TuHir FF: Never Your Wife Again!! Ch-28 on pg. 52: Intezaar - Page 53

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Posted: a day ago

Chapter 28:

Hmm Door opened really.

Gautam n Mihir's conversation has been so lovely. I really admire the fact that, Mihir is slowly making path to converse with his son. He waiting patiently, explaining how he got trapped, how his mind was drawn n believed noina more than any one, how he was trapped. But the disgust the son has shown in his eyes for his father is something no dad would ever have the courage to face, which Mihir did, "Naate potoan k saath khelne ki umar me.." Exactly he did not have to complete the sentence, the look n the tone in which he delivered this sentence said how angry is he with his father for ditching his mom. Deep down Gautam is very angry and felt the pain of his mother, though he is angry with her, he still has that affection and love for Tulsi. Mihir must be atleast relieved by this.

two men are looking into each other 's eyes and saying that they do n't feel the pain of parting with him .

Gautam shockingly surprised by his mother discovering the truth, he knew how efficient is his mother in such circumstances.

Beech me Gautam ka uthke jaana, door close karna, not wanting talk, even if talks, the harsj words to taunt n blame his father it's lovely portrayal of Gautam's state of mind n his behavior. ❤️

Mihir revealing we are as parent always their for you as a unit Gautam admiring, things settling down.

Mihir's coffee, then complementing ahh, father son thing awesome.


The phone call with Tulsi, Gautam's anger then surprised and happy somewhere Damini is going SN with his parents. (I didn't get his change in behavior). After hearing Gautam's accusations, Tulsi saying you are the only one I called in the past 6years, but you didn't answer my calls, neither reverted . Mihir felt some pain in his heart, (i failed to understand here as well, what was his concern or worry?? 🙄 is it Tulsi not forgetting her duties as mother inspite of being lonley??)

Tulsi n Mihir's conversation when Gautam went between the call, Mihir explaining Tulsi his son's change in behavior, then worried, hesitantly asking are you ok, Tulsi's haan then her sorry, Kal milte hai shows the care n the kind of concern they have for each other, it's lovely.

Then bechara Mihir wanted to talk but the son is difficult to handle absolutely behaving like teenager with his father ( i think we often tend to do this with our parent however grown up we are) so normal, typical of a child craving for care attention and ahh,his stubbornness ❤️ superbly written, i loved this, can visualize him😃.

a door that is open to a balcony with a pink sky behind it

Damini n Tulsi's conversation the bahu saas saga, they share friendly relationship. Damini is neither interested in a new job, but her mind wanted to be around ppl, she is tired of being lonely. it's good that she initiated the conversation and expressed to be in SN, Tulsi a yearning mom, hopes to get her son back. Perhaps, Tulsi knows how painful it is to be alone, so she wanted a better life for both Damini n Gautam.

Arre Gautam, kidhar leke gaya papa, where there is no room to talk 😂 smart beta.

Mihir had hard time with Gautam, he tried to talk 5mins, he wanted his son back, pleaded him to come back, he apologised,bcoz of him his son couldn't come home, and living a lone life, his parents separation affected him badly, his father's affair affected him, somewhere Mihir is more guilty of keeping his son away from his mother, his home, his family and getting depressed by his parents drifting apart.

Probably a pang in his heart out of guilt, frustration, i think it's difficult to survive like this for longer 🙄, then hold a straight face and be part of the routine, Mihir is commendable here. Thank you writer.

Mihir's BP will shoot up, Gautam's sudden entry n he looking at the monitor, gussa hai par pyar bhi hai papa ke liye. Khoon k rishte 😃

Mihir's logistics and administration smartness shown in vacating the Damini's flat. Mihir has contacts here too. True leadership and years of relationship with ppl helped here.

Mihir n Damini's meeting subtle. Mihir accompanying Tulsi till the car, Tulsi asking him about his BP, Mihir simply stating all ok, ❤️❤️

Gautam n Tulsi's adorable meet again. Dono maa bete ziddi, she preparing breakfast, he having it, then he kneeling over her shoulder, (can't tell you how good i felt with this scene), mom preparing Aloo paratha n chutney, she us stacking up for two three days efficiently, koun mana karega, maa bhi kaha sunti haismiley42.

Then Gautam asking why is Papa having BP, she answering half truth kuch saaloan se, then sadness then kaadha story... Small, short info fills the gap..

His questions on Nakul, Tulsi stating how happy he was to learn Damini going SN. Then maa to maa hai, she crying seeing her son living a ghost life, she cannot compell him to join him at SN, but be happy wherever he is

The family dinner elaboration, Gautam may not be interested, even if interested to join will not show in his body language, ego, kiddos behavior, 😂 but Damini bhi to janti hai kaise leke jaana hai isse😂, then comes our couple moments.

Damini stating she will wait for Gautam at SN, he was quiet but probably he knows there is some chord which still connects.

Let's see.

Our favourite couple balcony conversation, hearty smile, Tulsi still pulling stint to make Mihir have a hearty laugh. Then her concern n quick action, the allergy thing. Everything here is adorable, just fabulous.


Thank you writer for the great writing again, i have no words the depth you created among the, sans bahu, mother son, father son, estranged couple, and a family together. You touched the dynamics among all these perfectly.Your explanation to the surroundings like some open door, footsteps, cying child, heavy weight thing moving upstairs, auto at downstairs, cooker whistle at the neighborhood, the landlords thing handling, paper work the kitchen etc.

One more thing, Damini looking at the wall where the photographs were hung for years,Mihir understood this, his taking her so that she can create new memories at SN, probably with her son n husband also the family.


You are a gem, take a bow, thank you again.

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A big thank you to Vibrant/bpatil3, for your help with that dinner scene at the end - I have no idea about the South Indian cuisine except dosa and idli-Vada. Thank you for helping with the dishes, especially the Brinjal curry which could have cashews in it without Mihir or Tulsi suspecting it beforehand since Gujaratis especially don’t use cashew with Brinjal

Thank u so much dear

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Posted: a day ago

Mitali talking to suchitra about unconditional love was nice.her dialogues were very nice.i am shocked that suchitra doesn't mind asking mitali to leave the house for noina and mitali expected it.pari is right.mitali has an excuse of upbringing. But pari got good upbringing and Tulsi never allowed her to do wrong things and for that she kept insulting tulsi.mitali asking hrithik to give a chance as a friend was emotional. Mitali confessing all mistakes was emotional.

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Posted: a day ago

Chapter 28.. one of the biggest chapter. Thank you for that considering you had writer’s block 😇🤗

The gradual softening of Gautam felt incredibly natural and realistic in this chapter 😍

Tulsi in Gautam’s kitchen was honestly one of the strongest parts of the chapter. The way she quietly understood his loneliness and relating to it was heartbreaking in the softest way. apologizing for giving him away, explaining her reasons but not defending, making sure he understands his dad was against it so he doesn’t blame him. Everything came out so good. And Gautam leaning on her shoulder at the end of that scene really hit hard. 🥺💔

The Mihir-Gautam scenes were equally well done.😇 Mihir realizing what his mistakes did to his son and apologizing was very well written. Their relationship healing through small gestures like coffee, the fresh bedsheet, noticing Mihir’s BP monitor, the allergy scene at Karavalli where Gautam feeling guilty for not remembering it.. felt far more emotional.❤️ Poor Gautam, seeing what it would have done to his mental state knowing parents have drifted apart knowing he had witnessed his adoptive parents drift apart growing up 🥺

The strongest part for me was how parallel the relationships are becoming - first, Mihir/Tulsi finding their way back through care, habit, history and quiet understanding. Then, Gautam/Damini watching them and beginning to believe that maybe love can survive damage after all.🥰

The allergy scene deserves special mention because WOW. Tulsi stopping Mihir instantly before he even chewed properly. 🤩 A single moment conveyed 38 years of marriage better than pages of dialogue could have. And Gautam noticing it all made it even more impactful.🤗

Also loved how Mihir and Tulsi’s reconciliation is not being rushed. Their teasing each other and then her smiling at him and her noticing his laughter in the courtyard after six and a half years.. all felt earned precisely because the story has taken time to build every tiny layer of trust

Love the fact that Gautam and Damini are slowly finding their way back slowly. Damini’s “Main Shantiniketan mein tumhara intezaar karungi” was such a mature and beautiful moment.😍🥰

And the final “Boarded?”/“Okay.” exchange was perfect. So simple, yet emotionally huge coming from Gautam.😇

Failed to understand what went through Mihir when he heard Tulsi mention Gautam was the only family member she reached out to in 6 years. Was he expecting her to call him or was he guilty that despite going through so much Tulsi tried to look out for their son which he failed to do and realizing how he failed his wife and son yet again.. 🤔

Hope you clarify that in next chapter soon.. 😇🤗

Excited to see Damini and eventually Gautam back home. I always felt show did not do justice to them or gave importance they deserve as Mihir-Tulsi’s eldest son-dil like they received from their parents and siblings/cousins. They always get overshadowed by Karan-Nandini. In S2 even Shobha started getting overshadowed as she started calling Karan “bhaiya” despite being older than him 😅

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Posted: 23 hours ago

This song:

Tujhe bhi pyaar hai

Tujhe bhi pyaar hai mujhase

Main jaanati hoon sanam

Yeh baat aur hai mujhase

Kabhi kahaa to nahin

Yeh baat aur hai mujhase

Kabhi kahaa to nahin

Kisi ko chaahate rehana

Koi khata to nahin

Har ek pal main

Har ek pal main tujhe

Yaad kiya karta hoon

Tujhe bhulaa ke main

Pal bhar kabhi jiyaa to nahin

Tujhe bhulaa ke main

Pal bhar kabhi jiyaa to nahin

Kisi ko chaahate rehana

Koi khata to nahin

Khata to jab ho ke ham

Haal-e-dil kisi se kahe

Kisi ko chaahate rehana

Koi khata to nahin

Kisi ko chaahate rehana

Koi khata to nahin

Kisi ko chaahate rehana

Koi khata to nahin

Kisi ko chaahate rehana

Koi khata to nahin

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Posted: 21 hours ago

You started this chapter with the sentence "Door opened ", mujhe laggta hai,itne din jo jung pada tha uss dil ka darwaza khul gya hai.

It's not mere opening the door of a house, it's about opening the door of human relationship, the key lost somewhere in the ego, anger, frustration, depression, no communication has found it's door.

Be it Mihir Gautam, Gautam Tulsi, Damini Gautam, they found the key as a parent to opej the closed door silently with lots of patience and love for their son.

And a wife (Damini ) found her key by expressing "she will be waiting for him", small, tiny initiation big impact.

Tulsi n Mihir giving chance to their relationship after so many ups n downs, misunderstandings, hurt, ego and the separation, if they can find the path for their nest, why can't 10months of no communication relatiobship be stitched together. Perhaps Damini n Gautam both witnessed Tulsi Mihir gelling again, creating new paths, smiling to glory, love has never died despite all odds, they are rediscovering it, given a chance Damini n Gautam too can be haopy being around each other.

I liked this part.

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I am liking how tulsi Mitali's relationship is progressing.noina knows that because of self respect Tulsi won't return to mihir.so this pathetic woman is trying to take advantage of that situation.like Tulsi said she has no right to talk about Tuhir relationship. I liked tulsi and Mitali's conversation.

Thank you dear… for your beautiful comments.

Yes .. even I’m liking the Mitali and Tulsi relationship is fleshing out..

correct - aur Kuch nahi hua - toh Noina is using Tulsi’s self respect against TuHir reunion

But but - uski information (thru Mitali) purani hai - she doesn’t know about the balcony meets - they started after Mitali stopped being her informant, which is why she was so shocked to hear tulsi’s voice responding to her instead of Mihir

Yes - she needed to hear that - Mihir should have said that to her over 6 years ago - who are you to say anything about our relationship.


I am so glad tulsi and Mitali conversation towards the end came out so well

thank you again dear, and sorry I missed replying earlier

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