Revelation(epilogue) pg 37- 25/10 (short Michi FF) - Page 31

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: tweety_me14

Munee this short FF was simply amazing!

I would have loved to see something like this being played out in the serial, but alas, i don't think its going to be possible...
Nevertheless, I was able to visualise the whole thing- all thanks to the way you write!
I loved your work here Munee- it was simply outstanding!
Thanks for such a wonderful FF!

Aw Upa it had to be wonderful afterall I'm your sister see same grandpa and great minds think alike issi liye toh you liked it so much. I too had hoped to see something similar to this onscreen .... alas.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Aw Upa it had to be wonderful afterall I'm your sister see same grandpa and great minds think alike issi liye toh you liked it so much. I too had hoped to see something similar to this onscreen .... alas.๐Ÿ˜Š

Yes, afterall beheno ki soch ek jaisi hi hoti hain! Another thing in common- both of us LOVE Shabir to death! Isn't it?? ๐Ÿ˜ณ Sometimes I feel even love is a small word ๐Ÿ˜•..I don't know whether I love him, admire him, respect him or even literally worship him? ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: tweety_me14

Yes, afterall beheno ki soch ek jaisi hi hoti hain! Another thing in common- both of us LOVE Shabir to death! Isn't it?? ๐Ÿ˜ณ Sometimes I feel even love is a small word ๐Ÿ˜•..I don't know whether I love him, admire him, respect him or even literally worship him? ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†

Aiye haye Upa itna pyaar jeeja jii sey acha nahin hai chanda.... ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† yes seriously I love him too how lucky that guy is getting our unconditional love without even knowing it.....
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Aiye haye Upa itna pyaar jeeja jii sey acha nahin hai chanda.... ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† yes seriously I love him too how lucky that guy is getting our unconditional love without even knowing it.....

Jeejai....๐Ÿ˜ณ Aww tum unhein abhi se jijaji bula rahi ho ๐Ÿ˜ณ How cute is that! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Im sure he will love to have a saali like you ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜†
On a serious note- yes that guy has all the luck! ๐Ÿ˜‰ touchwood for that! Hope he gets lots more love from everyone!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: michifanreal

Thanks for making Milind got to go through a child birth. I really wanted this wonderful experience to be witnessed by him. Though I was nervous reading he had to make a choice between his wife and child was glad all went well in the end.

Loved Sumonto's worries about his sister not yet being the little mischief. I am glad he finally feels at home with Milind.

Loved the Katrina-Mehek conversation. So, you made Milind like Katrina.. hahaah (I don't like her :-((). But for once I was happy that Prachi didn't let him name their daughhter Katrina.. (the name is illfamous in US now, after the devastating Katrina hurricane).

Glad to see a happy Michi family. I hope Prachi has learnt her lessons and will not let go this happiness of which she is a pillar too.

I'm so happy Shubha you liked it I must admit the track had me frustrated and this was a good way of venting it all out. ๐Ÿ˜Š I actually never thought of Katrina as in the hurricane oh my....
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: michifanreal

and Munee special thanks for writing this FF, it made me feel so much better at times when they were bombarding us with non sense in the serial (which they still are).<br><br>

Oh thank you darling for appreciating my work so much it's really very encouraging since I plan on writing a short Shachi ff now.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rosie111

thank you so much it was a wonderful ff and you are a very good writer thank you so much writing this wonderful ff thanks again

Thank you rosie darling thank you so much.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Grateful Dead

Muneeeeeeeeeeeeeeee๐Ÿค—

Mindblowing..overwhelming,marvelous,phenomenol,spectacular,stupendous,.touching,poignant and ofcourse extremely credible...the three months torture of Prachi was needed to redeem her..i cant define in words how beautifully you have narrated their love making in the last part...sooooooo beautiful and pure...the epilogue is sooooooo touching...milind's anxiety for Prachi during the delivery is soooo emotional...a wonderful revelation...Munee...thanks a ton...and loved the name Mahek..thanks again for the brillliant read..!!

Oh my God GD that's too many adjectives and they're all so NICE to read.....๐Ÿ˜Š I'm so so happy you liked it to this extent yeah the lovemaking was essential had to show they patched up for good. I guess fathers get emotional during child births..... and I like the name Mahek a cousin of mine is named that...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks you Mene jaan for given us the beatiful FF . Lovely ending .A big thank you once again.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: lizzy_de

Thanks you Mene jaan for given us the beatiful FF . Lovely ending .A big thank you once again.

Aw Lizze jaan welcome back and yes I'm so happy you liked it. ๐Ÿ˜Š

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