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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey all, I'm starting a new fan fiction, the story is about a girl, whose mother and father both died, she became a orphan at the age of 10, but once she was 15 someone came there to adopt her, the lady had 2 daughters, both older than her. she was really happy, but once she moved in, she got the shock of her life, the lady that adopted her only adopted her so she could be her slave, but in return that lady gave her full education. She's very happy with her life. 5 years later she's in college. And that girls name is, Mukti.


Thats kind of what the story is about, and i hope you all will like it! um, the main characters are...


Mukti - a nice, sweet, innocent girl, who does everything her adopted mother says, listens to her sisters, and lives her life to the fullest.


Dia - she's the older twin of Priya, they both get into alot of fights, and also bug Mukti very much. She can't ever think anything straight, without help from her younger twin Priya.


Priya - the younger twin. she's a very smart girl, and can do anything to get attention.


Aparna - Dia and Priya mom and Mukti's adoptive mom. she is like both her daughters, she can do anything for attention and can't get anything straight. Mukti always helps her out.


And now for our hero, which is obviously, Prem.


Prem is the son of the most richest man in Mumbai, Mr. Bajaj, everyone knows about their whole family. He is also the most sweetest guy anyone has known, he's very nice, and cares for everyone.


thats all i can type for now, i have to go, so please reply, or give some comments on the intro, and i will continue once i get the time!!!


Umam
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi hon, its a nice intro. Go ahead with the story, would be a pleasure to read.

Cheers
Richa

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i luvd prem n mukti
nyc intro...hehe cinderella typ!!
cont soooon!!

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