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meepha

@Meeph

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Posted: 16 years ago

okay guys!!!!!i m v.bad at shairi n as u guys must know pakistan is sufferin wid alot of loadshedding n at dat time i was in pakistan n dere was no lite-so at dat time i made a shair on karan-i know it suck n u guys will b like it sucks buh still plz read

no lite-coffee haath mein

robbie ka wallpaper saath mein

kya romantic hai sama

janleva hai robbie ki ye ada'

do tell me if u liked it or not😕

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mimi0295

@mimi0295

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+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

vah vah vah!

lol Muneefah.. although I dont understand hindi.. like at all (well I do, but not that much) I somehow understood this one! lol So I'm thinking you were in a state of Karnooia when writing this? lol

Awesome job- who says ur bad at this?

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shumshad parveen

@shumi.

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

waah...waahh...waahhh...mai mar jaawaan...👏👏👏

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Iman

@robbieluvr

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+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

Thats very cute sweetie. That was very good👏

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shanana

@shandana

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Posted: 16 years ago

that was sooo nice...... 👏👏👏waah waah

Edited by shandana - 16 years ago

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Batukchand BittuJi Sharma

@BittuJi.

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

waah.....kya sher o shayeri hai wah wah wah😊....its awsum

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spunkpattinson

@spunkpattinson

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Posted: 16 years ago

oyye hoye!! tainu sohni shairi karna aati hain!

acha i will try to ryte one

jahan jaye meri nazar

teri awaaz sunay o be-khabar

karan kiya jaadu kiya tuneh

diwani huwi tere pyaar main

kya kiya hain tuneh

jab bhi tum ayo mere tv par

dil kare dhak dhak, ghoomein sar par

tumhara hi jaadu tumhara hi nasha

hogayi main karan diwani

hogayi main tujh par vari vari!

now please do tell me how did u like ITT!!

sara!!

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spunkpattinson

@spunkpattinson

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

sorry for tooo much urdu into ITT!!

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mimi0295

@mimi0295

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sarareimoo1
oyye hoye!! tainu sohni shairi karna aati hain!
acha i will try to ryte one

jahan jaye meri nazar

teri awaaz sunay o be-khabar

karan kiya jaadu kiya tuneh

diwani huwi tere pyaar main

kya kiya hain tuneh

jab bhi tum ayo mere tv par

dil kare dhak dhak, ghoomein sar par

tumhara hi jaadu tumhara hi nasha

hogayi main karan diwani

hogayi main tujh par vari vari!

now please do tell me how did u like ITT!!

sara!!

Oye hoyee! Kya baat hai?Wah wah wah! 👏 lol Saraaaaaaaaaaaaaaa you are tooo good! TOOO GOOD! I LOVED it! I'm gonna use this on a siggy okai? I need your permission! U rock girlfriend!

Edited by mimi0295 - 16 years ago