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Posted: 17 years ago
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Fiction: Kahani

I have decided to call this "Kahani", cause thats what it is!

This fic is slightly different. I have felt the need, once again, after Nostalgia, to write my update, sit in the moonlight...sit by the window....and feel it! Warna yeh commonplace kahani ho jayegi!

End humein pata hai...? Pata hai, ya nahin? Pata nahin!

Just to tell you all, please dont read this fic as a story. Story of two people. Read it as you in her place...his place. Feel it. Think about it! Think about every situation. I am sure each of you will react differently in each situation.....

And thats something I want to state here. Our reactions distinguish us! They are the deciding factors......

And this is another journey of feelings and its transformations and their struggles....finally whispering something that both feel...both realise...both live!

That is why I have not given it any name...just called it a 'Kahani'.......cause its name....for each of u is going to be different!

I hope you all enjoy the fic!

This is not gonna be very quick updates, cause, I am slightly busy with all the 'pre-departure' processes and shopping...and meeting old friends.....to.....

Par ab se is 'Kahani' ko bhoolungi nahin!


Cheers,
Janki

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Introduction




~It was never love. And never lack of it.


They had been with each other since the day they were borne. Almost like twins. Age was never a barrier, as they were just the same age.


She never expressed, but panicked in his absence. And he, well, he openly said, that life was well…. an enormous heap of goat droppings without her in it!


They teased each other…cried together…laughed their hearts out…


They were serious about each other's every right and wrong…. every joy and sorrow…every giggle and tear…


…. However, never felt the need to be serious about each other.


Today, it was almost 25years since they had…. well….'coexisted'…. it was like the 'Harry Potter Prophecy': None lives while other survives….


He never appeared without her, and she sulked for hours, if he disagreed on something.


They say, men are the little boys who never grow up! And most of the times, the role of a mother, shifts from the mom to the wife to the daughter. However, the world worked against its natural law when it came to these two!


Perfect Twosome!!


Lets see, the role of mother and the child varied everyday. Sometimes, she bossed around the whole place, and he sulked like a baby, and then she hid her face in annoyance and he became the caring papa!



Raj and Naina were perfectly imperfect with each other.


* * * * *


It had been 5years since their togetherness had changed.


Well, we know it. They don't!


It was their wedding anniversary. Raj and Naina were married 5years back, and they are happy. Perfectly happy.


Or so they thought!


* * * * * *

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey that sounds interesting plz continue it
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice one.. and another q... did you finish nostalgia.. if yes can u give me its link pls.. lookin forward to the next update...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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@ koolarch2001

Yes. I did finish 'Nostalgia' along with 'Together We Stand'.
However, I have a fully fledged community on Orkut that has all the fics, but still, if you want, I shall put up both the fics here!
Just lemme know!

And about 'Kahani', I can only write more, if ppl are interested, and I get comments!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hiiii jivora....i have read ur other fics at orkut, where i am a silent reader...but i really like the concept of this so plz continue it soon....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very very nice1.....👏
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lipi
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very very interesting starting
do cont..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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plz post ur other fictions here.very good start update asap
Edited by ananyapriya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hi!!I have read most of your fics.They are awesome but do post Nostalgia here also dear!!If ok with that.
and definitely continue soon.
It is interesting!!
The update was great!!
God bless u.
continue soon

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