TONIGHT'S PREDICTION....

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This was a joint effort by d friend of mine named ANJAN nd me........do commnt guys...pls.......😳



Ridhima becums realli worrid aftr watching shashank talk like that to some1 on d phone.......she had nvr seen her father cry...n tears,, d helpless was too much for her to bear and to see her father implore to d person begging him to give him that last one chance.....was too much for her.......

she dsnt know what to do.......and is totally shocked to find him in this state.....sitting on d bed,, wid his head between his hands,, crying like a baby,, cos sanjeevani was actualli like that onli for him........

She goes to him,, wid some courage.....and says...

"papa....papa,, aap aise ro kyu rahe hai..????? aur ye sanjeevani band hone ki kya........."""

shashank looks up in horror to look into ridhima's eyes........he stands up and says.....

" arre ,, beta tum...tum yahan kaise..???" wiping his tears.......nd trying to act normal....

"par papa,, aap abhi abhi to kisis Mr Modi se....""

horrified now totally that she actualli heard this much also......says....
" arre,, arre beta aisa kuch nahi hai....tum...tum chinta mat karo...mai hoon na.....mai..."

holding her face in his hands.....nd saying...

"mai hoon na beta..dont worry....sab ..sab theek ho jayega......aur beta,, iske baare mai kisi ko bhi mat batana.....kha ma kha sab pareshan ho jayenge....."

ridzz is now confused.......she's abt to say somethng whn he pushes her out of d room and cums along wid her to d drawing room,, whr evry1 is gathered......

Instead of sitting down wid evry1,, she makes a bahana.....n goes on d room...standing near d window..staring out into space.......wondering abt what all she heard.....especailly d way she saw her father crying wid tears....he was d pillar of strength in thier family,, nd to see him crying like this,, totally wrenched her heart apart.....

Meanwhile ,, Armaan is searching for her in d whole house.......he finalli finds her in d room ......standing,, looking realli pretty nd his heart skipped many a beat......bt on seeing her sad expresiions,, he gauges tht somethng is amiss and not rgt.......

Going behind her to stand,, nd pulling her in his arms,, suddenly shaking her out of her reverie.....

"tum yahan,, aise akele.....wo bhi jab itni kamal ki lag rahi ho.......koi aa jata to..???" trying to lighten her mood...

she turns around in his arms,, n gives a brief sad smile.....

putting his finger under her chin n making her meet his eyes.....eyes questioning her...."kya hua..??"

"armaan wo papa......"

"haan baba...hum papa ko sab kuch bata denge...tun se zyada to mujhe jaldi hai..."" smiles........pulling her close in his arms.....

""aise mujhe pata hai,, ki tumhe meri baahon mai aane ka bahana chahiye,, but dont u thnk ab tumhe pooja kar leni chahiye....huh..!!

because wo dekhiye madam aasman mai,,, chand aa gaya hai...pehle pooja kar le..???""

she looks up in d sky to see d moon high up....n says yes...

thy both go nd stand near d window....she picks up d thali,, n does d whole pooja.....

armaan is just mesmerised by her beauty,, nd has a holf loony kind of a smile on his face.....

she looks up at him to se him smiling tht way.....n smiles.....

aftr d whole pooja he pulls her in his arms n says


"ridhima,, tumhari jagah,, mere dil mai...to dil k paas aao na..."" nd smiles....nd kisses her on her maang tikka....

" i love u armaan...."" holding him around his waist .....hugging him back...n more fiercely....

armaan feels tht he's missing onto somethng..so says...kissing her on d forehead....

"dont worry,, hum kal subah hote hi,, tumhare dad ko apne baare mai sab kuch bata denge.....""

she suddenly braks away from his embrace nd says...

"nahi..nahi armaan,, hum papa ko kuch nahi bata sakte....""

armaan 's face goes thru a whole change of expressions.....from shocked,, to confusion,, to understanding,, nd then finally gussa.....when ridz tells him about d whole phone conversation wch he heard taking place.....

" tum hamare baare mai,, apni family ko batana hi nahi chahti ho..""

""nahi armaan,, but jab dad ke upar sanjeevani ki tension.hai to abhi batane se,, wo aur bhi zyada.....""

"ridhima,, ye tensions zindagi bhar honi hai...kal ko sanjeevani ke tension ke baad,, koi aur dossri nai tension aa jyegi...is tarah se to hum unhe kabhi nahi bata payenge......""

"nahi..nahi artmaan,, tum samjh kyu nahi rahe ho...."" trying to hold on to him,, to make him understand...."mai jaanti hoon,, tum papa ko sab kuch jald se jald batana chahte ho......lekin abhi.....""

he turns arnd,, n stops her from touching him also..n says..

"rehne do ridhima..."

jerks her hand off,, n jst goes off from thr in anger.....



Meanwhile..

Rahul is running behind muskaan.....whn evry1 says ki chaand aa gaya hai..sab terrace pe chalo....

he's like "aap sab log chalo,, mai muskaan ke saath yahi hoon...pata nahi,, isse chaakr aa rahe hai...""

"Rahul,, jab usne tere liye vrat rakha hai,, aur saare din se kuch nahi khaya,, to chakkar to aayenge hi na...????""" Atul says.....

Rahul is dumb shocked listening to this....he looks at muskaan to confirm what atul said,, bt she's just sitting wid her head in her hands looking down.....

he tells evry1 to go up..n tht he nd muskaan will b up in sumtym soon....

"muskaan,, tu pagal hai kya.????subah se bhooki baithi hai...???kisne kaha tha tujhe vrat rakhne ko..?????? ""

""oye ,, chilana band ar,, aisi hi sar phata jaa raha hai,, ur ab teri bak bak.....chup ho ja...""

"tujhe bola kisne tha vrat rakhne ko..??"" rahul speaks to her in a stern voice,,,,wch tells her tht he's mighty angry...

"abey gadhe,, aaga KARVA CAHUTH hai....har patni apne pati ke liye vrat rakhti hai,, to amine bhi rakh liya....tujhe koi problem ahi kya..???

aur tujhe kya problem hogi,, subah se to mai hoon bhooki,, khud to thoos thoos ke khaye jaa raha hai......"""

Rahul shocked at listening to all this...

""tune mere liye vrat rahka,...???lekin kyu muskaan...??? mai to tera pati hoon,, lekin wo bhi jhooth mooth ka na......................................"""

muskaan looks up at him nd says....

""haan ,, hai jhooth mooth ka,, to kya.?????ab mai tere liye APNI KHUSHI se kuch kar bhi nahi sakti..????"""" now realli realli mad at him......

as soon as she says this,, she suddnely realises what she had said......

rahul is dumbstruck....wid their RM backgrnd tune playing in d backgrnd....he just kees on looking at her.....

Anjie cums back..to see them just sitting thr on d sofa,, all d whole staring into each othr's eyes,, totrally oblivious to their surroundings....

""tum dono love birds ka ho gaya ho,, to ma ne kaha hai,, ki upar aake pooja kar lo....aur muskaan tune to aise bhi subah se kuch nahi khaya...jaldi se aaja....."""nd goes off.....

both get out of their reverie,, n go up to complete all d rituals...muskaan shying nd smiling like a totally new bride(wch she was)............. all d while ,, things going on in rahul's head,, as to wht muskaan said was true or not..........



Armaan,, drives around some place...n ethn finalli cums to a lonely spot.....

gets out n strts thinking all d while standing onli.....
""ye ridhima bhi na.,,,, pata nahi kyu nahi batana chahti sab ko humare baare mai...i agree ki shashank sir ko problem hai,, bt problems to hamsha hi honi hai,, especally jab wo sanjeevani ke head hai...to phir,, iss halat se to hum kabhi bhi kisis ko bhi......""" slaps his cheeks himself nd says....

""nahi nahi armaan,, kaise baatein kar raha hai...wo bhi to apni jagah theek hai na..phir...????mujhe uske point of view se bhi to samjhne ki koshish karni chahiye......"" calmimg down, n now thinking wid a clear head..... ""nahi ridhima theek keh rahi thi.....pehle sanjeevani ki problem solve ho jaye...phir to muhe koi bhi nahi rok sakta batane se...khud shashank sir bhi nahi.......""

he gets in d car nd drives of...

all this while ridz is trying to call him n to try n talk to him.....bt his cell is out of reach.....

trying to find ridz n armaan,, niki baby(sorry guys,, bt i prefer to call her this onli...:) :) :) ) enters her room.....

""arre,, tum yahan,, akele....armaan kahan hai..???""

""wo ...wo......n she has tears in her eyes.....""

she breaks down n tells niki some outline of d story,, bt just tells her tht thr's trouble brweing btwn her dad n some Mr Modi...... not telling her all d tensions.....n also tells her tht armaan is mad cos thy not telling evry1 cos of this whole problem...

Niki understands n tries to console ridz by saying,, ki armaan is just mad for d moment...he'll b back whn he's calm..n tht she'll help these two out till that tym.....n armaan wont evn cum to knw abt it..........

Armaan is standing near d wall of ridzi's room.....n listens to this whole converstion...seeing ridz's tear starined eyes......he feels like kicking himself.....

but listening to niki to help them out by misleading evry1 into thinking abt him and niki he feels realli mad n enters d room.....n says..

"nahi nik,, tum ab meri aur ridhima ki koi help nahi karogi....""

ridz turns arond to see him standing nd goes nd hugs him close.......then says...

""but armaan niki to .............................""

""nahi ridhima,, nik ab humari koi help nahi karegi...jo bhi karna hai,, sab mai khud handle karunga...aur tm to ho na mera saath dene ke liye...cos ab mai appna naam kisi ke bhi saath nahi jodna chahta......Nik ke saath bhi nahi....."""

ridz looks at him ,, opens her mouth to say somethng.......bt he keeps a finger on her lips..n says...

""nahi basket...aur nahi...mai hoon na...sab theek ho jayega...."" nd kisses her forehead on d maang tika....

"" sorry nik,, bt kuch cheezein mujhe khud hande karne do...help agar chahiye bhi hogi,, to i'll let u know......""

Niki watches this ......n listens to him speak this.....smiles a half smaile n says..

"no problem armaan...agar help chahiye ho to mai yahi hoon....smiles at ridz,, n goes off from thr....""

Armaan hugs ridz closer
"" sorry basket...mai uss tym bahut gusse mai tha...i mean,, hum itne tym se sab ko batane ki koshish kar rahe hai....bt hamesha kuch na kuch gadbad ho hi jati hai..........im realli sorry...holding his ears....n making a baby face.....

"its okay arman,,, mai bhi tumse bas yahi kehne ki koshish kar rahi thi....ki bas ye problem solev ho jaye,, uske baad hum papa ke saath sab ko bata denge....no waiting any more......""

""promise...????"""waiting anxiously

""promise......"" pulls him down to her level...n kisses his forehead.........

meanwhile.,,....nd door closes.....


NIK....to herself....

"""armaan,, tumhe help ki zarurat to padegi hi..........aur uss tym,, tum mere pass hi aaoge...as usual.......kyunki,,, anjie ko to shak ho hi gaya hai,, n now,, i'll try to make sure,, ki aur shak ho jaye,, n tht she's against u nd ridz now....muskaan ki to pehle hi shaadi ho gayi hai......to bachi kaun jo tum dono ki help karega..????? ME..!!!!! awww.........bt koi nahi,,, ridhima,...tum chinta bilkul mat karo........i'll totally help u guys out ........."""

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Rithika!!!
Cool prediction yaar.. liked it a lot.
just now read it in another forum...
gr8 effort by you and Anjan... keep the good work...
waiting to see more from you.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Rithika that was really nice
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey its really nice dude😛😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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THANK U ALLLLL SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

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