Winter Dream...AY Shot

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Surprise Surprise😃😳
this was looooooooooooong oberdue and was actually supposed to be a part of the thundering firebolt that hit u all in the name of "Ethereal"😳😳 but you know how hell hard a work it is to create ebery single of our homes..two posts banane main hi jaan nikal gayi..thats why this got delayed...but better late than neber
and guyssssssssssss am wanring you this is like my mooooooooooooooooost mooost passionate write up ebeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeer....☺️☺️..u know hwev writing this i was actvuallyyy tremebeliiiiing and getting gooses of dino's size☺️....i soooooo adore thiiiiiiiiis big timee and i habe worked hell hard on it coz pasison is a sesitibe issue if adequate care is not taken then the same can become bulger...and am so happy with my attempt i think i habe managed to keep it suttle as well as soulful☺️...so i neeeeeeeed really really HUGE HYPEEEEEEEEEER replieees from you all else loony's heart would be broken😭
so get ready for the most exotic most exstatic ride of your lifeeeeeeeeeee..and yeha its a bit adultish😆..so people wearing diapers and nappyies plz dunt read😆😆😆
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He stood there mesmerized by the sight she presented...she was the only one who could captivate his
soul.....He was looking at her with burning desiere in his eyes ..the intensity of his desiere made her shiver from within she could actually feel herself melt feel her soul go up in flames☺️☺️....she had never witnessed a sight as pure as this ...never lived a moment as beautyful as this...seeing his eyes sizzle with desiere...she felt as if the reason of her existance has finally got known to her...neither of them could speak even breathing was a huge pain...she could hear his heartbeat from where she stood across him...and she knew that every beat ewery thud of his heart spoke about his love for her☺️☺️...he was tenderly touching her with his eyes...whispering his desire to her in unsoken words....and that whisper directly reached her heart suddenly all she could see was him all she could hear was him and all she could breathe was him..☺️
how was it possible that just by his one gaze she started acheing for his touch his caress his kiss for his whole self...☺️..he always had this power this magic on her he could make her want him so badly that she would go weeeeeeeeeeeak in her knees and would faaaint hard if he didn't held her in his arms and kissed her maaadly then and there not caring where they are or who they are just remembering that this was the only thing they needed then for survival and if their hunger was not satiated then they would surely starve to death... ☺️
indeed it was a picture perfect moment the stars were staring down at them with envy in their eyes, the moon radiating light on them as if they were divinity itself..it was a moment where true passion was united..like a never ending song written from the soul and heart☺️ with him here so close to her she could feel her body glow with his heat☺️☺️...feel her heart beat faster as he held her close really close☺️...and all she desiered was that this moment lasted forever that they always stayed in this beautyful embrace
yes she wanted to forget the world and dance the night away with him☺️☺️ ...dance like never before till the end of time itself.... till the time when her legs give away and she is unable to stand...and then she wanted to see the night fade away into the mebers of her sleep...she sleeping in his arms her ears hearing the secure beat of his heart her lips kissing the hard tilt of his throat and she whispering words of endearment to him...his memory his feel filling her in her dream...her "winter dream☺️"☺️☺️☺️... yeag dreamland awaited her..and she closed her eyes for this was her fairytale☺️☺️☺️
but he was busy looking at her....whenevr he saw her he felt as if his heart has seen eternity...and he would start dreaming of a world far away from reality where they were all alone far away from humanity only surrounded by he stary night with the moon shining above them the wind brushing against her skin in a friendly gesture making her hair blow making his heart ache for her....☺️....the only noise heard in the midnight air was that of their breathing..which was heavied with the weight of their passion☺️☺️...in the still of the night he saw the light in her eyes..and he could not even begin to tell what he wanted to do......he wanted to love every inch of her, taste every part of her..wanted to drink her soul her flesh her blood through her very core☺️☺️☺️...he wanted to possess her to consume her with his one kiss☺️☺️☺️ wanted to see her shake with desire which only he could fulfill☺️☺️ wanted to see tears roll down her cheecks when he kissed her heart☺️☺️.....
and so as the wind flowed and candels flicked their flames...their eyes met briefly...both mirroring their deep well of longing and need...he ran his fingers through the cascades of her hair to remove the strands from her forehead but insted his fingers got entagled in thier maze...he could feel the heat of his desire rise he needed her more than the air he breathed he knew he was drowning in her intoxicating smell lossing all sembelance of sanity...the only rememberance being her soft skin and its sweet taste.....he took her in his arms and greedyly drank her as if she were the most delicious wine..☺️☺️..he could feel her body come alive, feel her swell with responses wich only he could arouse☺️....he was kissing her as if she was filled with him...lips meeting lips....tongue entwined in tongue...skin meshied with skin...flsh moulded with flesh.........the feel of her skin between his lips was like no other bliss..to see he cry out his name when his teeth met her warm skin when his hands caressed her..was a moment straight out of heaven....☺️..she broke the kiss in a gasp...and wound her hands in his hair and pulled him close so close that the flesh in his neck gave away..... it was a moment of hunger of timless passion...it was a kind of dewotion..he was worshiping ewery part of the her body with his mouth...there was no place to hide there was no place to run...all they could do is surendor to this insane demand of their souls...all they could do was get soaked in each others love in a way that their passion would touch the very deapth of their soul so that noone else could ever come this close for only they could fill their lives with joy....only they could quench the burning fire of their desire....and there in this winter dream of a night they lay together, one mind, one body, one soul...existing as one whole for this moment in which they experianced forever☺️☺️....
and in the middle of this blissful night, silently she awoke to see him sleeping peacfully to gaze at him while h slept like that...longing to hold him again near very near to her...she reached out and touched his face delicatly with her trembling hand...her eyes so tender so full of eternal love remembering the passionate memories they had together created just a few hours ago...he stired just then and caught her spying at him...she blushed openly to have been caught in the act of drooling...he placed his hand ober hers, stunned at the deapth of love brimming in her eyes...their eyes locked together never leaving each other for a second...she smiled shyly at him as she caressed his soft skin and moved closer to him...he took her in his arms and kissed the petals of her cheecks..she sighed and turned her head slowly to allow his seeking mouth take her lips....a subtle moan escaped her as his hands begins their journey again..he proclaimed his love for her by kissing her wanting neck...she moved her hands over him feeling herself being engulfed by him....her heart skipped a beat, his eyes adoring her..and together once again they created the perfect harmony which is the biggest proof of destiny that they were meant to be.... ☺️☺️
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Edited by smritisashi - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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and some ps
ps.........this is essentially a dedication to my adorable jemssssss whose presance in my life is no less than the shine of diamonds😳🤗...she has giben me loadsssss loads and loads not just in the form of her heartstopping unbeliweable dream come true creations...but mor so by being there always to be by my side when lif was not easy at all...i know for sure that she would neber leabe me alone in a deserted island and would always always find a way to make me smile to stand up for me and fight for my substance....thaanx jems for being what u areeeeeee...and this one is specially an ode to the breath taking nerbe jerking sense freezing Winter Dream siggy u made for ethereal...see jems see the power of your creations they single handedly can turn to be an inspiration just on look at it and words automatically start flowing...😳🤗🤗....you habe giben us loads and load🤗s of eternal memories jems and this is just my way of saying Thank You 🤗🤗...'"tw"😉
pps..........naaaaaaaaaaaaps would u do the honor of including this in the first page of our mesmerizing homeeeee?😳😳....i had written this only for our first page😳..."tw"😉
ppps...i had alshoo requeshted a siggy to represent this shot😳😳...wld search it and post it hre sooon😳
pppps.am so sureeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee u all wld lobe htis ot bitsssssss...hahahahaha...hey bhaggu teach me modeshty😆..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i cant stop blushing smruu..got butterflies in my tummy bahut saare...this maybe coz of my recent read of DH but well i think u write like JKR i hope u get the scene i'm talking of..i felt EXACTLY the same mayb more(this one has ay in it)

After re reading
ur writing is getting better
edited
i suck at long replies but that doesnt mean wat i'm saying isnt honest. U ROCK!
Loved the last line
this sure was a surprize
HAppy Teachers DAy
Edited by .smriti. - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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bak! oh toony ye kya thha hun? blush blush blush! dis shot is totally different! taking a piece of situation how u'v explained every single seconds of it! it's soooo!! ☺️ ☺️
n wanna tell u 1 more thing, d way u use yo lingo 2 express it jus luv yo ligos u use it's soo mmmmmm it makes d whole thing go mooooreeeeee dreamyyyyy!! gr8 1! 🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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..girl girl girl girl girl girl girl girl girl girlllllllllll....... are u wishing to cum to my happy go lucky funeral.. wat is this?????? ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ goodnes... Winter Dream.. m having rocking sweat over here... goshhh.. ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ He stood there mesmerized by the sight she presented...she was the only one who could captivate his soul.....He was looking at her with burning desiere in his eyes ..the intensity of his desiere made her shiver from within she could actually feel herself melt feel her soul go up in flames oh yehhhh... and here m going totallyy madd readin each line.. wat bout meee???? I read the very first line and fainted yarrr.. agey dekh kya haal kiya tuney mera simmi madam.. heshhh.. bhagguu u are my saviour.. gal... hatss offf.. luv yu for this one re simi... wu wu wuuuuuuuu ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️she had never witnessed a sight as pure as this ...never lived a moment as beautyful as this...seeing his eyes sizzle with desiere...she felt as if the reason of her existance has finally got known to her...neither of them could speak even breathing was a huge pain...she could hear his heartbeat from where she stood across him...and she knew that every beat ewery thud of his heart spoke about his love for her mammaaa..... ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ never witnessed a sight like this... pheww... ☺️ ☺️ definately what can be more pure and serine than this.. the eternal luv.. aww aww awww.. ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ I can acctually imagine each and every single line simi.. and believe me.. you have written a Bible as per me... ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ goodness.. no joking gul.. this is acctually taking my breath away as I am moving forward.. I couldn't resist to even read the complete fic.. but was dying to reply as I rad the first statement..m gradually reading and posting.. and the gooses and the rocking lumps m feeling.. wuuu.. simply osum... goshhh...☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ he was tenderly touching her with his eyes...whispering his desire to her in unsoken words....and that whisper directly reached her heart suddenly all she could see was him all she could hear was him and all she could breathe was him. goodness gracious... wat is this man.... ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️, shuckkzz... brath him, feel him and unspoken words, I think you are upto a great deal ahead sim.. goshhh.. ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️... all she could breath was him, and all I can feel rite now is hugging you.. muaaahhhhhhh ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ m sorryy but this is the only emoticon in the universe thn i know rite now gul... the scenarios that you have stated, is acctually to the core form of romantiza, and believe me gul.. nothing can be expressed in such a beautiful manner than this, which you have created, you have acctually created a 'SAMAN' meaning melody... ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ man.... as m moving forward with the fic.. I cannot tell you what beautifulness m going through yaarrr sim... way way wayy beyond my vocabulary ... ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ m gng to reply further gul... rite now m interrupted.. believe me.. will surely reply...☺️ ☺️ ☺️

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wahtever the "whole wrld" tries to convey smree this is one of the most rocking fics...even if u get lesser replies than other ppl
i know hw much efforts u have put into this one and trustt me smree it shows in the fic thers a very thin line between lust and passion and smree not in a single not a single wrd crosses the line..i'm proud of u my namuu... u prove urself in ALL genres i'm glad u tried writing this nahi toh i wud have never known and could never be so proud..
and when i say u write like JKR i dont mean u r coping her all i wanna say is ur writng style is as captivating as hers, mayb better...
all they could do was get soaked in each others love in a way that their passion would touch the very deapth of their soul so that noone else could ever come this close for only they could fill their lives with joy....only they could quench the burning fire of their desire....and there in this winter dream of a night they lay together, one mind, one body, one soul...existing as one whole for this moment in which they experianced forever☺️☺️....
ONLY YOU only u can write this way smree i'm so proud of u..
my dotty my twinkleeeeeee🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey gurly.... m chorryy m late bacchaa... haanji.. toh where was I?? yesh yesh yesh.. in the dreamland!!! ☺️ ☺️rocking one yarr.. m starting to get the gooses again.. ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ indeed it was a picture perfect moment the stars were staring down at them with envy in their eyes, the moon radiating light on them as if they were divinity itself..it was a moment where true passion was united..like a never ending song written from the soul and heart ☺️ ☺️ ☺️awwww simzzz.... this is another one re ladki.. hey bhagguu...yesh obviously this is The THE PICTURE PERFECT MOMENT yarr.. pheww....☺️ ☺️ yesh definately the stars will stare them with envy, as they don't get this trueness and the feeling of oneness in them.. phew.. ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ gosh simz.... it seemz dat m in aheavenly world.. hey bhaguu ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ the moon radiating light on them as if they were divinity in themselves.. man... this statement is making me go gaga over n over the time m reading it re.. waise kyu nah ho.. Divine matlab Divya 😆.. he he hee ☺️ ☺️ and all she desiered was that this moment lasted forever that they always stayed in this beautyful embrace yes she wanted to forget the world and dance the night away with him, hey bhagguu..this is chow trueee. the moment they are with each other, all they need is nothing.. simply nothing man..we are are crazzyy for the couple, and their crazzines for each other can be mentioned and explained by none other than you Sim. u rock. luv you mmuah m chorryy again i can post only this very emoticon gurly...☺️ dance like never before till the end of time itself.... till the time when her legs give away and she is unable to stand...and then she wanted to see the night fade away into the mebers of her sleep...she sleeping in his arms her ears hearing the secure beat of his heart her lips kissing the hard tilt of his throat and she whispering words of endearment to him...his memory his feel filling her in her dream...her "winter dream☺️"☺️☺️... yeag dreamland awaited her..and she closed her eyes for this was her fairytale☺️☺️☺️ my godness.. wat was this.. hey bhagguu ladki... are you upto writing a passionate script or wat?? goodness.. hey bhaggu apni is shishya ko samjhao.. we wanna live, and she is drowing us into the river called AY man.. heshh.. beautiful man.. I wanna drown.. drown drown....☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ossumm yaar simi.. I can't tell you how much i am loving each and every line as m moving forward, I am cuming back again to read those lines which are acctually soul catching man.. it seems you have given us a microscope, and explaining each and every thing that we can see or even which we cannot bacchaa!! goodness gurly.. love you yaarr sim.. hey ppl, who haven't read the fic, or haven't replied, better do that man.. or else you are unpriviledged and unlucky and unblessed to not have got the chance to give yr views about this flawless fic of Sim...mmuaahhh☺️...it is all just mesmerising yaar sim.. can't tell you what m I feeling re ladki.. just blowing away with the wind gurl.. thats all I can say now man..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey simz... m again backk.. sorryy that I am posting in parts, but there si sum problem with my net, agar aisa nahi kiya, then the complete post vanishes.. cool problem nah.. he he heee.. okk now coming back to the hypnotic state...☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ but he was busy looking at her....whenevr he saw her he felt as if his heart has seen eternity...and he would start dreaming of a world far away from reality where they were all alone far away from humanity only surrounded by he stary night with the moon shining above them the wind brushing against her skin in a friendly gesture making her hair blow making his heart ache for her....☺️....the only noise heard in the midnight air was that of their breathing..which was heavied with the weight of their passion☺️☺️...in the still of the night he saw the light in her eyes..and he could not even begin to tell what he wanted to do......he wanted to love every inch of her, taste every part of her..wanted to drink her soul her flesh her blood through her very core☺️☺️☺️...he wanted to possess her to consume her with his one kiss☺️☺️☺️ wanted to see her shake with desire which only he could fulfill☺️☺️ wanted to see tears roll down her cheecks when he kissed her heart☺️☺️.......simzz...wat are you upto yaarr... I mean okk gurl.. I said I have gone completely gaga.. what else.. each sentence is one more than the other yaarr.. how much should I express, I am not Smriti Singhvi ladki... heshh.. this very para is by far the bestestestestest one obviously I can't deny the fact that the others were great, but this one almost tore my eyes yaarr.. I am just more than happy and refreshed after reading this one shot jahaan tak bhi padhahai mainey abhi tak.. but believe me.. I give you the award of the best Shot writer gul.. I know you are depressed rite now.. but all I can do now is awe at yr shot, as it is the defination of being PERFECT, you have always done yr work with perfection bacchaa.. I know for you, it is the best or nothing, yr dedication, yr efforts, yr love, yr passion, i hatt of to each and everything bacchaa..you are a very big gift for all of us, and the biggest achievement, and the true defination of what a friend is, you mean so much to all of us, that if we will start expressing, then it would be a what du we say TAUHEEN 😆, yr respect in my eyes is always great sim, and the magic wand that you rotate with yr fics, the intensity of the words, the pressure of the sentences, yr expressing power, can take ne bloddy person to an entire world where no one is there, but every1 is present, I know that was an irony, but I mean each and eevry comma also what I am writing, after ages M posting this long comment, and it is entirely wrapped in a chotu sa envelop of luv for the rockstar.. muaahh! luv u baby!! each incresing page, is making me go donno where, but just gaze at everything which you have written gurly.. way way way to cool, and realistic baccha!! he wanted to see Tears rolling down her eyes when he gently kissed her, i believe this quote is the perfect one for the duo, eyes say it all, thats it.. nothing is further needed for them, we cry only for those whom sumwhere we love, but here, the tears also contain the passion, they convey everything, no words, no sentences, nothin just nothing, all is required is them man.. aur kuch bhi nahi re...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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He stood there mesmerized by the sight she presented...she was the only one who could captivate his
soul.....He was looking at her with burning desiere in his eyes ..the intensity of his desiere made her shiver from within she could actually feel herself melt feel her soul go up in flames
......smriti these lines r makin me crazy............wht a way to start the shot...........i jus kept readin these lines yaar.......... amzin.........these lines goes wth the ay patch up 2 vry well whn yuvi says i luv u ashi n keep lookin at her n she blushes........itz so damm cute yaar.........
he was tenderly touching her with his eyes...whispering his desire to her in unsoken words....and that whisper directly reached her heart suddenly all she could see was him all she could hear was him and all she could breathe was him............

indeed it was a picture perfect moment the stars were staring down at them with envy in their eyes, the moon radiating light on them as if they were divinity itself..it was a moment where true passion was united...........
wow amzin yaar...... readin thse lines the first thng tht cmes to my mind is gate scene................it ws the most passionate scene in remix......in these lines the only couple i cn imagine is ay..... whn thy were together thy didnt need anyone......thy were there fr each other nt onli as a couple bt as true frnds also............

she could feel her body glow with his heat...feel her heart beat faster as he held her close really close...and all she desiered was that this moment lasted forever that they always stayed in this beautyful embrace
yes she wanted to forget the world and dance the night away with him....................
onli man who could makee her heart beat skip ws yuvi...................she luved him like anythng.........noone cn take place of yuvi in her heart n her life..................beautiful lines.......luv each n evry line of ths fic.......again ths reminds me of ay candle night scene............these were the scenes whn thy started to feel somethng fr each other.......mindblowin yarrrrrrr

her eyes so tender so full of eternal love remembering the passionate memories they had together created just a few hours ago..........he stired just then and caught her spying at him...she blushed openly to have been caught in the act of drooling.....he took her in his arms and kissed the petals of her cheecks..she sighed and turned her head slowly to allow his seeking mouth take her lips....a subtle moan escaped her as his hands begins their journey again..he proclaimed his love for her by kissing her wanting neck...she moved her hands over him feeling herself being engulfed by him....her heart skipped a beat, his eyes adoring her..and together once again they created the perfect harmony which is the biggest proof of destiny that they were meant to be..............

these lines r makin me blush smriti..........i luv the endin smriti..........thse lines r so beatitiful.........u knw tht i m already gaga over the way u write smriti..........ths is indeed one of the best shots i hve evr read.........luv u fr ths..........continue writin these n givi us such beautiful suprises...u r indeed the best writer in rf.............luv u...............muahhhhhhhh............w8in fr u to cntinu tamana n ter yaadein fast....................fr me tamana is oe of the best fic evr..........cntinue soooooonnnnnnn👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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differnet...nd defntly not fr ppl in diappiess...very well wriiteen...nd d accnt of one second in such vivd details...lyk tym had stoppped for oders....im glad u made me read it...bt m not used 2 rytin huge replies so very sowwie....bt i can defntly. say its one of ur gr8st wrks...on ur grave wil be writen..
smriti singhvi
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caring friend
awesum fic ryter \m/
Edited by luv_remix - 17 years ago

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