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Posted: 17 years ago
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Im abig fan of adi and maithalli and i was thinking of writting a fan fic on them..it'll be called yaadein if u like my idea then plz respond...its the first time im writting

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome!!
Can't wait to read it..im sure it will be great!
ALways luv adi-mets' ff's!! plz continue! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Please continue with it 😃 😃 i luv AM and i think their fanfics r the best 😳 😳 cant wait to read it 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks heres the first part...im new so please bear with all my mistakes...
Part One
It had been about 3 years since adi and maithalli had been separated…It was since garima fell sick and acted as if it was because of adi that she had lost her child and had this had happened to her..…Parvati Had been strict and because of her husband om she had asked adi to leave maithalli..
Maithalli now lived with her best friend shalini and her daughter aditi…maithalli had been pregnant when parvati insisted that the two should be separated…Maithalli had never got a chance to tell adi….Maithalli was now a famous fashion designer and her friend shalini helped her out….Maithali had changed her name to a more modern one (Sonia)…..Adi had left his house after 3 month when he found out garima had never been pregnant with his child and she was never sick..Parvati tried to stop him but He dint listens.Pavati: adi ruk jao..Adi:Please Nahi mom, aaj main nahinn ruku ga dad ki najayss beti key liye aap ne meri aur maithalli ki zaindagi Bigaar di…..yeh mere sage baap hote huve bhi ais ne garima ka saath diya. …Parwati: please adi, samjayee aise om…Adi: enough mom apna rona dhona band kijeye agar aap mujhe aapna beta manti tu aap aisi kabhi nahinn karti……aap achi tarah se janti hi ke main aur maithalli kitne khusi se reh rehe theh..magar aapne apni shaadi kay rishtey ko bachane ke liye apne bete ke zindagii barbad kardi…adi shouted….adi talk to your mom properly..Said om….No Mr om Agarwal just be quiet aap ne apni najayse aulad ke liye I mean woj larki joh aap ki beti bhi nahinn hai aus ki wajah se aap ne apney sage bete ke zindagii barbad kardi…Aap se baat karte huve mujhe sharam aa rahi hai," said adi.. He walked out leaving the house....

Ps:i know this may be a bit short but first i want your replies and then ill continue..i know this part might be a bit boring but i promise theyll be adi-maithalli scenes soon..part one is just like an introduction...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i dont know if you guys like part one..but since i hvae part 2 ready im going to continue with it..

Part 2
Maithalli is now known as sonia
Adi had also changed his name because he knew that he would never get a job if he said he was adi agarwal….His new name was rahul khanna
Aditi:mummy agayi amma(Sitara is Aditis care Taker)…
Aditi:mama aaj zoo chale
Sonia:nahinn beta aaj mom ko bohot kaam hai kaal chale gey I promise….sitara plz aditi ko khana khela kar sola do..
Aditi:nahinn aaj main mama ke saath khaoo gi
Sitara:aditi beta zid nahinn karte mama ko kaam hai
Aditi starts crying
Sonia:sitara theek hai ais ka khana lao main aaj aise apne haathon se khelaao ghi
Sonia feeds aditi
Sonia:aab so jao
Aditi kissed her mother goodbye
Tanisha is sonia personal assistant(who is going to be promoted to a higher level)…Maithalli now needed a new personal assistant…. Tanisha walked into sonias office
Tanisha:Hii maam aap ko yaad hai ke aaj aap ko apne naye P.A ke liye interviews lene hain. sonia sighed and replied….Tanisha kitni baar kaha hai call me sonia aur hain mujhe yaad hain...
People made a long line outsides sonias office for the interview..Rahul(ill call adi this for a while) waited outside for an hour. Sonia and Tanisha were so frustrated interveiwing those people because they hadn't found anyone capable of this job…finally only two people were left rahul and this other guy…the other guy was useless as well….Tanisha: Sonia there's one guy left Mr. Rahul khanna shall I send him in.. Sonia: I bet he's probably useless but lets try and then .Rahul walked in with his file..


Sonia faced the wall
Rahul:Mam
Sonia: Yes Mr. rahul Aap apni ki file dekhayee . aur batayee aap kya kar sakte hai..he thus handed her the file..She looked at the file and heard him speak and was pretty much impressed…she felt she knew him because her heart started to beat fast….Sonia:your hired Mr. Rahu…and sonia turns her face around and is shocked...
Edited by hajialiya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg!! mets' highers adi!! cute!..very new concept! plz continue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Both chapters were brilliant šŸ‘ šŸ‘ Aditi is sooo sweet but then she would be cos she's AM's daughter 😳 😳 please continue soon 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3
AS sonia turned she was shocked to see adi....It was her adi she hadnt seen him for years..he looked so different...maithali was confused why was afi here agarwals were doing well so then why had he come for a job to her and why was his name different...adi was shocked to see he saw how pretty she looked..she had become even more gorgeous..he wondered how she became so famous and why she changed her name....They both wanted to question each other......Adi and maithalli at the same time tum...Adi:maithalli tum sonia ss boutiques ke kapre ki designer i dont believe it tum itni kaisi badal gayi.....Maithalli: adi tum bhi badal gayi,tumhara naam aur tumhari pehchan aur tum yahaa job ke liye....ohh main to pochna hi bhool gayi mama kaisi hai..aur garima...Adi:Maithalli woh ghar maine chor diya aur garima ko bhi
Maithalli:adi magar kyun garima toh bimar thi aur woh bhi tumhari wajah se..
Adi:maithalli garima kabhi pregnant thi hi nahinn aur aus ne kabhi apna bachaa nahinn khoya aur na woh bimar thi...aus rata mere aur garima ke beech kuch nahinn huva tha.....
Maithalli:what
Adi:maithalli usne hum dono ke rishte ko torne ke liye yeh nataak kya...aur jab mujhe yeh sachayee pata chali main woh ghar chor diya
Maithalli:aur mama aur papa
Adi:maithalli kitni mahaan ho tum jis aurat ne apne rishte ko bachanne ke liye hum dono ka rishat tora tum aus ke baare main pooch rahi ho...
Maithalli:adi jo mama ne kya woh aus waqt garima ki halaat dekh kar kiya
Adi:ya right maithalli hum dono ka rishta tor kar......
Both have tears in there eyes when there convo is going on...
Then aditi runs in
Aditi:mama,mama chale
Adi is shocked

I hope u liked this part plz reply soon so i can continue
Edited by hajialiya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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dude u shud definitely continue
its really interestin story.....
keep goin.... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow! great updatezz!! luvin' it! plz continue soon..and plzz make the updates longer!! šŸ˜†

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