Maaneet SS - The Perfect Pair - Epilogue updated 18/11/2024 - Page 9

Originally posted by: dellzcreationz

Chap 2

OMG Nushh, this second read has really got me hooked up for more and Geet and Maan's banter uff Kya kehna...

"Geet, could you not ...." Maan began, but she was already pulling out one of his neatly written notes.

I could literally imagine the amount of frustration he might have had when she did that

thanks to Professor Kapoor's questionable seating arrangement.

Why questionable? perfect seating arrangement, ek hai dheemi local aur ek hai hai toofani mail

Lol I could really imagine her wearing that for the presentation.

Love that Geet Handa ka jaadu Maan Singh Khuranna , the ever so studios guy pe chal raha hai, her over friendly nature, her energy, her vibe, her infectious laughter and smile with her own way being a entertainment package has started to loosen up this man.

Looking forward to read the next ones....

Sorrry jaana for the late comment

Thank you! I was a little unsure if readers would enjoy it since there’s no mystery or dhoom dhamaka...just a simple college love story. I'm really happy to hear that you liked it <3

Originally posted by: dellzcreationz

Chap 3

This is sooo amazing read, Geet sitting with her legs up , I wonder why no librarian ever asked Geet to respect the space of the library by sitting upright.

Loving this chaotic duo as the story progresses how's Geet's bubbly nature is getting into his skin and he is okay with it, even she is out of his comfort zone by making let go, and the way he starts to feel for her haaye ,

Geet teasing him about him liking her was too cute and funny, loved that she said “I know. But you’re stuck with me now. And I’ll make sure you have fun. Trust me.”

Yess she is bringing out his smile, laughter and making him a human, and he liking that she is bringing out that change in him which he thinks he shouldn't be doing but should be for his betterment.

Thank you, Dell <3

and sorry I'm very very busy this month. Tumhara FF padhne ko time nahi mil raha hai. March first week !! I promise you'll see my comments on all remaining chapters by March 1st week

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

Thank you, Dell <3

and sorry I'm very very busy this month. Tumhara FF padhne ko time nahi mil raha hai. March first week !! I promise you'll see my comments on all remaining chapters by March 1st week

joh haal dil ka idhar horaha hai

wahi haal dil ka udhar horaha hai

Today was a really busy day for me , aur abhi just busy updating my other 2 FFs and tomorrow since its a holiday, I have to update In Your Memories (and since its with pics toh wahi to get those and post them with the right dialogue takes time ) and then plus ghar ka saaf safai aur little office ke taam jaam bhi hai but promise you to read the last chap and then epilogue by Saturday and then shall move to the OS.

Part 4

Nushhh this chapter was beyond amazing

First am surprised that this college has in house theatre .

The colleges that I have known and that I have been to we had just traditional theatre and not the cinema wala theatre where you watch a movie and not a show, but I wished I would have been enrolled into such a college where this is there, maza hi aajata

"He could only blame himself for letting Geet worm her way into his life - and, apparently, his social calendar." , this line though, Geet as a friend and a college partner but her friendly and bubbly nature is getting into the best of him.

Finally they are going out of a date, and the confusion between them ki iss rishte ko kya naam doon? is so relatable when 2 people who are friends for a period of time and suddenly go out for a coffee, when one person starts to feel, and the other who has always been outgoing also feels that should she consider this to be a date "Date" or just a normal outing, I could feel that they both want to confess how much they like each other, lekin dusra kya sochega uske darr se they are just like," No, don't take it that sense wala" being guarded, trying to keep a wall sort of so that they don't get hurt.

And for the first time, as they sat together - Geet rambling, Maan listening - he realized that maybe, just maybe , just maybe, this was exactly what he needed. Not a perfect date, but something real. No expectations. No pretenses. Just them.And that, he decided, was more than enough.

This line perfectly summaries what I have taken out of it.

Indeed loved this last chapter....

will soon read the epilogue

Epilogue is absolutely a beautiful ending to this short story, nushh am in love with this story its so heartwarming.

The way Maan agreed first to attend the party, and then he accepted to dance, all because Geet was having an influence in him, he was loosening up in front of Geet, this melody has really tried to break off those walls around Maan the perfect geeky, know it all guy who is very pratical, a man who used to stay away from chaos, as loved the chaos queen her self, loved the way he confessed his feelings for her, yes you are right , no grand gestures , just that knew that there in love with each other but didnt knew how to express, but it was just so perfect, the way she said best of both worlds , indeed they are ..and a complete package deal.

Loved this story Nush

Cant wait to read some other stories by you.

Originally posted by: dellzcreationz

Part 4

Nushhh this chapter was beyond amazing

First am surprised that this college has in house theatre .

The colleges that I have known and that I have been to we had just traditional theatre and not the cinema wala theatre where you watch a movie and not a show, but I wished I would have been enrolled into such a college where this is there, maza hi aajata

"He could only blame himself for letting Geet worm her way into his life - and, apparently, his social calendar." , this line though, Geet as a friend and a college partner but her friendly and bubbly nature is getting into the best of him.

Finally they are going out of a date, and the confusion between them ki iss rishte ko kya naam doon? is so relatable when 2 people who are friends for a period of time and suddenly go out for a coffee, when one person starts to feel, and the other who has always been outgoing also feels that should she consider this to be a date "Date" or just a normal outing, I could feel that they both want to confess how much they like each other, lekin dusra kya sochega uske darr se they are just like," No, don't take it that sense wala" being guarded, trying to keep a wall sort of so that they don't get hurt.

And for the first time, as they sat together - Geet rambling, Maan listening - he realized that maybe, just maybe , just maybe, this was exactly what he needed. Not a perfect date, but something real. No expectations. No pretenses. Just them.And that, he decided, was more than enough.

This line perfectly summaries what I have taken out of it.

Indeed loved this last chapter....

will soon read the epilogue

Originally posted by: dellzcreationz

Epilogue is absolutely a beautiful ending to this short story, nushh am in love with this story its so heartwarming.

The way Maan agreed first to attend the party, and then he accepted to dance, all because Geet was having an influence in him, he was loosening up in front of Geet, this melody has really tried to break off those walls around Maan the perfect geeky, know it all guy who is very pratical, a man who used to stay away from chaos, as loved the chaos queen her self, loved the way he confessed his feelings for her, yes you are right , no grand gestures , just that knew that there in love with each other but didnt knew how to express, but it was just so perfect, the way she said best of both worlds , indeed they are ..and a complete package deal.

Loved this story Nush

Cant wait to read some other stories by you.

Thank you so much for your comment Really really glad you liked it ... grateful for all the love

It's boring, Maan is abusive towards Geet, he is always angry, oh please, and now Geet is pregnant from a brother, how stupid to start off a relation this way, its second main character is SERIOUSLY ABUSIVE, makes me want to vomit. Change the story line QUICKLY, or you will loose interest with you watchers. Ridiculous story line!!!.

Originally posted by: rianalee

It's boring, Maan is abusive towards Geet, he is always angry, oh please, and now Geet is pregnant from a brother, how stupid to start off a relation this way, its second main character is SERIOUSLY ABUSIVE, makes me want to vomit. Change the story line QUICKLY, or you will loose interest with you watchers. Ridiculous story line!!!.

Dear, I guess u have commented on wrong thread.

Mine is a college romance story and none of the line u have mentioned above is written here

Please re check and edit your comment

chapter 1

The crash between a mountain and a tornado. But both has a good attitude about it.

chapter 2

They are so opposite in their personality and outlook. But they still work it out.