Fanfic and book rant cause even if I make faces I can't stay away
There was this story I was reading in Wattpad, arjun is from etf and he goes to Sikkim/Shimla, there is already a team of shree Riya ayesha i beleive, they call themselves team A iirc. Rathore and arjun goes there they solve case most likely related to sik
It's revealed by Rathore that Riya loved arjun long back and arjun either rejected her or he didn't reciprocate even though he loved her too. So she married some guy and divorced too. She's apparently very hurt etc as Rathore warns arjun not to hurt her again. But arjun don't behave why different to her. And riya also heart eyeing arjun who apparently broke her heart
The first few chapter riya gets shot during a encounter and arjun is like if you can't handle guns don't come to field, I am not responsible etc even when he's actually the lead. I had commented in the story that if he don't care about team shouldn't be a leader and should go to field alone and die 🤣🤣 and it makes no sense dude apparently loved her long back. Dude be having amnesia
I went back yesterday to search for that story and the author deleted his/her profile. Very sad damn . And I hope my comment wasn't responsible for it lmao. I never bash the writers, it's always the characters.
My fav rant worthy story isn't updated I am sad. Same one where Riya has a bf and I want that dude for myself cause he's a package. He's in army, he's hot , he's sensitive sweet loves her too much. And arjun and other men hates women cause sakshi liza Ayesha were killed by some goons and they were too pussy to save them. Fck these nalla men and riya is stupid to work there.
There is another fic I was following with full shiddat but not anymore cause it's just disappointing. I lost my appetite for this story - cross over with another show. Fantastic for like 90% of the storyline, arjun Riya relationship is goals with very good hindi dialogues - very less people can write in Hinglish and make the words so romantic meaningful , the other character are great too
I recently felt that writer is using his/her most popular story to push her other stories which are original, delaying this story. The person has other amazing ariya related stories those are in halt for a long long time, so clearly author isn't interested to write imo. And it's just exploiting imo. You finish one story which has so much attention and move onto next one
Yeah so my original grudge - sikandar entry and that case handling was so 70s Mithunda movie style lol. With those dialogues agar use chua to hath kat dunga etc. and it wrapped up within 5 chapters currently. All the hype down the gutter. Left a bad taste in mouth. Not like author can't write a case. They did. They didn't bother with this one
And it made me realise i think very less fanfic out there which handled sikandar case with good case, good twist and proper aftermath. I forgot story name but I remember this ff when sikandar was caught, he had captured shree and arjun had to shoot shree to catch sik. The aftermath too was like him dealing about shooting his team mate. And the story was written in such a way we could feel arjun actually caring about his team.
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