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hello guys i am ridzzy i am starting a new ff i am just giving it a try hope u all like it and forgive for mistakes tell me so i can rectify n not repeat it.please comment.thank you n love u.enjoy .tc.
FF:LOVE TRIP
PART 1

(Rids is trying to convince muskaan to travel with her to India before two weeks for her cousin sister's wedding)

Rids: please muski I want to go to India.

Muski:I never said no but sapna di's marriage is after two weeks right so wat we gonna do for two weeks

Rids:we r doing nothing here also we will do Mumbai darshan.plz muski pretty plz have I ever asked u anything

Muski:wat a liar n don't give me dat puppy look of urs.ok fine I am coming

Rids:oh!u r my best friend

Muski:its high time u decide ur best friend between the three of us n well rids wat will u do of that proposal uncle told yesterday u have to see him day after tomorrow na.

Ridz:don't worry about that I told papa that I will see him when I am returning to states.

Muski:oh den u may stay at di's house right

Rids:ya jiju invited both of us n dodo will also be there.

Muski:ya I was also kind of missing bhai.

Rids:muski I was thinking of buying some clothes for the marriage wat say

Muski:good idea.rids..em..well don't get me wrong but y r u so excited to go to India ...um I mean ofcourse its sapna di's shaadi but this early.

Rids:ehh well actually even I don't know but there is this feeling that something is gonna happen .....I don't know what but something special

Muski:ok I am taking this for now lets go its almost evening u will take time for choosing Rids:muskaan..em...can u do me a favour😉

Muski:shoot

Rids:I was thinking i..i mean dad said that we should attend some party in delhi n from there we can go to MUMBAI

Muski:wats favour in that.c'mon out now

Rids:actually.i wanted to be undercover I mean in disguise not as riddhima gupta but someone different I hope u understand I mean u know that I don't like this arrogant rich brats I want a man who cares for me I mean for rids not the daughter of the great business tycoon shashank n the famous surgeon padma gupta...n I think I will meet him soon

Muski:ok then that's the reason I will sure tag along I want to meet the someone special in my rids life.now lets go.

(amy is driving the car and rags is giving him ideas to run away from the situation)

Amy:yaar rags u n ur brain needs some polishing do u understand. Ur ideas suck.i cant believe sarah has left me with u idiot.

Rags:den don't ask me for solutions

Amy:I am left with no choice

Rags:call sarah n ask her to help

Amy:what an idea sirjee.sangat ka asar.

rags:was it a joke.

Amy:hey sarah its amy here

Sarah:congo I heard u gonna join ur dad in business

Amy:kind of I called for some help

Sarah:ya I am running a side business.

Rags:sarah helpline.call on ##########

Sarah:(giggling)😆thanks rahul

Amy:will u guys stop this.papa is telling me to join him and after hearing that amit bhai is marrying he suddenly realized that I am also big enough and has got some proposal for marriage n u r here kidding with me gimme some ideas men

Sarah:ok armaan amit bhais wat u call in hindi.em saadi is after two weeks right .ok so tell uncle that u will join him after amit bhais shaadi n see that girl afterwards n after coming to states concenterate only on ur businees n if uncle asks u to marry someone say that u need to concenterate on ur career

Amy:terrific idea thnks sarah I love u n ryan r going to stay in states right.so we need a treat

Sarah:deal(keeping the call)

(amy explined rags the idea)

Rags:sore idea I hope uncle agrees

Amy:he has to. So Rahul ready to attack India

Rags:u bet

~after five days-delhi~

Rids:Muski u know I don't like these page 3 parties.

Muski:but wat for this party is

Rids:u think they need reason.well papa said that some bussinessmams daughter has made her debut in bollywood I just hope no one recognizes me.

Muski:u even feel that in this simple attire anyone will recognize u

(one lady comes)

Lady:I am sorry I didn't recognize u

Muski:hello madam I am muskaan chadha

Lady:beta tum kitni badi ho gayi tumhe bachpan mein dekha to kitni choti thi

Rids:(whispering)bachpan mein log chote hi hote hai

Lady:ye kaun hai

Muski:a rrrr

(rids kicks muski legs)

Muski:ouch

Lady:ouch?

Muski:I mean meri friend

Lady:well enjoy d party

~midnight~

(a car arrives)

Amy:we r late dude

Rags:o common not late .......fashionably late(mimicking in a British accent)

(laughing)

(a guy comes towards rids and muski air kissing them)

(Muskaan returns the gesture)

Rids:indias climate I must say

Muski:common rids its not those cheek-to-cheek contact nor sloppy wet smacks they r sophisticated muahs n schmoozing in d air if u haven't mastered d art of air kissing ur not allowed in these social parties.

Rids: ya!as if I was born yesterday I m familiar with this babes

Guy:DAHLIN'

Rids:right amount of panache n attitude with correct amount of accent (DAHLIN')right muski

dis parties r boring.

Amy:that girl must be half of his age yaar

Rags:dats why they r called pyt's pretty young things.dey r arm candies n sugar candies for show off.

Amy:mujhe bhook lagi hai .the amount of food they give ,a 5 yrs old child may eat more thn that

Rags:huh(lost)

Amy:where r u looking man (seeing muskaan)oh wa fast forward

Chal milke aate hai

Rags:r u crazy

Amy:even she is looking towards u yaar (dragging rags)

Rags: excuse me aaaaa I noticed u noticing me..............ah I just wanted to give u a notice that I noticed u too.(fumbled)


Guys I am ending it here hope u like it n plz comment.TC.😊😊





I tried to make it as long as I could.sorry couldn't update was busy enjoying diwali.heres the part.hope u all read n enjoy it.happy n a safe diwali to all of u.enjoy .tc.😊

Part 2

(amy kicked hard on his leg)

Rags:a...hi

Muskaan:(recovering)hi

Rags:I am rag..............reg.....rahghu...............i mean rrr.ahul grewal

Amy:naam to sunahi hoga.n I m armaan mallik

Rids: r u sure abt ur name hi I am rids n .........

Amy:pardon me maine hotel ka nahi aapka naam pucha(arrogantly cuts in)

Muski:mein muski for muskaan chadha and she is rids for riddhi.....................

Rids:ridhvika

Rags:nice name

Amy:u mean strange right

(rids hated arrogant guys n she quiet didn't like amy she also saw him flirting with some girls so she was trying to excuse from them)

Rids:muski I am quiet hungry n we have not ordered any so we should go to some restaurant quickly.i don't want to die of starvation

Amy:hey we are also gonna eat outside y don't u girls join us

(b4 rids could deny.............)

Muski:v will b obliged

Rags:v have our car parked outside..........

Rids:we have ours we will follow u

(in rags n amy's car )

Amy:wat was that noticing wala thing huh wat a way to start a conversation.sab pick up lines bhul gaya kya

Rags:I was so nervous that I forgot my standard pick-up lines.

Amy:nervous?

Rags:u will not understand as long as u don't meet ur girl

Amy:so muski is ur girl

Rags:I think so

Amy:good going my boy.nervous,my girl pyaar ke side-effects

Rags:there is only one happiness in this world to love n to be loved

Amy:whatever

(in rids car)

Muski:rids ye car kitne din ke liye rent pe li hai

Rids:3 days.n with this traffic we will be here all night

Muski:I know n this honking is doing no good either............rids that man is gonna hit us

(rids was trapped. the driver apparently had lost control over his vehicle.crash!

It plowed into the rear of their car with an impact that gave the girls a severe jolt.they sat stunned for a moment,but fortunately no one was injured badly only bruises.the boys heard some noise n leaped out,n saw at a glance that the car had been badly damaged.one fender was crumpled,rear lights smashed n the bumper on the ground.they quickly turned to see if the girls were fine.rids was the first one to realize wat had hit them muskaan being more sensitive came back in her senses minutes after rids.)

Amy and rags:r u girls fine

Rids:yes I think so.........

Amy:its ok relax(nervously n caringly)

Rids:thanks(she was surprised wid the sudden change he was very arrogant at the party)

Muski:ahhhh

Rids:muski r u fine

(muskaan was in the passengers seat and her head had banged at the door)]

Rids:muskaan u need first aid

Muski:no ridzu I am fine

Rags:amy u take the car to the garage n note down the license no. n rids n muski we will go to a nearby clinic. we will meet at Riverview restaurant.

~at the restaurant~

Amy:so u both don't live here right?

Muski:ya!from Europe

Rags:amy how did u know that they r not from India??????//

Amy:ah uh ...............aa..accent accent se pata chala.ah .by the way u have checked in which hotel

Muski:hotel paradise

Amy:oh really we have checked in the same hotel.wat a coincidence

(they had some more talks)

Rags: u r a tourist or have come to attend some function

Muski:actually rids' si..................

(rids stopped her.)

Rids:(whispering)

Rids:we had actually come to attend sapna bansals marriage

(sapna was rids' maternal side real cousin sis)

Rags:omg really we r also going for the same marriage

(rids was drinking water as soon as she heard the knewsshe started coughing)

Muski:ridzi tu theek to haina

Rags:surprising na

Rids:yup it was a shock I mean surprise a very very pleasant surprise

Amy:guys we should move.

(rags was glad he was attracted towards muskaan.muskaan was quite surprised but was haapy later.rids was dumbfounde she would have to carry the disguise whilst amy understood the reason behind rids n muskis reaction.)

~in rids n muskis room~

rids:wat will we do now

muski:u have to agree this plan is crap

rids:u bet

muski:well they r not that bad as u are making them out.

Rids:I know to whom ur referring to.i noticed ,noticing,..................

(muski threw a pillow on rids face)

Rids:u have to admit u have made a hit,alright!

Muski:the only thing that was hit was that car.uska extra charge kaun bharega.

Rids:don't try to change the subject muski.u like him.

Muski:y shouldn't I. they took our car to the garage n they r nice people.

Rids:as a matter of fact armaan took the car to the garage n not rags.n they r nice people n the soulful expression in rahul's green big eyes wen he looks at u!

Muski:were they green?i thought they were bl.........

(muski realized she was trapped)

Muski:alright u win!

Rids:but I don't like armaan he is way to arrogant

Muski:is he?i didn't notice

Rids:u were noticing that noticewalla guy

Muski:(blushing)I mean I didn't found him arrogant

Rids:whatever I am feeling quite sleepy.

~in the morning~

(muski was taking out all her clothes out.rids was still sleeping)

Knock knock

Amy:u r still sleeping

(hearing his voice rids eyes widened)

Amy:well heres ur breakfast

muski:thanka that was very sweet of u

rids:i don't drink tea.....i want coffee

amy:sure madam this servant is at ur service n plz get ready quickly (glancin towards muskaan u should wear a green one it's his favourite colour

muskaan:thanks amy n u go for yellow,white or blue its her latest favourites

amy:thanks

Rids:am I missing something here

Amy:yup! brain if u have one(rags called him from their room)emergency I should go

(closing the door)

Rids:good riddance

Muski:sorry I don't think so.actually rags asked me out

Rids:really!wen

Muski:morning half an hour before

Rids:so y r u apologizing

Muski:wel l um rids u know na that there is no one to accompany amy n u too are alone so.

Rids:so?

Muski:I know u don't like him....but we have fixed u both.




thank u all for reading.tc.😊


Part 3

R:wat?wat did u just say

Muski:that we have fixed u both

Rids:r u crazy,girl!i mean seriously ur joking right

Muski:sorry!i don't think so

Rids:muskaan:have u lost it how can I go with a jerk like him I mean I don't have any problems with rags but that amy guy is just not done

Muski:rids common its only a date afterall

Rids:date? Great '. with that jerk

Muski:rids agar tujhe nahi jana hai to main rahul ko mana kar deti hu'.

Rids:o sorry muskaan its ok mai chali jaungi but promise ki tum log jaldi milo ge

Muski: u sure u will manage

Rids:yup u go

(muski leaves)

(amy was talking rather flirting with the receptionist)

Rids:god!such a flirt ye muskaan ne kaha fasa diya

(she starts approaching towards him n he turns whilst rids loses her balance only to be caught by him. They stand there staring at eachother for over 2 mins rids feels a little uncomfortable)

Rids:ahem ahem '.can u plz lift me u c this position is a little'.UNCOMFORTABLE.

Amy: aaa'''I thought u wanted it

Rids:whatever''.can u please offer a room service n here r the keys

Amy:I am not urs servant

Rids:no ones asking u either

Amy:so y (turns n sees that shes talking to the receptionist )

Rids:(grinning)lets go

Amy:sure

Rags: so u in business

Muski:no no me n rids r practicing I mean v r interns''''.u know sanjeevani

Rags:is ran by padma gupta right.u know them ofcourse u may'''''.perhaps there elder daughter is also a doc right.i heard she married lately

Muski:yup 6 months back to jiggy''''.i mean atul joshi hes a business man too

Rags:so u have a bf

Muski:I don't remember having left someone back'..so u have a girl

Rags:well no but would love to leave someone back.(winks)

Rids:wat r we doing in this club

Amy:enjoying

Rids:well certainly not.i am no party animal

Amy:I am the party one n ur animal

(Before she could say a girl comes and hugs him)

Amy:hey sonia how u doing

Sonia:oh amy its so good to see u.well whose this pretty young girl here

Rids:hello I am ridhvika.nice to meet u.

Sonia:amy m\come I will intraduce u to my sis

Amy:u go ahead I am coming

Amy:u c its hard to find a decent girl wen u r so goodlooking

Rids:o ya sure. U have got a sense to find a 'decent girl'in a club

Amy:whateva u be here

(it was 15 min only.rids was bored n amy was also feeling uncomfortable with all the girls around. But act as if enjoying wen rids used to see him.he also glanced sideways every sec just to check if she was fine)

Guy:hello r u expecting someone

Rids:y''(glancing towards amy)I don't think so

VICKY!!!!!!!!Why the hell is he talking with ridhvika.n y is she responding.oh great he is asking her for dance.mind if he even touches rids.amy its dance ofcourse he will touch her.but y am I getting angry it's a dance after all.

Whilst rids was feeling uneasy.he was helding her close very close.and then suddenly he tried moving towards her lip.rids turned her head towards the other direction

Hey bhagwan.kisne kaha tha muski ki baat mane ko.ek to who amy pure traveling ke waqt pakaaya ab shanty se thi to yeh vivek a gaya.CREEP.GOD he is really trying to get close I don't want to make a scene.god help.ye armaan pata nahi kaha mar gaya.

'MAY I '

Vivek's face was worth watching both surprised and afraid.he felt a little pain on his face remembering how amy had punched him.before he could say anything or rather run away.amy whirled rids from vivek's arms and landed in amy's arms.she heaved a little sigh.seeing she was feeling uneasy he changed the subject.

Amy:so u missed me

Rids:missed u??????taht would be the last thing in my life I would imagining doing.i wonder how those girls stay with u

Amy:u see I am IRRESISTIBLE

RIDS:YA no one can resist u or I say tolerate u

(the rest dance was quite.rids was thinking about how amy saved her from being kissed by that vivek. She felt uneasy.Armaan held her by waist.her hands around his neck.both looking in eachothers eyes as the dance continued)

LATER

(they were sitting on a couch.they had almost dance throughout the evening)

Rids:could u plz bring water

Amy:ya!girls often feel thirsty wen I am around

Rids:thanks.n wen r u bringing the car u see its on rent. What is the total cost

Amy: don't worry I have collected the expenses from the man who runned into ur car.i will ask rags to collect it. He is going to that pace tomorrow with muski

Rids:what they r going tomorrow too.i thought it all ended today

Amy:u know what not only urs brain but ur eyes r also missing.can't u c they r attracted towards eachother

Rids: u got me wrong I was thinking that I have to tolerate u for one more day .so wat we doing tomorrow

Amy:there is a party thrown by sonia tomorrow

(IN RIDS ROOM)

Muski:hey rids

Rids:muski u back. So wat u thought about girls' name and who will cook on weekends.tell him u sometimes I have night shift on weekends n all'''..

Muski:rids wat r u talking

Rids:so u have not decided that I thought u did family planning too.so sad

Muski:rids(throwing a pillow)

Rids: common guys u have such speed.i thought rags was pilot of jet airways and u head of rajdhani express.

Muski:no rids it all went fine.he talked about his business and stuff.and u know what he knows paddy and shush

Rids:wat ha knows dada and mumma

Muski:yup and amy dad knows unc and aunty too.to be frank they r BUSSINESS RIVALS kind of

Rids:oh god its going to be hard

Muski:so wat did u guys do

Rids:us nothing we went to some club

Muski:ok I am hitting the bed.tommorows gonna be a big day

~beep beep~

(it was an unknown no.)

Rids:hello

Caller:MISS RIDDHIMA GUPTA this is vivek alias vicky I hope u remember.tommorow meet me after the party or else I will tell those two guys about ur truth and u surely don't want this to be told by me right miss.

~cut~

Oh crap that vivek again.wats his prob I didn't did anything to him so y he ating this weird. Rags and amy will not talk to us if they know I am their biggest rivals daughter that to from some stranger.idont want to break our friendship n muski n rags.GOD HELP

guys I am so sorry.i know it's a little boring but it surely would be more entertaining in the coming parts.tomorrow will update the next part.tc.

guys i have started a new ff hope u read it


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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey ridzy yeyyy fst 1 2 cmmnt yaar wowwwwwwww mindblowng yaar intrestng topic nd superb update hmmmmmm ridz nd muski wowwwwww nd ar nd rags grt yaar fnny i lvd it nw cnt wait whn thy wll meat cont soooooooooon.....
luv yachna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Ridzzi,
great concept yaar. waiting for the next update.......
cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!and plz pm me when u update.

love,
sameera.

check out my ff PYAAR, MASTI AUR TAKRAAR.
to read plz visit http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1061371
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
cool intro
the last line was quite an interesting one
plz pm me when u update
n ya update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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LUVD UR FF
N DE LST LINE ESP WS 2 FUNNY HUH!
PLS ADD ME 2 UR PM LIST IF U HAV
CONT ASAP
ASHU
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi
nice intro yaar
cool concept
ridz wants to be undercover
update sooooooooooooooon
can u pm me
luv soumya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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interstin! plz do cntd asap!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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all of u guys thankyou so much.will update supersoooon.hope u read n enjoy ma ff .thanks.tc.
love
ridzzy😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! tht was gr8. plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooN!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi ridzzy
thks for the pm dear
cool part yaar
muski and rahul r attracted to each other ha
AR start is not at a good footing
that noproblem
they say that when it starts bad that much strong bond it becomes at the last
it applys to AR
ridz lied abt her identity
but is it not going to be revealed in sapna's marriage ?????
clear my doubt
update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
luv soumya

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