Kasturi… Ek Aur / Pa 1 - Pg 2 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazz rocks

👏 👏 Hats off!! 😭 😭
Fabulous!



Thanks

Kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Should, I take it as a yes?

Kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Karan Lover

Hat's off yaar !

Iliked so much !

Waitin for next part😃 ~

Love u
Aisho😳



Thanks....Aisho

Kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: tsamhita

very nice plot! 😳 👏 very unique 😉 ...do pose Kasturi opposite Raunak 😳 please...we have were less RaKa ffs going round 😆 😳



Like... I said - earlier....i'm not sure who is going to be paired up with Kasturi but right now its only about Kasturi....

Well thanks a-lot

Kashish
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Friends...I have read many fan-fics of your guys and I know my fan-fic isn't better than your guys... anyways - I hope you guys will like it.....

Part - 1

"Where is my beloved daughter…Naagin Rani?" said by King of the Naag

"Maaraj, I think she has gone out with her friends to the nearest field by our house to celebrate her sixteen birthday"

Both Naag Raj & Naagin Rani are proud of their daughter Kasturi, who is turning sixteen today….

"Naagin Rani, go and call our daughter because I want to celebrate her birthday right now…between us than later this evening with our friends…"

"As you wish Naag Raj"

While Naagin Rani goes to call her daughter when four men, comes to Sundarnager, in the search for the precious Naagmani, but they weren't able to find it…until they saw two humans transforming into snakes…

~ Scene Shifts to Naag Raj planning his daughter's birthday when two men came into his home in the search for "naagmani" ~

Naag Raj was busy planning his daring daughter's sweet sixteenth birthday when two people came in his home….

Naag Raj stops doing whatever he was doing and attend his gust saying "how may I help you?"

First Person: Hi my name is Dushant Singhania & this is my friend Mr. Purshotam Sabharwal and we are here in the search for "naagmani"

~ Scene Shifts to Kasturi hanging of a cliff & saved by her best friend Shurya, who is also ichadhari naag like her ~

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BkjtTbc-vDI[/YOUTUBE]

Afterwards the scene, switch to Mr. Bajaj fourth member of those people, who came in the search for Naagmani & landed at Naag Raj's place but he didn't find anything because Naag Raj, escaped with the naagmani and gave it to his friend Anurag Wadhwa saying "Anurag…I don't know how much time I have left but promise me that if anything happens to me & my wife than you will take care of my daughter Kasturi, who is everything for me, after this precious naagmani"

Anurag looked at his friend than promised him that he will take care of this precious naagmani and his daughter too…

Afterwards, Naagin Rani and Kasturi comes to the place where Naag Raj gave Anurag the naagmani saying "if there is any other person I trust is you after my family and Kasturi beta…this is Anurag….my best friend"

Kasturi: Nice to meet you…Uncle (Kasturi touches his feet than goes running of with her friends, but her mother stops her saying "Kasturi beta…your father wants to celebrate your birthday…just three of us")

Naag Raj: Nahiin…. Anurag can also join our daughter's birthday celebration

***

Six hours later, Kasturi found her father covered in blood… Kasturi didn't know…how to react but stared at her father, who was no-more… Kasturi cried and cried for her father….

Ten minutes later… Kasturi's mother also comes inside with covered blood saying "Kasturi…promise me that you will take revenge on behalf of our death from those guys, who came with your father's friend Anurag"

Kasturi looked at her mother dying in her arms and promised her she will take revenge from those guys…who ruined her happy family….

***

Friends I need at least three or more replies to continue....cause I don't know why but I have a feeling that nobody will like this part 😭

anyways, thank you, for taking out few minutes from your time to read my fan-fic...

Preview: Three years later... Kasturi is living with Anurag Wadhwa after her parents death.... Also she meets a guy at somebody parry.... 😛

Kashish



Edited by Sharman-Siya - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Kaajal 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Anjali 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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first of all Kashish Do u really mean u dont write well??? Man this is imagining at the peaks.....👏 It is totally impossible for me to forge something like this in my mind and know i can neva do it. but u r doing a superb job...🤗🤗🤗 Really loved it😳 and i got just HOOKED on the preview😆.😳... Ohh cant wait and do update soon jaan....🤗🤗

LOVS

JAANU🤗

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