JDD 7-last part pg 4 - Page 3

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"I'm sorry but she's extremely critical both her and her child's life aer in danger only a miracle can save her nothing else" the doctor told a shattered family.

Bani could see jai he was standing in the light and she was in dark and he had his hand out stretched as if calling her…and after a long time she felt like nothing was holding her back and she ran into his arms…

"doctor the patient is sinking!" screamed the nurse

jai got up and as if in trance he pulled all the plugs and drips that were on him…he felt as if his life was slipping away he had to go……his Bani was in danger he could feel it…and if he didn't follow his instincts now it would be too late….


"mamma don't go pweaseeeeeeeee…." Shouted Krishna and atharav before Bani could reach jai she stopped and looked at her kids….could she really leaves them?

Jai holding his head walked down the corridor…with every memory of banis coming back to haunt him…when he first tied her dori…the night they consummated their marriage…the day she told him she was pregnant… the day the twins were born…the day the twins first walked…the day the twins first talked…and the day he last saw her with her eyes full of tears and with that he suddenly halted to a stop outside a door…


The kids suddenly disappeared and Bani turned around and ran into jais arms and all that could be heard was long beep of the machine when Bani took her final breath and jai looking through the window with tears rolling down his cheeks….

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Jai watched bani take her last breath with tears running down his cheeks…they both had come so far in life been through so much only to be torn apart like this? No thought jai this couldn't be the end...bani always used to say everything's alright in the end and if it isn't then its no the end….so this couldn't be the end for them not in this life and not in any other life
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"Bani how long will you love me for?" jai asked

"urmmm…well until your young but when you get old and have dentures and walking stick then forget t mister….." bani giggled when jai grabbed her and stared tickling her….then they both collapsed on the bed in a heap of giggleS

"Jai seriously I will love forever….because forever has no end…" whispered bani

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Jai ran into the room past all the doctors that were in shock at seeing him alive....he ran up to her and looked at her his angel in white lying there fast asleep…with no pain and no sadness on her face like the last time he saw her. But her eyes were closed…the eyes that would reflect her love for him….the eyes that spoke a million words to him…the eyes that were his undoing….and the eyes in which he saw himself every time he looked into banes eyes.

"bani sweetheart get up now is this time to sleep the kids have to get ready and go to school...common now get up…" jai shook bani but still no response.

"Bani stop playing games sweetheart I need to get ready for office...you know I cant find a damn thing without you so how I meant to get ready? Huh? Now be a good girl and get up…" jai said in a calm manner while patting her cheeks

By this time the whole family had assembled in the room and were in shock firstly to see jai…secondly realising that their bani had left them and thirdly looking at jai' condition.

Jai lloked up and saw them, but instead of greeting them he dragged them forward one by one and took them to banis bedside,

"dekhiye masi tell her shes angry with me because I left the house when she told me not to go and now shes not talking to me….masi you tell her she always listens to you tell her…" masi couldn't control her tears and gently held his face in her hands.

"munna…bani hume chodke chali gayi hain…"

Jai pulled her hands away and then said "chi masi aap eh kaisi baath kar rahi ain?"

He then dragged rano forwards," rano you tell your sister whe will listen to you…I have had enough of this punishment no more now tell her…" he dragged her forward and said to bani, " see even rano wants you to forgive me now get up bani please…aisa gaanda mazaak nahi karte…" rano unable to control her tears ran out of the room.

Jai then dragged everyone forward one by one and pleaded them to tell his bani to wake up but to no avail….until adi couldn't take it anymore' he took jai by his shoulders and shook him, "jai yeh kya pagalon jaise bartav kar raho? Bani ab iss duniya mein nahin hain! Tum jitna jaldi samjhoge iss baat ko utna hi accha hain tumhare liye aur tumahre bacho ke liye-" but before he could complete his sentence jai had grabbed the kids and placed htem on the bed.

"bani I know you can be angry with me but you can never be angry with ur kids especially ur prince atharv common now get up and let me see how you don't listen to the kids….bacho tell mamma to get up…"

Both in unison shook her, "mamma pwease get up now….look papa has also come back now you also come back…then we will go out to the park and do lots of masti and have ice cweam…no no ice cweam you don't like it when we have ice cweam so we wont have it god pwomie mamma…but please wake up….and we will watch tv when u tell us too…get up mamma pweaseeeeeeeeee…." they vigorously shook her but still nothing happned.

Jai gently pushed the kids aside and started shaking bani violently, : how can you be so stone hearted bani…you don't even wake up when the kids ask you to…how could you do this to me bani…you said we will stay forver but you left me even before our journey could begin…bani please come back I promise I will no irritate you in the morning before go to office…I will watch what I eat….I will not feed the kids sweeties on the side but you just come back to me bani please…because without you bani jai walia there is no jai walia…" saying that he collapsed in tears on the bed…..

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Bani suddenly felt jai pulling back from her and before she knew it he had disappeared she woke up screaming, "JAI!!!!"

Jais head shout up when he felt bins hand move against his head he couldn't believe it his Bani was coming back to him….he grabbed one of the doctors and pushed him towards Bani.

"hurry up and do something…my Bani is coming back to me and if you loose her this time I swear to god nothing and no one in this hospital will be spared!"

the doctor by this time was scared mindless and did his job, checked her pupils and her heartbeat and her pulse…it looked like god was being kind and was bringing her back into this world to save him and this hospital!


After a couple of tense hours where all the nurses and doctors treaded on egg shells around jai Bani was conscious and jai rushed to her bedside.

"baby…are you ok? Are you in pain? Don't u ever do that again to me…you promised not to leave me and that's what you were going to do weren't't you?"

"aap…aap…."
"ssshhhh don't say anything just rest here have some water." jai looked for the water but couldn't find it and got up to get some when he felt someone grab onto his arm. He turned around and saw that bani had grabbed his arm and her eyes had tears in them.

"main toh wahi kiya jo apne kiya…."whispered bani

Jai slowly walked to her, "kya matlab?"

"you left me without saying a word…when you promised me that you would never leave me and stay with forever…because forever has no end…but you broke that promise didn't you…" bani whispered with tears streaming down her face.

Jai slowly bent down and cupped her face in his hands and wiped her tears away with his thumbs and said, "you remembered that but did you remember that I also told you that remember your jai will only promise what he can deliver and then deliver more than her can promise….and that's what exactly happened I fought death to come back to you…do you know why because it was your love and devotion that pulled me back from death…there was one point when I was going to give up this fight but then I remembered the kids and then I remembered you…and I though no…not even death can take me away from you and then I came back just for you…no-one else just for you….and I promise you again we are going to be together forever because forever has no end. The onli person that can make or break jai walia is bani walia…jai walia is nothing without bani walia…..bani walia is his essesence…his reason for loving….his reason for living…his reason for breathing….and the reason for his existence…" saying that he broke down and bani simply embraced him and together they lay together like that until all the tears had been spent

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The next morning after having a quick shave and shower jai went o see the doctor.

"doctor saab sorri about yesterday I just got a bit emotional…" said jai sheepishly

The doctor simply smiled and said, "its ok Mr. Walia ….I understand but I must say its true love that bough Mrs Walia back otherwise we hardly get to see miracles like this nowadays.

Hearing this jai simply blushed and quickly changing the topic said, "urmmm…when can we take bani home?"

"well I would like to keep her in observation for today and then if there arnt any problems then tomorrow morning will be just perfect. But I must say that you have to be very careful with both of them now. And mrs walia shoud be kept away from any major form of stress-"

Jai interrupted with a confused impression on his face saying, "both of them?"

" yes mrs walia and the baby…" replied the doctor

"baby…that means bani is pregnant?" said jai with a massive smile on his face

"yes…."

"omg omg omg…does bani know?"asked jai

"yes she does…."

"and she didn't tell me…but then again she hasnt had a chance to tell me…hold on…hold on she just had an accident is everything alrite with the baby I mean its alright isn't it?"

"don't wory the baby is fine the car just hit her legs and then she hit her head that's why she had so much blood loss otherwise the baby is fine and in perfect condition."

After talking to the doctor for some more time jai left to go and see bani. When he entered the room he saw bani was sleeping and so he decided to talk to his unborn child. Placing his hand on her stomach he started talking to his baby.

" her princess…how are u? its papa….you recognise me na? I knw papas been bad and hasn't been there but now hes here and he promises that he will stay here with you…now be a good girl and don't trouble mamma like your bhaiya and di did….you be a good girl your papas angel…you should be exactly like you mamma…when you smile it should light up the whole house….you should have a dimple on you right cheek that will capture anyone's heart when you smile just like your mamma….you heart should be like your mamma clean and pure as an angels…always think good about everyone and keep everyone happy…your eyes have ot be like your mammas the windows to your soul…when you smile and naughty they should twinkle…but please just don't be a jasoos like your mum and don't do any jasoosi princess it just makes things worse….and urmm what else I knw…love your papa the most just like your mamma does…." saying that he placed a gentle kiss on her stomach and lay his head there when he felt fingers running through his hair he looked up to see bani was awake.

"what are you doing down there?" bani asked

"talking to my princess…."
"and what exactly were you saying to her?'

"to be just like her mamma…." edited jai

" well that's not going to happen"

Jai frowned, "kyun?"

"because my prince Is going to be exactly like his father not his mummy….

"prince? U mean princess….

"Prince….."

"Princess"

And like this they spent the next couple of hours arguing until the twins came running in

"papa papa aap agaye!!!" screamed the kids and jumped on him up and down

Jai winced his bruises and scratches still hurt him but didn't say anything seeing the smile on his kids faces.

"pehle app chalegye phir mummy yahan pe ayaa…lekin mamma toh kehri thi aap bhagwanji ke paas thai…toh aap waapis kaise agaye?" krishu asked

"yes princess I was…lekhin mein waapis agaya…."

"kyun?" krishu asked

"krishu ther mein bata hoon…"interrupted atharav with his trademark cheeky smile

"batao nah phir jaldi bhai…"

"who isilye kyun ki papa ne bahut masti ki thi bhagavnji ke paas isliye bhagavanji taang agaye aur papa ko waapis bhej diya…hai na mamma?" atharav asked with his cheeky grin.

Bani unable to answer through her laughter simply nodded

"hohhhhhhhhhhh sachi bhai?"

"muchi…." replied atharav and then he quciky ran away from jai and hid next to bani where he was safe.

"tu ther ja atharav ab mein tum decagonal ke masti kya hota hain!" jai teased him

Atharav in turn stuck his otngue out at jai and said, " aur aap hamesha ki tarah haar jayenge mujhse aur mama se…hai na mama?"

"haan beta…" replied bani ruffling his hair.

"hey bhai mere papa ko taang maat karo…." argued krishu

"that's my princess!" said jai cuddling her

"karonga!" atharav replied sticking his tongue out and making a face at her!

"maat karna varna…."

"varna kya?"

"varna mein aapko…."

"mujhe kya?"

"riya ka number nahi doing!" krishu replied sticking her tongue out at him

"that's not fair!" said atharav

"is to!" replied krishu

Jai and bani witnessed this whole banter with a smile on their face and when they asked atharav who tia was krishu was quick to reply

"riyia bhai ki girlfired hain!" giggled krishu

"nahi who meri dost hain jaisi tumhari vaisi meri…." argued atharav

"hohhhhhhhhhhh jhooot bhai aap ki naak lambi ho jayegi!" said krishu

"atharav…." bani said sternly but was cut off by jai

" haiiiiiiii mera atharav making me proud just like your father! Ladikiyon ki line lag jaati hain hum jaha jaate hain…aab hum iske baare mein kya karen? Aur waise apni maama aur bhen ko ignore karo yeh hum se jaalte hain….kyunki saare laadke inse rakhi banwati hain na?" saying that the father and son hi-fied each other while bani simmered in anger and when she looked like she was going to explode. Jai quickly gave her an apology.

"sorry baby I didn't mean that common don't get angry because anger means stress…stress means high blood pressure and that's not good for you or the baby calm down now…."

"hohhhhhhhh baby wheres the baby? Mujhe oth nahi dekhiya deta hain…." said atharav

"isliye kyunki who aapke mummy ke aander hain…meri 2nd princess ko kuch 6 mahine lagenge aane me?"

"princess? Yani ke anoher sister to boss over?" asked atharav with a big grin

" mere liye ke bhen jo mere saath khelegi?" asked krishu with a twinkle in her eye

"yes…aap ke liye aap ki nayi sister aanwali hain 6 months main."

"vaisa bhai bhi ho sakta hain…"

"no mamma! Hume sirf bhen chaiye no bhai!"

"aur mujhe sirf princess chaiye!" said jai in the same tone as the kids

And so they spent the wole afternoon and evening thinking of names for the new arrival and also what they would when she came…what she would read watch….they had basically planned her whole life out….and slowly nite fell and the kids fel asleep on the bed between jai and bani.
Jai and bani looked at each other and linked their hands over their childrens chests and said, " thank you and I love you…." and with that their famous eyes lock happened….
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Epilogue

10 months had passed and a lot had happened….meera had been arrested on the grounds of attempted murder of Mr Walia and pronita had been arrested for attempting to run over bani. They both confessed to both charges and also admitted that the reason they did this was to get bani out of jais life. Hearing this the court decided that they were mentally unfit and placed htem in the mental asyulum. Jai bribed the mental asylum officers and made sure that they were both placed in a cell that was so small they could hardly move in there…..he also made sure that the cells were full of mice rats and spiders…..he scared the life out of them so much that soon enough they lost their mental balance completely and decide to have cat fights with each other. With meera calling pronita demon and pronita calling meera bafoon.….they just clawed at each others hair….and a as a result pronita lost the one eyebrow arch as there were no eyebrows to arch and looked like the demon reincarnated and as for meera well she still looked like a bafoon nothing could be done about that.

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As for the Walia well jai and the kids got their wish bani did have a princess who they named, Diya Walia but was fondly known as angel in the house. And well bani was a bit disappointed that she didn't have a son but like jai said there's always next time and the next time they would just try harder!

muchos pyaar
huma
p.s any feedback would be welcome and if not then i hope u at least smile during this uodate thanks to my athrav and kirshu

hey huma gr88 part

the devil incarnation became angel at the end of the story

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