Was my Story better? (Waaris)

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Posted: 17 years ago

Remember before Waaris started, I wrote my own story of it? If Smriti took that idea ... do you think it could have become more popular (for one reason, Neha)? Could it have run for an other year?

What do you guys think? It's a better idea. No? 😳😆

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Muniza Riaz

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Posted: 17 years ago

I havent read your ff, so no idea, but agree with you.

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Originally posted by: muniza75
I havent read your ff, so no idea, but agree with you.

Muniza

If you have no idea ... how can you agree with me Ms Riaz? 😳 Let me tell you ... wait for my next reply. 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

It was a resumer, by the way. Not a FF. 😳😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

It was something like this:

Smriti is a billionaire and married to a disabled man. She's a don, you know like Amitabh. 😆

Neha (avatar: Blazers, skirts) is smriti's daughter. From an other man. A tough woman. She talks less --- acts a lot. 😉 Ooo, she smokes too. 😃 Only because, it will be hot to see her like this.

They don't get a long. Also, because of her, Neha's Fiancee, Eijaz, dies. Only Neha can see him. Whenever she's sad and all ... we can see her talking to him.

Neha herself is a gangster and she fights Smriti for her right. For the buisness.

How does it end? Neha dies on Smriti's lap --- Not a happy ending tho. But that's the main story.

I did write a full resumer, but I have no idea which thread it was. 😆

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Originally posted by: Mahi-lover

It was something like this:

Smriti is a billionaire and married to a disabled man. She's a don, you know like Amitabh. 😆

Neha (avatar: Blazers, skirts) is smriti's daughter. From an other man. A tough woman. She talks less --- acts a lot. 😉 Ooo, she smokes too. 😃 Only because, it will be hot to see her like this.

They don't get a long. Also, because of her, Neha's Fiancee, Eijaz, dies. Only Neha can see him. Whenever she's sad and all ... we can see her talking to him.

Neha herself is a gangster and she fights Smriti for her right. For the buisness.

How does it end? Neha dies on Smriti's lap --- Not a happy ending tho. But that's the main story.

I did write a full resumer, but I have no idea which thread it was. 😆

I like your story, Jake. It's very creative! I doubt anyone can come with a better story than this.

I do see chances of it working, but gangster female protagonist? What will happen to saint-ish betis/bahus we see on tv with all the rhona dhona?

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Originally posted by: Gossip Girl

I like your story, Jake. It's very creative! I doubt anyone can come with a better story than this.

I do see chances of it working, but gangster female protagonist? What will happen to saint-ish betis/bahus we see on tv with all the rhona dhona?

If they need rhona-dhona ... give 'em in a differ way. 😆😉

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Deeksha

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Posted: 17 years ago

Jake ur story is toooooo gud!!!!

i am sure the show must have done much better if this would have been the story line.

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Originally posted by: dreamer_dreams

Jake ur story is toooooo gud!!!!

i am sure the show must have done much better if this would have been the story line.

Uh thank you. Then maybe we can save it --- send Smriti a letter? or maybe a petition?

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DesiPrincess93

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Wow jake ur story is quite interesting n amazing! i think the show would have done great if ur storyline was used. 👏..and i've always wanted to see neha n eijaz together like since forever! they would burn the screen together! i luv them both!! n if IQ has to be in the show i wanna see him with Aamna shariff for some reason..lolz...now that would make a hott show if ur the storywriter n director offcourse!! hmmm lets start a petition to see neha n eijaz together? what ya think? cuz im sure smriti isnt taking a storyline from fans n plus the show is gonna end anyways...i watched like a few scenes of it n omg it seems soooo boring!! even when the show didnt start i knew it was gonna suck not because of IQ cuz i luv him but cuz the story,title, and everything doesnt attract a lot of viewers!! 😛

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