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Posted: 19 years ago
#11
Part-6....Mahi scolds dadi:its all bcoz of u.why did u
make that stupid singer in the outhouse?she went away
with kumud's heart.now he is more imp 4 her. dadi:i
never expected this 2 happen.i did'nt no there was a
romance going on between them. mahi keeps on blaming
her. Abhay goes 2 kshitij's house.Ks was happy 2 welcum
him. A:kumud told me about ur luv. Ks smiles:she had
told me that her luvly dad will surely conduct our
wedding. A:i'm sorry kshitij,i came here 2 tell u 2 4get
kumud. Ks:what? A:i promised my friend that i'll
make kumud marry his son Garv.he is a smart guy.
Ks:uncle,why can't u tell ur friend about our luv.we
can't liv without each other. A:how can i tell him like
that after giving him word? my reputation...ks:ur
reputation is more imp than ur daughter's
happiness.kumud told that her dad is a very
understanding luving person.but i feel the opposite now.
A:luv is sacrifice.why can't u sacrifice? Ks:its
very easy 4 u tell .but do u no the pain a luver has
when he has 2 sacrifice his beloved? A:be practical &
think about its after effects. Ks:do u think kumud
will hear ur words? A:yes..sure..she is practical.she
understood what i told.she agreed 4 the wedding.the day
after 2morrow is her engagement. Ks:no never.kumud
won't. A:if u hav doubt u call up kumud. Ks phones
her:kumud,ur dad told that u r going 2 get engaged with
garv.is it true? k did'nt get words bcoz of the
pain.she weeps. ks:kumud say...i can't liv without u.
k cries & disconnects the pH.ks becomes upset.
the engagement day....ppl make kumud ready.wears a grand
blue choli.puts ornaments & mehndi. she was sheding
tears.background song-the sad wedding song of kal ho na
ho. A:kumud,wipe ur tears .otherwise others will
doubt. kumud wipes her tears & smile. she pretends 2 be
happy b4 others.garv was not taking his eyes from
her.they exchange rings.that time ks was taking
licker in his house.devika:kumud,do u sing now?when u
were small u used 2 sing. mahi:ya..she sings.but she
never sings b4 public. G was excited:kumud,u plz sing
4 me. kumud agrees 2 sing after a while.she starts
singing aisa kyon hota hai{ishq vishq}.she dreams about
her moments with kshitij while singing this .garv goes 2 a
dreamworld with kumud. after the function without even
changing the dress,kumud sits in her room thinking about
her painful separation from kshitij.abhay cumes.kumud:my
acting was'nt bad,right? A:still u can't 4get kshitij?if
so,i'll bring him 2 u . K:no papa,i'm trying 2 4get
kshit9j. Ks was lost & becomes a big drunkard.he loses
his concentration on career.he rejects many of the
offers he gets.his career goes down.Garv forces kumud 2
cum 2 garv's house with garv. dadi:b4 wedding girls r
not supposed 2 go 2 their future husband's house.
G:o,cummon dadi,its a blind belief.plz send her. he
forces a lot.atlast dadi agrees:but on 1 condition,i'll
also cum with u both. G did'nt like it,but he hides
it:ok..they 3 go 2 G's house.dadi roams about 2 see
that big house.Garv takes kumud 2 his bedroom.G:this
is my bedroom,oh sorry...our future bedroom. k feels
weird. she sees a framed photo of their engagement thats
kept over there.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
awwwww i realy pity kshitij. kill this garv or turn him into a monkey 😆 😆 but plz get rid of this monkey asap.
Edited by karan_ranveer - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
😭 😭 😭
I can't see Kshitij like this...
😭 😭 😭

arggggghhhhhhh GARV I hate u 😡 😡 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
Part-7.....Garv:kumud,do u remember our 1st meeting ?
K:no. he:but i remember.it
was 14yrs back.we were
small.du u remember...once
since u told i climbed the K:no. Garv takes an album
full of akumud's photoes.
K:how did u get these many
pictures of mine? G:from om
uncle.even it contains ur
childhood photoes. actually
when i was small itself i
had crush on u. he shows a
particular photo of kumud's.
there he haS DRAWN A BIG
HEART. HE:after seeing this
photo i started luving u
seriously.after that i always
think that god made u 4 me.
Kumud remembers telling
kshitij that he is made 4 her.
garv's fingers goes thru
her face:i luv u kumud..he
begins 2 hug her.she gets
tensed. suddenly dadi
cumes:kumud..they get
embarassed.akumud goes with
dadi. dadi:b4 wedding,no
touching,ok.. inderji feels
pity seeing kshitij's present
condition:why r u drinking
like this? Ks:2 4get my
worries. inderji gets angry &
beats him:nonsense,its not
the proper way 2 4get ur
worries.go with music.it will
comfort u.only one or 2 of
100's become an artist.u r 1
among them.god gave u talent *
u shud not destroy it
thinking of ur crap luv
failure.u r a singer & now u
shud've only music as ur luv.
ks was touched by his
words.he concentrates on his
career.he wins national
award.kumud had secret
happiness about it.inderji books
a musical programme 4
ks.ks becomes upset eventho
he agrees 4 that.later kali
asks inderji:papa,i can't
understand why kshitij is not
happy eventho he's going 2
be the part of a big show.
inderji:thats bcoz that show
is on kumud's wedding
day.purposefully i booked that
show 4 that day 2 make him
away from this
place.otherwise he won't get
peace during her
wedding.the show will atleat
keep his mind peaceful.i
hope so. kali goes ith
kshitij's letter 2 kumud's
house.after giving the
letter,she goes.kumud reads the
letter:dear kumud,sorry...i
won't be there 4 ur wedding
eventho i wanted 2
come.unfortunately i had 2 do a show
on that day.but i'll pray 4
both of u.all the best 4 ur
married life with garv. kumud
cries.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
😭
Mera dil rooh raha hai....Plzz kuch karoo...
I can't se kshitij like this..
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
continue soon. awesome story very good n emotional
😭 got tears inmi eyes...great job. u r an awesome writer 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17
part-8...dadi & kumud go 4 a party at garv's
house.dadi

felt uncomfortable seeing
everyone taking licker.they

were shocked 2 see garv
drinking with other drunk

americans.G introduces
Kumud 2 the foreigners:meet my


fiancee kumud. 1 of them
tried 2 kiss her:hi! dadi

pushes him 2 the swimming
pool."how dare u try 2 kiss my


grand daughter?every1 was
shocked 2 see dadi's energy.

dadi complains 2 mahi:i don't
think garv will suit

kumud. Mahi:after the
engagement u r talking like
this?

dadi:i did'nt like garv.he
drinks. M:so what?in

america this is common.its not
a bad thing if he

drinks,after all he is from
america. kshitij was given a

func 2 greet. by the music
world.he recieves an award

from SONU NIGAM.Ks sings
the song 4 which he won the

national award.kumud cumes
there by auto.she 4gets

everythin & sings along with
him.she goes on 2 the stage
&
hugs him.ppl start clapping
their hands.even inderji

becomes happy.both of them got
conscious.kumud runs

out.there unexpectedly the
drunk garv was waiting with

his car:get inside the car.
kumud got tensed & do so.

inderji:kumud's arrival gives
hopes.u go out,meet

kumud. she may not hav gone.
ks smiles.with lots of

hopes he goes out.but was
shocked 2 see her with

garv.kumud looks at him with
tears on her eyes.the car

starts. background song:sad

version of the title song}.garv drops her 2 her
house.he also enters the

house.kumud goes 2 her
bedroom.while she was removing


her shawl,unexpectedly garv
opens the door &

enters.K felt weird,but
did'nt react. K:r'nt u

going home? he:no,2day i'm
sleeping here. K begins 2
go
out. G:where r u going?
K:u sleep here.i'll

sleep in another room. G:no
need.u also sleep here.

K gets upset:thats not
gud 2 do this b4 wedding.

G:u r insulting me.
K:whats there as insult?
G
:i
won't allow u 2 go out. she
becomes angry :look

garv.nobody else may be
sleeping .so don't make a
scene.

G did'nt mind.he closes the
door.pushes K 2 the

bed.K screams at him.she
tries 2 escape.but he holds

her hand tightly.sumhow her
hand got loosen & she slaps

his cheek.G stares at
her.K got tensed.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
😡
GARV ke bache mein tumhari jaan le longi
Agar mere bas mein hota 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
Part-9...Kumud runs & opens the door.she goes she hugs
mahi:garv

tried 2 ....she cries loudly.
dadi scolds garv.he did'nt

mind. dadi:Abhay,u scold him.why
r u standing like this

like a statue?u don't hav any
feeling eventho he was bad
2
ur daughter?r u a dad? A:he
is not conscious.so garv
goes. dadi shouts
at
Mahi:i had told u that he
is not a gud guy,he

drinks.but what did u tell?
mahi felt ashamed. kshitij

got ready 2 go far 4 the show
inderji had booked 4

him.inderji & kali cum 2
kshitij's room with a smiling

face. kali:sum VIPs hav cum 2
see u. Ks goes to the

drawing room.he was surprised
2 see abhay & kumud. kumud

smiles at him.Ks hesitates
2 smile in the presense of

abhay.kumud was surprised 2 see
kshitij's shirt.

flashback:when they were not
in talking terms b4,Ks

takes his shirt which was put
out 2 dry after washing

it. he was surprised 2 see
that a red rose was stitched
in
that.ks was shocked:how
did it cum in this?anywayz
it
looks pretty.it suits me
since i'm romantic. he hears

sumone's caugh & he looks
around.he sees kumud eagerly

looking at him.he realises
that its done on his shirt by

kumud. she stood there as if
she does'nt no anything

about it. Abhay:i no that 2day
evening kshitij is going 2

delhi 4 the show.b4 that i
want 2 tell u that i'm happy
2
giv my daughter 2 u. Ks
was

surprised.inderji,nakul & kali
smile. A:u can't

believe?yes kshitij..now i'm
sure that u'll make kumud

always happy.i learnt a lesson
..inderji:sumtimes our

children's selection cum
better than our selection.

A:thats true.i'm telling this
from my own experience. i
never expected garv 2 be a dirty guy. Kali:no,garv
is

gr8. A:what? Ka:u don't no
the truth.after the

engagement i had gone 2 see
garv 2 tell about kumud's

luv with kshitij.
flashback:Kali:garv,i want
2 tell an

imp matter about kumud. Garv
laughs:i can guess what u r

going 2 tell.kumud is in luv
with a singer named

kshitij.so i'm requested 2 drop
my idea 2 marry her.right?

reema was shocked. G:after
the engagement only i

came 2 no about it.but still i
luv her.so i want 2 see

her happiness.so i 'll rejoin
kshitij-kumud.but if i tell

that i'm not interested 2
marry kumud that will be an

insult.they themselves shud
cancel the wedding.4 that

i'm going 2 do certain
things.but rkali u plz promise

me
that u'll keep it as a
secret. Ka:ok,i promise.


ka:it was a part of
garv 's drama 2 cancel the

wedding. kumud's eyes gets
filled up with tears. Ks:i

want 2 thank kshitij. Kali:he
maybe in the airport.he's

going back 2 america now.
Ku:kshitij,i want 2 see garv

now.we'll go there.
ks-Ku step out 2 the
airport.

garv& parents in the
airport..his dad:i feel prowd
of u
my
son.u did a gr8 thing. garv
smiles. mom:who will be
my
bahu beta? G smiles:sum1
is made sumwhere 4 me

mom.i'll meet her one day.
mom:garv,why can't that girl

be
our kali? garv had a
naughty smile on his

face:maybe.she understands me
lot.very helpful too. they

smile.he bid gud-bye 2 his
parents & goes. Ks-Ku

search 4 him in the
airport.the flight time was

near.Ks-Ku were not allowed
2 get inside. Ks sees
G on the escalator.he shows it 2 kumud.kumud

calls him:garv....don't
go...Garv smiles at them.he
says

loudly:all the best!enjoy ur
life. Ks-ku r having

happy tears on their eyes.
Their colourful wedding takes

place. Ks-ku dance & sing
"mehndi laga..."{DDLJ}.

Kali cumes & tell:garv has
asked 2 convey his wedding

wishes 2 u both. kumud
becomes naughty:so u hav
contact

with him? kali smiles.
K:so u r in luv? Kali

becomes shy. Ks winks at
kumud.she laughs.they

continue dancing.kali & nakul
also join them.rkali

dreams of dancing with garv.
THE END
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
wooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
wat a brilliant ending...
I really lov it....
JASMINE U R TOO GOOD...

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