Definitely Yes, Maybe I- (AR) pt1- 13 - Page 22

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Posted: 16 years ago
Ok Di i just have to say one thing.....I love this!!!😆 Totally i mean i so totally smitten by this....David as Armaan i mean Ksg....ok i need to calm down....😆 the way u potrayed Ridz thinking and checking him out...i am doubting did u sneek-peak in to any one of our minds by any chance???😆

I glanced into the First class aisle through the curtain and saw a pretty flight attendant in an animated conversation with a very handsome young man, standing barefoot in his crisp black trousers, silk white shirt and a tie, loosely hanging from his neck. The two were engrossed in a discussion, interrupted by hearty chortles and friendly gestures as if they knew each other very well. As the restroom sign refused to budge from OCCUPIED, I was intrigued by the young man- or should I say captivated by him. His mannerisms, his deep dimples when he smiled and when he looked up, his deep blue eyes had me mesmerized for a few moments.

Ok that was outstanding way to introduce him!!

As I washed my hands and face, his smile and piercing gaze hounded my thoughts. Why did I feel that he was an Indian and not Italian? The olive skin, thick dark hair, blue eyes, fluent Italian, his very European mannerisms all pointed to him being a native,

Simply fab lines there Di....👏

After all, a thing of beauty could be admired by all- but I was not admiring, I was ogling him like men usually do to beautiful women. Oh God- he must think I was flirting with him; I must be some 'loose' kind of woman checking him out. Why did his opinion matter to me?

ogling???? Ok i am 100% sure u are mind reading us out here.....😆 I mean heck when it comes to him who can control???😆 Oh yes i forget we r talking abt Ridz....i mustsay ur building her character up brilliantly.....!!👏

Steal your most precious possessions? I heaved a sigh and then rested my head against the back of the seat. I shut my eyes and dozed off into a dreamland. I had the most vivid dream of my life- I dreamt that my mysterious Italian man, Armaano and I were flying high in an airplane. It was only the two of us; we were laughing, chuckling and teasing each other as the plane hovered over wide open fields of blooming flowers, trees and greenery. We held hands and then suddenly Armaano placed his arm around my waist and pulled me closer. His lips were inches away from mine, and as he bent down to kiss me, I woke up with a startle and a sweat all over my forehead. The train had come to a halt at its destination. With a pounding headache, I collected my camera and my hand bag. As I walked out, I was amazed at how quickly the time had flown by between Rome and Florence. I felt guilty as I recalled my amorous dreamscape. It was just a dream, I convinced myself, but why did it feel like I was being unfaithful to the man I was engaged to be married? And why did the dream feel so good?

Haha i loved this description...seriously the way u built up any scene is aplaudable. U r really surpassing ur outstanding talent!!👏 This left me in awe...seriously!!

"Or because you have no inspiration?" A man's voice above our table startled us.

Our jaws dropped simultaneously as he towered above us in a pair of jeans and a sports vest with tattoos over both arms, a complete contrast from the suave man on the plane.


"NICE TO MEET YOU LADIES….I AM ARMAAN MALLIK!" He stretched his hand out as I stared at him with disbelief written all over my face.


Ok tattoos???? OMGGG Di u hav left me speechless....wat is cooking in ur mind??? seriously i want to know desperately now.....and wow he already talking about thinking about of the box.....second meet !! Wow am pretty excited for this...Di u hav to continue soon...will be waiting...great update yet again...i am really waiting to see the idle daughterthink out of box.....😆







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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: aish_punk

Wow.. srry 4 commentin soo Late...bt mst say dis is mah 2nd favorite FF after To Err is Human..seriously!!

thanks aish!
I don really lykk Rahuls character.. hes a bit too concerned .. I mean over-concerned!! Awl he thinx of is makin money n bcmng a sucsessfull person in lyf... okay tatz gud..bt too mch is too bad!! He dusnt eva enjoy the goodness of life!! This Rahul is soo diff 4m our DMG Rahul!! yes this rahul is very uptight and a type A kinda guy here
Anjali is a chweetheart... I love her character.. shes got good sense of humour..shes straightforward.. she is gutty... she lives lyf 4 herself n nt nebudy else... yes she is a azaad pari
Yeah I noticed tat u rote dis FF wid Ridhimma narratin it.. well tats kinna gud... Lol..shes a bit complicated gal I feel.. I dunno y she ever acceptd Rahuls proposal... I don thnk she made a gud decision.. n newy I wanna c AR love story blossomin.. I hope tatll hppn soon... ridz wants to be a goody goody gal and do everything 'right'. Yes she is complicated in the sense that she really desires something else on the inside😳
I wznt shocked 2 hear tat Ridhimma wz smitten by Armaan or Armaano!! Nebudy wud g8!! Im surprised Armaan lukz lykk an Italian!!Bt he dus hv killer lukz!! Armaan jus rawks in dis too lykk alwys bt his character 4m To Err is Human n Definately Yes,May Be are soo diff yes i want armaan's character to be very different here...he is Mr supercool, quiet kinda guy who emotes more with his killer smiles and eyes....he won't be goofy like he was in To err😆
I thnk dis FF has an edge over ure oda FF in the style of ritin.. itz a bit betta.. nt tat u wer eva bad!! Cnt eva thnk abt tat!! Chweet FF... Im also lukn fwd 4 Shall We Dance?? i am trying to give this one a different flavor...thanks 4 liking it. i have started the other AK ff too😊
Wunnerful FF
Im glad dis tym I wz able 2 give u a lng comment!! Lol luved it!😊
Thnx 4 d PM... odawise I wud hv missed such a wunnerful thng!!
Plzz cont soon... I'm desperate 4 more!!
Aishwarya

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shweet29

bohot galat baat hai pehlay nhi bataya na that u are starting on 22nd main kab say keh rahi thi start karo tu batana tha na 🥺......

welll app ki writing skills ka tu koi jawab nhi awsum yaaaaaaaaar bohot zabardast i had a frown on my face after reading first part i thought wat RAHUL N RIDZ NONONO but after reading 2nd i was oooooooooooooohhhh thank God i was relieved lolxx very nice i wonder agey kia hoga plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
continue soooooooooon sorry sorry SUPER soooon lolx

luv
shweet29

thanks shweet29...sorry if i forgot to PM u...willmake sure I do so in part 3😊
[quote=DMG123]AWESOME part.....i absolutely love the character of Anjali.......
cant wait for u to continue.......its getting very interesting!!
pls continue soon......n thank u very much for the pm!
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Thanks DMG123😊...will try to write update tonite
Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sana20n

hey bheegi!!

jus managed 2 read both parts ov ur ff... i must say im already spellbound... awesome... im actually speechless....!!! i actually wud lyke 2 aplogise as i was a fan ov ur previous ff bt neva commented, i luvd ur previous ff's mostly 'to err...' bt dis tyme i cud nt resist myself 4m commenting!!!! thanks sana....i always love hearing from silent readers😊
wow dis rahul guy seems 2 b a bore... if i gt engaged 2 such a guy i wud most probably kill myself... 😆 hw cn ridz stand bein wiv him, he's 2 borin 4 my lykin... bt i gues dat'l change soon *fingers crossed* !!!! he actually has a cd on hw 2 propose, hes sucha nerd 🤢
u know in real life, there re a lot of people like Rahul esp in the highly educated circles😕
i luv anjali's attitude towards life.... u knw she sounds carefree n laid back bt commited 2 wrk n passion 4 art!!! yes she is a total opposite😃
haiiiiiiiiiii..... armaano😍!!!! d way u described him was as if i was imagining my dream guy *sigh*.... i dnt blame ridz dreaming bout him, admirin his charm!!!! may be i did get a bit carried away
i must say d lil advise dat anjali had given 2 ridz bout d eyes is so true, ive always bin able figure out by lukin in2 peoples eyes... at tymes my dad tels me off 4 starin... 😆 n has labelled me 4 bein insane n total embarassment bt wil neva admit dat im always rite...
yes, it's worked for me 2😊
in regards 2 ridzie givin up on her poetry, i completely undastand y she must've coz ive dne a similar sort in d past finkin my parents wudnt apreciate it!!!!! i guess it in our culture dat parents dnt reali apreciate their childrens ambitions n inspirations... only believe dat degrees lyke in engineering, law n medicine or business give u such status in society n a bank balance.... bt i guess armaans gna mke her start writin poetry again??? i do hpe so thou!!!! yes, unfortunately that's true but i think a lot of parents are changing these days...will wait and see what happens with ridz's parents
its nt fair, wen d actual fun started u stopped.... im insanely in luv wiv 'david' aka armaano!!!! he sure does hav his charm, althou i vaguely remember seein d statue, its bin almost 10yrs since i visited italy.... an amazing place 2 visit thou!!! yes...one of the most romantic places in the world 4 sure😳
i initially thort anjali n armaan were frends, bt i guess im rong, since she was equally shocked 2 c him!!!!! ur right...they don't know each other
please do update in ur convenience!!!! may be tonite
tke cre
luv sana

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Ladoo645

OMG DII!!!! ARE U SERIOUS!!!!

I'm like totally trying to breath here!, I just read ur parts and my jaws literally DROPPED!!

Well this time it ain't Armaan!, hehe I noe I noe, but nooo friggin way, I mustg confessed I did the same thing as Riddima as she waited for the washroom, and dannggg that boy was dang HAWT!, but instead of getting dat mesmerising eye I was soo distracted at my lil cuzin point at the loo to go in, hehe but it was some sight! Hehe, man made me relief some good memories, I'm soo enjoyin this FF already!

thanks natasha....i was hoping that there would be someone amongst the readers who would have had a similar experience😆

Whoa comparison go David statue!?, man dats ma boy putting her heart on fire!, and that too on a 1st encounter, I'd be weak on ma knees if her offered his celli at moi! Hehe

I'm totally loving this Angali!!, this is gunna be one heck of a trip! u bet it would be😳

Natasha

Ps sri to commenting late! NP dear

thanks nidha, worldgross.I hope ur better Nidha...take care
Edited by bheegi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag


WOW Dear!!!

stroy from Ridz' side ........... its really very cool n
ur narration is simple awesome!!!

her meeting with Ammy on plane n airport though its little but
its very cute n the story is very interesting...

ridz's way of thinking all r really very cool!!!

we can go to imaginary state reading this FF
as every thing is so impressive n imaginative!!!

ridz hanging aroung DAVID's statue n thinking about
her david ammy is its funny n very lovely scene!!

n ofcourse she is not ready 2 admit any of her feelings
neither about ammy nor abt poetry!! its coool!!!

so her side of story is very cute!!!

make the other part soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awaiting eagerly 4 ur update

Thanks bhau rekhag...it's my pleasure if u all can get transposed to an imaginary dream like state with this ff....i hope i can continue to justify the AR magic. UR right, Ridz will never admit to her feelings....not yet at least😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
2 weeks ago, my family from FL came to see me as they were missing me so much, then I went to NYC asa visitor and as u said yes for visitor. Di.... i lm ooking forward for my role with Armaan... sorry di if I m asking too much... but yeah i wud love play next to Armaan, he is the best.
love u take care
krina
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome san di..........
it is tooo gud............
thanx for pm'
sorry for late comments......
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Posted: 16 years ago
amazing part bheegi di
i loved it a tonn
ur work is the finniest ever
plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooon
and PM me toooo
i'm loving the whole
riddz- rahul things and the whole concept of armaan in it
and ridhima's desire to write poetry an artist
very unique
do continue sooon
and PM me plzzzzzz
swanzzy
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi dii....sorry for l8 comments
i wud jst say.....plz update soon as i cant w8 to see
AR romantic scenes as u said r gonna b in nxt few parts.....
mean time im going to read these parts again....
praj

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