Phir wahi sab huwa Veer Bani Jay FS- Page 4

Will write it if i get ideas.Did you like the last part?

Originally posted by: heavenlybliss

I want you to write a sequel to this where Jay comes back for revenge or maybe another reincarnation

Part 1

Veer helping Bani was cute. I hope Jay isn't negative here. Their fight was so cute. The imagination scene was lovely. Feeling bad for Veer. Perfect pics and edits.

Part 2

Sad that Bani chose Jai. Poor Veer. Jai is such a chipku. I wonder what's in the pen drive. I know Jai has sent this email. Good that Bani saw it all. Perfect pics.

Part 3.

I hope Jai doesn't harm Bani now that she knows everything and has confronted him. Veer is so kind. Jai never truly loved her, he isn't even a bit affected. Perfect pics.

Part 4.

Good that Veer saved Bani. The line "they fought like cat and rat" was hilarious. Veer caring for Bani was lovely. Eager to see their past life. Nice pics.

Part 5

Surprised to see IshVeer as VaNi in previous life time. The chess scene was sweet. Which actor is Chirag? The fire scene reminded me of om Shanti om. Lovely pics.

Part 6

Its clear that Jai remembers his past life. Good to see Shikhar. Performance was lovely. Glad that Jai got arrested. The proposal scene and moments were cute. Perfect pics. Favorite character is Veer because he stood by Bani. Favorite scene is Shikhar's performance with Bani and Veer.

Ravjeet Singh who played Chirag in matsh played Chirag in this ff.

Thanks a lot.Plz do read my other ffs also.

Originally posted by: salley145

Part 1

Veer helping Bani was cute. I hope Jay isn't negative here. Their fight was so cute. The imagination scene was lovely. Feeling bad for Veer. Perfect pics and edits.

Part 2

Sad that Bani chose Jai. Poor Veer. Jai is such a chipku. I wonder what's in the pen drive. I know Jai has sent this email. Good that Bani saw it all. Perfect pics.

Part 3.

I hope Jai doesn't harm Bani now that she knows everything and has confronted him. Veer is so kind. Jai never truly loved her, he isn't even a bit affected. Perfect pics.

Part 4.

Good that Veer saved Bani. The line "they fought like cat and rat" was hilarious. Veer caring for Bani was lovely. Eager to see their past life. Nice pics.

Part 5

Surprised to see IshVeer as VaNi in previous life time. The chess scene was sweet. Which actor is Chirag? The fire scene reminded me of om Shanti om. Lovely pics.

Part 6

Its clear that Jai remembers his past life. Good to see Shikhar. Performance was lovely. Glad that Jai got arrested. The proposal scene and moments were cute. Perfect pics. Favorite character is Veer because he stood by Bani. Favorite scene is Shikhar's performance with Bani and Veer.

Chapter 1

Thankyou for the dedication and writing this story for me. To be honest, I don't even remember the plot I gave you. So I can also enjoy like a new reader. Haha.

Veer helping Bani in taking the file from the top was nice. Jay, Veer and Bani's friendship is wonderful. I liked both the guys teasing Bani. Veer loves Bani and the dream proposal scene was romantic. Surprising that Jay also loves Bani. Veer decides to sacrifice his love for his friend Jay. That's sad. He is also doubtful if Bani loves Jay as she was laughing out with him.

Chapter 2

Jay proposing Bani was nice. Surprising that Bani too accepted it. Feeling bad for Veer. Their scenes are very romantic and pictures are also nice. It could be the first FF where Jay and Bani are getting wonderful scenes. Shocking that company information has been leaked by Jay. Poor Bani is heartbroken to know that Jay has been betraying the company for long.

Chapter 3

Good that Bani confronted Jay. So Jay is defending himself saying that he did everything for their secure future however Bani is strong with her ethics. Veer comforting sad Bani was nice. Bani noticing how Veer was honest and sincere was really nice. Bani confronting Jay again was good and surprising that he refuse to change his decision even after Bani broke up with him. Though Jay proposed Bani first, wonder if Jay loved Bani more than his money. Good that Bani also threatened him and Jay is also angry.

Chapter 4

I am shocked that Jay tried to kill Bani. Glad that Veer came at the right time. Shocking that Veer and Jay started fighting like cat and rat. Glad that Jay ran away seeing the guards. It's sweet of Veer to invite Bani to his house to protect her from Jay. So Veer too came to know about Jay's deceit to the company. Jay had completely transformed into a different person. Surprising that Bani got visuals of a temple near their locality and she feels the urge to visit it. Shocking that there is a special puja which gives the boon to visualize the previous birth if their future requires safety. Wonder what is left in the past birth.

Chapter 5

Never thought Chirag, Ishaani and Ranveer would be such a perfect choice for th flashback story. Even the names of Bani and Veer sounds similar to Ishaani and Ranveer. Shocking that in the past, Chirag married Ishaani for her property and did deceit to make her property into her name. Sad that Chirag set the curtains on fire to let Ishaani die. Sad that Ranveer too couldn't save Ishaani. The death of Ranveer, Ishaani and Chirag was so tragic. Sad that Ranveer never confessed his love to Ishaani. Good that Bani and Veer decided to expose Jay.

Chapter 6

Surprising that Jay remembers the past really well. Jay telling that history belongs to the winners was very cruel. Surprising to see Arjun as Shikhar. Veer and Bani deciding to team up with Shikhar was nice. Finally my favorite sequence has come. Arjun is the perfect choice to portray Chirag. The drama sequence was wonderful and I loved the song placement too. Finally Veer-Bani-Shikhar exposed Jay's crime and he got arrested. Glad that Veer proposed to Bani. Veer proposing her and Bani's response was emotional. Glad that they both married and stayed happy forever.

I remember I was giving fragment pieces of prompt and I myself was clueless how to merge this into a meaningful plot. But you made the story very beautiful and loved the office setup and initial Jay-Bani-Veer friendship dynamics. Thankyou so much for writing this up.

Favorite Character - Bani (for strongly confronting Jay against the wrong)

Favorite Scene - Veer, Bani and Shikhar's drama sequence,

Just now only i remembered the similarity in names.Ranveer and Veer.

Thanks a lot for the lovely comments.

Originally posted by: Sshesha

Chapter 1

Thankyou for the dedication and writing this story for me. To be honest, I don't even remember the plot I gave you. So I can also enjoy like a new reader. Haha.

Veer helping Bani in taking the file from the top was nice. Jay, Veer and Bani's friendship is wonderful. I liked both the guys teasing Bani. Veer loves Bani and the dream proposal scene was romantic. Surprising that Jay also loves Bani. Veer decides to sacrifice his love for his friend Jay. That's sad. He is also doubtful if Bani loves Jay as she was laughing out with him.

Chapter 2

Jay proposing Bani was nice. Surprising that Bani too accepted it. Feeling bad for Veer. Their scenes are very romantic and pictures are also nice. It could be the first FF where Jay and Bani are getting wonderful scenes. Shocking that company information has been leaked by Jay. Poor Bani is heartbroken to know that Jay has been betraying the company for long.

Chapter 3

Good that Bani confronted Jay. So Jay is defending himself saying that he did everything for their secure future however Bani is strong with her ethics. Veer comforting sad Bani was nice. Bani noticing how Veer was honest and sincere was really nice. Bani confronting Jay again was good and surprising that he refuse to change his decision even after Bani broke up with him. Though Jay proposed Bani first, wonder if Jay loved Bani more than his money. Good that Bani also threatened him and Jay is also angry.

Chapter 4

I am shocked that Jay tried to kill Bani. Glad that Veer came at the right time. Shocking that Veer and Jay started fighting like cat and rat. Glad that Jay ran away seeing the guards. It's sweet of Veer to invite Bani to his house to protect her from Jay. So Veer too came to know about Jay's deceit to the company. Jay had completely transformed into a different person. Surprising that Bani got visuals of a temple near their locality and she feels the urge to visit it. Shocking that there is a special puja which gives the boon to visualize the previous birth if their future requires safety. Wonder what is left in the past birth.

Chapter 5

Never thought Chirag, Ishaani and Ranveer would be such a perfect choice for th flashback story. Even the names of Bani and Veer sounds similar to Ishaani and Ranveer. Shocking that in the past, Chirag married Ishaani for her property and did deceit to make her property into her name. Sad that Chirag set the curtains on fire to let Ishaani die. Sad that Ranveer too couldn't save Ishaani. The death of Ranveer, Ishaani and Chirag was so tragic. Sad that Ranveer never confessed his love to Ishaani. Good that Bani and Veer decided to expose Jay.

Chapter 6

Surprising that Jay remembers the past really well. Jay telling that history belongs to the winners was very cruel. Surprising to see Arjun as Shikhar. Veer and Bani deciding to team up with Shikhar was nice. Finally my favorite sequence has come. Arjun is the perfect choice to portray Chirag. The drama sequence was wonderful and I loved the song placement too. Finally Veer-Bani-Shikhar exposed Jay's crime and he got arrested. Glad that Veer proposed to Bani. Veer proposing her and Bani's response was emotional. Glad that they both married and stayed happy forever.

I remember I was giving fragment pieces of prompt and I myself was clueless how to merge this into a meaningful plot. But you made the story very beautiful and loved the office setup and initial Jay-Bani-Veer friendship dynamics. Thankyou so much for writing this up.

Favorite Character - Bani (for strongly confronting Jay against the wrong)

Favorite Scene - Veer, Bani and Shikhar's drama sequence,