This story has been inspired by the 2002 Malayalam film Nandanam, and was written at the request of Jasminerahul. It is my humble attempt to bring the essence of that story into the world of Gopika and Saksham from "Tera Mera Saath Rahe".
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Chapter 1 (The Footprints of Fate)
The city of Ahmedabad hummed with life under the golden sun, its ancient lanes filled with the scent of incense, the sound of temple bells, and the chatter of shopkeepers. In one modest home on a quieter street lived Gopika — gentle, soft-spoken, and unnoticed by many, but cherished by the few who truly knew her.
Gopika, at thirty, had the innocence of someone untouched by the world’s harshness, even though she endured it daily. She was a slim figure, draped in simple cotton salwar suits, always with a dupatta pinned carefully. Large spectacles perched on her nose, and her hair was neatly braided — she looked as ordinary as any girl you’d pass on the street. But what set her apart was the small, beautifully carved brass Krishna murti she kept with her at all times — not too tiny to go unnoticed, nor too large to carry with ease, but just the right size to cradle in her hands, to confide in, and to seek solace from.
Gopika had lost her parents as a baby. It was her maama, Anand, who took her in — a man of kind heart but weak will. His wife, Ramila, resented Gopika’s very presence, seeing her as an extra mouth to feed. Ramila slowly turned Gopika into a maid in her own home, giving her the bare minimum of care while showering affection and opportunity on her own children — Hiten, who adored Gopika like a sister, and Aashi, the well-educated, polished daughter who mirrored her mother’s ambition.
The Sting of Society
One hot afternoon, Gopika walked back from the temple with a basket of marigolds and tulsi leaves. As she passed the neighborhood women gathered beneath the banyan tree, their voices carried.
“There goes Gopika — thirty years old, and still sitting at home like a burden,” one woman said, her tone sharp.
“Who’ll marry a girl who can’t see a foot in front of her without those thick glasses? And only eighth pass — in this age?” another snickered.
A third laughed. “Maybe she’s waiting for Krishna himself to step down and marry her!”
The group burst into cruel laughter. Gopika lowered her head, her heart heavy, and quickened her steps, tears blurring her already poor vision.
Gopika’s Prayer
That night, after finishing the chores Ramila piled onto her, Gopika knelt in front of her beloved Krishna, the familiar weight of the murti in her hands. The soft light of the diya made the brass glimmer, as if Kanha himself glowed in the darkness.
“Kanha ji,” she whispered, her voice trembling, “I never asked you for riches… or beauty. I just want someone who’ll look at my heart. Someone who’ll hold my hand. Do I not deserve even that much? Have I done something so wrong in some birth?”
A breeze stirred the diya’s flame, the distant temple bells ringing faintly as if in reply.
The Dream
That night, Gopika dreamed.
She stood beneath a grand Gujarati mandap, marigold garlands swaying in the breeze. She was draped in a red Panetar saree, a bandhani odhni over her head, gold jewelry shining against her skin.
Before her stood a tall, handsome groom in a cream sherwani with a rich red patola dupatta, a traditional safa on his head. His eyes were kind yet steady, his smile gentle as he held out his hand.
As she placed her trembling hand in his, peace filled her heart. The sacred fire crackled between them, and the priest’s mantras echoed.
Gopika woke with a start, her heart racing, her cheeks flushed.
The Modis Return
The next morning, a sleek black car turned into Modi Bhavan’s grand gates.
Minal and Keshav Modi — respected jewellery magnates with a name that shone across Gujarat and beyond — stepped out, their faces a picture of quiet dignity. With them came the weight of tradition, wealth, and responsibility.
Keshav spoke as they entered their ancestral home, “Minal, this time we will not leave without finding the right girl for Saksham. He’s devoted to our family and business, but he needs a partner who understands our values.”
Minal nodded thoughtfully. “Yes, someone who can stand beside him. Our Saksham deserves that.”
Their son Saksham Modi was not just their eldest, but also a jeweller of exceptional skill, known for his craftsmanship and business acumen. Their second son, Chirag, and daughter Tejal were settled, but for the Modis, Saksham’s marriage was the pressing concern.
Ramila’s Cunning Game
News of the Modis’ return spread fast. Ramila, ever watchful, set her plan into motion.
She didn’t approach Minal or Keshav directly. Instead, she planted seeds in the right places — a flattering word to a temple trustee who did business with the Modis, a casual remark at the jeweller’s wives’ gathering about her “modern, well-educated daughter Aashi,” and praise slipped to a family friend who often visited Modi Bhavan.
Soon enough, the word reached Minal and Keshav through these channels: Ramila Ben’s daughter is just the kind of girl Saksham needs — modern yet cultured.
Intrigued, Minal said one evening, “Keshav, maybe we should meet this girl. They say she’s well-educated and from a good family.”
Keshav agreed, and within a few days, the Modis themselves arrived at Ramila’s modest home, bearing sweets and good wishes, to formally ask for Aashi’s hand for Saksham.
Ramila greeted them with humble smiles, hiding the triumph in her heart.
The Request
Once the match was agreed upon and the Modis prepared to return briefly to the U.S. to wrap up business, Ramila gushed, already imagining the riches that would come.
“Minal Ben, Keshav Bhai, do visit anytime,” she said, her voice dripping with false warmth.
Minal folded her hands gently. “Actually, we need a small favor, Ramila Ben. Janaki Baa will be all alone in this big house. We won’t be at peace unless someone trustworthy stays with her. Could you spare Aashi for a few weeks?”
Ramila stiffened for a moment — Aashi couldn’t be sent; she needed to maintain her image. Thinking quickly, she smiled sweetly.
“Of course! Aashi has some important work to finish, but Gopika… my niece… she’s like a daughter to me. She’s humble, caring, and will serve Janaki Baa with full heart.”
Minal exchanged a look with Keshav and nodded gratefully. “Thank you, Ramila Ben. That’s very kind.”
Gopika’s Arrival at Modi Bhavan
And so, Gopika found herself at the gates of Modi Bhavan.
Her eyes widened at the grandeur — the white marble, the carved balconies, the lush garden blooming with jasmine and roses. She clutched her Krishna murti close, her heart overwhelmed.
“Kanha ji,” she whispered, “this house… it feels like your temple.”
“Don’t stand here gawking,” Ramila snapped quietly. “Walk straight, and don’t embarrass me.”
As Gopika stepped forward, a servant, rushing out, dropped a thali filled with kumkum and rose petals. The red powder spilled across the marble threshold.
Unaware, Gopika stepped into it. Her bare feet left delicate red prints as she walked inside — marks that no one noticed, no one but the silent, smiling Krishna idol inside Modi Bhavan’s temple.
The breeze stirred, the curtains fluttered, and the temple bells chimed softly. The leela had begun.
The footprints were laid. The house of Modi had received its true daughter, though no one yet knew it.
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To be continued.
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