FF: From Hatred to Love..prt 2 pg 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ok guys m not good in writing fanfiction but I love michi to deaths so m trying one. Please ignore my grammatical error and spelling and just enter into the world of michi..
Recently I visited michi heaven and saw one incomplete fanfiction..i really loved that story and was hoping if hello484 would continue but no luck..so m starting one..i thank hello484 for giving me this story line..

I will start when miland tries to rape prachi(aug ??) I don't know whether alaap raped sukriti or not but in my fanfiction he didn't but somebody told miland that he did.. also guys alaap is not so bad..he cares about sukriti now but both of them are married..ayesha is also not that bad and later she and neev will fall in love..ab aage.

Miland (grabbing prachi's sari) : aaj mein tumhe bataoga how it feels like to be raped..kaisa lagta hai jab koi aadmi ek aurat ke saath zabargasti karta hai(pulling her sari as well as holding her tightly)'laughing evilly ..
Prachi(holding her sari very tightly and crying): miland please yeh app kya kar rahe hai..please chod dijiye mujhe..please stop (she whispered ..but miland kept on pulling her sari and after one final pull he pulled it off her..
Now prachi was just in her petticoat and blouse..she looked shockingly at miland..she never expected this from him..she knew that he was short tempered and ill-mannered but it was not his faulty..life has made him that way..but she never dreamt that miland would stoop so low..
Slowly miland came near..As he took a step forward, prachi took a step backward at the same time begging miland to leave her alone..Tears fell from her eyes. She was so scared. She has never been this scared in her life..All her life she was pampered and treated like a queen but today..She looked at the door and silently prayed for someone to come and save her..but no one came..everybody has gone out so there was only two of them and miland has turned the radio's volume high so neighbours will think that they are having a party..
Finally miland pulled her roughly towards him and lifted her in his arms and proceeded towards the bed..He roughly threw her on the bed..she kept fighting him and getting off the bed but miland kept pulling her back and finally he captured both hands by her side and covered her body with his..
Miland(almost kissing her cheeks): kiyu'darr lag raha hai..jus think how my sukriti must hav felt..just think dammit..(he shouted)
Prach(eyes shut..cryng) : 'miland please mujhe chod dijiye..main ne app ka kya bigada hai?'
Miland(cruelly twisting her fingers): tumne nahi lekin tumhare bhai ne..ab mein use waise sazaa tu nahi de sakta naa??so way not her loverly sister?? Aur tumpar tu mera haqh hai..aakhir meri biwi jo hai..(laughing loudly)
Prachi(crying): I will never forgive you for this..
Miland : tu tumhara maafi kaun chahata hai..your forgiveness doesn't matter to me..because you don't mean anything to me..understood?? and started touching her
Prachi (trying one more time): miland meri baat suniye..pls don't this..i am a virg'' she stopped
Miland(acting shocked)..what!!really..(then laughing) tab tu aur bhi maza aayega..but u know prachi I find that very hard to believe..tumhari jaisi ladkiya aur virgin?? continues laughing..waise you were engaged with that neev naa??then how come you are a virgin..didnt neev do anything??laughing
Prachi gritting her teeth: chup raho..being engaged doesn't mean that you are married and can do anything..neev mujse pyar karta tha meri body se nahi..you are not even half of neev..'
After saying this prachi looked at him in panic..she knew she shouldn't have said that to him..at the moment miland was angry and she was just adding more fuel..but when miland insulted her like that she couldn't control herself..her heart know that she could never have slept with any guy before marriage..not even neev..she wasn't brought up like that..and neev understood..
Prach still struggling out of his grasp.: miland I am sorry ..i should have said that..pls i'.
Miland shouting: 'shut up' so I m not even half of the man..ok then I'll show what kind of man I am.'
And he cruelly kissed her cutting her lips..Prachi kept of beggin him to stop but he didn't..he kept on assaulting..slowly the screen fades away..

ok don't bash me..just giv your comments..and also advise whether I should continue or not..??

Love

Jaya




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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow dear,please please continue to do it because I love it and I'm sure other will as well,so thank u for this lovely start 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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pls do continue but write it completely in english,pls.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey cool start darling I'll await for the update.🤗
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Posted: 17 years ago
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quite a nice start pls continue!😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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really loved first part....
keep it going!!
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nihita
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Gr8 start. cant wait to read what happens next.😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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good do cont,but misi raping prachi.....................
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Please do continue soon. eager to know how hatrate will trun to love.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Omg that really good..please update!

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