New A-R FF / *teaser*

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hello everyone i've thought of another story on armaan and riddhima, this is just a teaser but i will carry on with all of ur approval, so please do tell me what you think of it, and do suggest some suitable names 😃
do tell me whether u like the story or not, the more comments i will get the quicker i will continue with this FF
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aishah 😊

Chori Chori Chupke Se Aayega Woh
Aake Mujhe Le Jaayega Haan
Yehi Jeevan Hai Apna Yehi To Woh Sapna
Main Ne Dekha Tune Dekha Hum Sab Ne Dekha
Yeh Sapna Na Toote Na Roothe Mera Raanjhna
Chori Chori Chupke Se Aayega Woh
Aake Mujhe Le Jaayega

"Riddhima beta aaj tum bohot khubsurat deek rahi ho" padma riddhima's mom placed a khala teeka below her neck "mujhe lagta hai ki meri khud ki nazar lag jaayegi tujko"

"Mom baraat aageyi hai"anjali tapped padma gently on the shoulder breaking a close mother- daughter moment between her and riddhima.

"haan, beta tum riddhima ko niche laadena, main jakaar bharaat ka swaagat kar thi hoon"

riddhima looked at herself in the mirror and felt tears spill down her cheeks, here she was getting married to someone she hadn't even met, she wanted to study, become the best docter in town so that she could take care of her family, and now she was getting married. How could she refuse padma though?? Padma had raised her as if she were her own child she loved her more than her own daughter, anjali, how could riddhima forget that shashank had left padma because she had chosen her over him, anjali had not received her father's love only because of her, and still padma did not leave her infact she hugged riddhima close to her chest and told her that she was her mom and she would always be there for her.

"arrey ridz, tu roh kyun rahi hai?" anjali wiped away the tears from riddhimas cheeks "ladke ki family vale bohot acche hai, aur ladka bhi bohot cute hai" Riddhima forced a smile to appear on her face "di, mujhe shaadi nahi kerni, main aap ko aur mom ko chor kar kahi nehi jaana chahti" "pagli ek na ek din toh tujhe shaadi karna hoga na, aur vaise bhi mallik family tujhe bohot khush rakhenge" riddhima had lived all her life in shimla and in a few hours time she would be leaving behind everything, her studies, her family, her memories, to go and live in mumbai with a person she hadn't even met yet.

"What the hell ??" is the first thought that entered armaan's mind, a women of about 50 was flirting with him?? " haye, kitna sona munda hai,itne bade bade muscles? haye main mar jawaan" he could barely breathe in this place, he couldn't believe this was his marriage, "the armaan mallik's marriage" the owner of mallik empires and the most eligible bachelor in town, was getting married to some behenji type girl from shimla." Why mom??" "I don't want to get married, I don't understand why I should pay for angad bhai's mistakes, if he refused to marry this middle class girl what can I do??" "Armaan, angad has left this house forever, and from now on I don't want you to speak about him,he is dead for me!!" ""mom that girl, is meant to be my bhabhi how can I marry her" "armaan please beta, maine already padma ko vachan de diya hai, this marriage has to take place, main aapni vachan ko nahi tor saakti, aur tum meri dil ke bemaari ki bare main jaante ho na, isse pehle ki ?. "mom aapki yeh emotional blackmailing nahin chalega.... "Fine I'll marry the girl, but how am I meant to forget the fact that she was meant to be my bhabhi"??
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Posted: 16 years ago
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am i the first one...i cant believe it! yippeeeeeee

i love it aishah, i do, i do, i do...but tell me something why is riddz called a behenji in every ff....she isnt a behenji in the serial . just becoz someone wears a suit doesnt mean they are behenji na...i have seen many jeans wearing types who are extremely behenjiish, and many suit types whoare extremely hip and modern. sorry, this is not really in connection with your ff, but in every ff she is a behenji type. but i really wonder why...in the serial she is a smart and sober doc who prefers to wear a certain dress and looks very chic in it...

okay, now what is this complication about thinking she is his bhabhi...arrey yaar, shaadi thodi hui thi! shoot!

and i just love kash yaar..so i am imagining shilpa here...let him take one look at her and all thoughts of bhabhi will run out of his head i hope...but this why is armaan having such weird notions. i can imagine him not wanting to marry a behenji types...but what is this bhabhi fixation?

do continue..it will be very interesting..a.nd u have written it very well...
Edited by *tiny* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: *tiny*

am i the first one...i cant believe it! yippeeeeeee

i love it aishah, i do, i do, i do...but tell me something why is riddz called a behenji in every ff....she isnt a behenji in the serial . just becoz someone wears a suit doesnt mean they are behenji na...i have seen many jeans wearing types who are extremely behenjiish, and many suit types whoare extremely hip and modern. sorry, this is not really in connection with your ff, but in every ff she is a behenji type. but i really wonder why...in the serial she is a smart and sober doc who prefers to wear a certain dress and looks very chic in it...

okay, now what is this complication about thinking she is his bhabhi...arrey yaar, shaadi thodi hui thi! shoot!

and i just love kash yaar..so i am imagining shilpa here...let him take one look at her and all thoughts of bhabhi will run out of his head i hope...but this why is armaan having such weird notions. i can imagine him not wanting to marry a behenji types...but what is this bhabhi fixation?

do continue..it will be very interesting..a.nd u have written it very well...

oh maybe i didnt put it clearly that riddhima's marriage was fixed with armaan's brother angad, who didnt want to marry her and left, thats why armaan thinks ridzi is like his bhabhi 😆 well i love ridzi in suits i guess everyone calls her a behenji because they like it when armaan changes his mind .. and starts complimenting her in a suit 😆😆 if i continue thiss ff everything will become clear. thanks a lot for replying tiny, thats very sweet of u 😳 suggest some good FF name na ?? 😃
Edited by aishah02 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Interesting concept...cant w8 to read more....and plz get AR married soon!!serial me toh nahi hua ff me hi kar do..
Edited by vinu01 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey interstng concept i luved it speacilly wen 50 years old trying to flirt wif armaan lol i loved these lines
kitna sona munda hai,itne bade bade muscles? haye main mar jawaan"
plz do pm wen u going update it and plz update it fast cos i want read it more and more lol
love sonia
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Posted: 16 years ago
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vinu and sonia thanks for replying
kinnda gutted not many people replied 😔
i guess no one liked the story
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Posted: 16 years ago
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seems really interesting! plz cont. soon! and can u PM me when u continue? :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome concept........................lovely...................Please PM whn u update...............
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey pm me,interesting concept,i love ff's of AR after marraige
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW

Its indeed a very different concept

gr8 oh poor armi

ridz was meant to be his bhabhi ............lol

interesting

want to c how'll make it progress

chandni

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