Arjun and Riya saga: Veil - Page 2

Writing this after the first post.

First of all,

How?

How can you write so good with so much words & details? Patience kahaan se aata hai itna?

Lord I am still running on emotions of the post…

At first I thought I’m reading a Cinderella subplot the way you began describing Riya doing all house chores and etc…

The Bengali lines were my fave, I died with amaro porano jaha chaye not chai like babes that’s crackling

I love you for how you described her inner emotions from her perspective of each scenes from the show, it’s what we all needed!

The alternative universe is my fave part as I would have died to see her reactions to the teams interactions with the new females in the group.

Thankfully Sakshi was described pretty normal in the story rather than her dramatic portrayal on the show haha

The terrace rain confession is like sone pe suhaga 🙈😍

I’m still struggling to find words to sum up that I’m in love with your writing!

Yet to read the 2nd post! 🏃🏻‍♀️

Originally posted by: SarafWasima

Writing this after the first post.

First of all,

How?

How can you write so good with so much words & details? Patience kahaan se aata hai itna?

Lord I am still running on emotions of the post…

At first I thought I’m reading a Cinderella subplot the way you began describing Riya doing all house chores and etc…

The Bengali lines were my fave, I died with amaro porano jaha chaye not chai like babes that’s crackling

I love you for how you described her inner emotions from her perspective of each scenes from the show, it’s what we all needed!

The alternative universe is my fave part as I would have died to see her reactions to the teams interactions with the new females in the group.

Thankfully Sakshi was described pretty normal in the story rather than her dramatic portrayal on the show haha

The terrace rain confession is like sone pe suhaga 🙈😍

I’m still struggling to find words to sum up that I’m in love with your writing!

Yet to read the 2nd post! 🏃🏻‍♀️

wrote it in wattpad like in 2 days till part 3. then rest of things over 1 week. once i have an idea i need to write it. or else i wont have the drive to write it since dimag mein sab khatam lol

lol nahi. loneliness is insane. i wont wish it on anyone.

Reserving this post to update later for second post commentary!!

Reopening on request

I didn't request?

Originally posted by: Phir_Mohabbat

I didn't request?

Oh did I open the wrong topic. Whoops. Let me recheck.

Ok problem resolved. Reopened topic.

Thank you 😘😘😘😘