FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 6/19/2025 Chapter 44 Part2 - Page 2

Jannu dii

You can't stop us from reading it

Lol

Originally posted by: swetiii

Jannu dii

You can't stop us from reading it

Lol

Done editing ... you can read now

Okay. Reading rn. Will comment by noon

Jahnu Dii, this chapter has me speechless!! Just mind-blowing. There’s so much happening in this chapter... I can't even begin to express how much I love the way you’ve crafted each scene.

The thorn in the bag haaayeee Glad his parents didn't ask him more and believed his fib.

And and and Usman knows right? About Jodha & Jalal? Like 100 takka confirm na?

And Jodha and Jalal uff ... beautiful ... teasing, romance, midnight fun You've really nailed their connection.... Jodha twirling around with a penguin, sending him clips ... only you could come up with such an adorable and quirky romance. Haayeee!

The songs and videos you added were spot on! They just fit perfectly I could imagine Jodha doing those ... and Paridhi Dii keeps sharing such reels on Insta .. so it was really easy to imagine hehe

Not commenting on Usman thinking about Aliya , Khans & Divorce! I don't like her Don't mention her name in next chapters if possible

And

And

And

And then the killer revelation !!!!! OMGGG!!!! I did NOT see that coming I sort of guessed it must be Rao after reading last chapter. But then I was like - "Why would she reveal it so easily?"

So it was really surprising .. And yeah it was Shyamkumar Reddy. I knew it.

I’m still processing about the Rao revelation ... This line gave me chills

I have to proceed with killing Jo but only time will tell whose doom is impending – you daughter's or mine!

Poor Jo ... can’t wait to see how it shakes things up for them moving forward.

‘You still game for that good bye hug?’

Ufff Ufff now Mr. Engineer is here for some midnight rendezvous haan I love the little moments you give them...they’re so in sync with each other...The prank, the spank, the teasing I was grinning through it all. It was so them!!! Beautiful...really

Also, Saradhi Ji catching on? Hilarious but clever. Honestly, I couldn’t stop laughing when Saradhi figured it out. It was so unexpected ...Good to know that his reaction was positive I’m kind of loving how everyone else seems to know what's going on b/w Jodha and Jalal

You have this way of making even the side characters shine, and I adore that. Loved Ahmed family time scene too!!!

And what’s this? I thought in this chapter, they’d finally realize how their paths had crossed before Offoo Jahnu Dii you better update next part soon!

Hahaaa Jodha jumping off the tree to meet him

and gosh ... even I hate them 'slimy green ogre'

Love the prank lol Jalal being Jalal.

And this - What will she do if he revealed that he’s an expert ‘foot-service provider’? That he had served random girls on the beach and saved them from their foot problems?!

Where is he taking her?

Imagine Jo's reaction when Jalal casually mentions how his friends saw her videos...

Jahnu Dii, please update the next part soon, okay? You've left us hanging with so much! I get that typing out a whole chapter might take 2 or 3 months, but this is 'Chapter 44 Part 2' we're talking about! So, you get just one month to update

The deadline is July 13...you better update by then

Loved this chapter ... totally ... will re-read till you update next part

Love yaaa

And I noticed how you increased the chapter length by adding songs, okay? ...

update soon.

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

Nahi batayengi... Fir bhi chalo 2 months I can wait

Usse jyada nahi

But waitt...it's Part 2 ... not next chapter ... so yesss .. 13 July!!!

13 July..chapter 44 part 2

Kya hai tum logo ka ? Aye bade 13 july vale.

Me itna wait nahi kar paungi bhai. I'm too curious aur aisa chapter padh ke to aur jyada curious. Di inka mat suno aap agle week hi update kar do please please

Originally posted by: manu_ak

Kya hai tum logo ka ? Aye bade 13 july vale.

Me itna wait nahi kar paungi bhai. I'm too curious aur aisa chapter padh ke to aur jyada curious. Di inka mat suno aap agle week hi update kar do please please

Lol me too

But itna toh jaan gayi hu unko

See she took 3 months to type out 44 Part 1

And she will type out same length chapter ... so it will take 3 months again

1 month bohot kam time diya hai fir bhi

But my god

What a chapter

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

Jahnu Dii, this chapter has me speechless!! Just mind-blowing. There’s so much happening in this chapter... I can't even begin to express how much I love the way you’ve crafted each scene.

>> Thanks Nushkiee.. yeah there is a piece of everything and everyone included... more like pre-climax scenes where everything begins to fall together in place

The thorn in the bag haaayeee Glad his parents didn't ask him more and believed his fib.

And and and Usman knows right? About Jodha & Jalal? Like 100 takka confirm na?

>> 100% confirmation means... his wife had already guessed it, right? And now he sees the shift in his son... he hadn't heard it from the horse's mouth to be 100% pakka but he knows what he knows!

And Jodha and Jalal uff ... beautiful ... teasing, romance, midnight fun You've really nailed their connection.... Jodha twirling around with a penguin, sending him clips ... only you could come up with such an adorable and quirky romance. Haayeee!

>> glad you enjoyed as much as I did while writing their scenes.

The songs and videos you added were spot on! They just fit perfectly I could imagine Jodha doing those ... and Paridhi Dii keeps sharing such reels on Insta .. so it was really easy to imagine hehe

>> yeah all thanks to the Gram.

Not commenting on Usman thinking about Aliya , Khans & Divorce! I don't like her Don't mention her name in next chapters if possible

>> hmm... its improbable for a father to not think of his son's failed marriage. Don't you think so? anyway shouldn't we thank Aliya for bori bistar baandke exiting from Jalal life?

And

And

And

And then the killer revelation !!!!! OMGGG!!!! I did NOT see that coming I sort of guessed it must be Rao after reading last chapter. But then I was like - "Why would she reveal it so easily?"

>> haye haye... you didn't trust me when I mentioned it in last chapter. Not done girl! Gotta trust your author!

So it was really surprising .. And yeah it was Shyamkumar Reddy. I knew it.

I’m still processing about the Rao revelation ... This line gave me chills

I have to proceed with killing Jo but only time will tell whose doom is impending – you daughter's or mine!

Poor Jo ... can’t wait to see how it shakes things up for them moving forward.

>> yeah it will quite staggering experience. Will see when we come to that part!

‘You still game for that good bye hug?’

Ufff Ufff now Mr. Engineer is here for some midnight rendezvous haan I love the little moments you give them...they’re so in sync with each other...The prank, the spank, the teasing I was grinning through it all. It was so them!!! Beautiful...really

>> That's the beauty of initial days of falling in love.. the whole experience is tantalizing on a different level

Also, Saradhi Ji catching on? Hilarious but clever. Honestly, I couldn’t stop laughing when Saradhi figured it out. It was so unexpected ...Good to know that his reaction was positive I’m kind of loving how everyone else seems to know what's going on b/w Jodha and Jalal

>> Same like with Usman... but Saradhi had more insight into Jalal n Jodha's equation than Usman because he witnessed some interactions between them live. Jala's concern for Jodha's life, his reaction to Ramesh's transgression themselves were very telling

You have this way of making even the side characters shine, and I adore that. Loved Ahmed family time scene too!!!

>> Thank you

And what’s this? I thought in this chapter, they’d finally realize how their paths had crossed before Offoo Jahnu Dii you better update next part soon!

Hahaaa Jodha jumping off the tree to meet him

and gosh ... even I hate them 'slimy green ogre'

Love the prank lol Jalal being Jalal.

And this - What will she do if he revealed that he’s an expert ‘foot-service provider’? That he had served random girls on the beach and saved them from their foot problems?!

Where is he taking her?

Imagine Jo's reaction when Jalal casually mentions how his friends saw her videos...

Jahnu Dii, please update the next part soon, okay? You've left us hanging with so much! I get that typing out a whole chapter might take 2 or 3 months, but this is 'Chapter 44 Part 2' we're talking about! So, you get just one month to update

The deadline is July 13...you better update by then

Loved this chapter ... totally ... will re-read till you update next part

Love yaaa

And I noticed how you increased the chapter length by adding songs, okay? ...

update soon.

songs were meant to be there... not just for chapter length. And their first encounter will unfold at its natural course. Hopefully it will make sense when its done. thank you for taking time to share your thoughts Nushkiee. Means a lot. Its these precious few words from readers that keep me pushing.

>> 100% confirmation means... his wife had already guessed it, right? And now he sees the shift in his son... he hadn't heard it from the horse's mouth to be 100% pakka but he knows what he knows!

Yes I got it .. got it

>> hmm... its improbable for a father to not think of his son's failed marriage. Don't you think so? anyway shouldn't we thank Aliya for bori bistar baandke exiting from Jalal life?

Yeah, I'm thankful for that too... but I wasn’t just talking about that. I get that Usman’s thinking makes sense.. but remember in the previous chapter.. during Jo’s midnight activity...the scene with the guard? Jalal said something like 'It must be boundaries set by Aliya'

If I were in Jo’s place.. personally... I wouldn’t really appreciate being reminded of the ex-owner’s rules. Just my opinion.. hehe. I'm secretly jealous of both Jo and Aaliya

>> haye haye... you didn't trust me when I mentioned it in last chapter. Not done girl! Gotta trust your author!

Yup I do trust her highness Jahnavi Sahiba .. but it was a shocker srsly!!!

>> That's the beauty of initial days of falling in love.. the whole experience is tantalizing on a different level

You got some personal tales to share here?

>> songs were meant to be there... not just for chapter length.

Okay okay chalo maaf kiya... but next update should be bada wala .. thik?

>> And their first encounter will unfold at its natural course. Hopefully it will make sense when its done.

Waiting for thattttt dayyyyy

>> thank you for taking time to share your thoughts Nushkiee. Means a lot. Its these precious few words from readers that keep me pushing.

Is it so? Then I'll keep on irritating you more with my requests

When can we expect Part 2 ?????