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Surprising that Preeta wanted Shalki have a simple marriage. So if Preeta finds Shaurya unlikely, she will break the marriage. Wow. Shaurya calling her as mother India was funny. Shaurya is very arrogant when he disrespected Mahesh and Rakhi. Shaurya's imagination of Preeta slapping him was hilarious. Glad Shaurya was tamed by his imagination and he obeyed things. Glad that Palki made Shaurya not drink in the house.

Part 5

Preeta advising Shaurya not to eat outside food was nice. Shaurya mindvoice, "I will see how the food tastes.If I don't like it,I will disobey mother India and eat whatever I like from India." is hilarious. Haha. Preeta blackmailing Shaurya that she can do emotional blackmailing on Palki was funny. Poor Shaurya has to fast even though he don't believe in rituals. Karwachauth scene was nice. So Preeta is going to teach Shaurya how to help elders. But Shaurya is disobeying Preeta by driving fast. Shocking that the car hit a tree.

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Pyaar Ka Pehla Vachan...Ghar Jamai(The first vow of love...Resident son-in-law)Part 6

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Shaurya increased the speed of the car purposefully to irritate Preeta.

Preeta:Shaurya.. please stop it.

Shaurya smirked.

But suddenly Shaurya noticed a car coming that way.He could not change the direction of his car fast as the speed was high.But somehow in a second he changed the direction and the car hit the tree.

Shaurya got escaped miraculously. But Preeta got injured terribly.Shaurya's heart broke and he took her to the hospital.

After some time...

Dr.Rajveer informed them:Though the surgery is done,the patient's condition is critical.She is still unconscious.

Karan,Palki,Mahesh and Rakhi were crying.

Shaurya felt upset seeing them cry.

He went out and cried.

Shaurya:Sasumaa had told me not to drive fast.Even after getting warned by her,I drove fast purposefully to irritate her.It's because of me that she is in this condition.If something happens to her I won't be able to forgive myself.

Seeing Shaurya cry,Dr.Rajveer who passed by went near him.

Shaurya looked at him and requested:Please save her life.I can give you anything to save her.

Rajveer:Relax.We are giving her medicines.Pray to God.

Shaurya:If i pray to God,will she be saved?Is there any guarantee that the so called God will save her?

Rajveer:Maybe.You pray.Even the doctors like me pray for the patient's life.

Shaurya thought:I don't believe in God.Because Nidhi mom hasn't taught me to pray to God.But I will try it as my last attempt to save sasumaa's life.

Rajveer:You look very upset.Is she your mother?

Shaurya stared at him.

Shaurya:You think so?

Rajveer:Yes.Seeing your concern for her,I feel that you are her son.

Shaurya was stunned.

Shaurya:I am her son in law.

Rajveer:She is lucky to get such a loving son in law.

Shaurya's heart was touched by his words.

Shaurya went to the temple.

Shaurya:Till now I have not prayed.but now I am praying to you to save my sasumaa.It's because of me that she is in this condition. If you want to punish me,please punish me.But please spare her.

When Shaurya went back to the hospital all seemed to be happy.

Palki:Shaurya...my mom has opened her eyes.She is conscious now.

Shaurya was surprised and happy.

He said in his mind:God heard my prayer.

Shaurya said emotionally:I want to see her.

Palki:Only one person is allowed inside the ICU.Dad is there with mom now.They will shift mom to the room soon.After that we all can see her.

Shaurya nodded.

After Preeta was shifted to the room,they all visited her.

Karan:Preeta...are you alright now?

Preeta:Yes Karan.But I got scared.

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Rajveer:You don't need to be scared Preetaji.You have a loving son in law too to care for you.He admitted you in the hospital...he prayed for you.

Everyone smiled.

Preeta looked at Shaurya:An atheist like you prayed for me?

Shaurya:Thanks to Dr.Rajveer who suggested me to pray for your well being.

Rajveer and Preeta smiled.

Preeta was given the discharge papers.

Preeta was feeling weak to walk.

Karan:I will lift you in my arms and take you to the room Preeta.

Preeta:No Karan. You are already having back pain.So if you carry me your back pain will increase.

Shaurya:I will carry you.

Preeta was surprised.Shaurya picked her up in his arms and walked to her room.

He placed her on the bed.

Preeta:What happened to you Shaurya?You are caring for me.You are praying for me.

Shaurya:I am really sorry.Because of me only you are in this condition.The guilt is killing me.

Preeta:So you genuinely wants me to be alright.That's why you are showing care.You prayed for my health and God heard your prayer too.Are you still a non believer of God?

Shaurya:No.Now I believe in God.I feel ashamed of disrespecting God.

Preeta smiled.

Preeta:So attend the puja regularly.

Shaurya:Sure.Because I want to thank God for saving your life.

Preeta smiled.

Palki was standing on the stool to decorate the walls with flowers for puja.

Suddenly her foot slipped and she was about to fall down.Shaurya ran towards her

and caught her before she touched the floor.The scared Palki embraced Shaurya.

Preeta was watching it.

She thought:I thought Shaurya is not good for my daughter.But he actually cares for my daughter.He really loves her.Shaurya is not as bad as i thought.There is something good about him. Maybe I didn't realize his good side before when he agreed to be a ghar jamai.He agreed for that only because he genuinely loved Palki.Shaurya had many bad habits.But he is changing now.

Shaurya attended the puja like a true devotee.

A few months passed by ...

Shaurya obeys Preeta and he has turned into a well mannered boy now.

Shaurya told Preeta:Today I have an important presentation.Please bless me mummiji.I don't have my mom with you.Now I feel that you are my mother.

Preeta was touched by his words and became happy that he addressed her as mummiji.

She hugged him happily after blessing him.He was very happy.

He thought:I never thought that I would feel that my sasumaa is my mother.

Preeta thought:Dr.Rajveer is right.I got a loving son in law.Now I feel that the first word of love is son in law.

Rakhi:I can't believe that Shaurya changed a lot.He is so sweet to us now.

Karan:It's Preeta's training.

Mahesh:She tamed him well.

They smiled.

Shaurya got a phone call.He was very happy.

He hugged Preeta and Palki happily.

Shaurya:My mom is out of coma.

They became very happy.

Preeta:This is such a nice news.You go and see her.Bring her here soon.

Shaurya smiled:Yes.

Because of Shaurya, Preeta got injured. Now he's heartbroken because there's an unknown connection between them. Dr Rajveer feeling the truth was stunning. Finally Shaurya turned to God to pray. Shaurya helping Preeta to bed by lifting her was emotional. Shaurya saving Palki from the fall like a superhero was amazing. Preeta realizing that Shaurya is not actually bad was nice. Shaurya also feels Preeta is his mother, good to see the bond developing between them. OMG, Nidhi is out of coma, now the truth will be out. Perfect pics, waiting for next.

Nice update. Surprising and sad that Preeta got into a critical condition. Glad that Palki didn't blame Shaurya. Rajveer and Shaurya scene was nice. Praying god was unexpected. Good that Preeta recovered. Shaurya's changed behavior is nice. Good that Preeta is also feeling positive about Shaurya when he saved Palki from being fallen. It was a nice scene. Shaurya calling Preeta as mummy ji.. was nice and surprising/ Wow.. Nidhi has come out of coma.

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