Gauri - Pyaar Ki Saugat - Pa 2 - Pg 4 - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part Two

Recap - Samar asked Shiv to pick up Gauri and take her college along with him

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After they freshen-up; they leave for college and soon as they get there - everything was back to normal - (Shiv and Gauri were arguing like cats and dog).

Gauri was so mad at Shiv that she called Samar on his cell-phone and told him what Shiv said….

A minute later, Shiv gets a call from Samar…

"Shiv, what is this?" Said by his bro

Shiv: What did I do…Bro?

Samar: You're asking me…what you did.

Shiv was getting so scared when Samar thanked him for bringing Gauri safely to college without arguing with him…

Shiv puts down the phone and says "thank god! Bro doesn't know what happened at the farmhouse or else he would have killed me?"

"What happened in the farmhouse?" Said by his best friend…Karan

Shiv: Nothing Karan (Shiv just walked to his class for the first time Shiv went to all his class without skipping any of them…for once. Even Gauri was surprise to see Shiv in all his class…even taking notes for the first time or else he had Gauri to do his homework for him)

Gauri was sitting behind Shiv when Vijay come to class (half drunk) as always… Vijay sat down beside Gauri, while Gauri tried not to pay attention to him, but his breathe was smelling so bad that Shiv notice from the concern of his eyes and switched place with Gauri saying "I think you are having hard time seeing the board so why don't you sit in my place and I'll sit in yours"

Gauri sits down beside Karan, who was thinking what is wrong with Shiv and why is he being nice with her when he hates her…

"Shiv, what was that?" said by Vijay

Shiv: Bhaiyya (Vijay is Shiv's mother's sister's son, who is older than Shiv) we will talk about this later and plus stay away from Gauri cause you aren't in your sense…. Okay

Vijay: What's wrong with you today? Why are you defending Gauri when you hate her? Are you in love with her?

"Who will go into the store room to bring me some markers?" said by Mrs. Garewal

Gauri puts her hand up and says "Ma'am, I'll get the markers from the store-room"

Mrs. Garewal allowed Gauri to get the markers from the store-room when Vijay took out his cell-phone and texted Veer (saying -Gauri is going to the store-room to get some markers and this is your only chance to take revenge)

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Scene Shifts to Gauri than Samar

Gauri was walking down the hallway saying to herself "that once Samar returns back she will confess her feelings to him on his birthday" at the same time Samar was talking to himself while driving to Simla…

(Samar talking to himself) Gauri once I come back from my business meeting I'll confess my feelings to you and I know that you also love me - because I can read your eyes…

Samar stops the car; Gauri stops at the store-room;

Samar takes a step forward; Gauri takes a step forward;

Gauri opens the door to the store-room; a man opens a door for Samar to get in the shopping mall;

Samar walks around; Gauri also walks around the store-room looking for the markers when Veer comes from behind and locks the door saying "Gauri, today you will pay for what you have done to me three days ago to me"

Gauri turns around and find someone standing behind her; Gauri was so scared and started saying "who's here?"

No one answered; Gauri got more scared and started walking backwards when Veer grabbed her hand and said "it's me…Veer! Samar's twin brother, who you slapped other day"

Gauri: Veer…let go off my hand

Veer lets go off Gauri's hand; Gauri was about to slap him when Veer says "not this time" (Veer was holding Gauri's hand again)

Hey guys I am stopping her and please let me know how I did and I need two replies to continue…

Kaajal







Edited by kajal_arjun - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
iam the first one to reply.very nice part.seems like samar n gauri r in love with each other.iam little bit confused with shiv n veer chars.u said veer also likes gauri but he is after her to take revenge.so this part is bit confusing.but still its a very gud part.keep it up friend 👏 .so update it soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
really its superb kaajal i will be waiting 4 your update 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
hey superb 👏
conitinue sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
hey kaajal ......wat 2 say ??????????
u jus rock!!!!!!!
infact m getting crazzzzzzy 🤢 2 read yur updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
plzzzz frnd go ahead.........
u r doing very very good.......

d part was awesommm!!!!
spe. d one wen sams stop gauri stop gauri takes a step sam takes a step..............dat part was really admirable........ 😊


wats more 2 say?????? yaar jus go ahead 👏
nd dis wat i can only hav 4 u 👏


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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
i rlly enjyd 👏 this part but itz still kind confussin.... 😕 😕 y does shiv call sam bro???? 😕 😕 do con soon!!! 😃

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