Was my Story better? (Waaris)

Originally posted by: muniza75

I havent read your ff, so no idea, but agree with you.

Muniza

It was a resumer, by the way. Not a FF. 😳😆

Originally posted by: Mahi-lover

It was something like this:

Smriti is a billionaire and married to a disabled man. She's a don, you know like Amitabh. 😆

Neha (avatar: Blazers, skirts) is smriti's daughter. From an other man. A tough woman. She talks less --- acts a lot. 😉 Ooo, she smokes too. 😃 Only because, it will be hot to see her like this.

They don't get a long. Also, because of her, Neha's Fiancee, Eijaz, dies. Only Neha can see him. Whenever she's sad and all ... we can see her talking to him.

Neha herself is a gangster and she fights Smriti for her right. For the buisness.

How does it end? Neha dies on Smriti's lap --- Not a happy ending tho. But that's the main story.

I did write a full resumer, but I have no idea which thread it was. 😆

Originally posted by: Gossip Girl

I like your story, Jake. It's very creative! I doubt anyone can come with a better story than this.

I do see chances of it working, but gangster female protagonist? What will happen to saint-ish betis/bahus we see on tv with all the rhona dhona?

Jake ur story is toooooo gud!!!!

Originally posted by: dreamer_dreams

Jake ur story is toooooo gud!!!!

i am sure the show must have done much better if this would have been the story line.