FF: Deewana....

My first FF 'Deewana' . Its extension of current story line.

1) Kiran is out from story.
2) Raunak and Massi shakes hand. Kill Robbie in front of Kasturi.
3) RA and MA creates fake will of Robbie, that proves property goes to Raunak and Massi.
4) Devika throws kasturi out of Sabarwal house.
5) Devika searching for way to get property back.
5) Kasturi returns to Chawla house.
6) Alka also returns to Chawla house. Everyone forgives her except Ajay.
7) Alka is also trying to find out way to insult JP and Kaushlya, but bcoz of Ajay she is not able to do anything till now.


Scene 1- Karan's entry

JP borrows some loan for Navneet's wedding. As guarantee, he puts Chawla saree center property.
After few months, he decided repay the load and get his land back. JP goes to meet person from who he borrows the loan. The person cheated JP and he sold out the land to some other party. When JP questioned him, he said the he cant wait for lifetime to JP repay his loan thats why he solded out. JP come to know that some local guys bought that property to open garage over there.

JP returns home and discussed this issue with everyone. Everyone at Chawla house is worried as everyone knows what is importance of that property for JP. Ajay decided to have a word with guys who bought this land. Ajay and JP goes to meet them.

Ajay and JP meets the boys and request them to give their land back. At first, discussion goes smoothly but suddenly it goes in another direction as one of them said some bad words to JP. Ajay insists them to speak properly with elder person. But things goes worst and Ajay hits one of the boys over there. He warns all that if they dont returned their land they have to pay for this.
JP is worried about all incident and takes Ajay back to Chawla house.

At chawla house, everyone is waiting for Ajay and JP to return. Bauji asks all women to go and take rest. He will wait for Ajay and JP. Kaushlya and Alka denies and they says that they will wait till JP and Ajay returns. Bauji asks Kasturi to go and take rest. Kasturi go to her bedroom.

Kasturi remembers all the moments she shared with Robbie.(Ye wada raha sad version plays in background...)

Ajay and JP returns to Chawla house. JP told everyone about the incident. He told Ajay that there was no need to fight with such guys.As there discussion is going on, those boys suddenly enters to Chawla house. They behave very rude with Chawla family. Ajay is not able see all this.

Ajay : Bas bahut ho gaya ab. An chupchap nikal jao yaha se, warna....
Boy : Warna kya??? Maroge, maroge phir se... Chal mar ke dikha.. Dikha mar ke...

When Ajay is about to hit that boy again.... someone comes in and stops Ajay by grabbing his hand...

Everyone from Chawla family looked at that person and shocked.... He is none other than person who looks like Robbie........................

woww Darshana what a gr8 start 2 ure FF
i luv it hmm i wonder what happens nxt
I lyk how uve started it
keep up the gr8 work

Amazing Work yaar! I read the short version and honestly as Mimi said you should start a fan-fic and you did!!

Awesome...awesome...awesome!!

Thanks Yummy... I am just trying write down some scenes about which I thought when I was free...

2nd part was gr8 2
hmm karans taught them a lesson but i wonder when karan-robbie and kasturi will come face to face or c each other
keep up the gr8 work

Scene 3 - Karan's life

Everyone at Chawla house is worried.. Everyone is thinking who was that person.. Was he Robbie or Karan?

Thank you noor... will soon post more parts....