What if............Arjun - Page 4

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

The story was very very interesting with Rathore once again accusing Arjun of laparvahi and arjun being as stubborn as usual that he has no fault. But Rathore was also right why arjun didn't go and find out about who killed the team

I liked the flashback too how these two always chose each other over everyone but in present it's shit.

Makes you question like how Arjun's mind work. As per story he truly saw the team as his family. But he don't feel any 0.01% of guilt that because of him they died. Similarly he don't take any blame for roshni too. Not saying he should. But realistically even if example a very ill person of family or very old person dies, the family feels like they failed the dead person somehow. Arjun don't feel shit

Did they write Him as psychopath lol. That will make a lot of sense 🤣

I dont think the OG writers continued long. Because there were so many contradictory behaviour in Arjun himself.

Originally posted by: Bodhianveshika

I dont think the OG writers continued long. Because there were so many contradictory behaviour in Arjun himself.

Ha i remember they went to chotus house and they were behaving like besties. Remembering about the old days

Also hiding about chotus death is stupid cause kabhi na kabhi pata chalta unhe . Etf team died it's not.possivke their neighbours didn't go to their house to console them . Sabse pehle family ko hi pata chalta like it usually happens in army death cases. Army people call first or media gets the news first

So shaleen had posted a video in his insta and everyone thought it's Arjun 2. It's scrapped or taking too much time that he's doing surbhi wahi wala show

I hope it's something interesting. I wont mind it being thriller series but let's see

Fanfic and book rant cause even if I make faces I can't stay away

There was this story I was reading in Wattpad, arjun is from etf and he goes to Sikkim/Shimla, there is already a team of shree Riya ayesha i beleive, they call themselves team A iirc. Rathore and arjun goes there they solve case most likely related to sik

It's revealed by Rathore that Riya loved arjun long back and arjun either rejected her or he didn't reciprocate even though he loved her too. So she married some guy and divorced too. She's apparently very hurt etc as Rathore warns arjun not to hurt her again. But arjun don't behave why different to her. And riya also heart eyeing arjun who apparently broke her heart

The first few chapter riya gets shot during a encounter and arjun is like if you can't handle guns don't come to field, I am not responsible etc even when he's actually the lead. I had commented in the story that if he don't care about team shouldn't be a leader and should go to field alone and die 🤣🤣 and it makes no sense dude apparently loved her long back. Dude be having amnesia

I went back yesterday to search for that story and the author deleted his/her profile. Very sad damn . And I hope my comment wasn't responsible for it lmao. I never bash the writers, it's always the characters.

My fav rant worthy story isn't updated I am sad. Same one where Riya has a bf and I want that dude for myself cause he's a package. He's in army, he's hot , he's sensitive sweet loves her too much. And arjun and other men hates women cause sakshi liza Ayesha were killed by some goons and they were too pussy to save them. Fck these nalla men and riya is stupid to work there.

There is another fic I was following with full shiddat but not anymore cause it's just disappointing. I lost my appetite for this story - cross over with another show. Fantastic for like 90% of the storyline, arjun Riya relationship is goals with very good hindi dialogues - very less people can write in Hinglish and make the words so romantic meaningful , the other character are great too

I recently felt that writer is using his/her most popular story to push her other stories which are original, delaying this story. The person has other amazing ariya related stories those are in halt for a long long time, so clearly author isn't interested to write imo. And it's just exploiting imo. You finish one story which has so much attention and move onto next one

Yeah so my original grudge - sikandar entry and that case handling was so 70s Mithunda movie style lol. With those dialogues agar use chua to hath kat dunga etc. and it wrapped up within 5 chapters currently. All the hype down the gutter. Left a bad taste in mouth. Not like author can't write a case. They did. They didn't bother with this one

And it made me realise i think very less fanfic out there which handled sikandar case with good case, good twist and proper aftermath. I forgot story name but I remember this ff when sikandar was caught, he had captured shree and arjun had to shoot shree to catch sik. The aftermath too was like him dealing about shooting his team mate. And the story was written in such a way we could feel arjun actually caring about his team.