Socha na tha-fanfic 4 Kshitij-kumud

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Posted: 20 years ago
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PART-1....Kshitij is
a middle class guy who is
crazy about music.his gr8est
ambition is 2 become a gud
playback singer.his friends r
Kali & nakul.kali is the
daughter of a famous
music director Inderji{Ronit
Roy}.kshitij's plan is 2 get
a chance from him 2 sing 4 a
movie.kali has given him
hopes.he stays in the outhouse
of a rich family.a smart
old lady called Arundathi
stays there with her
grandchilren kumud{19yrs old} &
shamit{11yrs old}.her son
Abhay & his wife mahi r in
america.One day in the
morning,kshitij hears a sweet
female voice :dadi,i'm going 2
college. Kshi was eager
2 see her.he looks thru the
window.he sees a girl going
out on a bike.he cud see only
her back.short
top-jeans...silky hair.after a
few days,shamit comes 2
see kshitij with a request:can u
do 1 favour? he:yes
sure. shamit:she told 2 take
the book thats kept on the
top of the cupboard. Ks:who
is this 'she'? shamit:my
luvly sister kumud.kshitij
smiles.he remembers seeing her
back 1day .he wants 2 see her
face. he goes there &
takes the book from the top of
the cupboard.the shy
girl{kumud} extends her arms
from the room 2 reach the
book. kshi smiles:cum out of
room. she cumes out
slowly.kshi was shocked 2 see
her.bcoz she was looking
horrible.she was in a pink
salwar.she hs worn a big
black framed spectacle.her
teeth were that horrible...as
if its going 2 cum out of the
mouth.kshi gives her the
book. kumud smiles:thanku..
kshi goes out
immediately.he was feeling
awkward remembering her
horrible smile. kumud &
shamit in the room.shamit
laughs:that poor fellow ran
away with his life.he got
scared. kumud laughs. she
removes her spectacle & the
duplicate teeth she had worn 2
fool kshitj. shamit:didi,u
wear it always.u look better
in it. kumud becomes
angry:u naughty boy.....they
dance 2 the sng...its the
time 2 disco...suddenly
hearing dadi's voice they stop
the music & pretend 2 be
studying. dadi cumes:gud,u both
r studying.every1 knows that
u'l study well with gud
culture if ppl stay with me.
kumud-shamit felt funny.
dadi:ur dad is online..they
become so happy that they
rush 2 take the Ph. shamit
talks.kumud takes the
reciever from him:hello
daddy,how r u?i'm fine...kshi
passes by...he looks at her
thru the window with a weird
feeling.he cud'nt see her face
.suddenly kumud turns
back.kshi was surprised 2 see
kumud's normal
appearance. kumud did'nt see
him.she continues talking:u
hav a surprise 4 me?whats
that?its a suspense? u'l bring
it when u cum here next
time?o!daddy,u r so
sweet.....kshi
whispers:kumud,u r also sweet....



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Posted: 20 years ago
#2
PART-2...Kshi:kumud u r also sweet like ur dad....the
next day when kumud goes near her bike,kshitij was seen b4
her.she gets shy,bcoz her identity is out now.
Ks:so.. were playing a drama...Ku:what drama?what
did i do? Ks:why did u fool me? Ku:u got fooled
easily bcoz u r foolish.what can i do 4 that? Kshi
becomes angry.but he controls. he becomes sweet
purposefully:why did u hide ur pretty face? kumud gets
impressed by that statement. she laughs:bcoz i wanted 2
tease u? Ks smiles:but why? she:simply...she takes
her bike & goes away with a smile on her face. Kshi
tells himself:i'm going crazy...is it luv?or simply an
attraction? he sings & dances around in that spirit:dil
to paagal hai...Kali:kshitij,who is in ur mind?
Ks:music. Ka:no 1 else? he:who else can take that
place? Ka:i can't believe it seeing u singing &
dancing like a mad person. kshitij becomes embarrased.
nakuk laughs. Ka:anyways,2morow,there is a song
recording.u cum with us.the super singer Rahul {kumkum}
is the male singer.and the 1 & only kali is the female
singer. Ks:u r so lucky kali...Ka:1 day that
luck will cum 2 u kshitij. he smiles. he also goes 2 see
the recording.he sees the song recording & enjoys.he
dreams -...kshitij singing in the place of Rahul. kali
intoduces him 2 inderji. Ks:plz giv me a chance 2
sing 4 a movie sir. inderji:i can't tell u yes
immediately.1st let me hear ur song. Ks gets
tensed.so his voice does'nt cum out properly.he was very
weak in singing. inderji becomes angry:this is ur song?&
u r so prowd.u want 2 sing in my movie?rubbish.he
does'nt even listen 2 kali's words. KA:kshitij,why r
u getting tensed?u were so energetic. he:i dunno how it
happened. she:anyways,u hav 2 take practise. he:ok...
kshitij goes 2 see inderji's house.he becomes angry:why r
u here again?i told u no,u can't sing,so no chance 4 u.
he becomes sad.but he does'nt show that. he:no problem
sir.plz giv me sum other job.i've financial problems.
inderji:can u do cooking? Kshitij was confused. kali
shows action 2 tell yes from a small distance. so kshitij
shakes his head. inderji:u no cooking? kshi:yes sir.
inderji:so 2day onwards u can do cooking here. he:ok
sir. inderji goes.kali cumes. Kshi:kali,i dunno
cooking at all. Ka:its ok,i'll help u.kshitij,its a
gud chance 2 get close 2 my dad.u'll get a chance 2
prove ur talent. kshitij smiles:thats my hope. kshi
serves food.he was tensed about inderji's reaction.
inderji tastes it:u r a gud cook. ks:thanku sir.i'm
also a singer. inderji teases:that i no.that day i had
heard ur song no. ks:sir...thats bcoz of my tension.
inderji does'nt mind it.he feels funny. kali consoles
him. kshi goes back.he sees kumud's bike.he goes &
touches it smoothly.he kisses it.he hears a laughter.it
was shamit's.kshitij gets embarassed:full of dust.i was
cleaning it.. shamit smiles & goes out with his cricket
bat. kumud brings a plate full of gilebies & ladoos
without others' knowledge & keeps it on kshitij's table
thru the window.she hoped that seeing this he will
search 4 her.kumud hides herself 2 see kshitij's reaction
seeing it. kshi had seen it,but hid himself from
kumud.he cud guess kumud's plan.so he pretends 2 be
crazy about these sweets.he does'nt look 4 her,instead
of that he eats it fast as if he was starving 4 1
week.kumud becomes angry & goes away.seeing it,kshi
laughs.he felt funny.kumud keeps a paper piece on
kshitij 's table thru the window & goes.kshi sees the
paper,takes it & reads.."fool,bloody fool...." kshi
becomes angry.
hp123 thumbnail
Posted: 20 years ago
#3
hey....luv ur fan fic...plz continue soon

p.s. we're all reading!!!!!!dont be saddd
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Posted: 20 years ago
#4
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It's lovely start...plz cont...
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 20 years ago
#5
Part-3....Kumud & simran were cuming back from the

college. S:how was
2day's class? K:oh,boring

yaar...i was not at all
listening. kshitij with tuff
face

stands b4 them. kumud
whispers 2 simran:this is that

fellow..simranlaughs.kshi
cud'nt stand them teasing.

Ks:kumud,i want 2 talk 2
u.plz cum 2 the park.i'll

wait 4 u. Ku:i'll think about
it{with

headweight}..Kshi waits 4
kumud at the park.she does'nt

cum.he gets really irritated.
but after sumtime she

cumes. Kshi was angry:why did
u becum late? K:i was

not late..accoding 2 me..i cum
only when i feel like..

Ks:ok..he takes out the piece
of paper kumud had kept
on
his table:whats this?
she:can't u see?its a

paper.very funny..Ks:i no
that.but whats written

here? she:can't u read
english? he:yes,thats why i
asked
u.
she:i've written that u r a
fool,bloody fool! Kshi

loses his control:stop it.in
the beginning itself i new

that u r naughty.but i took it
as a funny thing.but now
u
r crossing ur limit.u don't
no who i am.u no,when i

was in the college,i've done
many notorious things.

kumud laughs:so u r
adventerous.let me hear ur

adventures.tell me...tell
me....Ks:i won't tell u.but

i'll show. he keeps her
tightly close 2 his chest &

kisses her. kumud screams at
him:u brute!how cud u do

this 2 me?this is the way u
hav 2 behave 2 a girl? kshi

becomes upset:i'm sorry..i did
this 4 fun. she:this is

how u shud hav fun?i'll tell
this 2 dadi...& 2

every1...she runs away.kshi
becumes upset & goes 2 see

nakul-kali . he:i did a
blunder. Kali:what did u

do? Kshi tells
everything.they were shocked.

N:kshitij,this is not a silly
thing.u hav insulted a

girl in a public place.if she
files a sexual harassment

case,u'll be put into the
jail. Kshi gets tensed:then

what can i do? N:go there
during the nite.u take

all ur things & escape without
their knowledge. 3of them go
there.only kshi gets
inside.he

goes 2 his room & takes all
his things.suddenly he was

shocked 2 see kumud standing
b4 him. kshi gets

embarrased. K:so,u r
planning 2 escape from here.

ks:no,i was arranging
everything. K:u

can't escape now.i've called
every1 here 2morrow.let

them cum & giv u punishment.
Ks:its my request.plz

don't spoil my future.
she:this u had 2 think b4.
he:i

did that,bcoz u made me angry.
K:so when u bicum

angry,u kiss others?
ks:no,i kiss only u.bcoz i

thot u...K:what did u think
about me?u thot i luv u?

Ks:leave it plz..u can giv me
any punishments.but

don't insult me b4 others.
she:u're willing 2 accept any

punishment that i giv u?
he:yes. she:then u extend ur

right arm. kshi extends his
right arm after closing his

eyes.kumud felt funny seeing
his tensed face. she kisses

his arm.kshitij opens his eyes
with surprise.he cud'nt

believe it. kumud was
shy.kshi kisses her arm.then
they

hug each other. N:where is
this kshitj?i doubt

whether he is caught by them.
Kali:let me go & see.

she goes..she was shocked 2
see both of them hugging

each other.she smiles & goes
back 2 N:don't expect

him now.he won't cum.bcoz they
r n luv. nakul was

surprised. kumud runs away
from kshitij with shyness.kshitij

smiles at her.



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Posted: 20 years ago
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It's fantastic.......... ๐Ÿ‘ Briliant..Now plz can u do on page 3...try to do on it...Pzzz cont. soon..

I'm using home copm only 4 tur fan-fic..now plz try to do on page 3....

Edited by Day_Dreamer - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#7
PART-4...Kshitij tells kumud:atlast u stole my heart.so u
r a thief. K:what about u?u r
also a heart thief.i'd
noticed u watching me from the
beginning..they
laugh.she:kshitij..luv is a
feeling...true luv can't be
hidden anywhere.it will
automatically cum out. Ks:if
ur dad opposes our marriage?
K:never!he can't stand
against my wish. Ks smiles.
while inderji & kali
were entering the house,ks
was polishing inderji's
shoes & was also singing.
inderji was surprised 2 hear
kshitij's sweet voice. Ks
stops singing seeing him. he
goes 2 the kitchen. kali:
told u no papa,kshitij sings
well. inderji did'nt mind
her.she becomes dull. A song
recording of Rahuk ..kumud &
simran also cum 2 see it
on the care of kali.Rahul
came very late losing his
professionalism.ku-sim
ask 4 autograph,but
hedid'nt mind them. inderji
scolds him:now u r having
headweight. Rahul becomes
irritated.he leaves the place.
every1 becomes sad. inderji
was cool:kshitij,u hav 2 sing
this sing...ks-ku-kali
were surprised. Ks
did'ntget words 2 thank
inderji . Ks goes 2 sing.kumud
did some actions 2 giv him
best of luck.ks smiles.he
looks at kumud & sings the
romantic song. the song
becomes a big hit. when kumud
was dreaming about ks
in her room during nite,ks
cumes from back .kumud was
surprised. Ks:u were studying?
K:no...i'll get a
big zero 4 the exam.bcoz while
i open my book,only ur
face is seen. Ks:i'll giv u a
medicine 2 study well.
he hugs her. K:when u r
becoming a popular
singer,i'm getting tensed
whether u r moving away from
me.. he:never,bcoz real luv
can't go anywhere.my song
became nice ince u were there
with me.u r my inspiration
2 sing. K:i feel that those
romantic lyrics were
written 4 us. Ks smiles.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#8
PART-5....Kali arranges another house 4 kshitij.kumud
feels sad:khitij,plz don't
go....kali:whats this
kumud?its 4 kshitij's
career.its true that this house was
lucky 4 kshitij.but he has 2
change his house.there diff
producers & directors
cum.it'll bring favour 4 kshitij.
K:ok...ks:i'm going from
this house,not from ur
heart. kumud smiles. kumud's
dad Abhay & mom mahi plan 2
cum.that eagerly waited day
cumes. kumud-dadi-shamit go
2 the airport 2 receive
them.they were very
happy.surprisingly Raj Uncle &
devika aunty{their family
friends} were there with their
son.kumud is seeing them
after many
years....A:kumud,can u recognise who this
is? kUmud looks at the guy
{their son}. she was
surprised:Garv!what a gr8
surprise. G:wow!so u
remember me? kumud after
reaching home tells Abhay:dad,i
want 2 tell an imp matter.
A:whats that? she:i'm in
luv. A:wow!u r in luv?how did
it happen?may be ur luv
was at 1st sight..bcoz i had
told him not 2 contact u
till we reach here.bcoz i was
planning 2 giv u a
surprise. K:dad, whom u r
talking about? A:about
Garv,he is the surprise gift u
were waiting from me.
kumud was shocked:no,this
can't happen. Abhay was
shocked:why? K:bcoz i luv
kshitij. A:who is he?
she:he is a famous playback
singer. A:i'm sorry beti,i
can't agree with u. kumud was
shocked:is it my dad
talking like this?i can't
believe this. A:bcoz i
promised them that i'll
conduct this wedding.plz
kumud ...she cries:no papa,i
promised kshitij that i
won't leave him. A:when i
told u about my surprise 2
u,if u had given me a hint
about kshitij,i wud'nt hav
continued going with this
idea,but now its too late
...it'll harm my reputation.if
u don't mind ur dad
getting insulted b4 others
i'll conduct ur wedding with
kshitij.do u want that? he
cries:i beg u kumud...K:no
papa,i wont allow u 2 get
insulted b4 others.i'm willing
2 marry garv. abhay was
relieved.kumud was upset.she lost
her sleep.
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Drama mein aise hi kahte hain na...... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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YEH SHAADIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII NAHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII HO SAKTIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIi...........

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