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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey everyone... Many of you are upset after watching yesterday's episode...!!! To be very frank, I am upset too but I came up with an idea this morning, why not jot down what I want to see... So, I am posting this part.... It is a HOME MADE episode... 😃😃😃 Hope you all like it... 😳😳😳 And, and, and I am not torturing you people by writing ANOTHER fanfic... 😆😆😆

Alekh is staring at Taj Mahal...
Sa: Alekhji...aap kia dekh rahay hain itnay gor say...
A: Dost.. yeh place kitni beautiful hay na...
Sa: Haan Alekhji...
A: Yeh kis nay banaya tha dost...
Sa: Yeh ShahJahan nay apni dost kay liay banaya tha...
A: Yaani apni patni k liay...
Sa: Jii...
A: Good...good...Likin kiyun???
Sa: Jab God nay unki dost ko apnay pass bulaliya tha to ShahJahan nay unki yaad mein yeh banwaya kiyunki wo unki best friend thii na... 😳😳😳
A: Jaisay tum meri ho... Right?
Sa: Right! Alekhji kia aap bhi meray liay aisa Taj Mahal banaye gain...
A: Nahi...
Sadhna's smile fade...
Sa: Kiyun...
A: Kiyunki...yeh kis nay banaya tha...
Sa: ShahJahan nay
A: Haan wohi wohi...To usnay iss liay banaya tha jab unki dost unko chor kar chali gayii thiin....
Alekh came closer to Sadhna and hugged her tightly....
A: Likin mein tumhay kaheen nahi janay doonga dost.....Agar God tumhay bulaye gay bhi na to pehlay mein jaon ga...👏👏👏 (Hope this happen in the serial too)
Sadhna put her hand on Alekh's lip...
A: Dost promise karo k tum mujhay chor kar kaheen nahi jaogi..😍😍😍
Alekh put his hand forward... Sadhna shook it... She was ecstatic....

Ragini decided to go back home... She was leaving when Sadhna spot her...
Sa: Jiji...
Ra: Haan Sadhna....😕😕😕
Sa: Kia hua jiji aap udaas kiyun hain...
Ra: Sadhna mein wapis ja rahi hoon...
Alekh interrupted the ladies...
A: Ragini ruko na...dekho yaha kitna maza araha hai...
Sadhna then gave Alekh a hint to see where Ranveer is and Alekh went from there in his cute style... 😉😉😉
Ra: Mein pagal thii, jo yeh soch bethi k Anmol mujhay pasand karay ga...😭😭😭
Sa: Jiji aisa kia hogaya...Kia aap apnay phone walay dost say milliin...
Ra: Nahi... Likin mujhay unsay milna bhi nahi hai... Wo mujhay dekh kar hurt hoon gay Sadhna...
Sa: Jiji....Aap nay yeh kaisay soch lia.... Iss jeevan mein humaray liay koi na koi zaroor bana hai... Jo hum say bohat pyaar karta hai... Aur aap k friend bhi aap say pyaar kartay hain...Jabhi to wo aap say milnay k liay itnay impatient hain..,,
Ra: Per...
Sa: Nahi jiji ab jab aap aye hain to apnay friend say milkar hi jaye gii....Please...
Ra: Sadhna samajhnay ki koshish karo...
Sa: Aap intezaar karein jiji wo zaroor aye gain... Aur kisi say milay bina hi aap nay andaza laga lia k wo aap ko kia kahein gai...

Ragini sat on the bench...
Ra: Sadhna tum bhi meray saath rukko...
Sa: Jiji wo Alekhji ko yeh jaga bohat pasand aye hain issi liay wo yahan ghoomna chahtay hain...
Ra: Sahi hai tum jao...
Sa: Best of Luck jiji... 😃😃😃
Ragini smiles...
Ranveer reached the place....He was impatient....
Ran: Kahan hay Anamika....???
He saw some one sitting on the bench wearing blue suit....
Ran: That must be Anamika....
He ran to her...
Ran: ANAMIKA....
Ragini without turning...
Ra: ANMOL...
She turned and saw Ranveer standing with a bouquet... He was wearing red shirt and blue jeans...
Ranveer was shocked ... He moves backward... Leaving Ragini sad...
He turned and saw Alekh...
Ran: Bhaiyya...
A: Tum ja rahay thay na...
Ranveer didn't answer...
A: Tum bad boy ho...Tumhay kuch yaad nahi rehta...
Ran: Kia...
A: Yaad hai jab hum dono mandir gaye thay to panditji nay kia kaha tha...
Ranveer remembered each and every word... He then remember Sonia betraying hin and then the first talk which they had... He remembered when he rejected Ragini....Flashback continues... All the scenes mixes... he ran towards Ragini...(Ok! Now the same scene take place which happened in the serial.. A guy making fun of Ragini but here Ranveer listened...)
Ran: Hey....Tumhari himmat kaisay hoyi....
Guy: Hello....Aap kiyun gussa ho rahay ho....
Ranveer couldn't tolerate more and start hitting those men...Sadhna and Alekh saw Ranveer fighting with the men and they came to stop him....
Ra: Ranveerji chorein...
Sa: Ranveerji please janay bhi dain...
Ran: Nahi bhabhi aaj mein issay sabak sikha kar rahoon ga...
Guy: Yeh lagti kia hai tumhari...
Ranveer shouts: YEH MERI HONAY WALI PATNI HAI....
Sadhna was shocked,,, She couldn't belive what she just listened... Ragini was shocked too... The guy ask forgiveness and went or I would say RAN from there.....
Ragini and Ranveer were looking into each other's eyes...!!! ☺️☺️☺️

Now you have read the whole part... Do tell me how was it... Once again....

"This part has nothing to do with the episode telecasted yesterday.
If you didn't like it so please don't be angry on me for writing this worst thing.
The whole idea is mine and I want yesterday's episode like this that is why I wrote...
I apologize if I have done something wrong..."

But for my sweet friends... You all have to comment....Sahi hai...???? Good good!!! 😳😳😳

Edited by born-leader - 16 years ago

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Shrome

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Posted: 16 years ago

good thinking and i hope that happened in real...

we all can imagine or think or guess what we want it to be - but director's have something else in mind - if they keep dragging the show like this - hopefully lots of people will loose interest and just think this is another waste of time.

what you guys think??

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Shagun

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Posted: 16 years ago

Very nyc imagination and well penned down scene really loved reading it!! Lets c what turn in the show it takes now!!

Luv,

Shagun

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Pri

@pc84

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Posted: 16 years ago

simply mind blowing sweetie!!! i really enjoyed it.. and even gasped 😲 when he said "MERI PATNI!!""😆 but truly..
👍🏼

Please keep on going! you can make a FF out of this!! please do that

good job!!

luv pri

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rano-

@rano-

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Posted: 16 years ago

When I was reading, it was exactly what the characters in the show would say. It was so believable and real. It was like watching the show. I loved it so much. I loved the Salekh scene it was very sweet. I hope both of them live to be 10000 so no one is going any where.😊 Home run story.👏

Edited by priya*** - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: SHROME
good thinking and i hope that happened in real...

we all can imagine or think or guess what we want it to be - but director's have something else in mind - if they keep dragging the show like this - hopefully lots of people will loose interest and just think this is another waste of time.

what you guys think??

Thanks for reading and liking it too...!!!😃😃😃 Well, people are not disliking it, I mean they haven't came back from Taj, they are over there may be with the help of Saalekh they will meet...!!! 😊😊😊

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@born-leader

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_shagun
Very nyc imagination and well penned down scene really loved reading it!! Lets c what turn in the show it takes now!!

Luv,

Shagun

Thank you Shagun..!!! I couldn't write how mych happy I am reading the comments...!!! Thanks a lot for liking...!!! Yaar, there will be something good in store for us in the show...!!! 😛😛😛

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@born-leader

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pc84
simply mind blowing sweetie!!! i really enjoyed it.. and even gasped 😲 when he said "MERI PATNI!!""😆 but truly..
👍🏼

Please keep on going! you can make a FF out of this!! please do that

good job!!

luv pri

Awwww 😳😳😳 Thank you...Dunno your name but friend it's very encouraging...!!! Hmm, I am writing a FF u can read that too but it's quite different...!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: priya***
When I was reading, it was exactly what the characters in the show would say. It was so believable and real. It was like watching the show. I loved it so much. I loved the Salekh scene it was very sweet. I hope both of them live to be 10000 so no one is going any where.😊 Home run story.👏

Oh...!!! Thank you Priya... Thats very sweet of you... 😃😃😃 Thank you 😳😳😳 Now-a-days Salekh scenes were not much so I TRIED writing one...!!! Oh..!! You people like this HOME MADE story.. 😆😆 THANK YOU...

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lalalala

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Its simply superb. Hope Ragni goes back to TM and all these happens. Ragvir staring at each other 'aww'. 😳 I hope ranvir says something like this plus salekh cute scene like this would also be wonderful. 😳

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