.....~*love*~.....intro pg#1 note page#4

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Hey guys this is shweet29 i have decided to write a new FF of Armaan n Riddhima i knoe i am not known alot by u guys but this FF writing is truely inspired by bheegi,jia,kat,lubna ,veild n many wonderful writers on dmg forum
Well this is my secound FF i noe some of the people (my frineds)will be standing wid there shoes n all will be like pehla wala tu continue kar nhi rahi aur mazay say dosra bana rahi hai hehehehehhe but guys this idea stuck in my mind n i thought that this will be different story line of rids n armi i hope u will like it i am giving the intro plzzzzzzzzzzzz comment n tell me is it good should i continue??????????
(Note:- i am KASH FAN...so that means i am writing the FF putting shilpa in mind well its on u guys whom u wanna chose ur ridzi)
N if u wanna read my first FF then this is the link...
" lOvE WIlL FiNd a waY(AR) "

/forum/fan-fictions/958347/love-will-find-a-way-ar-imp-note-plz-read

~~~*intro*~~~

NOW MY STORY STARTS WID A BRIGHT MORNING A BEAUTIFUL HOUSE THE MOST HUGE N BEAUTIFUL HOUSE OF MR.SHASHAK N PADMA GUPTA'S VERY WELL KNOWN DOC'S .....IN THE HOUSE MORNING PRAYERS ARE HELD N IN A HUGE ROOM ONE GIRL IS SNUGGLING IN BED N ANOTHER GIRL IS LOOKING IRRITATED THEN SUDDENLY

TRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGG
hmm,di plz stop that alarm

rids get up or u will be late 4r the colledge today is ur first day remenber....a teenage girl got up wid a jerk as she listen to the words of her sis....OOOH FISH ..she was truly beautiful n a sweet featured girl n very very innocent

Ooh God di y didnt u told me before i would have got up early ."she was collecting her things n running towards the bathroom

As if u listened me i was calling u 4r half an hour but ur responce was nill thats y i rang this alarm"........she was always irritated wid her lil sis acts.

i knoe di u always do that"...........giggling standing at the step of the bathroom taking out her room slippers

if u will continue this na rids then u will never achieve wat u want...u wanna be a doctor na so u have to be responsible"

diiiiiiiiii plz not morning lectures"...okay now i am getting late

sorry di" she made a puppy face n her big sis melt

love u my lil sis"...she kissed her head

Angi diiiiiii" from the bathroom ...."kal raat ARMAAN JIJU 😲😲ka phone aya tha"

"oh"...KIA..tum ney mujhay bataya kyun nhi"

{from the bathroom}sorry di bhool gayye thi"

Oh ridzi i wanted to talk to him "i havent talk to him since tuesday u knoe na his wrk n all

{from the bathroom} oh di come on call him now he told me he isnt bzy till two dayz go ahead n call him

yeah yeah i will call him u get ready okay

angi then picks her cell n goes to the balcony n dials armaan's number

tringgg tringgg....

Hello sweatheart fursat mil gayye"

sorry armaan ridzi na bataya late"

oh tu sali sahiba ki wajjah say ap hum say 18 hours 35 minz n 28 secs baad baat kar rahi hain "

armaan tum har min ka hisaab rakhtay ho"{shocked}

haan bhai ab rakhna tu parey ga na ap say itni doori bar dasht nhi hoti"

armaan bas karo...she is blushing "

hey anji i love u "

i love u to armaan "

waisay anji humaray honey moon kay liyah kahan ja na hai"

armaan yeh hum baad main decide kartey hain na {blushing}

ohkay baba "

diiiiiiiiii towel dooooo"

armaan ridzi lagta hai shower say bahir agaye main usey attend kar rahi hoon phir tumein call karoon gi"

ooh yaar bar bar chali jati ho"

plz armaan "

ohkay bye acha saturday ko hotel blue diamond main dinner kay liyah chalo gi"

hmm theek hai "

okay main tumein pick kar loon ga 8oclock bye"

bye"

hey "

kia howa"

i love u loadzzzz"

same here"

hey cheating main ney jo kaha waisay hi kaho"

uufho"

i love u baba now bye"

byee take care"

u to"

Diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii{she screamed on top of her lungs} ..anji closed the phone a rush towards the rooms...............


yeah rids n armi r not in love they share a relation of jija n sali
now if u want me to continue then tell me by giving ur comment/critisize
i will be very happy if u people will tell me my mistakes n i will try to improve them
do comment then i will continue i knoe intro is not so good but story have alot of twist n turns ...........thats all i can tell
luv
shweet29



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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey intro is really interesting as we can't even make out any story!!
will AR be with each other in FF apart from beginning???

plz make AR as pair!!
n ya i am interested in this FF

make the parts asap!!!

waiting 4 update!!


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

hey intro is really interesting as we can't even make out any story!!
will AR be with each other in FF apart from beginning???

plz make AR as pair!!
n ya i am interested in this FF

make the parts asap!!!

waiting 4 update!!






well 4r that u have to w8 n 4r the AR being couple well ..........................yeah they will be but not so fast just w8 4r the part 1 n thx 4r the coment

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Posted: 16 years ago
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great starting👏👏👏.armaan is ridhima's jiju...................that is a shock😲.this is going to be very interesting.does anji love armaan?? and what abt armaan??.i am excited for the 1st part
continue soon........

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sasya

great starting👏👏👏.armaan is ridhima's jiju...................that is a shock😲.this is going to be very interesting.does anji love armaan?? and what abt armaan??.i am excited for the 1st part

continue soon........



thx 4r the comment hmm yeah i wanna give u all a shock w8 n watch sweety there r loads of shocks w8ing 4r u but 4r that i want comments to continue

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Posted: 16 years ago
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really nce concept sweety! i wnder wta is gona happen nxt and cn u plz pm me whenver u cntd coz i dnt wana miss any prts! i ill b w8in 4 ure pm! cntd sn!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pwincess kanzi

really nce concept sweety! i wnder wta is gona happen nxt and cn u plz pm me whenver u cntd coz i dnt wana miss any prts! i ill b w8in 4 ure pm! cntd sn!



Thx 4r the comment well u have to w8 a lil for that i will be posting the part were soon i just want some comments more actually😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sasya

great starting👏👏👏.armaan is ridhima's jiju...................that is a shock😲.this is going to be very interesting.does anji love armaan?? and what abt armaan??.i am excited for the 1st part

continue soon........

hi😊
intersecting concept and very catchly
update sooooooooooooooooooooooooon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
if u can can u pm me plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Edited by saridena - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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gr8 intro
i wonder how armaan-ridz fall in love
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!!JIJU!!!!!!!!!!!!!oh god. i really wanna keep on readin yr ff. plzzzzz continue!!!!!!!

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