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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys this is shweet29 i have decided to write a new FF of Armaan n Riddhima i knoe i am not known alot by u guys but this FF writing is truely inspired by bheegi,jia,kat,lubna ,veild n many wonderful writers on dmg forum
Well this is my secound FF i noe some of the people (my frineds)will be standing wid there shoes n all will be like pehla wala tu continue kar nhi rahi aur mazay say dosra bana rahi hai hehehehehhe but guys this idea stuck in my mind n i thought that this will be different story line of rids n armi i hope u will like it i am giving the intro plzzzzzzzzzzzz comment n tell me is it good should i continue??????????
(Note:- i am KASH FAN...so that means i am writing the FF putting shilpa in mind well its on u guys whom u wanna chose ur ridzi)
N if u wanna read my first FF then this is the link...
" lOvE WIlL FiNd a waY(AR) "

/forum/fan-fictions/958347/love-will-find-a-way-ar-imp-note-plz-read

~~~*intro*~~~

NOW MY STORY STARTS WID A BRIGHT MORNING A BEAUTIFUL HOUSE THE MOST HUGE N BEAUTIFUL HOUSE OF MR.SHASHAK N PADMA GUPTA'S VERY WELL KNOWN DOC'S .....IN THE HOUSE MORNING PRAYERS ARE HELD N IN A HUGE ROOM ONE GIRL IS SNUGGLING IN BED N ANOTHER GIRL IS LOOKING IRRITATED THEN SUDDENLY

TRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGG
hmm,di plz stop that alarm

rids get up or u will be late 4r the colledge today is ur first day remenber....a teenage girl got up wid a jerk as she listen to the words of her sis....OOOH FISH ..she was truly beautiful n a sweet featured girl n very very innocent

Ooh God di y didnt u told me before i would have got up early ."she was collecting her things n running towards the bathroom

As if u listened me i was calling u 4r half an hour but ur responce was nill thats y i rang this alarm"........she was always irritated wid her lil sis acts.

i knoe di u always do that"...........giggling standing at the step of the bathroom taking out her room slippers

if u will continue this na rids then u will never achieve wat u want...u wanna be a doctor na so u have to be responsible"

diiiiiiiiii plz not morning lectures"...okay now i am getting late

sorry di" she made a puppy face n her big sis melt

love u my lil sis"...she kissed her head

Angi diiiiiii" from the bathroom ...."kal raat ARMAAN JIJU 😲😲ka phone aya tha"

yeah rids n armi r not in love they share a relation of jija n sali
now if u want me to continue then tell me by giving ur comment/critisize
i will be very happy if u people will tell me my mistakes n i will try to improve them
do comment then i will continue i knoe intro is not so good but story have alot of twist n turns ...........thats all i can tell
luv
shweet29

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Posted: 16 years ago
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ur FF starting iz nice.................bt i dun want armi to be ridzy's jiju......................i mean wat ll happen to atul...............lol!!!!!!!............bt dats juz my opinion.................u can continue if u want...................coz i luved reading it...................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sehar mehrotra

ur FF starting iz nice.................bt i dun want armi to be ridzy's jiju......................i mean wat ll happen to atul...............lol!!!!!!!............bt dats juz my opinion.................u can continue if u want...................coz i luved reading it...................

Ooh thxx sehar i wasnt expecting so quick responce hmmm well arman rids relation.... 4r that u have to w8 sweety ..as i mentioned i am KASH FAN sooooooooo didnt u get wat i mean to say😉
luv
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yaaar plzzz aisa mat karo armaan rids ka jiju cant even imagine......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: anisha gupta

yaaar plzzz aisa mat karo armaan rids ka jiju cant even imagine......

Hmmmmm dont worry look i am not gonna reveal wats going to happen in my FF but plz put ur worrys aside i will never dissapoint u guys plzzzz chill there are alot more shock this is only the begining😛
i noe i have touch the nerve of u guys by mentioning rids armi ki sali hehehehehe but trust me
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanx both of u
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great starting👏👏👏.armaan is ridhima's jiju...................that is a shock😲.this is going to be very interesting.does anji love armaan??
continue soon........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sasya

great starting👏👏👏.armaan is ridhima's jiju...................that is a shock😲.this is going to be very interesting.does anji love armaan??

continue soon........

Hmm rids sali n armaan jiju u will get to knoe whether anji loves him or not...well u get more u have to read n 4r reading u have to WAIT LOLXX

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