Prayansh Aransh Anpi FF: Swapnakoodu - Page 4

The boys will not get anywhere with their attitude. Only RL is making sincere effort.

Why is Aradhana so shocked with RL's sincerity? Does she not trust it?

The boys did well for a change. They handled the event perfectly.

Malini saying that either PiAn will kill each other or fall in love was interesting. Prayansh conversation was lovely.angad telling pihu that he wants to play with kidney stones and RK singing were funny.picnic spot scenes were lovely. Angad missing the ball purposefully to argue with pihu was funny..3 boys admiring the girls was romantic. Sad that reyansh is still pretending to not loving pranati as he thinks that it will hurt RL.good that pranati noticed that RK is hiding pain behind his mischief.perfect pics

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A promising start! Evokes a sense of closure and anticipation. Eager to see where their journey leads!

The chef making the 3 boys cook properly strictly was hilarious. RK and angad saying that seriousness is RL's and style is RK's but excuses are Angad's was funny.RK telling pranati that it's better to burn food than to burn in her anger was funny.when RK asked her whether she cares for him pranati blushing was sweet.pranati said malini aunty.malini is aunty or mother?angad telling pihu thar numbers are jealous as she spends more time with the flowers was hilarious.angad saying that he wasn't dumb but he pretended to be helpless to gain her attention was cute.RL saying that learning new is his relaxation and aradhana saying that he is differently admirable was nice.beach scene of the couples was nice.angad pretending to fainting and confirming that pihu cares for him was cute.RK saying that when pranati smiles the moon looks dull and though he is a joker his feelings for her is not a joke was romantic.under this prayansh scene you have put pihAn and aransh pics.plz remove them as their pics are not needed in a prayansh scene.RL telling aradhana that flowers speak what he can't was nice.i think indirectly he said that aradhana made his life more beautiful. Perfect pics.

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

The chef making the 3 boys cook properly strictly was hilarious. RK and angad saying that seriousness is RL's and style is RK's but excuses are Angad's was funny.RK telling pranati that it's better to burn food than to burn in her anger was funny.when RK asked her whether she cares for him pranati blushing was sweet.pranati said malini aunty.malini is aunty or mother?angad telling pihu thar numbers are jealous as she spends more time with the flowers was hilarious.angad saying that he wasn't dumb but he pretended to be helpless to gain her attention was cute.RL saying that learning new is his relaxation and aradhana saying that he is differently admirable was nice.beach scene of the couples was nice.angad pretending to fainting and confirming that pihu cares for him was cute.RK saying that when pranati smiles the moon looks dull and though he is a joker his feelings for her is not a joke was romantic.under this prayansh scene you have put pihAn and aransh pics.plz remove them as their pics are not needed in a prayansh scene.RL telling aradhana that flowers speak what he can't was nice.i think indirectly he said that aradhana made his life more beautiful. Perfect pics.

Take it in this way - Pranati means to say his Malini Aunty.

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

The chef making the 3 boys cook properly strictly was hilarious. RK and angad saying that seriousness is RL's and style is RK's but excuses are Angad's was funny.RK telling pranati that it's better to burn food than to burn in her anger was funny.when RK asked her whether she cares for him pranati blushing was sweet.pranati said malini aunty.malini is aunty or mother?angad telling pihu thar numbers are jealous as she spends more time with the flowers was hilarious.angad saying that he wasn't dumb but he pretended to be helpless to gain her attention was cute.RL saying that learning new is his relaxation and aradhana saying that he is differently admirable was nice.beach scene of the couples was nice.angad pretending to fainting and confirming that pihu cares for him was cute.RK saying that when pranati smiles the moon looks dull and though he is a joker his feelings for her is not a joke was romantic.under this prayansh scene you have put pihAn and aransh pics.plz remove them as their pics are not needed in a prayansh scene.RL telling aradhana that flowers speak what he can't was nice.i think indirectly he said that aradhana made his life more beautiful. Perfect pics.

In which part? I will change

Part 12

Scene 1 – Reunion Announcement

At the hotel training centre, the manager gathered the interns.

Manager: “All of you worked hard. This weekend, Pondicherry Alumni Association is arranging a picnic by the lakeside. Our hotel is one of the sponsors, so you must attend. It’ll refresh you.”

RK (excited, eyes shining): “Picnic means… girls, guitars, and romance!”
RL (calmly, folding his arms): “Or peace, which you never allow.”
Angad (dreamily): “Or unlimited samosas and ice cream.”

Just then, the girls entered.

Pihu (clapping hands): “Did someone say picnic? Yayyy! I’m packing already!”
Pranati (raising an eyebrow): “We’ll see if Malini Ma agrees.”
Aradhana (smiling gently): “Come on, it’ll be good for all of us.”

RK (spreading his arms, filmy style): “Six hearts, three love stories… one picnic!”
Pranati (smirking): “Dream on, Khurana.”

Scene 2 – The Bus Journey

The alum picnic bus was buzzing with chatter. Everyone climbed in, laughing.

• RK made sure to grab the seat next to Pranati.

• RL quietly took a window seat; Aradhana slid beside him.

• Angad plopped down with Pihu, already planning his next prank.

As the bus rolled along the coastal road, a guy pulled out a dholak. Soon, someone started singing.

Singer (from bus):

Yunhi chala chal raahi

Yunhi chala chal raahi

Kitni haseen hai ye duniya

Phul saare jamele dekh phulon ke mele

Badi rangeen hai duniya

Rum tum taana na na tum

tum taana na

Rum tum taana na na tum

tum taana na

Rum tum taana na na tum

tum taana na bhaiya

hm.. haaaa..haa..Haa. Ha..

Ye raasta hai keh raha ab mujhse

Milne ko hai koyi kahin ab tujhse

Ye raasta hai keh raha ab mujhse

Milne ko hai koyi kahin ab tujhse

ohhhh...ohhhooo...

Dil ko hai kyun ye betaabi

kis se mulaaqaat honi hai

Jis ka kabse armaan tha

shaayad wahi baat honi hai

Yunhi chala chal raahi

Yunhi chala chal raahi

Jeevan gaadi hai samay paiya

aansoon ki nadiya bhi hai

Khushiyon ki bagiya bhi hai

rasta sab tera takke bhaiya

Yunhi chala chal raahi

Yunhi chala chal raahi

Kitni haseen hai ye duniya

Phul saare jamele dekh phulon ke mele

Badi rangeen hai duniya...

Everyone clapped along.

RK (jumping up, pointing at Pranati): “Sun rahi ho? Even the song says we should walk together!”
Pranati (shoving him back into the seat): “Walk straight, Mr. Filmy. Don’t trip and fall on me.”
RK (winking): “If I fall, it will only be in your arms.”

Aradhana laughed softly. RL noticed her, smiling.

RL (low voice): “You enjoy their fights?”
Aradhana (smiling): “They’re funny. But… you’re too quiet.”
RL (hesitating, then softly): “Maybe because I only want to talk to you.”

Aradhana turned to the window, hiding her blush.

Meanwhile, Angad tossed a peanut at Pihu.

Pihu (glaring): “Angad! Stop it!”
Angad (grinning): “Bas ek aur. If I hit the bull’s-eye, you’ll smile.”
Pihu: “And if you miss, I’ll throw you out of the window.”
Angad (dramatic): “Fine! At least I’ll land straight in your heart.”
Pihu (facepalming): “Uff, hopeless!”

Everyone clapped louder as the chorus rose. The bus became a mini concert —

• RK is dancing in the aisle like a Bollywood hero.

• Pranati is pretending to look annoyed, but is secretly laughing.

• Angad pulls Pihu up to clap and dance.

• RL and Aradhana swaying gently, side by side, their eyes meeting for moments.

The song ended with laughter and cheers as the bus drove into the hills.

Scene 3 – At the Picnic Spot

The bus stopped near a shimmering blue lake, surrounded by green hills. There were food stalls, boats, swings, and trekking trails.

RK (sniffing dramatically): “Ah! Love is in the air.”
Pranati (deadpan): “No, that’s fried pakoras.”
Angad (sniffing too): “Confirmed. Extra chutney smell included.”

Everyone burst out laughing. Soon, the pairs split naturally.

RK & Pranati – The Boat Ride

RK dragged Pranati toward a small rowboat.

Pranati (reluctant): “No way! I don’t trust you with boats.”
RK (grinning): “Trust me with your heart then. The boat is free.”

He rowed clumsily, splashing water.

Pranati (angry): “Stop it!”
RK: “Not my fault, the lake is jealous of your beauty.”

The boat tilted, Pranati slipped — RK caught her waist just in time.

RK (whispering, intense): “Even if the boat sinks, I’ll never let you fall.”

Pranati’s breath hitched. She quickly sat back straight.

Song plays

Shining in the sand and sun like

A pearl upon the ocean

Come and feel me.. How feel me

Shining in the sand and sun like

A pearl upon the ocean

Come on, heal me.. Please heal me

Thinking about the love and making

And life sharing comes and feels me

How feel me

Shining in the shade in the sun like

A pearl upon the ocean

Come on, feel me

Come on, heal me..

RK imagined serenading her under moonlight, flowers in hand. Pranati secretly dreamed of his arms around her on the lake, but shook herself back to reality. However, Pranati is unable to resist and imagines herself with Reyansh in a fair and exchanging romantic words.

Pranati (snatching her hand back): “Hopeless!”

RK (smiling): “Hopelessly in love with you.”

Hua jo tubhi mera mera

Tera jo ikraar hua

To kyun na main bhi keh doon keh doon

Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua

Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon

Jab se mila hoon

Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon

Jab se mila hoon

Shining in the shade in the sun like

A pearl upon the ocean

Come and feel me.. How feel me

Shining in the shade in the sun like

A pearl upon the ocean

Come on, heal me.. Please heal me

Both of them imagine dancing and jiving on the rooftop while having a cold coffee during the break.

Waise to mann mera,

pehli bhi raaton mein

Aksar hi chahat ke haan

Sapne sanjonta tha

Pehle bhi dhadkan ye, dhun koi gaati thi

Par ab jo hota hai

woh, pehle na hota tha

Hua hai tujhe jo bhi jo bhi

Mujhe bhi is baar hua

To kyun na main bhi, keh doon keh doon

Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua

Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon

Jab se mila hoon

Teri hone lagi hoon, khone lagi hoon

Jab se mili hoon :-)

RK and Pranati dream about being on the beach where Ruhaan carries Pranati in his arms.

Aankhon se choo lun ke

bahein tarasti hain

Dil ne pukara hai haan, ab to chale aao

Aaoge shabnam ki boonde barasti hain

Mausam ishara hai haan, ab to chale aao

Baahon mein dhalein, baahein.. Baahein..

Baahon ka jaise haar hua

Haa manaa maine mana mana

Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua

Tera hone laga hoon, khone laga hoon

Jab se mila hoon

Teri hone laga/i hoon, khone laga/i hoon

Jab se mila/i hoooooooooooon....

Shining in the shade in the sun like

A pearl upon the ocean

Come and feel me.. How feel me

Shining in the shade in the sun like

A pearl upon the ocean

Could you heal me? Please heal me

Thinking about the lovemaking

And life sharing go and feel me

How feel me

Shining in the shade in the sun like

A pearl upon the ocean

Come on, feel me

Come on, heal me...

RL & Aradhana – The Trekking Trail

RL and Aradhana took the hillside path.

She stumbled slightly. RL immediately held her hand.

RL: “Careful. You walk like you want me to catch you.”
Aradhana (blushing, softly): “Maybe I do.”

They reached the top, gazing at the sunset.

RL: “All my life, I thought success was everything. But today… with you, I feel there’s more.”
Aradhana: “Maybe because love adds meaning.”

They looked at each other, silently smiling.

Song plays:

Kehte hain Khuda ne is

jahan mein sabhi ke liye

Kisi na kisi ko hai

banaya har kisike liye

Tera milna hai us Rab ka ishara maano

Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye

Kehte hain Khuda ne is

jahan mein sabhi ke liye

Kisi na kisi ko hai

banaya har kisike liye

Tera milna hai us Rab ka ishara maano

Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye

Kuchh to hai tujhse Raabta

Dream sequence: hand in hand near the water, RL holding her from behind as the wind blew. Both lost in the moment.

Kuchh to hai tujhse raabta

Kaise hum jaanein humein kya pata

Kuchh to hai tujhse raabta

Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai

Jeene ki wajah hi yahi marna isi ke liye

Kehte hain Khuda ne is

jahan mein sabhi ke liye

Kisi na kisi ko hai

banaya har kisike liye

Uh ho.. Uh hooo...

mmmm... hooo.. heyyy.

Suddenly, the bus enters a beautiful greenery, and it begins to rain. Reyansh and Aradhana always loved to get wet in the rain. They are completely lost in their imagination.

Meharbani jaate jaate mujh pe kar gaya

Ghuzarta sa lamha ek daman bhar gaya

Tere nazara mila, roshan sitara mila

Taqdeer ki kashtiyon ko kinara mila

Sadiyon se tarse hain

jaisi zindagi ke liye

Teri sohbat mein duayein

hain usi ke liye

Tere milna hai us rab ka ishara maano

Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye

Kuchh to hai tujhse raabta

Kuchh to hai tujhse raabta

Kaise hum jaanein humein kya pata

Kuchh to hai tujhse raabta

Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai

Jeene ki wajah hi yahi marna isi ke liye

Kehte hain Khuda ne is

jahan mein sabhi ke liye

Kisi na kisi ko hai

banaya har kisike liye...

MMM hooo.. Mm hooooo..

mmm.. oo... hyeah...

Back in reality, RL whispered:

RL: “Maybe destiny brought me here… just for you.”

Angad & Pihu – The Swing Game

Pihu spotted a big wooden swing between two trees.

Pihu (excited): “Angad, push me!”
Angad: “Careful. My kidney stones can’t take so much pressure.”
Pihu (laughing): “Liar! You only use that excuse to skip classes.”

He pushed her, making her squeal with joy. Then, she suddenly jumped on behind her.

Pihu (screaming): “Angad! We’ll fall!”
Angad (laughing): “At least I’ll fall in your arms.”

The swing slowed. His arms were still around her. For once, Angad’s tone changed.

Angad (soft, serious): “You know… I don’t need a swing. Just being with you makes me feel alive.”

Pihu froze, cheeks turning red. She jumped off quickly, but her heart thudded.

🎵 Song plays 🎵

Pehli baar tumko maine jab dekha thaa
Sunlo yaar ki maine kya socha thaa
Laga ke tumse hai milna tabaahi
Is dil ko hi samjaane maine kahaa
Is raste na jaana kabhi raahi
Yeh tere liye hai hi nahi




Dream sequence: carnival lights, Pihu and Angad laughing, dancing, stealing ice creams together.





Dil mera bol utha
Hone do ab jo bhi ho
Darna kya bhala bura
Hone do ab jo bhi ho

Kya dil ki sunli tumne

Kya raah chunli tumne

Haan dil ki sunli maine

Haan raah chunli maine

Pehli baar tumko maine jab dekha thaa

Sunlo yaar o maine kya socha thaa




Both dream of spending time in the park.

Laga ki mashware sunte ho dilke

Laga ke thode se ho tum deewane se

Karoge dil ki hi baate phir milke

Aur hongi yeh baate badi haseen

Dil mera bol utha

Hone do ab jo bhi ho

Darna kya bhala bura

Hone do ab jo bhi hai

Kya dil ki sunli tumne

Kya raah chunli tumne

Haan dil ki sunli maine

Haan raah chunli maine

Lehron mein jaise lehre mile aise

Mil gayi dilo ki dhadkan

Chalte hi chaltey raaho mein

Khoye khoye hai dono tan mann

Haan paas aaye toh kyun paas aaye

Socho toh baat hai zara si

Kuch tum bhi pyase pyase they kab se

Main bhi thi pyasi pyasi

Laga ke tumse hai milna tabaahi

Is dil ko hi samjaane maine kahaa

Is raste na jaana kabhi raahi

Yeh tere liye hai hi nahi




Angad imagines himself with Pihu and his childhood friend, Raghav. He thinks that if Pihu agrees to marry him, and if there's any problem, they can go to Raghav.

Dil mera bol utha

Hone do ab jo bhi ho

Darna kya bhala bura

Hone do ab jo bhi ho

Kya dil ki sunli tumne

Kya raah chunli tumne

Haan dil ki sunli main

Haan raah chunli maine

Back to reality

Scene 4 – Bonfire Night

Everyone gathered around a bonfire.

• RK tried to roast corn but burned it completely.
  Pranati (laughing): “Even fire rejects your cooking.”

• RL quietly gave his jacket to Aradhana when she shivered.

• Angad mimicked their manager.
  Pihu (laughing so hard): “Stop! My stomach hurts!”

All alums danced around the fire, clapping, singing.

• RK tried pulling Pranati close; she escaped, laughing.

• RL and Aradhana swayed gently, lost in each other’s eyes.

• Angad spun Pihu till they both tumbled on the grass, laughing breathlessly.

Scene 5 – Night Confessions (Almost)

Later, everyone went into their tents.

• RK stood outside Pranati’s tent.
  RK: “Goodnight, darling. Sweet dreams… of me.”
  Pranati (blushing, hiding smile): “Nightmare guaranteed.”

• RL paused near Aradhana’s tent.
  RL (softly): “Sweet dreams, Aradhana.”
  Aradhana (turning, smiling warmly): “Sweet dreams, Rey.”

• Angad tossed a pillow inside Pihu’s tent.
  Angad (teasing): “One day, you’ll accept you’re mine.”
  Pihu (throwing it back): “Keep dreaming.”
  But her smile lingered in the dark.

The lake shimmered under moonlight — three love stories quietly blossoming.

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Great update... well written