FF: Hume Tumse Pyaar Itna..Part 22 Pg 13

So i got hooked onto this show becuz of my best friend Jnawaz!!!! the way she talks about this show... now i am all crazy for heer and prem!! and becuz of thier current situation..... i have a FF!!!!.......(In case you dont know.... i have written over 50 FFs.... but this is my 1st one for heer and prem! hope you guys like it!)


Character Outline:

Prem: Business man!! nothing major!!

Heer: Lives alone with her 2 sisters!!!.... Since she has no parents.... she supports both of her sisters!!!!........ and loves them very much!!

meher: Heer's younger sister!! SHe's the middle child!!!! just a bubbly person!!

veena: heer's other sister! she's the baby of the family and wants to be a doc!!!!

preet: Prem's younger brother!! he's the baby of the family!!!!.......

balwant: Prem and Preet's oldest brother!!!... there's a huge age difference between balwant and the other two!!!!

daljeet: Balwant's wife!!!!.... shes' the bahu of the house!!!.... does nothing !!!

gayatri: Mother of 3 wonderful sons!!!

Babuji : Lalit of of course! but i always call him babuji!!!!!

veena:

Harman & Nihal: Balwant and Daljeet's sons!!!... Harman is also becoming a doc!!! Harman is just there!! Dont mention him til later on!!

Ash: Prem's fiancee!!!!!!..... (Dont kill me!)

Part 1

Starts off showing a huge mansion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Inside'.

There are so many people!!

Its like a party!!!!!!!!!!!

Ash: I cant believe it!!!! I am getting married to Prem!!!!

Daljeet: Of course!!!!!!!'.. And u wouldn't have if I hadn't said anything!!!!

Ash: I love Prem!!!!! And now I will be Gupta Bahu!!!!!!

Both of them smile at each other!!!!

Prem is walking around in his Black Sherwani!!!

And he's smiling

And telling thanks for coming!!!!!!

He's smiling!!!!!!

A guy comes on stage

And he tells everyone thanks for coming!!!!!

And he's like

Today's a very special day'''..

It's the engagement of Prem and Ash'''.

Everyone is clapping!!!!

There's was an arranged marriage!!!!!!!!!

Daljeet suggested Rohsni

And Bapuji and Gayatri agreed!!

Prem didn't have a say

But whatever made his parents happy!!!!

Ash always liked Prem!!!!!

And she's happy!!!!

They both come on stage!!!!

Ash has a huge smile''.

They both exchange rings!!!!!!

And everyone claps!

And they take everyone's blessings!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Meanwhile''

There's a person walking''

It's a female

She's walking around

Giving orders to people

And is putting files on people's desk

And tells them to check it

They are all saying yes maam!!

She goes into a cabin'..

And slowly

You see her face

And its Heer Chopra!!!!!!!!!

She's on the phone!!!!

Her boss comes in

And says'

Its late now

U should go!!!!!!!!

Heer is like its okay!!!!!!!!!

She says she'll finish it!!!!!

She finishes

And comes home

She lives in a small home

With her two sisters''.!

She goes into Veena's room'

She's studying!

She's the bookworm!!!!

She loves School

She wants to be a doctor!!

Heer works extra to support her family!!

And to pay for Veena's skool!!!!

Meher works too

But only part time!!!!!!!!!!

Heer cooks dinner'

And all three eat

And talk about their day!!!!!!!

At Gupta House

Prem and Ash slow dance!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She's in heaven!!!!!!!!!!!!

Afterwards..

All the guests go home!!!!!!!!!!

Ash and her family go home too!!!!!!!!

Prem goes to his room!!

Gayatri comes in

Prem: Ma.. come in!!!!

Gayatri says I want to ask you something!

Prem says go ahead

She says are you happy????

Prem looks at him!!!

Gayatri: She says I know we got u engaged to Ash.. but are you happy??

Prem: Are you happy?

Gayatri: Yes!

Prem: Then so am I!!!!!!

Gayatri: But..

Prem: U guyz always pick whats best for me!!!

Gayatri says okay!!!!!

And she leaves!!!!!

Next Morning''..

Prem goes to work!!!!

All three brothers always leave at different times!!!!

They don't go together!!!!

Prem goes..

He himself drives!

And he stops at a red light..

And he's waiting!!!!

And then

There's a rickshaw'

And a person is getting out

And he looks that way!!

She's wearing an outstanding salwar!!!!!

Prem keeps looking''

The person is paying rickshaw person!!!!

And then'..

Like in movies'.

She looks up

And her hair goes flying back''

And Prem sees her!!!!!

And yes its HEER!!!!!!

Prem is like wow!!!!!!

Heer looks gorgeous!!!!!!

She has make up and jewelry!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Its plain and simple

But its mindblowing!

Prem keeps looking at her!!!!!!

And its like'

He himself is in heaven!!!!!!!!!!!!!

But then

Light turns green

And everyone is honking at him

he snaps out

And he's like I am going I am going!!!

And he drives off!!!!!

At Gupta Group of Industries'.

Meher is walking'

And she has papers in her hand

She's thinking I hope I am not late!!!!

She's walking fast

And then

Someone bumps into her'

And she's like oh my god

She gets all mad

And says cant u walk where are you going??

And its Preet!

He says look where you are going?

He says I work here'.. and we all talk at normal pace not 50 miles per hour!

Meher says thanks to you all my papers dropped!

Preet: No you caused that!!

Meher is like you'.

And she picks them up

And she leaves!!!!

Meher sits down


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(In case u dont know.... i will update every single day!!... unless other wise!!!!)

tell me if i should cont or not!😕 comments are welcomed good or bad!!!!!

or if i shouldnt even write anymore!😕

oo! nice character intro! on to reading the part.. well, personally, I love the way you colorized it! 😆 You should continue, though. :)

continue soon..i will be waiting..

how come prem knows heer??? 😕 lol..

but still it was fab 👏 continue soon...will be waiting 😃

oh ofcourse u should its very niceeeee
i will be waiting 👏 👏continue soon
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babe...im here...just read mels update and haila...😳

but now to this ff...woo hoo...this is going to be good...and i mean GOOD...😉

JAZ

interesting ffloved how you switched the surnames and daljeet chachi se bhabi ,this will be fun
will be looking forwrd to theupdate

i like the fact tht u made Dj n Blawant prem's brother and bhabhi!
plus, u must be in love with exclamation points! 😆

continue soon!

guli u need a title because you are here too I needed to catch up on 3 weeks and found this

it was awesome
plz continue soon 👏

Part 2

And her name is called up

She goes

And says can I come in???

Prem turns around

And says yes!!!

Meher smiles

And then sits down

She's getting a job!!!

Prem is looking at her qualifications!!

Meher says

I had this so nice and neat

But one of your employees

Bumped into me!

SO they all fell!

Prem says who?

She says I don't know

But he was rude!!!!

Prem is like….

I will give you the job!

She says really??

She's happy

She says thank you sir

U wont be disappointed!

Prem says I know I wont!!!!!

Preet comes into his cabin!!

Preet; Bhaiyya…..

Prem: Listen!!! I have hired ur new secretary!!!

Preet: who??

And then Meher turns around

And they both look at each other!!!

And they both at the same time say YOU???????

Both of them say You??

At the same time!!!!!

Prem is like u two know each other!

Meher gets up

And says he's the one..

Becuz of him

I was late… and he dropped all my papers!!!!!!

Meher: U should fire him!!

Preet is looking at him!

Prem; I am afraid I cant do that!!!!!

Meher looks at him!

Prem: U see…. He works here!!!!….. He' s my brother…. And you will be his secretary!!!

Meher is shocked!!!!!!!!

Preet is about to laugh!!

But he controls it!

Meher is like are you kidding me?

She's like omg!

She cant believe it!!!

She looks at him Preet

And he just looks at her

Prem tells her

She starts from tomorrow

Does she agree or not?

Meher nods her head yes!!!

And she leaves!!!

Prem gets up

And goes to Preet

He smacks him upside the head

Preet: Ouch! What was that for?

Prem: Why didn't you help her pick up what she dropped??

Preet: What?? She was rude!!!!… And she was walking fast!!!

Prem has the Oh please! Look!!!!!

Preet walks off!!!!

Meanwhile..

Heer's in the office

Her boss comes

And tells her

That she needs to deliver this flowers!!!!

Heer is like sure!!!!!!

She gets the address

And she goes right away

She has a whole basket!!!!

She goes into a rickshaw

And leaves!!!!!

Meanwhile….

Prem's goes back into his cabin..

He just stepped out

Lady in the front

Says that there's someone here for him!!

Prem is like send them in!

Prem's doing some paper work

And there's a knock on the door……..

He says come in……

And its Heer

The she's holding the basket in front of her face….

And she says excuse me

He looks up

All he sees is flowers

He gets up

And says yes??!!!…..

Heer says that her boss.. (Whatever name maybe) sent these!!!

Prem goes to her

And takes the flowers

And he puts them down

He turns back around…..

And sees Heer standing there!

And he's like omg!!!!!

He's in total shock!!!!

He's thinking omg!!! Is she really here??????…..

And he just keeps staring

Heer is waving her hand up and down

And he snaps out!!!!

Prem; Uuhh.. hi!!!!

Heer is confused!!!!

Heer: Hi??

Prem: Come and sit down!!!

he smiles

Heer is like I have to go..

Prem is like come on

Only 5 mins!!

He says

U came here to drop this off

Least you can do is stay!!!

Heer is like okay?!

She goes and sits down!!!!

Prem: Ur name??

Heer: Heer! Heer Chopra!!

Prem: Prem Gupta!

Heer smiles

Heer: I know!!!!!!!!

And she giggles!!!!!!!!!

Prem: Wait did you say Chopra???

Heer says yes!

Prem: Are you related to Meher Chopra???

Heer: Yes she's my sister!!! How do u know her?

Prem; She came here for a job!!!

Heer: Oh yeah!! Today's Thursday!!!!… I forgot!! Did she get it?

Prem says yes she did!!!

Heer is happy!!!!!!!!

Heer: Phew!!!!!!!!!!

Heer is like thank god!

Prem: why u say that??

Heer: Well.. our parents died long time back… So I am supporting both of my sisters!!!!… And my youngest sister wants to become a doctor… so need the money!!!!

Prem is looking at her

She's so determined

And is taking care of her sisters!!!!!

Heer is like omg!!!!!!!!!!!

She says I have to go!!!!!!!

Heer is like

It was nice meeting you Mr. Gupta…

Prem: Yes!!!! It was!!!!

He smiles at her

She walks off!!!!

She goes down

And he looks at from the window…

And he sees that she's trying to get a rickshaw!

He sees this!!!!!

And then

He goes down

And says here I will take you!!!!!!

She says its okay!

Prem says allow me!!!!!

And he gets his car

And he takes her

Prem is smiling

But she cant see it!!

He's thinking OMG!!!

Now she's sitting in my car!

He keeps taking glimpse at her

Every now and then

Heer tells him to stop!!!!!

And she gets off

She comes around and thanks him!!

And he watches her go

Until she's not seen!!!

And he's like wow!!!!!!!!!!

What a babe!!

And he drives off!!!!

And is blushing!!!!!

Prem goes back to his office!!!

He goes into his cabin!

And someones in his chair

They turn around

Its Heer!


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