FF maj.vaibhavi

hi guys

this is my first FF..so please comment on this.actually this FF was posted already,but it was disappointing only some saw but they gave me good comments.so i would like to continue.those who read this can just scroll down to read the 2nd part.

MAJ .VAI SAYs THAT SHE IS HAPPY TO THAT

EAGLE IS A WOMEN.WHEN GUNNY WALKS HE FINDS A

SHADOW RUNNING AND CAPT.UDAI IS NOT THERE.

NOW I AM GOING TO START MY STORY

WHEN GUNNY GOES TO TELL THIS to VAI .HE DOESN'T

FIND HER.SO HE PRESSES THE ALARM.AFTER THAT

VAI ENTERS IN AN ABNORMAL WAY .SHE TELLS HIM THAT

HE HAS RAN AWAY IN THE JUNGLE AND ORDERS HIM TO

CATCH HIM.THEN, SHE GIVES AN EVIL SMILE LIKE EVERY

VILLAN DOES..BUT GUNNY WAS UNSUCCESSFUL.BUT HE HEARD THAT HE HAD RAN AWAY THRUGH THE BACK GATE NOT TO THE JUNGLE.NOW,HE STARTED TO DOUBT ON MAJ.VAI.AND HE TELLS THIS TO ABHI.

THEN ABHI TELLS HIM TO CHECK HER FILES TO FIND ABT

HER.WHEN THEY BOTH GO TO CHECK HER FILES.THEY

FIND A SHOCKING NEWS!.

TO BE CONTINUED...........

Good starting FF on Major V Sharma . please don t make her Eagle , not even in your FF 😛 thanks and please continue.

thanks for ur reply
continued...
they find in her personal details that she is a twin.and her sister got indulged in a terrorist attack .her name is maj.vaishanavi.then,she was put into jail.but she escaped.this was written in that.they fastly drove the vehicle to the commendo centre.when they
reach there they find maj.vaibhavi is not there at her room. they search her eveyehere but in vain.at last,they find in her room an eagle sign with a letter with it.in the letter it is written that if u want her alive,i need the files abt the eagle operation.i will call and tell u the time and place.a call comes.gunny speaks to her.he says we will be there with the file.when they went there he would see a dark shadow coming but they could not see the face.he gives the file.they return vaibhavi back.when the dark shadow opened the files he didn't find anything.then,gunny,abhi and vaibhavi are now at gun points.now vaibhavi turns and faces the gun towards gunny and abhi

to be continued....

really nice! for a minute i thought is this for real? plz continue soon!

- Sumaiya