Chal Mere Bhai ( Come on, brother) Karan Preeta Rishab

Chal Mere Bhai ( Come on, brother) Part 1

I dedicate this SS to my dearest friend Salley who asked me to write a PreeRan Rishab Tejasswi Prakash SS on the movie Chal mere bhai.Thank you Salley for the lovely edits.

Thank you so much my dear friend Sydell for making a lovely cover page for this SS.

Luthra Mansion....

Mahesh,his wife Rakhi,his mother Bani and his son Rishab were having breakfast.

Mahesh:Where is Karan?

Rakhi:He is doing rehearsal.

Mahesh got irritated.

Mahesh:Instead of joining our family business,he is doing dance dramas sacrificing food.

Bani:One day he will become famous and you will be proud of him.

Mahesh:Not everyone can become famous Maa.

Rishab:Whether he will become famous or not,he is doing what makes him happy.Karan's happiness is more important for us.Right papa?

Mahesh was silent while everyone else smiled.

Rishab:Today evening Karan's show is there.Get ready.We all will go together.

They smiled.

Karan's dance play....

Karan danced with his co-actors.His whole family enjoyed his performance.

Mahesh felt like laughing hearing the lyrics of the song.

Aye neeli chhatri waale
Agar tu hai to
Meri faryaad sun
Is duniya mein kai
Ladkiyaan hain ek to
Arre ek to mere liye chun

Mere baap ki beti
Mujhe bhai bolti

Mere baap ki bibi
Mujhe beta bolti

Mere baap ki beti
Mujhe bhai bolti
Mere baap ki bibi
Mujhe beta bolti

Meri maa ka bhai
Mujhe bhaanja bolta
Mere bhai ki beti
Mujhe chacha bolti

Ooparwaale tune
Mujhko sab kuchh diya
Ab dede husband
Kehne waali sundar bibi
Mere baap ki beti
Mujhe bhai bolti
Mere baap ki bibi
Mujhe beta bolti
Meri maa ka bh...

(Chal Mere Bhai).

Rishab was interviewing a girl for the post of his personal assistant.

Rishab:I am sorry to say that you are not suitable for this job.

She became sad.She was Preeta Arora.

Preeta:Why Sir?What's wrong with my performance?I prepared so much for this interview.But you are rejecting me cruelly?

Rishab was stunned.

Rishab:Cruelly?What cruelty did I do to you?

Preeta shed crocodile tears:You rejected me.

Rishab was shocked to see her cry.

Rishab:You are behaving as if I rejected your marriage proposal.

Preeta:Job is more important than marriage Sir.Without marriage,we can live.But without a job,how can we live?

Rishab became dull.

Rishab:You try for another job in another company.

Suddenly Mahesh entered the cabin.

Mahesh:Who is crying here?

Suddenly he saw Preeta crying.He was shocked to see her.

Mahesh:You?

Preeta:Sir!

Mahesh:Why are you crying beta?

Purposefully Preeta cried more dramatically.

Preeta:Because he refused to appoint me.

Mahesh looked at Rishab.

Mahesh:Why are you making this poor girl cry?Why are you not appointing her?

Rishab:Papa...I took her interview and realized that she doesn't suit this job.

Mahesh:I don't want to hear anything.Once when I fainted on the roadside due to low sugar level,it's Preeta who took me to the nearby hospital.

Rishab was surprised.

Mahesh:So don't think twice.Just appoint her.

Rishab:Okay.

Preeta:That means I got a job?

Mahesh:Yes.

Preeta jumped with joy.Mahesh smiled.

Rishab murmured:Crazy girl!

The next morning....

Preeta was travelling in a taxi.

Suddenly the car got stopped.

Preeta:Driverji...you stopped at the wrong place.This is not my office.

Driver:I know that.But the petrol got over.So the car got stopped automatically.

Preeta was shocked.

Preeta:Without checking whether the petrol is full or not how can you even drive the car?Who made you a taxi driver?

Driver:My father made me a taxi driver as he and his father were also taxi drivers.

Preeta gritted her teeth in anger:I have never seen a stupid taxi driver like you.

Preeta got out of the car angrily.

Driver:Give me my money and go.

Preeta:To give you money,I need to have a job.Right?Because of you,the first day itself I will lose my job.I need to save my job by reaching there on time.

Preeta started running to reach the office fast.She got tired and started sweating.

Karan who saw who this opened the door and asked her:Hello baby doll...why are you sweating so much?This doesn't suit pretty baby dolls like you.

Preeta looked at him.

Suddenly she opened his car and sat inside.Karan was shocked.

Karan:Why have you sat inside my car without my permission?

Preeta:Why did you call me Baby doll without my permission?

Karan was embarrassed.

Preeta:I got a job in Luthra industries.Today is my first day.I need to reach there on time.Please drop me there.

Karan was surprised.

Karan:You work in Luthra industries?

Preeta:Yes.

Karan:It belongs to my father and brother.

Preeta was surprised:Rishab Luthra is my boss.

Karan:He is my brother.I am Karan Luthra.

Preeta smiled with surprise.

Karan got inside the car and drove the car.

They reached Luthra industries.

Preeta:Thank you.Because of you only I reached here on time.

Karan smiled.

Karan accompanied Preeta to the Luthra industries.

Rishab was surprised to see Karan with Preeta.

Rishab:You both know each other?

Preeta:Yes Sir.We are friends.

Karan was stunned as she addressed him as her friend.

Rishab:When did you both become friends?

Preeta looked at the watch and said:Half an hour back when he agreed to drop me here.

Preeta walked to her seat.

Rishab and Karan burst into laughter.

Karan:She is so funny.Did you appoint her on the basis of her loose brain and humour sense?

Rishab:She is papa's selection.

Karan just smiled.

Rishab's office employee Swastika gave presentation.Rishab was impressed by her performance.

Rishab:Your presentation was really nice Swastika.Well done.Our clients are also impressed.

Swastika smiled:Thank you Sir.

Swastika was in her room.

She was really happy.

Swastika:For the first time Rishab appreciated me.I feel so happy.

I hope he will get impressed with me again and again.After I enter his heart,I will tell him everything.

Swastika dreamt of having sweet romantic moments with Rishab.

Meri neend jaane lagi hai
Meri chein khone laga hai
Meri neend jaane lagi hai
Meri chein khone laga hai
Meri neend jaane lagi hai
Meri chein khone laga hai
Mujhe ishq hone laga hai
Mujhe ishq hone laga hai
Mujhe ishq hone laga hai
Mujhe ishq hone laga hai

Meri neend jaane lagi hai
Meri chein khone laga hai
Meri neend jaane lagi hai
Meri chein khone laga hai
Meri neend jaane lagi hai
Meri chein khone laga hai

Mujhe ishq hone laga hai
Mujhe ishq hone laga hai
Mujhe ishq hone laga hai
Mujhe ishq hone laga hai

Duniya lage hai nayi si sab
Kuchh lage hai suhaana
Teri jhuki nigaahon ka main
Ban gaya hoon deewana
Beete mere din tadapke
Mushkil se raina guzaari
Maine to aaj jaana kya
Cheez hai bekaraari
Main bhi to hoon khoya khoya

Ab hosh aata nahin hai na
Jaane kaisa nasha hai
Ab hosh aata nahin hai na
Jaane kaisa nasha hai
Meri neend jaane lagi hai
Meri chein khone laga hai
Mujhe ishq hone laga hai
Mujhe ishq hone laga hai
Mujhe ishq hone laga hai
Mujhe ishq hone laga hai

Betaab se hain nazaare
Mausam badalne lage hain
Madhoshi mein yun hum dono
Girne sambhalne lage hain
Baahon mein aake dilbar ke
Armaan machalne lage hain
Hum bhi jawaan chaahat ke
Rangon mein dhalne lage hain

Kaisa hai ye jaadu jaadu
Ye aag kaisi lagi hai ye
Dard kaisa jaga hai
Ye aag kaisi lagi hai ye
Dard kaisa jaga hai
Meri neend jaane lagi hai
Meri chein khone laga hai
Mujhe ishq hone laga hai
Mujhe ishq hone laga hai
Mujhe ishq hone laga hai
Mujhe ishq hone laga hai.

.( Chal Mere Bhai).

Rakhi and Bani were looking at the matrimonial site.

Rakhi:This girl looks beautiful.Right mummiji?

Bani:She looks like a drum stick.My Rishab deserves a Princess.

Rakhi:What about the other girl?

Bani:She looks like a rotten flower.

Rakhi showed her another girl's profile.

Bani:She looks older than me.

Rakhi felt like laughing:Mummiji...

Rakhi showed her another girl's photograph.Bani:She is not as pretty as me.

Rakhi burst into laughter.

Rishab reached there.

Bani:Rishab...all the profiles in the matrimonial site are disappointing.

Rakhi:You check beta.What if you like someone?

Rishab:I told you hundreds times not to find a girl for me.I am not interested in getting married.You know the reason.Then why both of you are forcing me to get married?

Bani and Rakhi became upset.

Rishab walked to his room.

Rakhi:Poor boy!He has not recovered from his past yet.

Rishab remembered his past painfully.

Lovely cover page. Rishabh is a very good brother. The song scene was funny. Preeta’s scene with Rishabh and Mahesh was hilarious, she really suits the character. Preeta didn’t even take money to give to the taxi driver? Lol. Now itself Karan is calling her baby doll. Their scene was sweet. Suddenly Preeta calling Karan her friend was cute, he was himself shocked. Swastika already in love with Rishabh was nice, so here there will be love triangle or not? Bani is so funny. Wondering what is Rishabh's past. Perfect pics, waiting for next. Thanks for writing this for me.

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Part 1

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Chal Mere Bhai ( Come on, brother)Part 2

The credit for the edits goes to the unknown editors.

Thank you Salley for the Manit Tejasswi edits.

Rishab remembered his past painfully.

Flash back....

Rishab and Janki were lovers.

Once they were travelling in a car and on the way they met with an accident.They were severely injured.

Both were got admitted in the hospital.

Dr.Riddhima and Dr.Armaan did their operation.

Riddhima checked their medical reports.

She became dim.

Riddhima:Janki's condition is really critical.

Rishab regained his consciousness and all were happy.

Rishab:Where is Janki?Is she alright?

Riddhima:She is okay.You don't stress.

Rishab:I want to see her.

Riddhima:You can meet her when you are well.

Somehow she convinced him to take rest.

Dr.Riddhima did Janki's surgery again as according to the report she had severe brain injury.

After some days Rishab recovered quite well.

Dr.Riddhima:You have improved a lot Rishab.Congratulations.

Rishab:I don't care about my health Doctor.I want to see Janki.

Riddhima became dull.

Rishab:Atleast now please let me see Janki.

Riddhima:Janki had a severe head injury.So she has slipped into coma.

Rishab screamed:No....

Rishab got discharged from the hospital.

He rang up Janki's mother.But she didn't attend the call.

Rishab:Why is she not picking up my call?

Bani:She won't pick up the call as there is no connection between her and you now.

Rishab:What are you saying dadi?

Bani answered tearfully:The connecting factor Janki is no more beta.

Rishab was shattered.

He cried loudly:Janki....

Everyone felt sad and hugged him to console him.

Present...

Rishab checked what Preeta has typed.

Rishab:So many errors Preeta.

Preeta:I am so sorry Sir.As you know I am not used to typing.When I typed fast I made mistakes.

Rishab:You can't be careless like this Preeta.

Preeta closed her eyes due to embarrassment and difficulty to face him.

Preeta:Sorry Sir.Now onwards I will be more careful.

Rishab:Is there any day you have not made mistakes?

Preeta:Yes sir.. there are days.

Rishab:Oh really?Which days?

Preeta:Sunday and the public holidays when I don't come to office.

Rishab burst into laughter.Preeta too laughed seeing him laugh.

Seeing them laugh together Swastika became jealous.

Swastika thought:Preeta is so lucky to be Rishab's PA.She can spend a lot of time with Rishab.But I can't even see him properly.

Preeta went to a mall.There she was surprised to see Karan doing a dance skit and the crowd watching him perform.Preeta was also impressed by his performance.

The host:Now a lucky person will get a chance to dance with Karan.

All were cheering up.

The host:Let's see on whom the spot light will fall on and gets selected to dance with Karan.

The spotlight fell on Preeta.

Host:Here is the lucky girl.

Preeta couldn't believe that she got selected.

Host:Please come on to the stage.

Preeta walked to the stage.Karan was surprised to see her.

Karan:What a pleasant surprise!Baby doll...you are the lucky one who got the opportunity to dance with me.

Preeta:You are mistaken.You are the lucky one to dance with me.Because I know that I am the best.

Karan murmured:How overconfident!

Preeta:When you dance with me you will understand that you are the one who is overconfident.

Karan:Let's see.

Karan and Preeta started dancing together.

Aaj kal ki ladkiyaan
Kamaal karti hain
Hoy aaj kal ki ladkiyaan
Kamaal karti hain
Kisi ko dil mein rakhti hain
Hey kisi ko dil
Mein rakhti hain
Kisi pe marti hain

Aaj kal ke ladke bhi
Kamaal karte hain
Aaj kal ke ladke bhi
Kamaal karte hain
Dekhke kisi bhi ladki ho hay
Aah bharte hain

Aaj kal ki ladkiyaan
Kamaal karti hain
Aaj kal ke ladke bhi
Kamaal karte hain

Ek to hai ye teekhi lauki
Uspe neem chadhi hay
Uspe neem chadhi
Kad iska chhota hai
Lekin karti baat badi
Mujhe pata hai darta hai
Ye...


(Chal Mere Bhai).

After the dance got over...

Karan:You really surprised me baby doll.

Preeta:I told you that I am the best.

He smiled.

Karan:We both are tired.Why don't we go to the pizza hut and have some hot pizzas.

Preeta:I would love to.But on one demand.

Karan:What's your demand?

Preeta:I am a kanjoos due to poor financial level.So you should pay the bill.

Karan:Such a small demand!I will pay the bill.

Preeta smiled.

Karan and Preeta went to the pizza hut in the mall and enjoyed having pizzas and cool drinks together.

Swastika was uncomfortable with Rishab spending time with Preeta.She walked like a depressed soul.

Rishab noticed that she was completely lost.

He stood infront of her and waved his hand at her.

Rishab:Hello!

Swastika looked at him:Sir!

Rishab:Where are you lost?

Swastika was embarrassed.

Swastika:Nothing like that.

Rishab:You need to go to Dubai for our project.Because you are the best for this project and you only prepared the presentation for it.

Swastika was shocked:What?

Rishab:Don't worry.Lilly,Swati,Ramesh,Hassan are all will be there with you.Any problem to go there?

Swastika thought:I can't live without seeing Rishab.But if I refuse to go,he will have a bad impression about me.So I will go.

Swastika:I will go Sir.

Rishab smiled:Good.

She smiled slightly.

Swastika and others got ready to go to Dubai.

Rishab:I wish you all the best.Take our company to the higher level.

Swastika:Sure Sir.

Rishab smiled.

Swastika:Before going can I take a selfie with you Sir?

Rishab was surprised.

Rishab:Why?

Swastika said in her mind:So that I can look at our photograph whenever I miss you.

Swastika:Then I will feel that you are near me and your presence will inspire me to work harder.

Rishab:Really?Sure.We will take a selfie.

Rishab and Swastika took a selfie together.

Swastika and gang bid good-bye and left for Dubai.

In Dubai...

Swastika smiled looking at her selfie with Rishab. Slowly slowly she slept off.

When she was sleeping,Rishab leaned towards her

and pecked her forehead. Swastika opened her eyes.

Swastika:Rishab!

She found no one.

Swastika blushed.

Swastika:It was such a sweet dream.I wish it was real.

At night....

Rishab saw Preeta still working in the office.Rishab:Preeta...I gave you very less work.But for that you took so many hours and still you have not finished it.

Preeta:I am sorry Sir.Just 5 minutes more.I will finish it now.

Rishab:It's becoming late.You don't go home alone.I will drop you home.

Preeta:Thank you Sir.

Rishab:I will wait outside.You come there.

Preeta:Ok Sir.

Rishab went out of the office.He got an official call and attended it.Preeta came there.Preeta was shocked to see some men approaching Rishab with a huge knife.

Sad that Janki died. Preeta is so funny. Now I remembered my ff love in Goa where Preeta was jealous seeing Swastika and here Swastika is jealous. PreeRan dance was beautiful. Have u written any ff where Rishabh and Swastika are father and daughter? Swastika taking selfie with Rishabh was cute. Her dream was so romantic. Shocking that some men are trying to attack Rishabh. Perfect pics, waiting for next.

In love in Goa was Tejasswi's name Swastika?

I think I have not written any ff where Rishab and Swastika are father daughter.But I wrote 4 ffs where they r a couple.

Thanks a lot.

Originally posted by: salley145

Sad that Janki died. Preeta is so funny. Now I remembered my ff love in Goa where Preeta was jealous seeing Swastika and here Swastika is jealous. PreeRan dance was beautiful. Have u written any ff where Rishabh and Swastika are father and daughter? Swastika taking selfie with Rishabh was cute. Her dream was so romantic. Shocking that some men are trying to attack Rishabh. Perfect pics, waiting for next.

Yes

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