns around to see where rahul is and is surpeised to not see hima round she walks towards the car and sees rahul busy working on the car with his hood up he is tunning the engine… she walks over and asks him***

Muskaan: Oye! Abhi tak yahi hain… aur yeh kya toh doctor say mechanic kab bana?

Rahul: (looks up and is shocked to see muskaan standing with her jaw dropped and surprised) ab tujhay kya hua hain? Kya pwhlay kabhi mujhay dekha nahi ya meri shakal par kuch…

Muskaan: kuch nahi bahut kuch (she takes out a small mirror from her purse and puts in front of rahul)

Rahul: (Looks at the mirror and realizes the charcoal from the engine is on his face) ahhh! Muskaan teray pass koi…

Muskaan: (hands him tissue without him even asking for it and starts to laugh)

Rahul: hahhaha… kya haan rahi hain.. toh haan… bata nahi sakti thi

Muskaan: nahi.. kyunki Bandar ki shakal aisi hi hoti hain iss main batanay wali kya baat hain..(LAUGHS)

Rahul: Tuney mujhay badar bola teri toh… (looks at his dirty hands and runs with them behind muskaan)

Muski: Oye Rahull nahi.. apnay kaaley haath apney pass rak.. (still running)

Rahul: nahi nahi main toh Bandar hjoon na… aur yeh Bandar tujhay nahi choorey ga..

Muski: Rahul….nahi ..(she is running so fast that she doesn't see unclejii coming with the food tray and clashes with him getting all the food and oil on her clothes)

Muski: Hayeo Rabba.. meray kapprey… saarey kharab hogai…

Uncle: Oye huye puttar toh theek hain na…

Muski: Unclejii main toh theek hoon lakin meray kaprey… (eipe soff stuff)

Rahul: (Laughing) abb kuan hain Bandar yahan per…

Muski: Oye tu chup kay (serious and angry) teri wajah say yeh sab kuch hua hain baat na kar mujhsay..

Uncleji: acha puttar toh yeh tera Driver hain…

Muski: (realizes if rahul finds out she told uncleji he is her driver he will not spare her) uncleji sab chooro… batana zara bath room kahan hain…

Uncleji: (points at a little cottage type building and says) "puttar meri beti hain waha Sonui tu ussey kaprey lay lay aur yeh waale dayde who saaf kar kay lutaday gii.."

Muski: jee acha uncleji…

Rahul: (offers her his hand) chal aja

Muksi: (looks at his hand then him and gets up on her own) rahen day…aur ja yahan say..

Rahul: (looks disappointed and slowly takes his hand away… while watching muski leave)

**Muski goes inside the cottage and finds Soni who is a nice girl and hjelps muski out by giving her clothes which are Patiala shalwaar suit with short shirt it's look really cool on muskaan as blue suits her very well she changes and cleans herself up.. while Rahul is totally lost as he is thinkinh "kya who mujhsay saach mein naraaz hain.. aur galti bhi toh merit hi na… yeh maine kya kiya.. uska dil tood diya…"

He goes and sits on one of the dhaba takhat's… Muskaan is now coming out of the cottage after thanking Soni for being soo nice.. rahul sees her coming at first he doesn't recongnize her then he is lost in her as she looks stunning in blue and keeps on looking at her until she is infront of her…**

Muski: Oye (snaps her fingers in front of his face) aisa kya dekh raha hain tu?

Rahul: nahi kuch nahi.. kuch bhi toh nahi

Muski: acha.. choor tunay kuch kahya…

Rahul: muskaan toh mujhse naraaz nahi hain?

Muski: Kyun hona chaiyay?

Rahul: nahi toh nay kaha tha kay yahan say chala ja.. aur sab

Muski: DEkh rahul main toh kuch bhi kabhi bhi kehdeti hoon… toh bura maan jaiga mujhay nahi pata tha..Iss liye ajj yeh clear kardeyti hoon… mera ghussa barf ki tarah ka hain thodi deer main phighal jata hian…shamja…

Rahul: Saach.. chalo yeh toh acha hain phir toh main kabhi bhi teray saath mast..

Muski: Oye khotay.. yeh mat shamajh na kay ghussa thanda baraf kay jitna hian..

Rahul: (laughs) chal yeh lay khan bhi agaya (he sees uncleji coming with the food)

Uncle: yeh loon putar…aur puutar ji ka driver..

Rahul (who was drinking lassi chokes on it)… kya driver

Uncleji: haan puttar ji nay bataya na… kitni achi hain teri maam sahib tera khyaa karti hain

Muski: (looks a bit ashamed she is trying not to look at rahul but finds the situation funny)

Rahul: haan… (looks at muski) bari achay dil ki hain MERI maam sahib…

Uncleji: chalo main chalta hoon…

Muski: who rahul.. main

Rahul: nahi nahi… rahul kyun driver acha title hain madam…(laughs)

Muski: toh aur kya kehti kay toh mera pati hain…

Rahul: (looks at muski upon her finishing the sentence and continues to stare)

Musk:i (realizes what she had said)…umm.. mera matlab hain kay dekh yeh gao hainaur yahaan doost voost kuch nahi hota.. rishtey saaf hotey hain.. shamajh raha hain na toh? (continues eating)

Rahul: (still staring) haan… shamajh rha hoon.. kay shayad rishtoon ko waqi main saaf hona chiyay..

Muski: kya matlab?

Rahul: umm.. nahi kuch nahitoh kah na…

Muski: toh bhi kah.. lambi drive hain aur kahein ruk bhi nahi saktey..

**Both rahul and muskaan eat the food then pay and thank uncelji for his hospitality and as muskaan gets her clothes back and is about go to change rahul stops her and…**

Rahul: muskaan rahnay day.. achi lag rahi hain aiisey hee

Muski: Yeh soni kay kaprey hain… mujhay waapis..

Soni: (realizes and identifies what rahul has in his eyes for muskaan) didi rehnay day meri taraf say raklay.. app waaqi bauht change lag rahi hain..

Muski: Saach Soni (hugs her) akhir kaprey hain he tei tarah Soney…

Rahul: abb chalein…

Muski: haan chal…

Rahul: thanks..

Muski: kis baat ka..

Rahul: Tunay change nahi kiya

Muski: Ooye teray liye thori maine toh Soni kay vaaste nahi kiya change ( but she liked if when rahul said "achi lag rahi ho" and she thought to herself wow… rahul would says something like that to her.. she was taken aback by his compliment)

*** Muskaan and rahul had a long drive to continue as they did muskaan kept on thinking: "yeh kya horah hain mujhay.. kahein main… nahi aisa nahi hosakta.. main toh kabhi bhi nahi… and rahul kept on thinking "yeh ajj mujhay kya hua hain… pehli dafa kissi larki ko maine bola achi lag rahi hoon.. aur ajj kyun main preshaan tha kay muskaan mujh say naraaz hain… rahul sambhaal kay.. kahein toh saach mein…nahi.. aisa nahi.."

Muskaan: kuhc kaha tumne?

Rahul: nahi kuch suna tumne…

Muskaan: nahi… (looks out the window) woh aur kitni deer hain

Rahul: bas 45 mins aur phir hum hongay campsite per..

Muski: toh zaara bhi nervous nahi hain

Rahul: kyun yu nervous hain kya?

Muski: haan.. pehli baar hain na..

Rahul; kuch nahi hoga.. jaisaey hospital main hota wohi sab kuch hoga..

Muski: haan.. per phir bji..

Rahul: Muskaan chill.. toh akeli nahi hainmain ho na teray saath…

Muski: haan tohhain na meray saath…

**both muskaan and rahul reach at the campsite and are assigned in the same camp booth where villagers are to come and get vaccines and general checkup… All day muskaan and Rahul check patients prescribed drugs and told them how to take better care of themselves…. All this time muskaan and rahul both helped each other when muskaan needed anything rahul would know it before she asked for it and same with rahul muskaan knew his need before him actually saying it… it's evening and muskaan is standing on a bridge looking at the sunset which looks so very beautiful when rahul come and stands by her..**

Rahul: kya dekh rahi hoon?

Muski: huh?.. (Straights herself and her dupatta) tum kab aye?

Rahul: jab app khui hui thi…

Muski: main.. main toh bas yunhi..

Rahul: Yunhi kya..

Muski: Rahul dekho..(Points at the brids flying away)

Rahul: kya? Birda haan urr rahi hain..

Muski: nahi rahul yahi toh na… who urh sakti hain.. kaash main bhi urr skati..

Rahul: (looks at her looking so intensely at the view she looks soo beautiful) tumhey urna pasand hain.. Muski: (looks at him in disbelief) kya matlab..

Rahul: yeh vaada rah aik din tujhay urrao ga.. theek hain..

Muski: Tub hi na.. aik number ka chooro hain.. kaisey urai ga

Rahul: It's called sky diving… urnay jaisa he hain.. Mumbai chal saath chaley gay..

Muski: (smiles) saach

Rahul:much…

Muski: Rahul pata hainmujhay sunsets bahu achey lagtey hain.. kitney khubsoorat hotey hain na

Rahul: (stares at her) yeh bahut khubsoorat…

Muski: ( looks at him) kya…

Rahul: (diverts his attention away from muski) sunsets…

Muski: acha chal chaley..

Rahul: Kahan?

Muski: tu na bhuddu hain waapis camp

Rahul: nahi.. mera matlab hain chalo na wlak peer chaltey hain

Muski: walk per iss waqt?

Rahul: haan chal…(grabs her hand and strts walking it's a stary night moon is shining and rahul just wants to sepnd it with muski although he is not sure why)

Muski: acha chal.. lakin haath toh choor..

Rahul: oh.. yeh lay choor diya..

Muski: acha hum jaa kaha rahein hain

Rahul: kahein bhi..

Muskaan: per rahul..

Rahul: (turns around and puts his fingers on her lips) dekh muskaan teray questions thdo deer kay liye band sahi hain… abb toh bas meray saath chal..(clouds are rumbling..M USKI is lost in his eyes)

Muski: theek hain lakinlagta hain bearish aaney wlai hain hum jaldi aajai gay na..

Rahul: Chaley gay toh waapis aiigya na.. madam..

Muski: (Smiles… )

**Both rahul and Muski are walking under the stars talking about random things they seem to be too lost in each other as if no one exist.. then the thunder happens and its…***

TO BE CONTINUED…

PART 4 OF STORY LINE ONE…

"Jeenay Kay Issharey Mill gaye."

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Muski: Uh No.. Rahul dekh abb kya karey gay.. bearish.. Ufff

Rahul: Oye! Kuch nhai hoga kya tuney pehley kabhi bearish nahi dekhi kahley nahi pehlay bearish mein?

Muski: Acha toh tu kehraha haian kay main nahi kehli bearish mein… abhi bata ti hoon.. (she runs after him and is messing up his hair and making him stand in the heavy rain)

Rahul: Nahi… muskaan.. yaar.. yeh tu… nahi

Muskaan: Nahi rahul tu khel khel na… bari acahi lag rahi hain na baarish…

**Rahul keeps on moving backwards and since its raining and its dark he doesn't realize that there is a deep trench that goes downhill and as Muskaan and him are having fun while playing in the rain rahul has moved all the way back and is on the tip on the mountain rock… he has no clue what is about to happen***

Muski: Yeh kyat u itna daarpook nikla…peechay kyun jaraha hain?

Rahul: (before he can answer realizes that he is loosing his balance) Muskaaaaaaaaann….

Muski: (Looks at him at first thinks he is joking) jaantey hoon mera naam hain yeh tu kya cheekh raha…

(notices he is not there) Rahl dekh dara mat.. kahan gaya..(looks around and then lighting stikes and she sees that thewater is falling down from where rahul was standing meaning rahul had fallen) RAHULLL!!

Muski: Ab… abb kya hoga.. (cries) nahi… who kaisey… kahein who.. main… (wipes her tears) medical camp jaati hoon… help kay liye…papaji (looks at the sky which is not showing any mercy as it is raining harder than ever) app rahul ko aisey nahi cheen saktey aur main ussey jaaney nahi doongi…

**Muski starts to run back to the camp it's raining really hard and she has to get there to get help… she has to go through the woods and as she is she gets her foot hurt a thorn stabs the soel of the feet and she is struck with pain**

Muski: Ahhh… (She looks at the blood screaming in pain closes eyes then sees Rahul's Face and without realizing the pain she is enduring takes out the thorn with bare hands and starts running) kuch bhi hojai mujhay rahul ki help karni hain…. (her feet are bleeding badly and she is hurt and limping a little but is still running rushing past strong winds and heavy rain she finally reaches the camp)

Gurad: Dr.. app iss waqt bearish mein

Muski: (Out of breath) nahi kuch theek nahi hain… Who Dr. Rahul…

Guard: Dr rahul.. kahan hain woh... (Sees muski's bleeding feet and blood on her hands) app ko yeh?

Muski: Dr Rahul clif fepr say slip hogay hain aur mujhay madad chiyaya.. abhi Jaldi karo…

Gurad: jee acha.. main security officials ko lakey jata hoon right away lakin Dr. Muskaan app yhai tehriyaya..

Muski: Nahi main saath jaao gii Jaldi karoo gari nikalo…(limps towards the car in pain and bleefing hands and feet)

Guard: jee doctor

**With approaching police car and forest security officials and Muskaan following behind them finally reaches where Rahul had slipped and it had stopped raining they all get out of the cars and officials start doing their work.. .Climbing down the mountain with search lights, helicopters flying looking for him, and yelling rahul's name in loudspeaker all are in search of Rahul but he is not be found anywhere.. Muski can just wait and watch from the sideline.. there are so many efforts being made to try and find Rahul but she feels as if no one is doing anything when a police officer approaches her…***

Officer: Dr. Muskaan..

Muski: officer.. kya hua.. rahul mila.. who uss ney blue t shirt pehney huoi thi aur… officer..

Officer: Dr Muskaan humey aik body milli hain lakin we are not sure if it's dead or unconscious..

Muski: Body…? Officer app rahul ko dhoondhay app yeh body.. nahi officer.. main kehrahi hoon na blue shirt aur jeans .. aur..

Officer: Dr. Muskaan humney body transfer kardi hain karreb kay sher main Civil hospital aur app ko chalna hoga doctors wahan puri koshish kar rahye hain I am sure…

Muski: (tears rolling out her eyes she is shell shocked) Who Rahul nahi hosakta….Rahul nahi ja sakta (she says to herself)

*** Officer is driving and muskaan is in state of shock she is sitting in the front crying endlessly with all the moments she spent with rahul are playing like a movie in her head she feels as if she will loose something that kept her alive that gave her a reason to live to smile to laugh… it's 4 in the morning and the night is never ending the darkness seems to get only darker no sign of morning… Officer is doing his duty he trying his best to get Muski to the hospital as it is a little far but they finally reach and muski 's eyes and face looks as if she has been destroyed to pieces she walsk out the cars and trembles… **

Officer: (gives her hand support) Dr. Muskaan app theek toh hain?

Muski: haan..(still lost)

Officer: Dr muskaan… (taps her shoulder like shakes her a little )

Muski: Yes.. officer.. main theek hoon.. app Rahul… ko… Who inder hain na..(she looks at the hospita's entrance)

Officer: jee app chaley main ata hoon (he lets her go and gets a dispatch call on his walky talky)

***Muskaan slowly walks towards the hospital and every step she is taking it feels like her legs are not able to carry her there… her body is like refusing but she is persistent and is still moving forward with teary eyes and Rahul's Picture in her mind.. His smile his..promise.. His touch.. every bit of it.. she enters the hospital and sees that people rushing and attending to patients as any other hospital would she notices the emergency room and Rahul's Watch which in the process might have slipped on to the ground from his hands she picks it up…***

Muski: Yeh Watch Toh.. rahul ki… (while she is looking at it a nurse comes by and sees her)

Nurse: Madam… app ko toh choot lagi hain.. appke pair mein.. khoon bhi nikla tha shayad..

Muski: Haan (shocked..surprised) nahi nahi.. kcuh nahi app mujhay plz batadey yeh patient kahan hain (she shows the watch) who police lay kar aoii thi unhey..

Nurse: Madam lakin app toh

Muski: plz nurse plz (teary eyes explode once again)

Nurse: yeh watch toh ussey ki hain jo rescue team kay saath aaya tha…

Muski: (smiles but still crying like trying to get a hold of herself) haan haan wohi kahanhain who…

Nurse: Room number 145… lakin maam app…

Muski: (she runs from her before the nurse can actually even finish telling her that she is badly injured and needs help) Rahul yahaan hain who zinda hain (she looks the the watch) ussey kuch nahi hoga kuch bhi nahi…

*** Muski reaches room 145 and runs in to the room she sees doctors surrounding a patients bed she is nto able to see rahul or anyone on that bed yet until she drops the vase that was next to the door when doctors turn around and look at her giving a view of who is on the bed… and.. soo… well.. it is a person with his head bandaged his arm wrapped in bandages like if it was fractured and he looks at muskaan it's Rahul muskaan looks at him she has tears running down her face and his watch clenched in her hands the doc notices that they both are looking at each other and and move away saying "Dr . Rahul lagta hain appse koi mlne aaya hain" Muskaan runs to Rahul and Hugs him really tightly… she is not able to control her tears her emotions she is overwhelmed and so is rahul seeing her like this he hugs her back ignoring the Pain he is enduring since muskaan has gripped him tightly… but pain doesn't matter to him right at the moment it's the fact that muskaan is here.. and she is with him..for a long time they embrace each other like they have met after the longest time muskaan still with a teary face… is not able to accept the fact everything will turn out to be okay… that his papaji had only tested her… the fact that she now knows that she has feelings for rahul… the reason why she had been up all night driving herself crazy… dying every moment that showed no signs of hope.. her papaji had only made her see the trailer of love… her saccha pyaar.. her destiny perhaps… **

To Be Continued…

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PART 5 OF

"Jeenay Kay Issharey Mill gaye."

Rahul And Muskaan are still hugging each other when Rahul Realizes that the patients in the ward are starting to stare …**

Rahul: Muskaan… (softly pats her back) mujhay dard horaha hain…

Muskaan: Dard…(she opens her eyes and realizes what she was doing) oh haan…I am soryy rahul who main…

Rahul: Sorry kyun tum kyun sorry…(wipes her tears from her face as she looks at him in amazement)

Muskaan: haan main kyun sorry bolo tumhay bol na cahiyay sorry meri jaan nikal kar rakhdi..aik pal mein meri zindagi jaisey badal de hoon.. jaisey puri duniya ulat gayi hoon (her tears start to come back again and as she explains rahul looks at her in surprised manner as he never knew she cared about him soo much) aur mujhay akelay choor diya hoon bahut akelay… (realizes what she just said and looks at rahul who is continuously staring at her) kya hain? meray shakal par kuch likha hua hain kya? (shakes him a little)

Rahul: Haan likha toh bahut kuch hain bas tumharey ansoo issey chupharey hain…(wipes her eyes again)

Muskaan: who main… (feels uncomfortable as she doesn't even know why had she been crying)

Rahul: (looks at her feet and see the deep wounds) Muskaan Yeh kya… yeh tum.. muskaan tuney..(he gets up and bends down without caring for his own injuries)

Muskaaan: Rahul tum yeh ky akar rahey hoon.. pata nahi hain kis haal mein hoon itni chootain lagi hain

Rahul: (ignores what she is saying and touches her feet and sees the deep and hideous wounds he is shocked ) Muskaan yeh tumne kya kiya? (teary eyes)

Muskaan: Who kuch nahi thodi sic hoot lag lagai thi

Rahul: Yeh thodi se hain… jahan tak main janta hoon tum aik doctor hoon aur yeh thori se choot nahi hain yeh tum bhi jaanti hoon bnahut achi tarah se… (he gently touches it and muskaan shrieks)

Muskaan: Ahhh…

Rahul: Bahut Dard Horaha Hain na? (almost about to cry)

Muskaan: Nahi zara sa bhi nahi

Rahul: Jhoot bol rahi hoon

Muskaan: saach kehrahi hoon jitna dard mujhay fab hua tha jab tum nahi thay ussey zayada dard kabhi ho he nahi sakta.. yeh toh halki ki kharooch hain theek hojai gee..

Rahul: Meri wajah say tumhay yeh sab hua na… (looks guilty)

Muskaan: Nahi meri khud ki wajah say hua… kyunkay rahul (can't seem to find her words)

Rahul: (questioning look) kyunki muskaan?

Muskaan: Rahul mein…

Rahul: Janta hoon…

Muskaan: Kya?

Rahul: Muskaan tum meri bahut zayada parwa karti hoo, mera bahut zayada khayaal hain tumhey, meray dard say tumhey dard hota hain.. meri takleef say tumhay… aur kahein na kahein mujhay bhi tumhari utni hi parwa hain

Muskaan: rahul…

Rahul: Ssshh… Puts his fingers on her lips) Bas kuch mat kehna kuch bhi nahi…(He touches her hand which was also hurt and lifts it up close to his lips and kisses it…)

Muskaan: (Tears fall from her eyes and land on rahul's hand)

Rahul: yeh bahut keemtey hain (looks at the teardrop) aur main itna ameer nahi kay inko keemat day sako.. (he closes his hand which had the teardrop)

Muskaan: Rahul toh phir waada karo kay kabhi bhi yeh ansoo nahi anaey do gay meri ankhoon mein…

Rahul: Kabhi bhi nahi… kabhi bhi nahi (he hugs her )

Muskaan: Rahul i…

Rahul: Jaanta hoon…

Muskaan: Kab se rahul?

Rahul: Jab say tumko maine chaha hain tab say…

Muskaan: (blushes) acha… toh tumharey he iradeein naik nahi thay…

Rahul: (smiles and lets go of Muskaan and looks at her) Haan tu kya hua… kaam toh hogaya na?

Muskaan: Toh yeh aik kaam tha Dr. Rahul… (stand up and pretends as if she is angry)

Rahul: Muskaan mera who matlab nahi tha… main tu

Muskaan: (due to her foot injury she does'nt realize she is barely able to stand and falls back into rahul who lands on the bed with Muski on top of him) **Eye locking session a long one**

Rahul: Muskaan….

Muskaan: Rahul…

Rahul: Mera Haath…(fakes pain)

Muskaan: Haye Rabba! (gets up and feels guilty that she was hurting him for so long) rahul tu theek hain na? kuch hua tu nahi na (looks at his hand she is frantically searching if anything happened or not) Rahul zayada dard toh nahi hua na iam so sorry rahul who main…

Rahul: (Bursting out in laughter) muskaan main toh theek hoon lakin tu.. tu bilkul (Laughs)

Muski: Rahul kay bachey tu nay toh meri jaan he nikaal din a.. Tu.. (Lifts her hand to hit him then says) TU… na theek hojaai hir dekh na.. teri tu band baajh jai gii..

Rahul: Oye Huey! Itni jaldi hain siniye.. band baja bhi laaoga… pehlay zara…(pulls her closer)

Muskaan: (blushes and pushes him away ) mera who matlab nahi tha…

Rahul: kya… tu bagair shaadi kay he…(jokingly mischivious) WAISEY MUJHAY KOI PROBLEM NAHI HAIN…

Muskaan: Rahul… tujhay toh main na… choor jaaney day.. iss dil kay aagey aur teray aagey kabhi nahi chalay gii kissi ki bhi…

Rahul: So toh hain.. pehlay soochna chahiyay tha na madam…

Muskaan: Soochanay ka waqt he nahi diya tum ne..

Rahul: Who bhi hain.. chal abb tu yeh zakham saaf karwa… aur haan.. waada kar kay kabhi ais akuch nahi karey gii .. meray liye apni jaan kabhi nahi khatrey main daalay gii chahay main maar…(muskaan puts her fingers on his mouth)

Muskaan: Rahul aaj kehdiya hain phir kabhi nahi kehna…

Rahul: Nahi kaho ga… baba.. sorry… bas tu kabhi aisa na karna…

Muskaan: Nahi karongi bas…kush..

Rahul: (Calls out for the nurse who is going by)

Nurse: Jee Sir

Rahul: sister app please inki dressing kardey inkay pairoon main choot aiy hain

Nurse: Sure.. madam app meray saath chalein gii…

Muskaan: Siste rkya main yahi nahi rukh sakti who kya hain na mera pair bhoot dukh raha hain..(she gets a hold of rahuls hand… who looks at her then her hadn and holds it back and smiles)

Nurse: theek hain… main dressing ka samaan lay kar aati hoon…

Rahul: Acha.. bahana hain waisey..

Muskaan: who kya hain na… mujhay dard bahut hota hain.. aur agar tu saath hoga na toh darda kum he nahi mehsoos bhi nahi hoga..

Rahul: (smiles and makes her rest on his shoulder)

Nurse: Mam… r u ready

Muskaan: Jee nurse app dressing kardey…

**all the while the nurse was cleaning muski's wound rahul and her were looking into each other's eyes they were lost in each other and didn't seem to care about the rest of the world.. Rahul seemed so happy his pain was never so sweet and muskaan couldn't believe that she has found someone who she can never imagine living without… Rahul and muski were in the hospital for the night they slept on another's shoulders and were up till late talking about their future and how they had always admired one another.. its morning and it's time for them to go back to sanjeevani…***

Rahul: (on the phone with armaan)

Armaan: Rahul… suna hain toh patient bana hua hain ajj kal?

Rahul: acha mujhay toh nahi pata tha

Armaan: abbey khotey… tu apney app ko bara hero shamajh tha hain…

Rahul: ab maine kya kiya hain? (thinks how did he find out about muski and him)

Armaan: yeh jo tuney james bond ka stunt maara hain na.. cliff say neechay chalag laganey ka.. yeh sab

Rahul: Abey yaar jaan kar thodi gira tha slip hogaya tha bas aur kuch nahi

Armaan: Acha.. mazzaq say haat kar toh theekh toh hain..?

Rahul: main pehlay say bahut zayada theek hon… ( sees that muskaan is coming from the other end she is dressed in lime green churidaar and looking gorgeous she stopped by some kid on wheel chair rot talk to him and is giving hin a kiss while rahul is watching from distance)

Armaan: Abey tera demaag toh theekh hain.. tujhay head injury toh nahi hui lagta hain paagal hogaya hain..

Rhaul: huh?... (get sback to his senses) nahi yaar.. main theek hoon kuch cootey aii hain nothing serious…

Armaan: Haan toh phir theek hain na.. sub set hain

Rahul: yeh… bas hum ..

Armaan: Hum?... yeh hum kuan hain..

Rahul: ABey mera matlab hain main.. main jald he sanjeevani poch raha hoon na.. phir baat karey gay..

Armaan: Rahul mujhay daal mein kcu kala lag raha hain

Rahul: Abey artmaan daal kahan choor day… (waves at muskaan who is coming towards him now)

Armaan: Huh?.. Rahul betay…

Rahul: Armaan baad mein yaar muhya jaan hain I'll see you soon

Armaan: Yeah man.. I guess.. Bye khyaal rakhna

Rahul: Ok bye…
(hangs up and finds muskaan in front of him)

Muskaan: Kis ka phone tha?

Rahul: Armaan ka…usey choro aik baat kahao.. agar main wheel chair per hota toh kya mujhya bhi…

Muskaan: Wheel chair per kyun? Tujhay bahut zoor zay laga hain kya abhi bhi darad hain? wheel chair lao… (she gets concerned and blasts rahul with questions who makes her quite by kissing on her cheek)

Rahul: Pehlay sun liya kar phir bola kar… ajj toh bahut achi lag rahi hain..,a ue wheel chair sirf iss liye kaha tha kay jaisey tu nay uss bachey say bahut "pyaar" say baat kit hi na tu mjuhsay hi kabhi "pyaar" say baaat karliya kar…

Muskaan: Hmmm.. Pyaar se…. well Dr. Rahul kay hain na.. (grabs his ears)

Rahul: Ouch muskaan choor na… sab dekh rahey hain…(LOOKS AROUND)

Muskaan: acha.. aur abhi 2 min pehlay nahi dekh rahey thay jab tuney mujhya …(lets go of his ears and doesn't know what to say she blushes)

Rahul: Maine tujhay kya muskaan? (Mischievous smile)

Muskaan: Rahen day.. haan.. bas jaaney day..(looks down and blushes)

**A driver approaches them and tells them that Their car is ready and that if they want he can drive them to Mumbai**

Rahul: Nahi theek hain main drive karloonga..

Muskaan: Thnk You.. Bas yeh saaman rakh dey gaari mein..

Driver: ok mam..

Rahul: Tu tayaar hoon…?

Muskaan: (looks at him doubtly) Rhaul… tayaar ksi baat kay liye?

Rahul: Hmm.. (changes voice) larki tum aik ajnabee kay saath 3 ghantey ka safar tai karongi… akely

Muskaan: (smiles and comes closer to rahul and acts seductive) bas sirf teen ghantey main toh puri zindagi bhar kay liye iss safar ki tayaari say aii hoon… mister.. R-A-H-U-L…

Rahul: Not bad…(he grabs her by her waist)

Muskaan: (feels uncomfortable and closes her eyes) Rahul.. chooro na… main toh sirf mazaaq.. (rahul lets go of her but she is sill thinking he has his hand arounf her) rahul chooro na…

Rahul: (Laughs) kab ka choor ddiya ankhein khool loon main bhi mazaaq kar raha tha..

Muskaan: ( Blushes and Smiles) who main..chalo chaley (she runs towards the car while Rahul is behind her looking like the happiest person on this earth with the cutest smile)

**Both Rahul and muskaan have 3 hr long drive to go before reaching Mumbai on their way to Mumbai they talked, laughed, selpt,and in the back of their mind had been thinking was this all a dream? Kya yeh sab kuch waqi saach hogaya? Jisko maine pasand kiya ussney mujhay chahah? Abb yeh zindagi hameesha kay liye ussi ki rahey gii hameesha"Bhaut ksuh hai woh doono koi aur dkeh paye ya nahi woh dono aik doosray ki ankhoon ki khusi ko dekh saktey hain… they can feel what their heart is telling them… aur kahein na kahein they know kay abb iss zindagi ko aik naya maqssad mila hain… abb yeh adhoori anhi rahe… even in their awkward silence while driving both knew exactly what the other person was saying….***

TO BE CONTINUED…

*** Rahul's car pulls up in front of Muskaan's Apartment and it's time to say goodbyes which they both hate because they feel like they haven't said or done enough they needed each other like life requires breathing… Rahul looks out the window.. muskaan turns off the cd player…both confused not wanting to leave….**

Rahul: Muskaan…

Muskaan: Rahul…

Rahul: (smiles) pehlay tum…

Muskaan: Who main kehrahi thi kay … kay tu… theek toh hoga na.. akelay ghar per…

Rahul: Matlab…

Muskaan: matlab tera haath… tujhay koi dekhney waala hoga na?

Rahul: (looks at his hand) haan… main theek hoonga who ramu kaka hain na..

Muskaan: Acha toh theek hain.. pehir main…(tries to open the door)

Rahul: Ruko muskaan…(pulls her back)

Muskaan: (gets lost in his eyes..)

Rahul: Who main tujhay… tera saaman ghar tak..(muskaan snaps out of her thoughts)

***Rahul and Muskaan get out of the car rahul opens the trunk muskaan carries the bag since rahul is hurt they both are walking towards Muskaan's Apartment and thinking "kaisey kaho… kya karoon.. yeh raat ko bhi abhi hi ana tha Mumbai bahut jaldi aagaya…" they reach Muski's front door**

Muskaan: Ghar agaya..?

Rahul: Haan.. tum relax karna.. meri wajhah say kitni preshaan thi tum? (reaches fro her hand)

Muskaan: (gives her hand to him) Rahul main teri wajah se nahi api wajah say preshaan thi…

Rahul: Acha who kaise?

Muski: Dekh agar tujhay kuch hojata na tu main kya jawaab deyti… upar waaley ko

Rahul: Keh dayti ""maar daala" (LAUGHS)

Muski: Naai rahul tumne maar daala meray dil ko… (gets serious)

Rahul: Tumne zinda kar diya meray dil ko… (smiles)

Muski: Rahul… waada kao yeh sab kuch khawab nahi…

Rahul: Wada…. Khwaab nahi….(comes closer to her and kisses her on the cheek)

Muski: Rahul….jana zaroori hain..?

Rahul: Ms. Muskaan app kay iradey naik nahi lag rahey?

Muski: (blushes and realzies what he meant) ufff… is paglay ko toh… (hits him playfully)

Rahul: What!? tum he kehrahi thi..

Muski: acha late hogaya hain abb tum jao… (pushes him…)

RahuL: Aik minute…

Muski: kya hain..?

Rahul: (Pulls out 2 kangans) hmm… mil gaye..

Muski: Yeh kya hain?

Rhaul: yeh meri maa kay kangan hain…

Muski: lakin rahul yeh toh bahut keemtey hain na tum yeh mujhay…

Rahul: Shhhs…(makes her quite) yeh kangan tumharey iss lye kay tum bhi in kay jitney keemtey hoon meray liye… yeh maa nay diye thay kaha tha jab tumhey meray liye meri bahu mil jaye toh pehna day na… aur… tum mil gaye… ab yeh zimadaari tumhari…(kisses her forehead)

Muski: (Blushes and is about to cry out of happiness)

Rahul: uh no… Not again… muskaan… (wipe sher tears) abb kya hua hain…(hugs her)

Muski: kuch nahi bas yunhi kabhi.. kissi nay mujhay iss tarah say… rahul meri toh maa bhi anhi hain main toh kab say akeli hooon aur ajj tumney mujhay maa bhi day de…

Rahul: Muskaan tum akeli nahi hoon abb…main ho na teray saath hameesha kay liye…jeehlay gee mujhay zindagi bhar …(smiles still hugging her) aur agar kabhi chora na…

Muski: (looks up quickly and places her hand on his mouth another cute eye locking session an emotional one) kabhi nahi… kabhi bhi nahi..

Rahul: jaanta hoon…

Muskaan: (pulls herself back to normal) rahul I love you..

Rahul: Love you too…

Muskaan: Abb toh jaa…

Rahul: chala jao…? (being silly)

Muskaan: haan kal miltey hain…sanjeevani mein…(lets his hand go)

Rahul: acha theek hain..toh apna khayaal rakhna aapni dressing change karleyna…a ur dawa kah leyna…

Muski:Aur kuch meray "dadiji"

Rahul: (comes closer to her and whispers) meray baarey main zaayada nahi sooch na…

Muski: hmm.. nteray baarey kuan soochta hain? Mai toh apni fav hoon aur apney he baarey main soochti rehti hooon..

Rahul: toh theek hain pehir toh sooch lay ne apney baarey main… main bhi yahi karney waala hoon..(he walks off shouting that and leaving muskaan smiling as she watches him go he waves from his car and goes muskaan turns around opens her apartment door gets her stuff inside and runs to her bed smiling..)

MUSKAAN'S ROOM

Muski: (playing with her kangans changed in night clothes she looks beautiful in the moonlight that is being shadowed on her face through her room window she gets up and look out the window) ahhhhhh.. tahnk you papaji.. ajj app nay sab kuch day diya.. mujhay itna kuch kay shayad thank you bahut he choota lafz hain.. lakin auer main keh bhi kya sakti hoon… bachpan say laykay ajj tak aik sapna jo maine dekha tha who saach hora hain ahist ahista… bachpan main jab main akele thi maa baba jab app kay pass chaley gaye thay… main samjhi kay mujhay kabhi koi pyaar karney waala miley ga he nahi.. lakin ajj rahul nay mujhay sab jkuch day diya.. apna sab kuch apni maa.. papaji mujhay toh pata bhi nahi hain maa hoti kya hain.. kyun who apney bachoon say itna pyaar karti hain… maamta kya hoti hain? lakin shayad who din door nahi jab mujhay bhi maa mil jaye gii rahul ki maa.. humari maa… aur papaji iss khusi ko bas abb kissi ki nazar na lagana meri apni khud ki bhi nahi.. thank you papaji.. sab kay liye meri khusi kay liye..

(she goes back to her bed and lays quietly just feeling the quite moonlight and air on her face she looks at her hands again and her kangans which today had completed her.. her exsistence and in thoughts of her fute with rahul she drifts to sleep after a long time she was finally able to sleep without worrying about anything at all… )

** It's next morning… and both rahul and muskaan are up and smiling… both away from each other but doing almost exactly the same..***

Rahul: AHhhhhhhhhh…(yawns) hmm its gonna be a good day today…

Muskaan: (infront of her mirror fixing her hair) Oye huye.. Muskaan kya baat hain toh bahut khush hain?Haan hona bhi chiyay.. rahul ko milney may kuch der hi toh hain.. (Smiles to herself)

Rahul: (tooth brush in his mouth standing in front of his wardrobe) hmm.. kya pehnoo.. yaar kash muskan hoti pick karnay kayliye yeh sab choose karna.. uff.. khair (pulls out a nice black shirt and pair of jeans)

Muskaan: hmm… kya pehno.. rahul ko kuan sa color acha lag ta? (hits herself on the head on her naivety and blushes she picks out turquoise and purple churidar)

Rahul: (changed and looking handsome in front of his mirror) hmm.. rahul not bad.. (fixes hair sprays cologne smiling still hears ramu kaka calling for breakfast) aaya..

Muskaan: (putting on earings and chiriyaan again looking at the kangans and smiling) rahul ko achi lagay gee na? (she looks in the mirror) hmm.. ussey say poochloongi.. (smiles and picks up her bag, lab coat, and stehscope she goes out the room)

Rahul: Hmm.. Ramu kaka.. mri file kahan hain (looking around )

Ramu kaka: beta gari main sab kuch rakh diya hain tumhara lab coat, sethscope bag, aur file.. tum naashta karlo//(brings him a glass of juice and sandwhich)

Rahul: Thanks ramu kaka (drinks the juice in one sip and grabs the sandwich) late horaha hainmain raastey main kah loonga…(pats him and leaves)

Muskaan: (In auto thinking to herself) Jaldi say sanjeevaani aajai aur main rahul say milo.. uff kitna door hain yeh sanjeevaani…(smilies…and thinks about rahul)

Rahul: (listening to in dino from life in a metro and singing along) "karle tu bhi mohbbat..hain tujhay bhi ijjazat.." (smiles and thinks to himself) muskaan… abb toh mujhay gana gana bhi sikh diya tumney…

**Both reach Sanjeevani parking lot rahul pakring his car and muskaan paying auto driver his due and as they walk towards Sanjeevani's entrance they both clash into each other muskaan ending up in Rahul's arms… and Rahul just Mesmerized by the way she looks her, deep eyes,her smile, and her face which is reflecting her happiness… it's like the world has stopped for a while just for them…they both are lost in one another and the song that plays in the back is…

"Usako chhupaakar main sabse kabhi le chaloon kahin door...

aankhon ke pyaalon kse pita rahoon usake chehre ka noor

iss jamaane se chhupakar , puri karloon main hasrat

hai tujhe bhi izaazat, karle tu bhi muhabbat

in dino, dil mera, mujhse hai keh raha

tu khaab saja, tu ji le jara

hai tujhe bhi izaazat, karle tu bhi muhabbat "

To Be Continued…

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**Both reach Sanjeevani parking lot rahul pakring his car and muskaan paying auto driver his due and as they walk towards Sanjeevani's entrance they both clash into each other muskaan ending up in Rahul's arms… and Rahul just Mesmerized by the way she looks her, deep eyes,her smile, and her face which is reflecting her happiness… it's like the world has stopped for a while just for them…they both are lost in one another and the song that plays in the back is…

"Usako chhupaakar main sabse kabhi le chaloon kahin door...

aankhon ke pyaalon kse pita rahoon usake chehre ka noor

iss jamaane se chhupakar , puri karloon main hasrat

hai tujhe bhi izaazat, karle tu bhi muhabbat

in dino, dil mera, mujhse hai keh raha

tu khaab saja, tu ji le jara

hai tujhe bhi izaazat, karle tu bhi muhabbat "

Rahul: who.. muskaan.. main kuch..

Muskaan: (realizing she is still in his arms): rahul pehlay mujhay.. choro.. (blushing)

Rahul: Huh? oh haan.. (lets go of her and pulls her up to normal)

Muskaan: (looks at him with intensity) kuch kehrahy thaay?

Rahul: (lost in her snaps back) Haan main yeh kehraha tha kay…bahut deer se..

Muskaan: kya hau rahul.. bahut der se kya?

Rahul: woh… tujhay..

Muskaan: mujhay rahul main late tu nahi hoon (looks at her watch) toh phir der se..?

Rhaul: (takes muski's hand to get her attention) bahut der se kaha nahi "I love you"

Muskaan: (lost in his eyes) i…. i…main..

Rahul: (lets go of her hand abruptly as he sees armaan and others coming from behind)

Muskaan: Rahul tu..tumne mujhay…(a little shock at the fact he would just let go like that)

Rahul: Muskaan.. teri problem kya hain? (Looking behind and trying to act that he is just fighting eith muskaanMuskaan: Rahul yeh kya hua tujhay achanak? (confused look)

Rahul: (looks at muskaan and tries to make a face that would say "sorry plz pretend") tuhjay na…main kehraha hoon kay duty pe..

**While muskaan stood there not understanding the sudden change in his behavior Armaan, ridz, atul, anjali approach them....**

Armaan: (running to rahul) Rahoooooolll!!.. (gives a great hug and distance shim form muskaan who stares at him with a sad face)

Atual: (rushes after armaan to greet rahul) abbey rahul kahan tha tu tujhay bahut miss kiya maine… ajja yaar lag lag ga.. (rahul is happy to see his friends but his eyes are still at muskaan who is standing still with a confused and distant look he can't get his eyes off of her and mouths "iam sorry" to her as he hugs his friends and is being dragged by armaaan and atul to the locker room)

**as muski stands there watching him go thinking " yeh sab kitna mushkil hoga na… rahul aur main saath saath reh kar bhi saath nahi…" (sad expression) Anjali and Ridz come up from behind her…***

Anjali: Muski… (higs her..) kaise hain tu… aur theek toh hain na?

Ridz: Hi muskaan… tuney yeh kya kiya.. medical camp wala haadsa humne suna toh hum daar gaye thay kay kahieen tujhay kuch ho toh nahi gaya… tu theek hain na?

Muski: haan guys main change hoon.. tum batao… (she looks back one last time to see rahul but he is gone from the corridor and starts walking with her respected friends trying not to show her worries)

Anjali" Muskaan tumharey saath koi aur bhi gaya than a?

Muski: haan anjie… (loses herself in thoughts…)

Ridz: (looks at muskaan who is lost and motions ajie what's wrong with her who replys with a shrug I don't know) muskaan (taps her shoulder) kua gaya tha saath?

Muski: oh sorry guys.. Dr. Rahul hain na….

Anjali: oh rahul gaya tha tumharey saath.. oh god kahein usney tujhay atual ki tarah tang toh nahi kiya…

Ridz: Haan muski yeh boys bhi na… Armaan aur atul nay toh mera aur anjali ka demaag he kahliya.. toh hoti tu forrran chup karadey tey doono ko…

Anjali: (laughs) I know we misses dou so much… aur atul ko toh tu he handle kjar sakti hain

Ridz: Afterall she is aur own Punjabi mundi… kyun muskaan?

Muskaan: haann… yaar.. (Covering up her disappointment in her voice she said)

Anjali: chal ridz locker room agaya.. duty shuru

Ridz: yaeh.. lets go..

**as the girls made their way into the locker room guys were still in the corridor coming as they tried to catch up with the details abpout rahul's trip…**

Armaan: toh.. kaisa raha..

Atul: Haan kaisa rah.. suna hain toh martey martey bacha hain..

Armaan: haan champ.. nay toh itni duain maangee kay bas..

Rahul: Guys main theek hoon… alright tum loogoon kay saamne hoon… (tensed and irritated)

Atul: ok chill na..

Armaan: itna bahao kyun lah raha hain…

Rahul: (realizes he is being suspicious and so sstrats to lear his throat) sorry guys oh iam just tired…

Armaan: it's ok.. as long kay tu theek hain aur hum se kuch chopa nahi raha…

Rhaul: nahi main toh kuch nahi chupa raha what will I hide?

Atulk: ok rahul… bharoosa hain tujh per…

Armaan: (grabs rahul off to a side) oye! khotey kay chal raha hain?

Rahuk: Kya matlab…?

Armaan: daal mein kuch kala hain?

Rahul: armaan.. aisa kuch nahi hain.. har koi teri tarah nahi hain

Armaan: pakka

Rahul: haan pakka.. ab chal warna atul police ko phone kardey ga "meray doost missing hain"

Armaaan: (laughs) haan chal (the both catch up to atul and attack him playfully from the back)

***Guys reach the locker room where girls had already been preparing to report to their respective duties**

Armaan: Wah kay baat hain… pehli baar girls are early acha change hain nahi atul… rahul?

Ridz: Excuse me… armaan… atleast hum tumhari tarah nahi hain…

Armaan: janta hoon ho bhi nahi saktey

Rifz: hona bhi nahi hain…(makes faces)

Atul: yaar armaan tu phir shuru hogaya…

Anjie: yeah atul tum apne dost ko shambhal kay rakho…

Armaan: atul to chp beth… rahul agaya hain na meri side per wahi aik hain tut oh thali ka began hain…

Atul: ARmaan meray doost main toh sirf shanty chata hoon… u know peace yeh girls vs guys ki world war nahi…

Ridz: haan tu phir armaan ko shajha loon na..

Armaan: Ridhimma… kay hain na… main shamajh ta nahi hoon…sirf soochta hoon

*** Anjali, armaan, atul, and rida are all busy agruging but both muskaan and rahul look at eachother and muskaan get supset rahul is worried seeing her like this… she is on the verge of crying she gets up takes her sethscope and lab coat and goes out of the locker room leaving the girls and guys fighting and rahul wondering… they al get duties in different wards muskaan is distracted but perform the mandatory rounds and check ups on patients then decides to take a break aoutside by the lake…her fav place in sanjeevani she come sthere to relax… as she is lost in her thoughts rahul sees her pass by and thinks this is the perfect time ton talk to her..he decides to follow her.***

Rahul: nurse yeh meri break tiem hain iam going out make sure kay Mr. Sinah ki reports Dr.Atul Joshi tak pooch jai… he will take over the case

Nurse: theek hain Dr. Rahul…

(he runs to muskaan)

Rahul: Muskaan…! ruk..

Muskaan: (turn around to see him then starts walling faster) rahul plz.. chala ja..

Rahul: Muskaan… the toh sahi tujhse baat karrni hain…

Muskaan: (runs aways from him and reaches the lake front now with tears in her eyes she runs towards the bench and stops as she places her hand on the bech standing with her head down searching for answers…she seems upset and hurt)

Rahul: (out of breath finally next to muskaan he turns her to face him) muskaann.. (looks at her teary eyes) muskaan… yeh kyat u roo kyun rahi hain…

Muskaan: Rahul…(gets herself out of his grip) choor mujhay aur chalaja yahan say…

Rahul: Per muskaan toh tu…

Muskaan: (looking the other way) Roh rahi hoon na maar tu nahi rahi… tujhay kya farq phenda hain (sobs)

Rahul: (agains makes her face him pulls her by force) muskaan… pagal tu nahi hogi hain tu? Kya baqwaas kar rahi hain…

Muskaan: acha… tu main… main baqwaas kar rahi hoon…

Rahul: aur nahi toh kya… kab se pooch raha hoon kya baat hain aur tu bahao kah rahi hain

Muskaan: tu.. tu jaana chahta hain na kya problem hain…(wipes her tears and mpves closer to him)

Rahul: (looking at her as if asking her something)

Muskaan: Problem yeh hain na kay subah say tu na maeray pass aya… na tuney mujhay aik baar bhi mur kar dekha kay main hoon ya nahi… meri parwa toh hain he nahi tujhay who toh main he pagal hoon kay sara waqt pal pal tera intezaar karti rehnde hoon… aur toh sirf apni parwa karta hain… yeh nahi kay aik baar bas aik baar aik pyaar bhaari nazar say dekh lay…aur baqi sab kay saamne aisa bana raha jaisey mera dushman hoon… yeh sab kya hain huh? Kya tu mujhay teray qabil nahi samajhta,,. Kya toh humarey rishtey sya khush nahi? (tears drip from her eyes)

Rahul: (lost in her innocence and her complaints as if she is singing to him instead of steaming with anger, he snaps back as muskaan shakes him) haan… oh haan… muskaan.. meri jaan…(puts his hands on her shoulders and make her sit on the bench and sits next to him) dekh… iam sorry… very very sorry (hold his ears and apologizes cutely) who kya hain na ajj subhah jab armaan aur sab humari taraf arahey thay main confused hogaya kay… tujhay poochay bina kaisa sab ko batado kay tujhse…samajh rahi hain na tu.. aur phir atul aur armaan saath lay kar chaley gay,,, aur duty mil gaye lakin tuney bhi toh meray say door rehnay ki qasam kahli thi… itni mushkil say dhoonda… pura waqt duty per har patient ko muskaan kay naam say bularaha tha… kisi ko pata chaley na chaley nurse ko toh pata chal.. he…

Muskaan: (smiles and brust out with laughter at rahul's cute explanation) Rahul… toh na.. bahut he cute hain.. teri explanation toh use bhi zayada… (Playfully hits him on his head and then lets herself in rahul's embrace, rahuls puts his arms around her)

Rahul: Muskaan… tuney toh meri jaan he nikal de… aur teray yeh wadey wadey ansoo…

Muskaan: tuney bhi mujhay itna sataya hain na ajj… pehlay nahi bol sakta tha yeh sab main samjhi kay kahein tu mujhsay… naraaz hain yeh phir muhjay choor kar…

Rahul: ssshhh….(puts his hand on her mouth and looks at her deeply) tujhay choordoga toh khud kaisey rahoon ga…(takes his hand off her face)

Muskaan: such… (still lost in his eyes)

Rahul: azmaan kar dekh le… agar yakeen nahi ata.bol kya sabut doon?

Muskaan: hmmm… (looks around giving attitude then looks at rahul) abhi kay liye toh kuch nahi lakin wada kar kay sab kay saamne toh ajnabee nahi baney ga… hum doost hain na… sub kay saath.. toh aik dooserey kay saath bhi rahen gay pehlay jaisey… bol wada raha (puts her hand in front od rahul)

Rahul: hmmmm… theekh hain… pakka wada (puts his hand on her and both laugh) iss ka yeh matlab hua kay hum abhikisi ko nahi bataney waley kay hum aik doosrey ko…

Muskaan: pasand kartey hain… haan rahul yeh theek rahey ga… jab baat pakki…(she realize what she had blurted out and blushed)

Rahul: (being silly) oh…ms.muskaan rukh kyun gayi… aagey boleyay na… kya keh rahi thi? (moves his head closer pretending he is trying to listen closely)

Muskaan: Woh main kuch… kuch bhi toh nahi (blushes and makes rahul's face turn the other way)

Rahul: Muskaan…tujhay mujh pe bharoosa hain na? (serious tone)

Muskaan: Apne app se zayada

Rahul: toh bas phir ab yeh baat tabhi saamne aiigii jab tu chahey giii lakin iss ka yeh matlab nahi kay tujhay mujhay… woh teen words nahi kaho gey.. jo ajj subha adhoorey rehgay thay? (gives her a remember look)

Muskaan: kuan say teen words… rahul tuh hi na pata nahi ajj kal kya hoagaya hain tujhay bhool jata hain…

Rahul: aaa…a main kuch nahi bhola.. dekh muskaan kehna toh parey ga…

Muskaan: rahul kya kehna parey ga.? (acts as if she does'nt know)

Rahul: I… Love… You (he kisses her on the cheek)

Muskaaan: Raaaaaaahuuull! Teri yeh majaaall

Rahul: toh iss mein "majaaal" wlai kuansi baat hain tera honey wala pati hoon main afterall…

Muskaan: acha…(looks at him with a fake smile) toh meray honey waley pati app zara door hatey gay mujhay duty per waapis report karna hain warna hitler maar daaley gee..(gets up)

Rahul: (pulls her back and she falls on him) dekhka lagta hain ajj toh upper wala bhi yahi chahata hain kay tu meray shaat rahey…

Muskaan: rahul choor mujhay jaana hain.. dekh duty hain late…

Rahul: ok… ok… kehdey the magic words then…(mischivious smile)

Muskaan: (rolls her eyes) I…(pulls herself back)

Rahul: (lets her go a little) agey bol…(staring at heR)

Muskaan: Rahul… I Rellly (gets herself up almost)

Rahul: (Losses his grip to the point where muskaan can easily run form him) janta hoon mera naam rahul hain abb aagey bol na… warna (as he is about to come closer to her muskaan gets herself completely up and free from his grip and runs a little leaving rahul surprised)

Rahul: (shouting to muskaan) Muskaan! This is unfair… kehna parey ga…

Muskaan(smiles and turns around to make a funny face) kabhi nahi…

Rahul: dekh lay na rahul garewal haar nahi manta..!

Muskaan: Rhaul garewaal.. phir milenge…and I…

Rahul: (gets excited)

Muskaan: and I think you should go back to work…(she disappear inside and rahul is left standing)

Rahul (to himself): ajj nahi toh kal kehna toh parey ga…muskaan tu aisey he haastey rahey… I love you so much…(sees that muskaan's payal is laying on the grass it might have fell when she was running he goes over and picks it up) hmmm..(noticing her payal) Mrs. Rahul to be app kuch bhool rahi hain? (Smiles to himself ansd goes inside Sanjeevani as well. )

*** Both Rahul and Muskaan are attending to their respective duties it's a long day filled with patients and their problems all the interns are involved in their work, labs, checkups, and rounds they went through it all now it's time to finally call it a day.. they all report back to the locker room…**

Armaan: Uff yaar ajj tu bsahi ka kaam hua hain..

ATul: tut oh aisey kehraha hain kay jaisey pehili baar kaam kiya ua

Rahul: champ! you never know it's armaaan…

Armaan:(hits rahuls on the back and gets irritated) rahul talk for yourself…

Rahul: joke tha.. toh bhi na…

***the girls walk in… rahul and muskaan stop to look at eachother and smile then muski blushes and moves ahead towards her locker looking down trying to avoid rahul's gaze.. she seems happy…***

Ridz: Anjie… who lab reports dr keerti ko umbit karadi thi na

Anjie: woryy not ridz all si taken care of…(puts her lab coat in her locker)

Ridz: thanks you are a life saver…

Armaan: Ms. Ridhima kkabhi humey bhi lifesaver baney ka chance de…

Ridz: (smiles fakely) Dr. Malik app yeh chance handle nahi kar paiye gay… so its ok

Armaan: how can u say that before actually experimenting?

Ridz: app kishakal pe likha hua hian na iss liye…

Armaan: whatever…waisey app apney app klo kuch ziyada credit nahi de rahi hain?

Anjie: oh plz armaan… ridz deserves it all aur dekh layna she will be inten of the month

Atul: anjie how can u say that.. hum boys bhi kam nahi

Anjie: but girls are better…

Armaan: oh really

Ridz: yes definitely…

**Iterns go on having their chit chat while muskaan realizes that her pyal is missing she is searching her locker, her abd, and other belongings and Rahul notices standing against the locker he plans on teasing her so remains at distance and does'nt say a word just looking at muski getting worried..**

Anjie: Muski kya hua?

Ridz: kuch ghum gaya kya…

Muski: Haan yaar meri payal.. woh .. pat anhai kahan..? (Searches her bag more)

Armaan: uff girls.. tum loog kitni irresponsible hoon

Ridz: excuse me armaan… usski payal ghum hogi hain and app ko abhi bhi mazaaq sooj raha hain?

Armaan: iwas just joking chill ok

Atul: Muski koi baat nahi tu doosri kahreed layna..

Muski: nahi yaar who meri fav thi… khair chor… milne hui toh mil jayegee I guess

Anjie and ridz: Awww it's ok..(hugs her)

Muski: thanks guys..

Armaan: awww soo sweet.. ab tum logon ka hogaya hon toh chale..

Ridz: hann yaar its getting late letsgo

Anjie: ridz tera bag (rhands her the bad moving towards the door)

Muski: you guys carry on main yeh sab wapis rakh kar aati hoon.. kitn amessy hogaya locker aik payal ki wajah se…(starts to pick up stuff)

ridz: you sure.. toh theek rahey gee na?

Muski: yeah don't woryy guys… bye

Armaan: (notices rahul standing against his locker looking at muski ) oye rahul tujhay bhi kya yahi rehna hain..?

Rahul: (surprised and snaps back to reality) umm… nahi.. nahi yaar woh mujhay thoda sa kaam hain patient file sumbit karney hain.. phir niklo ga.. tu atul kay saath chla ja.

Armaan: oye bongee itni deer say khara tamasha dekh raha hain pehlay nahi ja sakta tha…

Rahul: meray baap galti hogi… tu chal na main aata hoon

Armaan: jaisey teri marzi…

***all the interns leave and it's muskaan and rahul left in the locker room… muskaan is still trying to get her stuff together .. rahul goes to her… ***

Rahul: ahem?

Muskaan: rahul tu gay nahi abb tak..(still working and talking at the same time)

Rahul: nahi woh kya hain na… muhay kissi ko bye kehna tha phir agar woh bura na maaney toh mujhay aik cup coffe kay liye invite kar sakety hain… bahut thak gaya hoon na iss liye..

Muskaan: huh? kuan…

Rahul: (hits himself on his own forehead) bipsha basu..!

Muskaan: rahul .. tu bipasha basu ka wait kar rah hain…

Rauhl: muskaan tu itni bholi hain

Muskaan: woh toh main hoon (finaaly closes her locker and direst her attenion to rahul)

Rahul: pagali (hits her forhead) tera wait kar raha hoon…warna tujhay phir se ghussa gjai ga ajj subha ki tarah…

Muskaan: (blushes and moves closer to him putting her arms around him says) hmm.. very good I like it.. tu finally mera kaha maan raha hain..

Rahul: yeah right,, rahul garewal wohi karta hain jo who chahta hain don't get any ideas..

Muskaan: Rahul kay baachey…(pretends she is going to kill him)

Rahul: ok ok… mujhya maar ne say pehlay teri aik cheez toh lay le..

Muskaan: (questioning look) kya?

Rahul: (takes out the payal from his pocket and waves it in front of her)

Muskaan: (tries to grab it but rahul takes it farther away verytime she tries) Rahul de na? teray pass thi aur main kab say…? Rahuuuullll..(gives up and sits down a little angry)

Rahul: (smiles on her childish behavior and bends down infront of her) muskaan..naraaz tu na hoon.. teri payal mil gaye tujhay khush hona chiyaya…

Muskaan: (crosses her arm and looks at him) haan.. bas rehen de..

Rahul: chal yeh lay… (Puts it in fornt of her)

Muskaan: tu khud he pehna de.. warna phir bachkana keh kehley ga…(puts her leg in front)

Rahul: theek hain... madam... (rahul softly puts it on her and she gets loss in his softest touch and keeps on looking at him she is in awe at his gentle nature and loving personality) Muski..(snaps his finger in fornt o fher face to get her back) kya dekh rahi hain?

Muskaan: tujhko...(moves closer to him)

Rhaul: hmmm.. such… mujhay…(moves closer to her)

Muskaan: Rahul pata hain tujhay tu muhay bahut acha lagta hain… bahut

Rahul: bas sirf acha? (makes a face and look the other way still holding her close)

Muskaan: aur rahul main… na

Rahul: (still looking disinterested)

Muskaan: kuch keh na hain sun na…(make shis face turn to her)

Rahul: bol kya hain…?

Muskaan(:comes closer to his face and whispers) "I LOVE YOU"

Rahul: (smiles) I love you too…(kisses her on her forehead and they leave the hospital arm in arm)

*** As they reach the parking lot muskaan tries to call for an auto.. its late she is not sure if she will find one.. rahul grabs her arm…***

Rahul: madam jab driver saath hoon toh auo ko kyun bola rahi hain app?

Muskaan: rahul tu mujhay gahr choorney jai ga.. late ho jai ga..

Rahul: muskaann… mujhay ghar he toh jana hain koi dr. keeerti ko report thodi karna hain (pulls her towads the car and opens the door for her)

Muskaan: Rahul.. are you sure? ( makes her sit and closes the door and leans in on her from the window)

Rahul: kahan na.. main choor deta hoon .. aur phir tumhari haath ki coffe bhi pe loonga..

Muskaan: Theekh hain abb chaley…

TO BE CONTINUED…

Precap: Muskaan brings in coffee and sees that rahul had fallen asleep on the couch… she moves forward and puts a blanket on him…she starts to stare at rahul's face.. she is really close to him..

** Rahul And Muskaan both reach muskaan house… rahul has come to drop her off …**

Muskaan: Rahul.. inder nahi aaogay?

Rahul: (looking at her deeply) umm… kyun?

Muskaan: nahi voh tumhey um…. (trying to look for a reason) Coffee! haan coffe kay liye

Rahul: (smiles) coffee? right… chalo isse bahaney sahi…muhjay invite toh kya (gets off the car and walks in muski's house)

Muskaan: so welcome sir!... yeh mera choota sa ghar.. (she welcomes him in with a cute smile)

Rahul: hmmm…(looking around) ghar toh bahut acha hain lakin…(looks around more)

Muskaan: (seeing him lokking around thinks maybe he doesn't like it) kya hua? acha nahi hain…

Rahul: (turns his attention to her) nahi main toh bas yeh kehraha tha kay… iss gahr mein jo rehta hain voh... zayada acha hain… (moves closer to her and puts his arm around her)

Muski: (lost in his gaze blushing) rahul… main.. hum..

Rahul: Tum…main… hum..(Imitates her confusion) kya hua muskaan…

Muski: voh main coffee…(distances herself from him)

Rahul: (lets her go seeing her blushing he is just soo happy thinking how lucky he is) sure jao…

Muski: Rhaul tum.. tv on karlo main do min main coffe lay kar or change kar kay aii.. is that ok?

Rahul: yeah.. perfectly ok.. lakin jaldi aana..

**As he watches muski go in her room he smiles and then looks around at muski's simple house… everything around the house descriebs her bubbly personality… sunflowers in the center table decorated rahul can almost imagine her putting them there… picture of her foster parents and orphanage where she grew up… her friends ridz and anjali in different photoframes… rahul can see how much she cares about them… and then he comes across a personal diary…it says.."memories of muskaan malhotra" he looks around to see if she is there.. then calls her out.."

Rahul: Muskaan…?

Muskaan: (form her room) Rhaul aii! bas 5 min…

Rahul: no its ok take your time... (Thinks to himself: chalo 5 min main muskaan ki dairy dekh leyta hoon.. mera haq banta hain…I think)

**Rahul opens her diary it is decorated with muskaan's own personality, colorful, pretty, and charming filled with pictures… rahul is basically looking in to muskaan's life.. on the very first page there is a photo of her late parents… she has written all about them.. even though her parents died when she was 4 she wrote all that she wanted them to know all the love that she wanted to express is in those pages.. then it has muskaan's orphanage and school life.. her good days and bad..she written about them all and as rahul reads his eye s fill with tears because muskaan hasn't change a bit same innocence can be seen and felt by he presence.. he laughs at her funny comments… as he moves on he comes across muskaan's trip to Europe the very first time they met… he is sursprised tat she has written so much about the trip she ven has a coupleof photos that he doesn't remember her taking of him… he goe son reading…

Muskaan's writing: "europe… iss jaga ko jitna praise dongi utna kam hain.. what an amazing place.. mountains, waterfalls, valleys.. sub kuch kitna khoobsorat hain bilqual aik khawab jaisa.. aur anjali ridz kay saath yeh safar aur bhi abhut acha raha.. lakin is safar per main aik ajnabee se mili.. wo ajnabi…wo.. ajnabi nahi…shayad koi apna tha.. pata nahi kaisey har waqt help kay liye ajata.. agar who na hota toh ajj main yahaan nahi hoti… hameesha ki tarah akali iss duniya main bhatakhti hui jab airport per lost hogai aur kuch gande logon nay mujhay … mujhay daraya.. toh mujhay laga ajj toh papaji… nay mujhay bula he liya lakin.. phir who ajnanabi aya.. aur jaisey aik sec main sab kuch sahi hogaya.. sab kuch theek.. kuan hain.. kahan hain? nahi jaanti haan naam zaroor pata hina.. Rahul.. Rahul Garewal.. . usskay naam main hain kuch.. aik garv.. ya shayad.. aik mazbooti jo bahu kum loogonmain hoti hain..main larti use ussey dekhna chati thi kay main bhi strng hoon.. cool.. uski tarah lakin har baar.. wohi.. mujhay jeet leta.. aur.. phir main jaisey bilqual.. chup rehjati dehkti rehti.. khair.. agar who ajnabi yeh phar lay toh soochey ga "kya larki hain upper say daatey hain aur inder say mujhi par marti hain" anyways lakin akhair main muskaan hoon toh meray liye chalta hian.. kahir ajnabi tum jahan bhi hoon kahein bhi hoon… thank you mujhay baachaney ka.. aur haan tumhari sub say achi baat yeh kay jab tumney kaha tha "yeh zindagi bahut lambi hain aur humrey pass waqt bahut kum hum tum zaroor miley gay" aggarr yeh saach hua toh tumhe aik din zaroor kahongi kay tum mere liye kyat hay uss raat jab mera koi nahi tha… aur shayad tumharey jaisey bahut kum loog hain iss dunya.. mein.. dua karti hoon papaji se kay tujhay har voh khushi miley jo tujhay chiyaya..(rahul is interrupted.. by a tap on his shoulder, he is startled)

Muskaan: Rahul..! tum yeh…kya.. (takes it away form his hands) rahul tuney meri diary phari. tujhay pata hain yeh meri personal dairy hain.. sirf meray .. liye..(as she is busy closing it up rahul keeps his eyes on her and is stunned at how much cared about him evr since the first time and that he has always though differently that for him it was later that he started to have feelings for him but muskaan has always cared about him soo much… he just stares at her in complete awe..

Muskaan: Oye..(Snaps her fingers in front of his face) kya hua…

Rahul: (look deeply at her he has tears in his eyes)…Muskaan tuney.. yeh sab…? (points to the diary)

Muskaan: (puts her finger on his mouth) rahul…. choor na..

Rahul: kabs e.. tumujhay pasand karti thi.. aur main…

Muskaan: dekh rrahul yeh zindagi hain na … uss upar waley nay banai hain.. aur such kaho toh bahut khoobsorat hain… tujhay toh jaisey maine pehli nazar main he chaha.. aur bas uskay bad say sirf dua ki kay toh jaha hoon;.. jaisey hoon.. bas khush hoon.. aur phir aik din upar wlaey nay meri sunli aur tuhjahy merya pass bheejh diya.. bas itni si baat hain yeh.. sab..(looks at rahul whp has a ter falling from his eyes) arrey.. tujhay kay hua.. rahul toh bhi na (wipes his tears and makes him sit) kitna sensitive hain… waisey toh bara hero bana phirta hain.. chal beth yahan… main coffe lay kay aii..(she starts to go when he pulls her backa nbd hugs her tightly)

Rahul: Muskaan mujhay maaf kardeyna maine teri feelings kabhi shamjhi hi nahi…main toh yahi shamja kay toh mujh say kitni nafrta karti thi aur phir jab main tujhsay pyaar karney laga toh hi tu nay mujhay pyaar kiya.. lakin toh tu jaaney kab se.. mujhsey… (lets her go form his embrace and looks at her holding her hand) muskaan.. I love you soo much.. (kisses her hands)

Muskaan: I love you too rahul… voh kya hian na main apni feelings ko leykar hameesha say thodi careless hoon.. akelay rehtey rehtay thak gayi hoon aur apni narmi kabhi saamne nahi aney deyti.. issi liye feelings ko hid ekarti hoon.. lakin jab tum milli tab.. sub kuch badal gaya.. aisa laga jaisey ab main akeli nahi… ab mujhay tumhara saath haasil hain.. iss loiye darti hoon kay kahei tu mujhsy.. door na …

Rhaul: Muskaan… (cutting her off) main tujh se door nahi jaaney wala.. yeh wada hain.. ajj ki aur humarey aaney wale kal ki haqeeqat hain…. aur tujhay agar koi dulhan banai gat oh voh hoon main.. sirf main.. shamjhi… (kisses her forhead )

Muskaan: (smiles looking at him) toh abb coffee hojai…?

Rahul: haan..abb toh main bhi thak gaya hoon.. teray saath itni baatein kar kay (jokingly)

Muskaa: acha.. toh yeh baat hain…(glares t him)

Rahul: Oye! teri ankehin bahir na gir jai.. inhein inder rakh plz..

Muskaan: Rahullllllllllll!

Rahul: Muskaaaaaaaaaaan!

Muskaan: Uff... kya karo tera… (slaps her own forhead)

Rahul: Pyar kar lakin fil haal... coffee… plz..

Muskaan: (smiles) theekh hain toh rukh main abhi gai bahi aii..

**As muskaan goes in to the kitchen to make coffee rahul turns on the t.v and as he is watching his day's exhaustion gets a hold of him and he drifts in to deep sleep on the couch... while muskaan brings in coffee with rahul's fav cookies she sees that the T.V is turned ona dn Rahul is sleeping*

Muskaan: oye! (smiles) yeh toh soo gaya (puts down her tray on thetable and goes to him with a blanket, as she puts the blanket on him she notices the calm and sweetnes that resides on rahul's face as he sleeps.. she is lost in his expressions) (to herself) kitna,, sona lagta hain.. tu sotey way..bilqual aik cute say baby ki tarah (smiles to herself) kash toh hameesha issi tarah rahey… tujhay koi problem kabhi tang na karey.. toh duniya ki mushkiloon say dur rahey.. aur (runs her fingers thorugh his har) meray pass pass reahy..(she leans closey towards him and kisses him on the cheek.. as he is sleeping rahul moves his hand unintentially holding muskaan's ) with a smile muskaan blushes and puts her head down on the couch and sit son the floor closing her eyes as she can feel rahul's grip on her hand.. it's strong and protective.. she knows he will always be there.. she drifts into sleep as well.. Kneeling besides rahul on the floor…)

** Next mornig Rahul wakes up and see sthat muskaan had been sleeping next to him and he has held he rhand.. he realize staht how uncomfortable it must be for her to sleep like that all night half on the floor and he rhead resting on the couch… he approaches his hand to wake her up then,, stops..**

Rahul: Muskaan.. tub hi na.. ab kaisey utho.. sori hain.. (thinking) hmm.. apna haath hata layta hoon… (he remove shis hand and that is felt by muskaan she gets up..)

Muskaan: Rahul!

Rahul: Muskaan... main yahi hoon... kay hua..(he gets shocked seeing muskaan freaking out all of a sudden)

Mukaan: voh main.. mujhay laga.. chor…

Rahul: Muskaan… toh theek hain na?

Muskaan: Haan main theek (fixing her hair she is trying to get up but her lower back is hurting because eof the way she had been sleeping all night) Ahhhhhhh!

RaHul: Kya hua toh theek toh hain na? (tries to help he rup she is not moving)

Muskaan: Rahul pata nahi kay hogay ahian.. mujhsya hila nahi jaraha? main.. main…

Rahul:hold on… tera muscle pull hogay hoga.. kya zaroorat thi raat bhar yahaan aisey soney ki..(picks he rup in his arms.. msukaan is stunned she just looks on) kya hain? abb bata tera bedroom kahan hain?

Muskaan: corridor say 2 room left.. . per kyun?

Rahul: Kya matlab kyun… tujhay letana hain.

Mukaan: subha hogai hain humey hospital jana hian.

Rahul: (laughs) to hiss halta mein hospital toh kya… bathroom bhi nahi japai ge.. muscle pull hua hain… tera.. Dr.muskaan app ko pata hona chiyay amuscl epull karney sayu band walk nahi kar pata…(he opens the room door and gently takes her to her bed..)

Muskaan: per rahul dr. keerti…(tries to get up) Ouch!

Rahul: dekh muskaan toh anhi jarahi hain..s hamjhi.. kitna dard horahian rujhay abhia,,, fikar na kar main bata doon ga.. mujhay late horaha hian… alright toh aik kaam kar… (fixes the pillow make she rile down and then elevates her leg) ajj aisey he rahey.. rest karley main ramu kaka ko bula leyt ahoon meray ghar say who tera khyaal karey gay.. phir main ajj try karta hoon kay jaldi ajao.. shmajhi…

Muskaan: rahul per..

Rahul: (on his cell calling ramu kaka he gestures muskaan to be quiet) HELLO! ramu kaka.. je main rahul… ramu kaka app aik kaam karey muskaan kay ghar.. mera matlab hain kai jo bandra mian apartments hain na.. haan wohi waley falt # 102 per chaley jai whan meri aik doost ka khayyal rakhey ussey choot aii hain.. khana.. peena make sure who sab miley jo app mujhay daytey hain jab meri tabyaat kharaab hoon.. jee.. address likh liya na..? .. jee .jee.. nahi meir kal bahutt important duty thi issi lliye raat nahi aaya… (he looks at muskaan.. with a miscvhivious look she blushes) sahi hain phir main rakhtha hoon (hangs up)

Muskaan:rahul main sara din kay karoongi?

Rahul: Jaan.. app sara din sirf araam karrongi..(realizes he is getting late) abbmuhya jan ahain.. tum yhai rehna main tumhai key bahir rakh jata hoon.. ramu kaka khd ajai gay.. sahi hain.. (kisse she r forhead) I love you...

Muskaan: "I hate you…" (makes a face)

Rhaul: dekh muskaan.. teray bhaley kay liye sab kuch kar raha hoon.. Ab jaldi say smile kar warna main yahan say nahi jao ga aur late hojao ga aur phir dr. keerti tu toh jaanti hain na?

Muskaan: tujhse jeetna kitna mushkil hain..(smiles and blows hima kiss) I will miss you jaldi ana

Rahul: that's like it…(smiles and waves her good bye and heads out)

Muskaan: pagal ahin yeh larka… (flips over the magazine on her side table and starts reading)

*** Rahul is running late he tucks his shirt in as he is getting in to his car and realzies he going to snajeevani in the same clothes as yesterday…***

Rahul: Abey yaar!.. yeh kya..maine toh change bhi nahi kiya kaisey kart aghar he nahi gaya..(looks at the watch) aura bb time bhi nahi hain 5 min hain .. kahir choro lagta hain ajj aisey he kaam chala n parey ga.. (he reaches sanjeevani parking lot and fixes his hair real quik before heading out) he runs in to sanjeevani with his report files and baely makes it to the nurse station where the rest of the interns are waiting…

Rahul: Phew!... hey guys

Everyone: hey rahul!... running late?

Rahul: na pooch..(dr. keerti heading towards station)

Atul: Oye rhaul tuney kaprey change nahi kiye kay?

Rmaan: (noticing rahul's strange behavior and expression) kya baat hain?

Rahul: shh... chup kar baad mein moring dr keerti

Dr keerti: Mornign interns appki duties are on the board plz follow them and meet me back here after luch for a duty change (she stats to leave)

ALL interns: (Relaxing) thank ghawd ( keerti turns back)

Keerti: Where is Dr. Muskaan?

Rahul: (shocked) Mam'am actually…

Anjie and Ridz: (lookinga round asking eachother where is she)

Rahul: Dr. Muskaan ajj nahi aiige

Dr: Keerti: why is that Dr. Rhaul?

Ridz andNajie (shocked): yeha rahul why?

Rahul: (looks at them then Dr. Keerti) she is sick..she pulled a muscle and so.. mam'm voh nahi aa sakey ge..

Dr keerti: Oh… ok tehn proceed to your duties (she leaves)

Ridz and amaan: Rahul! (a AND r LOOK AT EACHOTHER)

Ridz: mujhay RAHUL SAY BAAT LAR NI HAIN PEHLAY

Armaan: nhai mera doost pehlay meri baat…

Ridz: voh hum sba ka doost hain

Rahul: guys tum dono muhjse baat kar saktey hoon what' the matter?

Armaan: (about to as something but stops) actually ridhimma pehlay app..

Ridz: (surprised at armi's behavior but proceeds) jahan tak muhay yaad hain humney kal rat muskaan ko shai halat mein dekha tah.. aur uska koi muscle pull nahi hua tha… lakin tum uss kay saath tahy na? kya hua ussey…

Anjie: yeah.. rahul you gusy wer the last people..

Rhaul: (shocked can't find the right thing to say) guys.. boh main..

Ridz: muskaan meri best friend hain agar usey kuch hota toh voh mujhay ay anjie ko call karti

Armaan: well anjie and ridz rahul mer abest friend hain aur I am sure rahul ahs nothing to do with muskaan.. right rahu?

Atul: haan rahul bol de inhe,, kay toh nahi janta uss chatter box nay apna muscle pull kaisey kiya..

Anjie (in anger): Atul! behave your elanguage meri friend ko cahttter box na kaho..

Rahul: (breaks them up): guys… look muskaan aky pao ka muscle pull hoga ya tha last night jab voh.. meray (realizes that he is not supposed to tell tehm anything yet)

All interns: voh what?

Rahul: jab voh sanjeevani ki entrance per slip oigai thi… jaatey waqt so I gave her a ride home and she said to tell dr. keerti she won't make it today…)he says trying to sound convincing)

RIDZ: anjie…I think rahul is right

Anjie: yeah lets go call muski... (they leave but armaan and atul are there still dobting)

Rahul: What?

Atul: ummm..(looks at armaan) voh yeh yahan khara that oh main bhi u know …

Armaan: atul tu ja main aya. (atul also leaves).

Rahul:Ajeeb insaan hain yeh atul.. (looks at armaan hiding his nervousness)

Armaan: Tujhse zayada nahi!

Rahul: Kya matlab?!

Armaan: dekh rahul tujhay main tujh se achi tarah jaanta hoon…

Rhaul: toh?

Armaan: yeh sab kay hain teray aur dr.muskaan kay beech?

Rahul: kuch..nahu.. kuch bhi toh nahi…

Armaan: right.. tu ajj tak kabhi apney kaprey repeat nahi karta.. toh phir what's different today...nervous nahi hota then why are you looking guilty? (then looks at the fiel he is holding which is msukaan becuz rahul accidently pickled hers up from the car) aur toh aur kabhi doosroon ki file nahi pakrta tha phir ajj what's different?

Rahul: (shocked he looks at the f ile it's muskaan's) umm.. Armaan.. main voh…

Armaan: betay toh raat ghar per nhai tha na?

Rahul: (guilty) nahi tha..

Armaan: rahul toh.. nahi yaar.. tuney shaadi se pehlay nahi yaar..

Rahul: Armaan! pagal mat ban.. idhar aa..(he take shim to a corner and explains everything that happened with him and muskaan he tells armaan everything)

Armaan: oye huye! yeh baat hain…HMMM,.

Rahul: armaan abb toh yeh bat apey pait tak he rakhna.. oher wise I will kill you shamajh gay na?

Armaan: jee.. shamajh gaya sir! (jokingly)

**They both leave for their duties and get busy with work patients checkups and routines interns are all busy… finally it's 6:00 and they have to report back to Dr. Keerti as they approach nurse station they se buch of people crowded infornt of the t.v**

Araan: kya hua? yeh sab yhan per

Rhaul:I don't know chal chl kay dekhtey hain

Atul: lets go..

Ridz: omg!

Anjie: nahi

Armaan: kya hua..!

Ridz: (points at the screen)

TV NEWS CASTER: ajj bandra kay apt builing block 12 mein agg lag gaye haiin apartment kay rehnay waaley loog resuc hue hain lakin abhi bhi more thanhalf of the residents are still in the building agg bharti he jarahi hain.. fire birgaders are trying there best apt number 1-75 aky residents rescuded hain laikin there are no confirmation on the rest…

Rahul: (shell shocked) yeh vohi building hain na jahan per muskaan…

Ridz: HAAN YEH VOHI…

Armaan: rahul…! (he tries to get a hold of rahul who si about to faint) hoosh mein aa..!

Anjie: ridz muski kahein.. voh toh nahi..?

Atul: yaar..a rmaan aag toh bharti he jarahi hain.. (point at the tv)

Rahul: nahi.. muskaan ko kcuh nahi hoga…(he gets himself in senses and runs from the hospital)

TO BE CONTINUED…

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Guys i will upload the rest of the part later in the ff section but for those who don't know me i am imane and i am in love with RM chemistry and so decided to do a ff on them you can check it out in DMG discussion forum under ~Treats 4 RM fans By Imane~ FF

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