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Posted: a day ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 16

great that Maan took Geet to the meeting

this was his test

hate Mr Ellis's behavior and comments

of cos Maan supported Geet

Mr Ellis was indeed adamant

admire that Maan stood his ground

glad that he refused the deal

as expected the board was not happy

Maan raised valid points

well Maan's dad was proud of him

but was also worried

Geet's questions was reasonable

pleased that Maan assured her

liked their convo

now Geet was proud of Maan

Maan clearly passed the test

so Maan waited for Geet

he is going through what Geet went through

loved his concern for Geet

nice that they are getting closer

at least a smaller company wants to collaborate with KC

Maan's question was anticipated

her response was understandable

finally they are together

that kiss said everything


update soon

Thanks a lot for sharing your detailed thoughts on the chapter.

It is always a pleasure to read it.

Yes, now the couple is moving on in the real sense of the journey.

Stay tuned for more…

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Posted: a day ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Chapter 16

A Understanding and United filled Chapter

Maan truly stood strong with Geet and in return he lost the foreign deal

but he also won Geet's heart and trust a little bit more

while even Maan's father is proud of him for standing up for Geet

finally Maan and Geet are together on the same level of thinking

and now respect between them has also increased

their shared kiss was beautiful


Thanks a lot for sharing your detailed analysis on the chapter.

It means a lot. I am glad to know you are liking the story so far…

Stay tuned for more updates…

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Posted: 22 hours ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

Geet was treated like an accessory to her man, not someone who is valuable. Maan stood up for her this time.

Thanks a lot for your comment on the chapter. It means a lot. Yes, he is protecting her. Now, their real journey begins…
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Posted: 22 hours ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

Eventually, he will earn respect with the right people. The wrong ones will not matter. He will earn respect in his own eyes too, which is priceless.

Thanks a lot for your crisp analysis on the chapter.
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Posted: 22 hours ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

First sign of feelings were poured into that kiss. He is getting there.

Thanks a lot for sharing your feedback.
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Posted: 6 hours ago

Kiss!! A kiss!! Have to check your previous writtings in this forum!! I do not recall any such!!


Well, will write my opinion up till chapter 16 tomorrow perhaps. Just finished reading probably 12 chapters in one go. And my head is buzzing with steel spined Geet and calculative and businessman Maan.

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Posted: 3 hours ago

Originally posted by: PaintedSky

Kiss!! A kiss!! Have to check your previous writtings in this forum!! I do not recall any such!!


Well, will write my opinion up till chapter 16 tomorrow perhaps. Just finished reading probably 12 chapters in one go. And my head is buzzing with steel spined Geet and calculative and businessman Maan.

I usually don’t write intimate scenes, so this is a rare occurrence. But when I do, the emotions matter the most to me. I’ll be waiting for your response to the story so far.Take your time, and do let me know how you liked it.
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