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Posted: 16 years ago
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Guys this is just some story I was thinking of getting Prem back. I kinda of used stuff from Twilight. (Heer-Bela Preet-Jacob & of course Prem-Edward)

Since Prem is gone, Heer is going to be sad and miserable. She's going to crying a lot missing him and all that yucky stuff. Preet comes in there (like Jacob Black) and comforts Heer. They share thier sadness, tell stories about Prem, keep him alive in thier memories. He starts to show her how to smile again, make her happy, show her fun and they become very good freinds. They grow closer and closer and Heer realizes he's her own personal sun and she cannot be where she is without Preet, he's kept her so happy and he's the bestest friend she's ever had. She cannot be without him, she's already lost prem, she cant bear to lose preet either (before you get it's only in a freinds way not the lovey way she feels for Prem). They continue to comfort each other, making each other smile. The family sees this. They all think about Prem and miss him, how sad heer was, how preet stepped up to the plate and showed his bhabi how to smile once more. They decide it's best that preet marry Heer. Everyone agrees. They go to Preet and ask him if he will marry Heer. He refuses sayin heer is prem's bhai's, I canot take her away from him, and beside have you thought about what she will think. She'll never take me, she loves prem! They tell him prem is gone, hes not here, he cant marry her! You can, you can make her happy, you've showed her how to smile, you've comfort her like no on has, she's always happy whenever your around. If she's to spend her live with another man it can only be you! prem would want her to be happy, and only you make her happy. would you want ot she her sad? you bhai sad? this is what prem would have wanted. They argue for a while proving points and finally persuade preet to marry heer on one condition -- they ask heer first, if she's ready to marry him, he will marry her today!! The family is happy to hear this and worry the greater challenge of persuading heer. they go to her and tell her what all has happened. She breaks down saying no! she can't! She won't marry anyone, only prem. He'll came back to his heer, he has to. This story hasn't ended. Prem and heer are end up together, that's how it ends, and that's how it will end! One of the family member speaks up saying you right the story hasnt ended, you're still here but prem isn't! Instead he's come back as preet, he's in preet's heart, marry him! Prem wouldnt be mad, he wants you to be happy, and preet will keep you happy, he would have wanted it this way. She continues to refuse and preet comes in there saying if she doens't want to marry, then i wont marry her, that's final. They family scatter disappointed. They try to think of some way to persuade heer. Meanwhile heer is crying, thinking abou prem, and "talking" to prem saying things like "why? why did tyou go? come back to me? your heer misses you so much" and prem appears saying i haven't left, how could i leave my heer, i'm with you 24/7, i've build a very nice warm house in you heart and i refuse to ever leave it" and he smiles his beautiful smile (lol) he says he doesnt want to see her sad like this never again and wipes her tears he tells her to marry preet, he's good for her, look me i cant be with you like this..heer says no! i only want you prem, ill choose to be with even this way prem says its not right its not how it should be heer argue says you and me thats how it should be and prem argues with her encourage the marrige and heer agruee disapproving the marriage finally prem yells out no heer your going to marry preet and thats final, i'm leaving! heer says no! she wakes up! heer cries saying no prem come back please. prem appears touches her cheek and says i'll always be with you pagli now be a good girl and marry preet and he leans to kiss her, she pushes him away saying why do you keep trying to me to marry preet, dont you love me anymore? he says what kind of question is that? of couse i love you, i can never stop loving you, trying to stop loving you is like trying to get a fat kid to go on a all healthy veggie diet, impossible! and he laughs his gorgeous laugh. heer ask then be with me, he says i am with you and always will, but not in a way that you and preet should why are you not grasping this! i cant marry you! i cant love in a way a person is pose to (not in a nasty way!! but still physically) i'm not alive...preet comes in and prem diappears smiling. heers yells out premmmm! preet looks in the direction heer was looking and looks back at her. he sits down next to her and says "bhabi i need to talk to you, i know the family came to talk to you about the marrige" heer "preet.." preet "listen to me first please, i know they came to talk to you, and i told them no, i cant replace prem, i cant take you like that, you love him, i told them that, you wouldnt agree, but they still tried. look heer its upto you, i know the answer is know but listen whatever you decision is im fine with it. its its a no i never ask you again, i'll leave you alone, but if its a yes know that i wont force anyhting on you, i love you and cherish you like prem bhai would, ill never let a tear fall and alway keep you happy, b/c just today i realized i have love for you..." heer is shocked and backs a bit everything freezes and prem comes back heer reaches for prem and crys, prem says i tld you not more crying and i todl you preet is right for you, did you just hear all he's said, say yes heer for me, please ,just say yes, you wont refuse my request will you? heer says anything but that please prem, he says not this is the only thing he want, cant she give it him, all he wants is her happiness and this the only way he'll truely know she's happy, she cries and huggs him and says not but she keeps saying more things and she fianlly agress after some time and he disappears, her arms cross and she opens her eyes, nothing is in between her arms, she looks at preet whos waiting, prems face appear on preet and heer reaches out and touches prem face disappears and preet has his eyes closed. heers removes her hand, she sees prems face saying say yes, begging in a cute happy smiley way. she smiles and nods her head. preet head appears and he asks are you sure, prem head appears and he's nodding so she nods and preet comes back and says okay i'll go tell the family. i swear to you ill keep all my promise and make you the happiest woman on this earth, i wont let you feel prem missing presence, ill fill with joy. and he walks out heer cry as she realizes what just happend. time goes by and theyre engaged. all the rasms finish and the marrige is today. all the vows are done and all thats left are the pheres. they get up to do them, meanwhile some car apears ...phere 1...mans gets out...phere 2.....man's walking toward mandap...phere 3...man's still walking...phere 4....he's almost there phere 5......he reaches it ....phere 6 .....everyone is shocked and preet stops looking at the man, heer bumps into him and looks at him she looks towards the direction of preet shocked face and see PREM!! everyone is shocked! she screams prem! prem looks at her shocked! everyone looks at prem! she yells prem is it really you? he answers yes! hum milay na milay plays really fast at this point and heer runs to him! heer says your real? he says yes! she ask how? everyone runs toward him they all ask where has he been? how did he get here? they thought he was died. he explains the mix up at the bomb blasting his stuff in the other's guy's jacket, etc all are happy!...preet walks off th mandap and walks towards prem, he looks up at him and smiles, preet is about ot walk to the side and aroudn him and when prem stops him, he says didnt you miss me? preet says i've missed you so much , i've cried you so muchand now you come back. why not sooner? out of all days today? prem says sorry and relizes what was going on, he tells preet congratz on the marrige bha, you've have a great bride. preet says she's not my bride she never will be this wedding is off, she's yours and walks off.
thats all i got. of course prem and heer will be happy, they're together! i wish this happened. the only bad thing is preet. poor preet i dont want him to be sad and hurtm he deserves a nice girl! someone who will love him just as much as heer loves prem.
what do you guys think?

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I don't think so. I know what you are wanting to say, but...hold on, it can happen. Like Preet comforting Heer and all thinking she is his bhabhi, which she obviously is. Than Ashlesha will think Heer is trying to steal Preet and become evil and start doing evil deeds. Than Lallu will get some wacky idea of getting Preer married but at the last moment, our hero Prem enters and its PREM-HEER as always...and forever.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Shifali*

I don't think so. I know what you are wanting to say, but...hold on, it can happen. Like Preet comforting Heer and all thinking she is his bhabhi, which she obviously is. Than Ashlesha will think Heer is trying to steal Preet and become evil and start doing evil deeds. Than Lallu will get some wacky idea of getting Preer married but at the last moment, our hero Prem enters and its PREM-HEER as always...and forever.

ye totally agree with u..x
coz aslesha gna start thinking AGAINST heer..x
which we dnt want..x
Freeha..x😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Well if lallu does think of Preet and Heer, i hope Prem comes in the nick of time!

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