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Posted: 16 years ago
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There lived a girl in a village small,Who wore pigtails that annoyed all'
They pondered much and cried more
Because she wouldn't lose them.
They mused upon this strange case,
And swore they'd change the pigtail's place,
And put a smile on everyone's face,
And make sure that she would lose them.
What powers these pigtails do possess,
That a prince should love her, no less,
And determine to make her his princess.
But first she must lose them.
The prince one day, thought very hard,
All day he remained on guard.
How to give IF this reward?
By ensuring that she lose them.
And then the hunk had an idea,
Of how to rid them from his dear,
And promptly went searching for some shears,
In an effort to lose them.
He crept up behind her ever so quiet,
And grabbed those tails ever so tight,
And in one fell swoop with all his might,
The pigtails, he did lose them.
Alas my friends, we did not foresee
The power of the tails truly,
For now Rani has turned into Bhumi,
The pigtails, she shouldn't have lost them.
They made her what she was it seems
Every prince's eternal dream,
The perfect saathi, the perfect queen,
The pigtails, she shouldn't have lost them.
But hair is hair, whatever the fashion,
And pigtails I loathe with a passion,
They never really have me gushin'
She had better lose them.
Any style, any trend,
I don't care how the creative's mend,
They'd better see them come to end.
The pigtails? You've got to lose them!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow Rakhi, its awesome.šŸ‘ So true, we dont care what style the creatives give Rani, but these pigtails really need to go. Specially now that she is a teacher. Common yaar, how can a teacher and her students have the same hairstyle, specially pigtails. Creatives, are you listening, please implement Rakhi's poem and change Rani's hairstyle jaldi se.
Edited by parikhanvi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#3
Great job Rakhie, yeap u r so right the pigtails need to go! It does look awful!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sorry dears but I dont mind her pigtails - she looks cute with them..

But Rakhie dear oh what lovely poetry..me was never good that wid de english so..stuck to numbers yaar much easier..but give credit where due..you have a talent.šŸ‘šŸ‘

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Rakhie, great job yaar U R a ture poet I'm a regular reader of your amgic moments and love them a lot and now your poetry Great! Tell me yourachivement in writting field.
waie its high time CREATIVES!!!!!!!!!!! please ehy they want us to beg comne we are begging for Hug that is not happenign I do get hopes when Yudi suggest "sagai' as Rani being so much maryada waali she wouln never have gone beyond eyelocking unless Yudi gets a stauts of her fiance or whatever...........
But woh bhi paani paani ho agya..now school tracka dn teacher thing was good to get some cutenes of Swades...and the first thing we thought Rani in proper Sari or suits will do but not witht he pigtails..comeon..........I mean limits of frustration..
Hye whats happening at our Please whcih we worte to SBS? How do get in touch with them BTW after BB track is over I'm so happy YURA being together and facing eveything but this pigtail is noe KILLLLLIIIIIINNNGGGGGG!😔
Edited by yurafan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh, Rakhi I do agree
I shall join you in your plea!
This hate towards red ribbons has consumed me
Oh, what lies for Rani I do not foresee
For the creatives have determined to torture us endlessly


If only Yudisther could get on his knees
And beg his lover to let loose her tresses

We have waited so long
This wait, please do not prolong

That hair needs to go
Or god knows what will become of this show
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Posted: 16 years ago
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tasmin and rakhie i agree ! imagine - rani pigtail free
that would fill us with glee
and surely mesmerise Yudi
But alas, they remain
the creatives r to blame
the schoolkids dying of shame
coz their teacher looks the same
and poor darling yudi...
in love with a kurri..
who could get very moody..
if pigtails went for goody...
all we can do friends, is pray
that maybe, someday,
the pigtails go away
much to rani's dismay
so dont give up hope...
on our fave daily soap..
im sure we can cope...
as long as yura dont mope
so now, all my dear friends..
this poem comes to its end..
but theres more around the bend...
like my ff(hopefully) this weekend....
tc and i hope u enjoy..i havent properly written poetry since a poetry publishing competition 4 yrs ago! xxxxxxxxxx
Edited by jazzybabes7 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh wow kahenaa pade yaa..............pig tail ki bhi poetry .ye tos irf RKAB forum main hi ho shaktaa hain....
well done rakhie, tash and jass loved it you people are very talented keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow nice poemšŸ‘really enjoyed itšŸ˜†šŸ˜³expecting more from you friend.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow nice poem on her PIGTAILSSS..Hope creatives dun take it as if we love them🤢...Rakhie i hope she doent turn into bhoomi when her pigtails are taken off by Yudi by forcešŸ˜‰šŸ˜†.. Okies that was farce but CREATIVESSSS we really really want her to get rid of it.. I dun understand wat purpose it serves.. She doesnt look younger in that if that is the intention..It was such a shock to see her back again in those pigtails after the momentary makeover...😔
You know i was so happy yesterday when it occured to me that to be a teacher she needs to get rid of pigtailllss😭
Edited by monu1101 - 16 years ago

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