Beqaraar Dil ~ TalRosh TS | Part 3 (Last) - Pg 9 - Page 9

Mrina, what about part 3? It's been a few days now...

Originally posted by: LadyWhistledown

MRINU DIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII

I LOVED THISSSSSSSSSS

I know... I know... I'm late as usual But, my stupid office trip came in the way, and I haven't been online in a loooooooooong time!

But, now that I'm here, I have a lot to sayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!

Coming to the 2nd Chapter, Roshi yaaaaaarr! Itna attitude!

Talha Pookie kitna koshish kar raha hai bechara!

I love how Talha is dealing with her in this light-hearted, teasing way, and his amusement at her annoyance. Banda knows that she'll come along one day

And I loved the way he uses Baba and Mohid's names unflinchingly to get his wayyyy... smart husband

And Rosh, how long will you lieeee? Kya tum sach mein sirf Baba ke liye yeh sab kar rahe ho

Talha reaction when he sees Rosh in her Walima outfit... Hayeeeeeeee

And Roshi... you know that Talha's complements are real! Ab bano mat! Aur kitna tadpaaoge meri Talha ko Bechara!

But Mrinu Di... the way you've incorporated those subtle inner thoughts Roshi, that she is on her way to acceptance *chef's kiss*

This is such a wonderful piece of writing, but it's toooooooo short

I WANT MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

Love,

Niya

Niyaaaa!

Thank you so much my pyaari. I really had to incorporate Roshi's innrer thoughts for a more complete reading experience. Personally I have started feeling that one person POV feels very incomplete while reading.

I'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed reading it and yes, I know Part 2 was shorter than the first one... but I wasn't sure how to conclude the story so I had to stop where I did.

Last part is coming soon... I am working on it.

Love,

Mrinu di

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

Mrina, what about part 3? It's been a few days now...

Originally posted by: minakrish

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

No sorry baby... I was just asking...

I’m writing. Just the last scene pending.

This is so beautiful Mrina... so deep and raw between Talha and Roshi... a conversation like this should have been in the show as well... not that I am complaining about the last episode and their conversations but this too would have been emoted so well by Ahad and Dananeer...

Look fwd to reading more of your writings and thanks again for tagging me

you are such a good writer love how you wrote teasing talha in first part to him sharing his pain in last part never for a second I thought they were any different from the serial. Keep writing :)

Originally posted by: tulip.johar

This is so beautiful Mrina... so deep and raw between Talha and Roshi... a conversation like this should have been in the show as well... not that I am complaining about the last episode and their conversations but this too would have been emoted so well by Ahad and Dananeer...

Look fwd to reading more of your writings and thanks again for tagging me

Thank you so much Tulip.

I wanted to keep it similar to the show yet do something different. I wanted to make sure Talha confessed his love while talking to her about the accident and Roshi had to probe and push him to get him out of his shell and actually vent out.

I'm so glad you enjoyed reading. Next one shall come soon.

Originally posted by: jenshad

you are such a good writer love how you wrote teasing talha in first part to him sharing his pain in last part never for a second I thought they were any different from the serial. Keep writing :)

Thank you so much Sara. I'm glad you enjoyed reading my work. I wanted to keep the characters true to the show yet put my spin to it. This was a tough one to write but I'm happy it worked out.