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Originally posted by: Grateful Dead
Muneeeeeeeeeeeeeeee🤗
Mindblowing..overwhelming,marvelous,phenomenol,spectacular,stupendous,.touching,poignant and ofcourse extremely credible...the three months torture of Prachi was needed to redeem her..i cant define in words how beautifully you have narrated their love making in the last part...sooooooo beautiful and pure...the epilogue is sooooooo touching...milind's anxiety for Prachi during the delivery is soooo emotional...a wonderful revelation...Munee...thanks a ton...and loved the name Mahek..thanks again for the brillliant read..!!
Oh my God GD that's too many adjectives and they're all so NICE to read.....😊 I'm so so happy you liked it to this extent yeah the lovemaking was essential had to show they patched up for good. I guess fathers get emotional during child births..... and I like the name Mahek a cousin of mine is named that...😊
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