*NEW FF (kissa yeh pyar hai part 1-8 on pg 1)

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Hello friends

I am very sorry for the blank topic I meant to have part1 of my ff but cause of problem due to my computer I was able to send part one. I am very sorry once again.

Here is part 1 hope u would like it. I would be starting it from where it ended. There wouldn't be much of arman and ridz sence in first 2 parts

Part 1

Chrig chrig !!!!! chrig kya howa'. Chrig plz kuch to kaho Arman deko''. Ritu shout

Arman holds chrig and shake him

Arman ' chrig kya howa r u ''.. look at ritu as see her very frighten and tense.

Arman then look at ridz and give her sign to take ritu away as too much tense is not good for her.

Arman ' ritu tum chalo ridz ka saat I well take care f chrig.

Ritu- no I am not going any where chrig get up plz look at me

Ar- riddhima ritu ko lajao''.

And ridz take ritu and arman cal wardboy and take chrig some tests.

Arman done all the test.

Arman ' sister lovely mujhe chrig ke test results bahut jalde chayha .plz

And come out of the room while chrig is still unconscious. Ritu comes there

Ritu ' arman ho chrig'

Arman ' don't worry ritu chrig is perfectly fine'. Mujhe lakta hai ka kamzori howa hai.

Ritu ' thank god he is fine '''' tears come out of her eyes'''' so to light the environment'''

Arman ' ritu it all your fault u don't give him proper food.

Ritu- Arman.!!!!!!!!!!

Arman ' I am joking

Nuser ' dr arman chrig ko hosh ayia hai.

Ritu rush in followed by arman ritu give chrig hug and cry

Chrig ' ritu I am fine it was just'''''

Ritu ' shut up chrig it was nothing for u but''''.. and cried main re to jaan nikle rahe thi'''

Chrig ' ritu'''

Arman make a sound to show his presences.

Arman- I be just right back

He was walking lost in how much chrig and ritu love eachother and his and ridz love is completely different. He was so lost that he didn't see and bump into some one and that was none other then riddhima.

Riddhima was about to fill down when arman holds her hand and bring her back and their chest hit one other. Ridz hair was flying and going all over armans face, arman just stare at her and did not more while ridz trying to move her hair from armans face and not realising that she is caring his face. Arman holds her hand and ridz looked up to see him, but ridz pager start ringing and they break apart

Ridz- thank u ''..or otherwise I would..

Arman- cut her off in between '''. It ok ''' and is about to leave'..

Ridz- arman r u going to collect chrig's report.

Arman ' yes y'''

Ridz- it here '''.. and hand it to him

Arman ' thank u ''. And again trys to leave

Ridz- arman '''he looked back at her'''. Arman ow Dr keerti want to see the file and both of us together.

Arman ' ok lets go'..

They both reach dr keerti's cabin

Aramn ' dr keerti can we come in'''..

Keerrti ' yes Dr's

Arman- dr keerti yeh hai chrig ki reports, he suddenly got headache and fainted so therefore I took some blood simple and here is the reports''.

Dr keerti sees the reports''

Ridz- dr keerti I have see the resukt I don't think it anything serious I think'''

Dr keerti ' dr ridhima it is serious'''

Ridz- kya dr keerti but'''

Arman- wat wrong dr keerti, what does the reports show.

Dr keerti ' chrig ko brain tumor hai''. Aur'

Arman and ridz both are shock and cant think of anything.

Arman ' dr keerti aur'''..

Someone ' kya!

Some one says.

Who is this person''' I will tell u in next part .

here is Part 2
Kya!!!!!!!!!!!
Arman, riddhima turn around and is shock to see chriagh standing in front of them.
Arman – chriagh who …….
Chriagh- arman how can this be possible I didn't do anything why me……….. tears roll down from his eyes
Armaan- chriagh dehko woh………. Take deep breath……..tumhe kuch nahi hoga…. Woh……….
Dr keerti- Dr armaan I don't think you should hide anything from him.
Chriagh – Dr keerti mujhe kya howa aur iske koi
Dr keerti – yes Mr Verma there is treatment for it but we need to do some test. Dr Armaan aap Mr Verma ka test karka mujhe dekayai plz
Armaan – yes dr keerti.
Dr keerti leave the room
Armaan – chriagh can we do the tests
Chriagh – armaan tell me the truth what are the chances of me surviving ……. Both eyes are numb.
Armaan – chriagh……….woh
Ridz – armaan ……. Holding his hand and give him a sign that ritu is here………
Ritu – chriagh kya howa is everything fine…………
Chriagh wipe his tears and smile…..
Chriagh – kuch nahi dr's said that everthing is fine……….
Nuser- sir everthing is ready we can do the tests now………
Ritu look confused
Ritu- what tests……chriagh if everthing is fine then why doing more tests……. Chriagh wat is it ……..
Ridz try to control the situation but fail as ritu did not listen
Chriagh - ritu it nothing these tests just small it just because I have gona quite weak so that why they are checking to see wat they can give me so I can be normal……..
Ritu – r u telling me the truth
Chriagh – hai aur nahi to main tumhse lie ……..
Ritu – nahi who I was worried………… and hug him
Chriagh – don't worry ……… a single tear rolls down and armaan put his and on him …….
Armaan – yes ritu u women cry in ever small thing , ……….ridz looked at him……… chriagh lets go
Chriagh – can I go now ritu………..
Ritu - ok..i will be waiting here…..
Armaan – riddhima tum ritu saat raho
Ridz nod her head
Armaan take chriagh with him and he does the tests.

After few hours armaan is with dr keerti and chriagh come in.
Chriagh- dr keerti kya hai report mi
Dr keerti – have sit mr verma……
Chriagh – nahi dr you tell me wat in the report
Armaan – chriagh report mi ya hai ki ………. Tum ko……….tum ko
Chriagh – kya armaan mujhe ko kya armaan
Dr keerti – mr verma you have to be strong in listening to wat we are going to say…….the reports shows that you have brain tumor which is the reason why you blank out.
Chriagh break down ………kya , dr wat is the treatment
Armaan – chriagh we can do surgery and after that you would be fine
Chriagh look up at armaan with shine of hope
Armaan – but ……….
Chriagh – but kya……. Armaan
Armaan- but there is a risk of you losing your memory
Chriagh- kya …………in shock….. isn't there any other way
Dr keerti- no mr verma there is no other way ……
Chriagh looked down – is I don't do the surgery how longer can I survive….
Dr keerti - maxi of 6 months
Look up and tears roll down his eyes
Chriagh with tears in his eyes……… 6 months ………6 months ………….in lower tone………. I will be able to see my baby and ritu………
Armaan is shock by wat he has heared …… chriagh hai tum kya ka raha hoon……… tum ……..
Chriagh – nahi armaan mujhe yeh surgery nahi karne hai……and start waking away.
Armaan – chriagh ………….sono ….chriagh
Dr keerti- dr armaan you plz try to make him understand and we have less time we have to do the operation as soon as it possible.
Armaan – yes d keerti……..and leaves.
Armaan walks down and goes to the fire exist and sit down on stairs………… and chriagh's words goes around his head………. And he cross his hand with eachother place it on his forehead…………
Someone put their hand on armaan's shoulder and he look up to find riddhima standing there.
Ridz- armaan……..and sit next to him……….armaan what has in chriaghs's report…
Armaan look up at her and then away – brain tumor………and he is ……..
Ridz- he is wat armaan.
Armaan- he is refusing from doing operation which means that he would not be able to live more the 6 months or less.
Ridz – wat looks all shock………. Ritu …….. armaan look up … I mean has he think about ritu and …………
Armaan- ritu ……….. ridz wat a luck she has as one happiness is on the way for her and one sorrow is right next to her in either way she is losing………. I am more worried of when she get to know about chriagh 's condition god know how she is gona…….
Ridz put her hand on his and look into his eyes…….. armaan chriagh is your friend talk to him and try to make him understand the satiation and how risky it would be for ritu his lost.
Armaan who put his hand on top of ridz….. I think you are right I will talk to him… they bith look the other way…..

Scene shift to chriagh who walk down and see ritu who is staying in a sofa in his room (in sanjevin) and fall in asleep……. He walked toward her and tears rolled down his eyes…..he talk to himself. Ritu mujhe maaf kardo main aapna vaada nahi neba pa woga……wat can i do when we want to live we cant and when we don't want to live we don't get the chance.
I love you ritu more than anything I can risk your life …….. and wipe his tears and say to himself we are going to leave today and go far so nothing happen to you……then look at ritu 's tommy ……… beta tum appne mummy kayal rak na mera ja ne ka bad………. And kiss her tommy……….
Armaan – chriagh ………. He look up to him ………..i want to talk to you come with me…………
Chraigh- kya hai armaan….. if you gona talk to me about the surgery , then I don't you are wising your time as I am not goning to change my mind
Armaan – chriagh why are you doing this……….. yes I understand there is risk but it not definite. And think about ritu what is she going to do ……. How is she
Chriagh – armaan it very easy for you to say, but I don't want to live a life where I would not remember my wife and child, I perfre death then that type of live…………
Armaan you wouldn't understand when ever you love someone then you would understand that thinking live without that person is not just ard but impossilbe. And I don't want to live unknown life.
Arman- you are telling me all this but you are not thinking how ritu would live without you when it impossible for her too. So plz do the operation and you never no nothing may happen to you. Because that is the only way which you can survive. Plz chriag try to understand ……… and put his hand on chriagh shoulder…..
Chraig – lekan armaan ……..
Sound of glass breaking come and both armaan and chraigh are shock…..


Part 3
Rituuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Chriag shockly yelled.
And run toward ritu so does armaan. As ritu is on the floor.
Chriag – Ritu ….ritu …kya howa…..plz open your eyes……… armaan dehko….dr ….dr ……….. chriag shout out loud.
Armaan – chriag calm down ………. I will check her ………..
Chriag – liken armaan…….
Armaan – chriag ………. Come….. they take ritu to a room
After 15 min………… ritu jump and call out chriag………
Chriag – ritu main yaha hoon , I am here next to u
Ritu – chriag …..chriag .woh ……………tears roll down her eyes and hold chriag's face ………. Chriag tum ….tum operation karoga. Armaan operation tayare karro.
Chriag – nahi ritu , I am not going to the operation
Ritu – but why not chriag baby plz try to understand, armaan tell him
Chriag – nahi ritu, I don't want to live a life which has no meaning, if I don't even remember the most important person in my life. Nahi ritu
Ritu – chriag how can u be so selfish only think about yourself, why don't you think about me what am I gona do without u. plz chriag
Chriag – ritu plz try to understand I love very much but …………putting his hands on ritu's face .,tear roll down his tears.
Ritu holding his hand and look into his eyes- fine chriag but before anything happen to you I will kill myself ……..
Chriag's eyes wide open – ritu yeh tum kya kara hai hoo. Ritu plz don't say that
Ritu – chriag I cant live without you ………. And take his hand and place it on her head …….. chriag tumhe main re kasamh …………
Chriag – ritu tum yeh sab………..
Ritu – nahi chriag plz yeh operation karro.plz
Chriag single tear roll down his eyes and he close his eyes- ok ritu I will do the operation……. Ritu give him hug and both cry their hearts out. Armaan meanwhile staring at them.

Near the reception.
Armaan – doctor keerti chriag is ready to do operation
Dr keerti – that is good, we have to do the operation as soon as possible because the tumor is separating very quickly. Aur hai Dr atul will be assisting us in this operation.
Armaan – yes dr keerti.
Dr keerti – i will tell sister lovely to ready the operation equipment and will inform you u when it ready.
Armaan – ok………. And leave from there and goes to the locker room where all other inters were there.
Atul – armaan where were u I was looking for u………….have no reply so walk to armaan and put his hand on his shoulder. And armaan jump……. Kya howa armaan
Armaan- chriag's operation is today, oh yeh you are assisting it dr keerti said it.
Atul- oh ok….. but armaan isn't the operation to risky…….
Anjali – kiss ko kya howa hai
Muskaan – woh chriag ko brain tumor hai ………..he is armaan's friend
Armaan's pager rings ………… atul let go it from dr keerti
Dr keerti with chriag and ritu – Mr verma everything is ready shell we go. Armaan and atul arrive there.
Armaan- dr keerti we are here ……..goes and give chriag injection to put him to sleep but before that chriag holds armaan's hand …………… armaan is everthing be ok…….. armaan smile …………..yes it would be and inject him
Atul- don't worry chriag everything would be perfectly finebeacuse you so many people praying for you so don't worry…..they take chriag into operation theatre….
Ritu – armaan take care of chriag plz……folding her hands together.
Armaan holds her hand and nod his head and look over to ridz……….
Ridz- ritu sit down everything would be fine…………. And armaan leaves.
Ritu and ridz waiting outside the theatre room

After 3hours(hopefully)
They all come out…………..ritu run to armaan …………and look into his eyes.
Armaan put his hand on her shoulder …………. Ritu the operation is successful, chriag is unconscious right now and as soon as he is conscience the u can see him…….ok………. ritu smile and tear drop out of her eyes
Ritu – thank god …………….
Nuser comes running – dr keerti the patient is sinking……….dr
Armaan – wat…….. all run inside again………….
Ritu – kya howa armaan……. Soano……ridz try to come her down ……nahi riddhima …….woh ….and hold dr keerti's hand……dr keerti kya howa hai mera chriag ko………tell me
Dr keerti – I need to check but may interal bleeding….everything would be fine
Ritu – nahi …..nahi……… and walk backwards ………..she suddenly start having pain and hold her tommy……..
Dr keerti and ridz run to her …..ritu ritu hold your self.
Dr keerti – dr riddhima I think it time for, you take her , dr anjali you also help dr riddhiam…
Anjali – yes madam…………they take ritu whilr keerti went back to operation theatre
Ritu still in pain – riddhima chriag mera chriag ko kuch nahi hona chayia hai main
Ridz – don't worry ritu………….take deep breaths.

In the operation theatre
Atul – dr keerti the patient heart beat are very low …….armaan looks worried and get tense
Dr keerti – dr armaan give him shocks ………… but the it did not show any results… oh no the patient is sinking he is not responding to anything ……..
Armaan – no dr keerti nothing should happen to chraig and give him more shocks…
But in the middle keerti stop armaan …..dr armaan you r a dr you should not be behavouing like this……
Atul -dr keerti chriag is responing they all look at this heartbeat graph……..

Sence shift to ritu who is unconscious………. Anjali – wow she has given birth to baby girl ohhhh she is so cute……..
Ridz – hai di she is and I hope nothing happen to chriag aur………..

Sence again shift to chriag…….. dr keerti – his life is saved but he is in coma……. Dr armaan app…………. Armaan eyes are wet and walks off form there without saying anything ……
Atul- ha re armaan sono…………but no respond and just walked past. He walk up to terrace and chriag's words goes around his head and at the background dmg title track play in slow motion.

Ridz- atul chriag , how is he
Atul with very low voice – he is in coma…….and armaan
Ridz- armaan ko kya ……….in very tense tone…..
Atul looks surprisely ………y r u so worried about armaan …….
Ridz – no nothing where is he I need to tell him some thing ………and look down
Atul- I don't know but he was very upset………….and he just walk…..as soon as he look up ridz was not there……….. hare yeh ridz kaha chali gayi.

Ridz run up to the terrace and see armaan sitting down in one corner, so she walk up to him…….and put her hand no his shoulder.
Ridz- armaan ……..and sit beside him…………armaan turns around and hug her tightly………..which shock ridz but she also hugged him back and armaan let out his heart ………
Armaan- riddhima I couldn't save chriag , I don't know how ritu would react and it not good for her state.
Ridz break apart and hold armaan's face – nothing would happen to ritu and she ahs given birth to a cute baby girl…..this bring small smile on armaan's lip but quickly it wife and he stand up………..ridz wat about her how is she gna……..
Ridz- don't worry armaan god is still there don't worry let go to ritu…….. armaan nods his head and wipe away his tears and both walk down.

Ritu become conscience and look around and see her baby girl beside her and smile touching her check and thing to her self ……chriag you won it baby girl and suddenly she get up……..
Anjali- rituji app.it not good for you, you must rest……
Ritu – nahi dr anjali I want to meet chriag , I need to tell him that he has won and need to show him our baby ………….she pick up the baby and start walking
Anjali- ritu you can meet chriag now ..plz listen to me
Ritu – why icant meet whats wrong with him where is he his he fine tell me
Anjali remain quite no knowing what to say. Ritu – plz tell me how his he. Just then muskaan comes in –anjali atul is looking for you, and oh yeh you know the patient that had brain tumor …………. Anjali ttry to stop her but fail to ………..he is in coma………
Ritu – kya chirag coma ma hai ……….. muskaan looks shock……….and look at anjali – she is chriag wife ……
Ritu – where is chriag I want to meet him ……and keep on repeating samething in louder tone.
Anjali – ok mrs verma i will take you there …………..so she take ritu ………as they leave armaan and ridz reach there
Ridz- muskaan ritu kya hai
Muskaan – I didn't know she was chriag's wife so I told anjali about chriag and ritu find out that he is in coma….armaan holds his head
Armaan- muskaan wat have you done and runs to reach to ritu and followed by ridz and muskaan

Ritu who enters chriag's room and walk up to him with her baby…. And sit beside chriag and place her hand on his hand
Ritu – chriag you know you have won you wanted a girl, now your girl is here so open your eyes look at her take her in you arms . plz chriag you promised me that we will always stay together now you cant break your promise or I will never talk to you .
Tears run down her eyes like rain. And he shake his hand plz chriag get up..humari beti ka lyia plz open your eyes
Just then arman and other reach there as ridz was about to go get ritu out armaan stop her.
Ritu – chriag look I cant live without tumhe humari beti ki kasamh plz get open and he put her head down on his hand …………
Then we see chriag moving his hand and feet slowly and his eyes open slowly….


Promo = there is fire in sanjeevin and very one is running but someone is missing.

hello people thank you. here is the next part hope you would like it.

Part 4

Ritu – chriag !!!!!! chriag………… a huge smile appear on her face… chriag……..place her hand on his head………
Armaan come there………….ritu- armaan look chriag has open his eyes………armaan nod his head and look at chriag.
Chriag open his eyes and slowly move his hand………..ritu……he called out.
Ritu – hai chriag I am here…….holding his hand……ridz take the baby from ritu…….and ritu hug chriag………
Chriag – ritu ……….holding her tightly …………….I love you
Ritu – I love you too, aur you know tumhare beti tumhare bahut interzar karay hai…..and smiled……
Chriag's eyes lighten ………. Really ritu ……..and she nod her head………..chriag sit up abit and ridz give the baby into chriag arms.
Chriag – my girl …….and give are a kiss………….thank you ritu for beautiful gift.
Ritu – thanks to you without you nothing has meaning…….and they look at each other…..
Chriag – I told you it was a girl …………give a naught look to ritu and she hit him on his shoulder…….. she is our Roshni ………..both hug…………
Ridz – ritu we should leave chriag to rest……….and nurse come and takes roshni with her.
Chriag – nahi riddhima ritu ko yaha ruko janna do plz……..
Armaan – yes sure …………and armaan and riddz leave the room.

Ridz and armaan are walking and they got on the lift ……noone is on the lift expect them two….there is long silence………
Ridz - armaan ritu and chriag ka beach ma bahut pyar bagwan kare un ki pyar ko kissei ki nazar na lage.
Arman – look at ridz , pyar to sab karta hai but kuch log beach mai chor data hai.
Ridz look up into his eyes….. armaan…………and she understood wat he was referring to.
Lift stop at floor 3…ridz- armaan I have meet anjali di here………and try to leave but armaan holds her hand and pull her back in the lift door closes.
Armaan- ridz I was not finishedu
Ridz- armaan tum hai kya………….as he stop the lift.
Armaan – I want to ask you something riddhima, kya ma itna bura hai ka tum mujhse inti door janna chati hoon.
Ridz – armaan tum yeh kya kara hai hoon mujhe samaj main nahi arra hai.
Armaan move closer to ridz.
Armaan – ridz you know what I am trying to say, ridz where did our love go, just because of small thing why did all this happen………..looking into her eyes and both eyes are moisture. Ridz tum mujhse inti door kissa gaya, kya tumhe mera pyar par koi barosa nahi ta. Didn't you truth me
Ridz – armaan it not……..but we cant be one
Armaan hold her shoulder with both his hand – then what is it ridz, kyat um mujhse pyar nahi karti. ……and press ridz against the lift wall.
Ridz – armaan this is wat's the difference between us two
, we are completely different so how can we be together, there is not even one day that we don't fight
Armaan loss his graft and slowly take his hands of f her, and look at ridz + give a smile of saying is this much you know me ridz.
Armaan – you remember all the times we fight but not time lovely love time we have spend,………….and take a deep breath …………ridz you never understood me have always loved you, but you never……………
Ridz – armaan you are not understanding me ………
Armaan lift up his to say……….. bus ridz now I have understood everything ……and start the lift again ………………
Ridz – liken armaan …..holding his hand …………….but armaan pull his hand off her…………… ridz u think due to the fight we are not good for each , but you havn't think that behind all those fight there was love………single tear drop down his eyes…... if you would have told me once you don't like fighting then I wouldn't have even bother you ………….wiping his tears away………… ridz you don't know wat love is but until I am alive I will love you …………….putting ridz hand up and placing it in his heart ……………only you live here ridz and will always………..the lift door open and armaan leave…….. while ridz stare at him until he disappear and the lift door shutted again. Ridz cry her heart out and all round her armaans voice went around her head………..

In the pat lab anjali and atul was there
Atul – wat her u doing her anjali……..
Anjali – why are you asking…………. Atul – just like that , anyway you are looking very nice today , anjali not looking wat she is doing she drop methanol (which is very flammable) near Bunsen burner, and the lab catch fire.
Anjali – atul ….atul ..aag ………….. atul – don't worry anjali I am here, and the fire alarm went off, everyone in he hospital running out.
Dr keerti – every one go out from fire exist ……… dr subanker comes there …..kerrti everyone is going you came out let go I have called firebreak, they will be here soon.
Atul and anjali also goes out
Armaan – chriag ritu let get out there is fire I n sanjeevin hurry.
Ritu- lekan roshni kaha hai.
Muskaan – she is here let go quickly.
Armaan holding ritu's hand let go they went out.
Dr keerti – oh thank god everyone is out dr anjali you take all the child patient and get there register so we know everyone is here or not …….she give otherdr other things to do.
Armaan notice that ridz his not there – ridz kya hai …. And look around and she is no where to been seen. ……….. where is she , and then the argument that they had click on his mind…………. And his face froze.


Part 5
Armaan – ridz kya hai……….dr keerti have you seen ridz
Dr keerti – no dr armaan wat the matter……….
Armaan – I been looking for her but she is no where to be seen…….i will look for her…….anjali …………anjali………ridz ko kyi deka hai….
Anjali - nahi armaan, …………atul comes there ………..i saw ridz an 30mins go going to the terrace an not after that ………………….then we see armaan running form there………..armaan sono to …………….wats wrong with him…………
As armaan is about to go inside subanker hold his armaan – armaan are you mad y are you going inside it dangerous …………
Armaan – ridz is inside ………I need to go she is somewhere near terrace ……….
Subanker- wat that where the fire is, I can let you go , and you never know ridz may not be there at all. She might……………..
Armaan – she is……and leaves from there and went inside…………

Armaan goes toward terrace pass from each corner shout out ridz name but no respond ……the fire is building up…………

Outside the firebreak has reach and start dealing with the fire…………everyone move back…….

Armaan still looking for ridz…….. as armaan pass the second stair before the stairs for terrace he hears someone voice …………as he move forward he see ridz a smile appear in his smile of relive but soon it faded away. And ridz………who is unknown of the condition in hospital as she is lost in armaans words and though and crying………..
Armaan – ridz ..moving forward and on hearing his voice she quickly got up and wipe her tears and ready to leave.
Ridz- armaan I was just leaveing……… but armaan hold her hand …….
Armaan – where are you going …………….. ridz look confuse ……….
Ridz – y are you asking me…………..this changes armaan's mood and in louder tone
Armaan –ridz the hospital is in fire for past half an hour and you don't know it.
Ridz who is shock in hearing this …….wat hospital is in fire ……..but
Armaan – ridz where were you lost that you didn't even know what was going on
Can you hink if something happens to then wat would I do………..he stopped there as ridz look deep into his eyes…………
Ridz – why did you come here …………. Armaan looked at here and think …you know ridz and again you ask…………
Armaan- I think we should go before more fire builds up…………..and hold ridz hand leave to get outside. There is fire everywhere..ridz hold armaan hand + arm very tightly , …..armaan I am scared……..how we gona get out of here it ……….impossible armaan ……
Armaan – don't worry I am here with you nothing will happen to you ……….
One of the pillar fall and result in armaan and ridz apart from each other……….
Armaan – ridz……..watch out…….
Ridz – armaan ……….try to come forward ………
Armaan – no ridz stay there I will come ……….dont worry……..and he jump over the burning pillar………get near ridz………..ridz hug him………..
Ridz – armaan ……….and cry…………..why is this happening …
Armaan –shhhhhh let go………they run toward he exist area but there the fire was very high……….. armaan – we cant go from here and see the window ……and look at ridz ….we have to jump from that window ok and run to there ………….
Ridz looks down – I cant jump from here and move back ………..
Armaan – ridz it not time to argue hurry why r you going backward …….ridz and see another pilaar about to fall on ridz and he run and push ridz near the window and the pilar fall on him on his legs………
Ridz – armaan wat have you down and try to move the
Armaan – no ridz go from here the fire ….dont think about me I will be fine go and pushing her ………..
Ridz – no armaan I am not leaving you …………why are yu like this why did you save me ………..tears roll down her eyes ……………meanwhile armaan is trying to push her outside as he see atul and others standing there and he knew that they will hold ridz…………………… ridz still. Crying kyun armaan
Armaan because I LOVE YOU RIDDHIMA………I LOVE YOU…….and then he push her out …………
Ridz – armaan !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! fall on the ground
Atul – ridz you ok armaan ……..
Ridz – he is inside ……and trying to go inside ..leave me …armaan ……….he is stuck there let me go.
Atul – you can go the fire is out of control…………
Ridz – wat……………….

Promo – ridz sitting near armaan …I am sorry armaan I have given you lost of pain I am very sorry. But you know why I keep distance but I was scared that you would leave me …………I really love you.


Part 6

Ridz – wat ….atul armaan is there help him……..

Atul – ridz control your self, don't be silly you can t go inside……..and anjali comes there and holds ridz

Ridz – di armaan is in there,……….tthere is break in each of her words……di help him plz………

Anjali – ridz don't worry the firebreak has find there way, everything is under control, and soon they will bring people who are stuck in there,….and it not only armaan ok now relaxe……….

Ridz – but di armaan came to safe me ………and he got stuck there.

Anjali look at her – don't worry he will be fine.

After 1 hour the fire is down , and many people are brought out. few people are injured and rest are fine.

Dr keerti – dr's each of you handle one case and dr subanker making books in the hospital near us for these patient until we fix something for them. Ridz come there looking for armaan.

Ridz – dr keerti have you seen armaan.

Dr keerti – wat would doctor armaan do here, the patient are here………and dr riddhima don't wise time do would I have told you

Ridz – dr keerti armaan was stuck inside…………tears drop from her eyes and went looking for armaan

Dr keeri – dr riddhimma listen ……………

Ridz looking around ….armaan ………armaan …….she look everywhere but there is no sign of armaan…………….armaan where are you…………as she was about to turn someons hand slide pass her;s she look back and see it was armaan .

Ridz – armaan ……and holds his hand armaan open your eyes armaan………then atul comes there.

Atul – ridz we need to check him up and he is bleeding and got some burnt………ward boys……and the scene shift to Tata hospital where all other patient were shift for short time including armaan.

Doctor comes out of armaan room. Ridz – doctor is armaan ok, y his he not coming in conscious it been so long…….

Doctor - dr riddhimma plz control………..you are a doctor you shouldn't react like this.

Ridz – but sir he……….. doctor- dr riddhimma we are trying we cant do anything until ka woh hosh me nahi hata…it dangerous …….hope you understand and pray for him to come to conscious as soon as possible. And the doctor leaves.

Ridz goes inside and sit beside armaan. Tears rolled down her check. And hold his left hand and place a kiss.

Ridz – armaan plz open your eyes, plz forgive me, armaan I am sorry armaan I have given you lost of pain I am very sorry. But you know why I keep distance and close her eyes take deep breath….. I was scared that you would leave me I was scared of losing you. Armaan open your eyes don't make my fear turn out t be true. Plz armaan …….I LOVE YOU ARMAAN. And cry her heart out and put her hand down ……….i love armaan …………

Riddhimma……….someone called ………..

Part 7

Riddhimma ………….

She look up and sees armaan looking at he

Armaan – riddhimma………in very low voice.

Ridz – armaan tum thik ho. Thank god tumhe hosh ayga.

Armaan – ridz I am fine

Ridz – tum bi na hut kardita ho. Agar tumhe kuch ho ja tha to main to. ..pause there

Armaan look into her eyes – ridz agar tumhe kuch ho ja ta to main marja tha. I cant think of live without you ridz……. Tear down his check and hers.

Ridz – armaan …holding his hand tightly ………… kyun karta ho mujhse itna pyar ………kyun ……..why I don't understand your love armaan kyun…..and cry her heart out.

Armaan – ridz if we knew the answer for why than there wouldn't be any problem…….all this is caused by why……and place ridz hand on his heart…as ridz stood up and sit beside him on the bed facing him…………….. riddhimma is dil ma sirf tum ho ……sirf tum aur humasha rahogi……….ridz bend down and place a kiss on his heart………….. I love you ridz

Ridz – I love you ……….i love you……………and hug him……….. still hugging him ………..i am sorry armaan I have givin you alots of pain na I am sorry. Place a kiss on his chest while he kiss her forehead

Armaan – jo hogay so hogay ,………..forget it ridz and…..holding her face and making eye contact with ridz…….but you are the only person that have givin me alots of happeness as well……………..

Ridz- I love you armaan

Armaan – love you toooooo

Excuse me…………ridz turn around and see the doctor……..

Ridz – yes doctor

Doctor- well how are you feeling mr malik.

Armaan – much better dctor.

Doctor – that's good, but I need to do some test to check everything is fine due to why you have remain unconscious for so long.

Armaan – ok

The doctor done the test…..ok mr malik everything is fine……….let me help get up.

Armaan – it ok doctor I can get up myself…….and try to get up but fall down….

Ridz – armaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan!

Here is part 8

Ridz – Armaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan…….. and runs to him ……..Armaan are you ok….who is on the floor.

Both the doctor and ridz help armaan to sit on the bed.

Ridz – Armaan are you ok……

Doctor – Mr malik and goes to check on him…………… while ridz look tense……..oh don't worry Mr malik it just minor pain cause by the pillar so therefore your legs are numb so that way you may find it hard to wake without support for 2 weeks.

Armaan – doctor when will I be discharged.

Doctor- well Mr Malik you will be discharged within a week.. and he leaves…….

Ridz sit next to armaan and hold his …armaan and look into his eyes don't worry everything would be fine……

Armaan – looking at her ……..ridz and smile …….. the major problem is fine this is just sides…..and laugh…….ridz also smile.

Armaan- I love you riddhimma I love you a lot.

Ridz – I love you too and hug him.

Scene shift to doctor keerti and other doctor including inters and seniors.

Dr keerti – look angry …doctor what every happen in sanjeevian 3 days ago was not an accident but it happen because on someone's carelessness and this has cost us alots. Through investigation and etc it proves that the fire started from pat lab. According this on that day……..pause for few minutes and look at all the inters, while all are tense………dr anjali it was your duty there...... anjali looks down ……………dr anjali how did this happen………… answer me………….

Dr anjali – who dr keerti main…..and pause as she was very frighten wohhhhhh…….

It was my fault dr keerti some one said ………. Anjali look shock … as everyone turned to look at that person.

That it for today……………. Sorry it short but the next part would be very long that would make up for this.

Hope you like it. Plz reply back.

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Hey sweets its an nice 1 but u should post ur FF in Fanfiction section..
Love Piya..
eDIT:vERY NICE I LIKE ALL UR PARTS..dO COUNT SOON DEAR..
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hey zohul
piya @ she did post it in FF section before
and zohul plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soooon

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