$$ poems on my veer : rajat $$....plz c

hey huys these are my poems on my rajat :- plz read fully

hamesha rehta hot and cool
hhf hai jiska school
logon ke dil par chalta hai jiska raj
vo hai mere liye bahut khaas
jiske hai innocent smile
vo basa hai mere dil main like a body tile
his hair is blonde
jispe luta doon millions of pond
acting hai jiska passion
jo rehna chahta hai in the fashion
jo hai as sweet as honey,
golden heart is his money
jisko mil gaya hai itna fame
rajat tokas is his name

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hum par chada aisa deewanapan
ki bhool gaye apnoon ka apnapan
sunnne lage hain dil ki baat
soya nahi jata poorie raat
hawa bhi aajkal gungunane lagi hai
unke baatein sunane lagi hai
barish bhi dete hai mera saath
saale hathoon main haath
phoolon ki kyareyaan bhi haste gaati hain
khushbu main unka aehsaas karati hai
lekar aati hai nayi bahaar........
jinse hai humain itna pyaar{rajat}

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uske smile hai bahut cute
mujhe karta hai vo 100% suit
pehle tha vo indian taj
bacause he was 'bal prithviraj'
apne nainoonse chalata hai vo teer
dharti mata ka hai 'veer'
female fans main hai popular
he is spectacular
to me, he is gold
he is 14 year old
jiska hai apne acting pe focus
vo hai rajat tokas

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hope u like it!
do comment and rate out of 10 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

thanks plz rate out of 10 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Originally posted by: sandy_mudgil

thanks plz rate out of 10 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

9.5 / 10

u shld hav written rajat instead of veer

can u make a poem for me too
on rajat only but wid my name also in it plzzzzz
can u

hey the poem was awesome yarr........ 👏 👏

Originally posted by: sandy_mudgil

k but it will take time

no probs but plz can u pm me dont postit here

and my name is amaal

Originally posted by: tokas 111

no probs but plz can u pm me dont postit here

and my name is amaal

ok amaal

Originally posted by: sandy_mudgil

plz rate it out of 10

well i give you full marks i.e. 10 as only few persons hv d capability to write such wonderful poems....................😊 👏

MInd-blowing!! 👏 👏 👏
vry nice poems!!
full marks....10/10 😃

luvly poems sandy- 9.5 /10 yaar, blonde hair keliye .5 kate. plz dont mind, I luv his blach hair so 😆