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Part 1

As she woke up from the arm chair her back was hurting really badly but she still got up and went inside her room just to find mother sitting there looking at her
"mom u here", she said

"Yeah i wanted to talk to u, about last night" when her mom said about last night her eyes formed tears again, trying to control it

"Mom i don't want to talk about it"

"But i do" said her mom

"Will talk about this later mom, i need to go, or I'm going to get late for high school" saying this she left the bed room

She got her clothes and went in the bathroom to get changed

Her clothes

She came out and went into the dining room, she saw her mom standing there cooking

"Mom i need to go"

"Have breakfast first"

"NO mom i don't want too" she said this with an angry face

"At least listen to me sweetie" her mom tried to explain to her, but there was no change

"I need to go mom" saying this she took an apple from the table and ran out

"Listen to me plzzzzz VANESSA" her mom screamed out

"There's nothing left to listen mom, NOTHING" Vanessa ran out.

Her mom stood there with tears in her eyes.

While all this was going on, a girl is sleeping on bed, her alarm rings, but she throw the alarm on the floor and cover her face with the blanket.

"Ohhhhhhhh my heads spinning" she said while trying to get up

"That what you get for drinking so much last night and partying round" a voice came from outside her room

"MOM" omg she thought how mom came to know about this???

"MUM, how do u know, u know what i did last night?"

"I'm your mother i know about this ASHWARIYA"

"NO mum it's ashly not ASHWARIYA..........."

"Fine fine "ASHLY" her mom said

"That's like a good mom" ashly said

Just then Ashley's eyes fell on the clock, as soon as her eyes looked at the clock her jaw dropped.

"What happened ashly?"

"Mum, PLEASE tell me that, that's not the right time2 pointing at the clock

"Yes ashly that's the right time" her mom replied

"OMG MOM I'M SOO LATE" she screamed

"OMG mum, I'm gonna be sooo dead meat today" ashly said while going through her closet

Taking out her clothes she ran into her bathroom

"This girl will never change" saying this ashly's mother whose name is AVANTIKA

Ashly came out wearing

Ashly's clothes

"Mom please i need to go I'm getting too late" ashly said running down the stairs

"Sweetie at least have some food to eat" Avantika said while getting ashly her shoes at the same time

"Mum, where's dad" ashly said while looking around the house searching for her dad

"Ash, your dads gone out of town" Avantika said looking into her daughters eyes

"When's he going to come home" ashly said really angrily

"Ashwariya, don't be angry sweetie" Avantika tried to calm her down. "His only gone there because his got a business meeting"

"NO mum dad's always like that leaving me and going" ashly said really madly

"But he'll be back Na?"

"NO mum I'm going"

"ASHLY PLZ LISTEN TO ME"

Ashly ran out of the house with tears following from her eyes

We see this girl walking down the street; her hair tied back holding 9 dogs in her hands (well their chains)

"This is getting a little too hard"

Saying this she ran to the dog's owner and gave them their dogs back.

"OMG not again" looking at her watch she ran home as quick as possible

She reached home

"MAMA MAMA MAMA" she shouted as she got in her house

"Yes ridhima I'm in here" ridhima's mom padma shouted from the kitchen

Padma's pic

Riddz ran and gave her mama a big hug from the back

"How r u sweetheart"

"Fine mama"

"OMG mama I'm gonna get sooo late" ridhima ran upstairs and changed her clothes and came downstairs

But then she bumped into her papa

"Good morning papa" hugging her papa

"Good morning riddz" getting out of the hug

"So papa u going for work" riddz said

"Yes sweetheart"

"Ok papa I need to go college" riddz said in a hurry

"Ok bye" riddz dad said.

Shashank pic

Ridhima ran into her room to get change

Shashank came down and gave padma a sweet hug and left

Ridhima's clothes

Tier Frill SkirtGingham Ruffle Corset

"Mama I'm leaving"

"Ok riddz"

Riddz left her house and she took out her phone and called someone

Ashly took her phone out and called someone

Vanessa too out her phone and called someone

Vanessa: ashly, riddz

Ashly: baby V, Riddz

Riddz: ashly, baby V

All said this at the same time,(3 way calling)

Ashly: (laughing)

Riddz: ashly stop laughing now

Ashly: hey baby V, where are u

Vanessa: well just left the house, and u riddz

Riddz: same here

Ashly: ok then, i'll get my car and will meet at "THE BENZ" {CAFE and RESTAURANT}

V and riddz: OK will meet u there

Baby V and riddz walked to the Benz cafe

Riddz and baby v met and they gave each other a sweet hug

Riddz: hey baby V wants wrong

Baby V: nothing riddz

Riddz: hey don't hide anything from me

Vanessa started crying

Riddz: shhhhhhh sit down and tell me what happened

Riddz made Vanessa sit down on the chairs

Just then ashly came

Ashly: hey riddz, Baby V

They both turned around

Riddz and baby V: hey

Ashly: hey baby V what's wrong sweetie

Baby V: nothing guys

Riddz: baby V tell us were your best friends

Baby V: well MOM

Riddz and ashly's head shot right up

Ashly: oh no

Riddz: what did she say?

Baby V: "VET" "VET" "VET"

Ashly: oh no!!!!!!!!!

Baby V: this time she said it sooo clearly

Riddz: hey forget that for now OK

Baby V: ok

Well the talk was going on but then ashly's eyes fell on the watch

Ashly: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Riddz and Vanessa jumped up

Baby V: what happened?

Riddz: and why did u scream?

Ashly: did u guys check the TIME?

Riddz and Vanessa looked at their watch.

Both: OMG

Ashly: were sooooooo late

Riddz: come on

The 3 sweet girls sit in the car and leave for high school

The girls Enter School

Well now u can see a huge school

U can see cheer leaders who are wearing red and white cheerleader uniform (just like in HSM)

Cheerleader uniform

All dancing and singing

Cheerleaders: Wild cats sing along
Yeah, you really got it goin' on
Wild cats in the house
Everybody say it now
Wild cats everywhere
Wave your hands up in the air
That's the way we do it
Let's get to it
Time to show the world

The girls walk in people crowded everywhere

Riddz: omg these people always crowding the place

Baby V: i know

Ashly: come on let's just try to get inside

Baby V: fine

While walking inside every guy was staring at ashly

Riddz: why does everyone have to stare at u?

Ashly: i know, it's so annoying

Baby V: you're so lucky to have guys who look at u

Ashly: (giving Vanessa evils) IT'S NOT FUNNNNNNNNN

Riddz and Vanessa started laughing

Riddz: ok guys will meet at the cafe after are first session

Ashly: so what u guys got first session, ME got art. Which ain't nice?

Riddz: well i have got science

Ashly: what about u Baby V?

Baby V: hmmmmmmmmmm let me check

Vanessa opened her bag and took out her timetable

Riddz: so what have u got WOMEN?

Baby V: Ohhhhhhhh no!!!!!!!!!!!

Ashly: what's wrong?

Baby V: I've got gym aka P.E

Riddz: well good luck

Ashly: bye

Ashly went left

Riddz went right

Vanessa went straight

Ashly was walking up the stairs when she bumped into someone she was sooo close to fall down but she got caught right in time before she fell. She found herself looking into these green hazel eyes. No contacts were made, only their eyes were speaking

Ashly: I'm sooo sorry

He looked into these cat eyes which were sparkling really brightly

Guy: it's OK; i think i saw u somewhere

Ashly: (looked up) yeah I am in your art class

Guy: oh yeah

Ashly: Rith right?

Rith: yeah. Hrithik aka rith

Ashly: it's nice to finalllly talk to u (laughs)

Rith: u too

Ashly: well i need to go art class

Rith: me too

Rith: can we walk together?

Ashly: yes sure

Rith clothes

Ashly and rith walked to class together, ashly really fell heel over him when she first saw him but rith didn't feel anything it was just another girl for him.

While all this was happening to ashly and rith, let's get back to Vanessa

Vanessa was walking down the hallway to gym, but someone stopped her

Mrs Louis: Vanessa could u help me sweetie

Vanessa turned around and saw her dance teacher carrying balls bats all these other stuff

Baby V: omg Mrs.louis do u need help?

Mrs Louis: a lot angel

Vanessa carried the big footballs which covered her face she couldn't see anything, mrs Louis left

Baby V: oh god, how am i supposed to carry all this without seeing anything?

While Vanessa was walking she didn't know that someone was walking towards her and that person was hearing music and looking through his texts that he didn't notice Vanessa

Then a big crash all the balls on the floor, Vanessa face was covered with her hair, so the person couldn't see who it was

Guy: what's wrong with u can't u se where you're going

Vanessa looked up; her face was glowing like angel

Baby V: ohey you're the one who came in my way (shouted)

Guy: hey, how dare u speak to zac like this? (Angrily)

Baby V: i don't care who u are MR Zac or MR gorilla

Zac: how dare u call me a gorilla? (Annoyed)

Baby V: G......O...........R...........I..............L............. .....L..............A (Saying it realllly slowly but annoyingly)

Zac: omg u u u

Baby V: what I yeah go on

Zac: just forget it

Zac left with Vanessa behind

Zac clothes

Baby V: omg what the h**l does this guy think of himself

Vanessa started picking up all the balls

While picking up she cursed zac under her breath

She picked all the balls and went to the gym

When all this stuff was happening to zac and Vanessa let's get a closer look too what riddz has been up too.

She was walking to her science class which was downstairs, well this time destiny was one her side or shall we say luck was there on both their sides, she never knew how her life was gonna change today

She was walking down, when MR perfect was walking up

Riddz: OMG I'm gonna be so late, miss Wilson's gonna kill me

Riddz: I'm gonna have to run to class

Saying this riddz ran down stairs, while MR perfecto was coming up

Riddz ran down and them BOOOM

Riddz: ahhhhhhhhhhhh

Riddz was half way of falling down

Riddz: (to herself) OMG this is gonna be too hurtful

But then she wondered why she didn't hit the ground

Riddz opened her left eye, and she was shocked to see herself staring into 2 light blue eyes

He stood there admiring her face he took note of every single thing even her tiniest spot, she looked like an angel to him, he had seen so many girls in his life and dated tons of girls but he never saw a girl like her before

He slowly brought her up

Riddz was in her own land she had wanted a prince like him for ages

Riddz: I'm sorry (low voice)

Guy: it's ok

Riddz lowered her head, the guy lifted her chin up, and he caressed her cheek as slow as he could. Not letting his sight move from her

Riddz: looked into his lash blue eyes

Guy's clothes

Long sleeve pink stripe shirt

Guy: I'm really sorry

Riddz: it's ok

While riddz was leaving her hair got stuck in that guy's button

Riddz: owwwwwww

The guy stopped and looked back

Guy: is everything ok?

Riddz: ouch it really hurts

The guy tried to take off riddz's hair but because riddz was too far away from him, he couldn't take it out

Guy: (to himself) hmmmmmmmmmm what shall i do

Then he got an idea he took hold of riddz's wrist

Riddz gasped at his touch

He pulled her so close that there was no space between them

Riddz crashed into his muscular chest, he was so strong no one like him in the whole world so hot so fit his like a Greek god (riddz thought).

He slowly looked into her eyes; he tried to talk her hair out but was still staring at her

Guy thought: I heard a saying that "clear as mud" and i always wondered how mud and be so clear because it's not, but for the first time I think mud is much more clear looking into her brown mud looking eyes their so clear, "clear as mud" so shiny and bright

He came out of his thoughts

He got riddz's hair out of his button

Riddz couldn't stand anymore so close to him her knees were getting too week

Riddz ran down not having the guts to look into his eyes anymore

Guy: wow this is stands out

Smiling to himself

Vanessa carried all the balls and went to gym; well there wasn't a pleasant surprise for her

Baby V: oh no not him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Zac: oh great not her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They stood there in utter horror

Ashly and rith got into their art class

Ashly: oh great

Rith: NOT him

MR stack: UR LATEEEEEE

Ashly: sorry sir

Rith: were really sorry sir

Ashly: Oh no I HATE THIS TEACHER {she said to rith}

Rith: same here

Mr Stack: ok have a seat

Rith and ashly took their seats

Mr Stack: ok guys your real teacher miss Lindsey has left school, so i will be your teacher from now on

Ashly: oh no

Mr Stack: Do u have a problem miss ashly?

Ashly: no sir

Well Mr Stack is the worst teacher in the whole school, his too strict

And the bad day for ashly has already started

Riddz ran to her class

Miss Wilson: riddz come in

Riddz was Miss Wilson's best student ever

Miss Wilson: riddz i need to talk to u

Riddz: yes Miss

Miss Wilson took riddz outside her class

Miss Wilson: riddz you're my best student and looking at your results for the test u have passed so i have decided to put u in a higher group

Riddz: OMG really

Miss Wilson: yeah u will now be in Mrs Kira's class

Riddz: that's amazing miss

Miss Wilson: ok then u know where Mrs Kira's room is?

Riddz: yeah i do

Miss Wilson: ok then i'll see u later ok?

Riddz: ok miss bye

Riddz left and she went o her knew class

She knocked on the class door

Mrs Kira: oh wow, u must be riddz right

Riddz: yeah

Mrs Kira: come in

Riddz came in

Mrs Kira: (to riddz) ok riddz could u sit next to ammy plz (pointing to the seat next to ammy)

Riddz walked to ammy's seat, she couldn't see ammy's face because he was talking to one of his friends

Riddz: excuse me excuse me

Ammy turned around and was in for a big shock and so was riddz

They stared at each other with utter shock and astonishment

precap

Ashly looking hot, Vanessa looking sexy and riddz looking too amazing, ammy, zac and rith enter all staring at each other. All dancing to samba music in a place with fire coming out and dragons coming out like a big fiesta.

What will happen to Zac and Vanessa will they ever get along well?
Will ashly fall for rith?
And what has ammy and riddz seen that shocked them?

for this u have to wait and read
Love Story Of 6

😊swansea😊

Edited by swansea - 17 years ago
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swansea updated her ff on dmg forums. here it is
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Part 1

As she woke up from the arm chair her back was hurting really badly but she still got up and went inside her room just to find mother sitting there looking at her
"mom u here", she said
"Yeah i wanted to talk to u, about last night" when her mom said about last night her eyes formed tears again, trying to control it
"Mom i don't want to talk about it"
"But i do" said her mom
"Will talk about this later mom, i need to go, or I'm going to get late for high school" saying this she left the bed room
She got her clothes and went in the bathroom to get changed

Her clothes


She came out and went into the dining room, she saw her mom standing there cooking
"Mom i need to go"
"Have breakfast first"
"NO mom i don't want too" she said this with an angry face
"At least listen to me sweetie" her mom tried to explain to her, but there was no change
"I need to go mom" saying this she took an apple from the table and ran out
"Listen to me plzzzzz VANESSA" her mom screamed out
"There's nothing left to listen mom, NOTHING" Vanessa ran out.
Her mom stood there with tears in her eyes.

While all this was going on, a girl is sleeping on bed, her alarm rings, but she throw the alarm on the floor and cover her face with the blanket.
"Ohhhhhhhh my heads spinning" she said while trying to get up
"That what you get for drinking so much last night and partying round" a voice came from outside her room
"MOM" omg she thought how mom came to know about this???
"MUM, how do u know, u know what i did last night?"
"I'm your mother i know about this ASHWARIYA"
"NO mum it's ashly not ASHWARIYA..........."
"Fine fine "ASHLY" her mom said
"That's like a good mom" ashly said
Just then Ashley's eyes fell on the clock, as soon as her eyes looked at the clock her jaw dropped.
"What happened ashly?"
"Mum, PLEASE tell me that, that's not the right time2 pointing at the clock
"Yes ashly that's the right time" her mom replied
"OMG MOM I'M SOO LATE" she screamed
"OMG mum, I'm gonna be sooo dead meat today" ashly said while going through her closet
Taking out her clothes she ran into her bathroom
"This girl will never change" saying this ashly's mother whose name is AVANTIKA
Ashly came out wearing

Ashly's clothes


"Mom please i need to go I'm getting too late" ashly said running down the stairs
"Sweetie at least have some food to eat" Avantika said while getting ashly her shoes at the same time
"Mum, where's dad" ashly said while looking around the house searching for her dad
"Ash, your dads gone out of town" Avantika said looking into her daughters eyes
"When's he going to come home" ashly said really angrily
"Ashwariya, don't be angry sweetie" Avantika tried to calm her down. "His only gone there because his got a business meeting"
"NO mum dad's always like that leaving me and going" ashly said really madly
"But he'll be back Na?"
"NO mum I'm going"
"ASHLY PLZ LISTEN TO ME"
Ashly ran out of the house with tears following from her eyes

We see this girl walking down the street; her hair tied back holding 9 dogs in her hands (well their chains)
"This is getting a little too hard"
Saying this she ran to the dog's owner and gave them their dogs back.
"OMG not again" looking at her watch she ran home as quick as possible

She reached home
"MAMA MAMA MAMA" she shouted as she got in her house
"Yes ridhima I'm in here" ridhima's mom padma shouted from the kitchen

Padma's pic


Riddz ran and gave her mama a big hug from the back
"How r u sweetheart"
"Fine mama"
"OMG mama I'm gonna get sooo late" ridhima ran upstairs and changed her clothes and came downstairs
But then she bumped into her papa
"Good morning papa" hugging her papa
"Good morning riddz" getting out of the hug
"So papa u going for work" riddz said
"Yes sweetheart"
"Ok papa I need to go college" riddz said in a hurry
"Ok bye" riddz dad said.

Shashank pic


Ridhima ran into her room to get change
Shashank came down and gave padma a sweet hug and left

Ridhima's clothes


"Mama I'm leaving"
"Ok riddz"
Riddz left her house and she took out her phone and called someone

Ashly took her phone out and called someone

Vanessa too out her phone and called someone

Vanessa: ashly, riddz
Ashly: baby V, Riddz
Riddz: ashly, baby V
All said this at the same time,(3 way calling)

Ashly: (laughing)
Riddz: ashly stop laughing now
Ashly: hey baby V, where are u
Vanessa: well just left the house, and u riddz
Riddz: same here
Ashly: ok then, i'll get my car and will meet at "THE BENZ" {CAFE and RESTAURANT}
V and riddz: OK will meet u there

Baby V and riddz walked to the Benz cafe
Riddz and baby v met and they gave each other a sweet hug
Riddz: hey baby V wants wrong
Baby V: nothing riddz
Riddz: hey don't hide anything from me
Vanessa started crying
Riddz: shhhhhhh sit down and tell me what happened
Riddz made Vanessa sit down on the chairs
Just then ashly came
Ashly: hey riddz, Baby V
They both turned around

Riddz and baby V: hey
Ashly: hey baby V what's wrong sweetie
Baby V: nothing guys
Riddz: baby V tell us were your best friends
Baby V: well MOM
Riddz and ashly's head shot right up

Ashly: oh no
Riddz: what did she say?
Baby V: "VET" "VET" "VET"
Ashly: oh no!!!!!!!!!
Baby V: this time she said it sooo clearly
Riddz: hey forget that for now OK
Baby V: ok
Well the talk was going on but then ashly's eyes fell on the watch
Ashly: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Riddz and Vanessa jumped up
Baby V: what happened?
Riddz: and why did u scream?
Ashly: did u guys check the TIME?
Riddz and Vanessa looked at their watch.
Both: OMG
Ashly: were sooooooo late
Riddz: come on

The 3 sweet girls sit in the car and leave for high school
The girls Enter School
Well now u can see a huge school
U can see cheer leaders who are wearing red and white cheerleader uniform (just like in HSM)

Cheerleader uniform

All dancing and singing

Cheerleaders: Wild cats sing along
Yeah, you really got it goin' on
Wild cats in the house
Everybody say it now
Wild cats everywhere
Wave your hands up in the air
That's the way we do it
Let's get to it
Time to show the world

The girls walk in people crowded everywhere
Riddz: omg these people always crowding the place
Baby V: i know
Ashly: come on let's just try to get inside
Baby V: fine
While walking inside every guy was staring at ashly
Riddz: why does everyone have to stare at u?
Ashly: i know, it's so annoying
Baby V: you're so lucky to have guys who look at u
Ashly: (giving Vanessa evils) IT'S NOT FUNNNNNNNNN
Riddz and Vanessa started laughing
Riddz: ok guys will meet at the cafe after are first session
Ashly: so what u guys got first session, ME got art. Which ain't nice?
Riddz: well i have got science
Ashly: what about u Baby V?
Baby V: hmmmmmmmmmm let me check
Vanessa opened her bag and took out her timetable
Riddz: so what have u got WOMEN?
Baby V: Ohhhhhhhh no!!!!!!!!!!!
Ashly: what's wrong?
Baby V: I've got gym aka P.E
Riddz: well good luck
Ashly: bye

Ashly went left
Riddz went right
Vanessa went straight

Ashly was walking up the stairs when she bumped into someone she was sooo close to fall down but she got caught right in time before she fell. She found herself looking into these green hazel eyes. No contacts were made, only their eyes were speaking
Ashly: I'm sooo sorry
He looked into these cat eyes which were sparkling really brightly
Guy: it's OK; i think i saw u somewhere
Ashly: (looked up) yeah I am in your art class
Guy: oh yeah
Ashly: Rith right?
Rith: yeah. Hrithik aka rith
Ashly: it's nice to finalllly talk to u (laughs)
Rith: u too
Ashly: well i need to go art class
Rith: me too
Rith: can we walk together?
Ashly: yes sure

Rith clothes


Ashly and rith walked to class together, ashly really fell heel over him when she first saw him but rith didn't feel anything it was just another girl for him.

While all this was happening to ashly and rith, let's get back to Vanessa
Vanessa was walking down the hallway to gym, but someone stopped her
Mrs Louis: Vanessa could u help me sweetie
Vanessa turned around and saw her dance teacher carrying balls bats all these other stuff
Baby V: omg Mrs.louis do u need help?
Mrs Louis: a lot angel
Vanessa carried the big footballs which covered her face she couldn't see anything, mrs Louis left
Baby V: oh god, how am i supposed to carry all this without seeing anything?
While Vanessa was walking she didn't know that someone was walking towards her and that person was hearing music and looking through his texts that he didn't notice Vanessa
Then a big crash all the balls on the floor, Vanessa face was covered with her hair, so the person couldn't see who it was
Guy: what's wrong with u can't u se where you're going
Vanessa looked up; her face was glowing like angel
Baby V: ohey you're the one who came in my way (shouted)
Guy: hey, how dare u speak to zac like this? (Angrily)
Baby V: i don't care who u are MR Zac or MR gorilla
Zac: how dare u call me a gorilla? (Annoyed)
Baby V: G......O...........R...........I..............L............. .....L..............A (Saying it realllly slowly but annoyingly)
Zac: omg u u u
Baby V: what I yeah go on
Zac: just forget it
Zac left with Vanessa behind

Zac clothes

Baby V: omg what the h**l does this guy think of himself
Vanessa started picking up all the balls
While picking up she cursed zac under her breath
She picked all the balls and went to the gym

When all this stuff was happening to zac and Vanessa let's get a closer look too what riddz has been up too.
She was walking to her science class which was downstairs, well this time destiny was one her side or shall we say luck was there on both their sides, she never knew how her life was gonna change today
She was walking down, when MR perfect was walking up
Riddz: OMG I'm gonna be so late, miss Wilson's gonna kill me
Riddz: I'm gonna have to run to class
Saying this riddz ran down stairs, while MR perfecto was coming up
Riddz ran down and them BOOOM
Riddz: ahhhhhhhhhhhh
Riddz was half way of falling down
Riddz: (to herself) OMG this is gonna be too hurtful
But then she wondered why she didn't hit the ground
Riddz opened her left eye, and she was shocked to see herself staring into 2 light blue eyes
He stood there admiring her face he took note of every single thing even her tiniest spot, she looked like an angel to him, he had seen so many girls in his life and dated tons of girls but he never saw a girl like her before
He slowly brought her up
Riddz was in her own land she had wanted a prince like him for ages
Riddz: I'm sorry (low voice)
Guy: it's ok
Riddz lowered her head, the guy lifted her chin up, and he caressed her cheek as slow as he could. Not letting his sight move from her
Riddz: looked into his lash blue eyes

Guy's clothes


Guy: I'm really sorry
Riddz: it's ok
While riddz was leaving her hair got stuck in that guy's button
Riddz: owwwwwww
The guy stopped and looked back
Guy: is everything ok?
Riddz: ouch it really hurts
The guy tried to take off riddz's hair but because riddz was too far away from him, he couldn't take it out
Guy: (to himself) hmmmmmmmmmm what shall i do
Then he got an idea he took hold of riddz's wrist
Riddz gasped at his touch
He pulled her so close that there was no space between them
Riddz crashed into his muscular chest, he was so strong no one like him in the whole world so hot so fit his like a Greek god (riddz thought).
He slowly looked into her eyes; he tried to talk her hair out but was still staring at her
Guy thought: I heard a saying that "clear as mud" and i always wondered how mud and be so clear because it's not, but for the first time I think mud is much more clear looking into her brown mud looking eyes their so clear, "clear as mud" so shiny and bright
He came out of his thoughts
He got riddz's hair out of his button
Riddz couldn't stand anymore so close to him her knees were getting too week
Riddz ran down not having the guts to look into his eyes anymore
Guy: wow this is stands out
Smiling to himself

Vanessa carried all the balls and went to gym; well there wasn't a pleasant surprise for her
Baby V: oh no not him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Zac: oh great not her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
They stood there in utter horror

Ashly and rith got into their art class
Ashly: oh great
Rith: NOT him
MR stack: UR LATEEEEEE
Ashly: sorry sir
Rith: were really sorry sir
Ashly: Oh no I HATE THIS TEACHER {she said to rith}
Rith: same here
Mr Stack: ok have a seat
Rith and ashly took their seats
Mr Stack: ok guys your real teacher miss Lindsey has left school, so i will be your teacher from now on
Ashly: oh no
Mr Stack: Do u have a problem miss ashly?
Ashly: no sir
Well Mr Stack is the worst teacher in the whole school, his too strict
And the bad day for ashly has already started

Riddz ran to her class
Miss Wilson: riddz come in
Riddz was Miss Wilson's best student ever
Miss Wilson: riddz i need to talk to u
Riddz: yes Miss
Miss Wilson took riddz outside her class
Miss Wilson: riddz you're my best student and looking at your results for the test u have passed so i have decided to put u in a higher group
Riddz: OMG really
Miss Wilson: yeah u will now be in Mrs Kira's class
Riddz: that's amazing miss
Miss Wilson: ok then u know where Mrs Kira's room is?
Riddz: yeah i do
Miss Wilson: ok then i'll see u later ok?
Riddz: ok miss bye
Riddz left and she went o her knew class
She knocked on the class door
Mrs Kira: oh wow, u must be riddz right
Riddz: yeah
Mrs Kira: come in
Riddz came in
Mrs Kira: (to riddz) ok riddz could u sit next to ammy plz (pointing to the seat next to ammy)
Riddz walked to ammy's seat, she couldn't see ammy's face because he was talking to one of his friends
Riddz: excuse me excuse me
Ammy turned around and was in for a big shock and so was riddz
They stared at each other with utter shock and astonishment



precap
Ashly looking hot, Vanessa looking sexy and riddz looking too amazing, ammy, zac and rith enter all staring at each other. All dancing to samba music in a place with fire coming out and dragons coming out like a big fiesta.


What will happen to Zac and Vanessa will they ever get along well?
Will ashly fall for rith?
And what has ammy and riddz seen that shocked them?

for this u have to wait and read
Love Story Of 6

swansea

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woooohhhoooo swansea !! 😃 šŸ˜† šŸ˜† thats my buddy šŸ˜‰ ur story is gr88 !!! im wealy wealy wealy looking forward to ur next installment !!! šŸ‘ i think is sooo funny how V and zac hat eachother šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜† cant wait to see them dance together šŸ˜‰ šŸ˜† šŸ˜† geez im still laughing over the gorilla thing 🤣
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Part 2

Ok guys I'm realllly sorry for not telling u this before i am really sorry but i'll tell u now

Well this is a new semester and every semester your classes are different so that's why these character meet, they don't know each other so well but they finally meet in their new semester classes. Sorry if i confused anyone and QUESTIONS then plzzzzz ask

Ammy turned around and was in for a big shock and so was riddz

They stared at each other with utter shock and astonishment

Ammy and riddz were still in their own land, totally surprised

Mrs Kira: riddz could you plz sit down

Riddz came out of the staring session

Riddz: yes mrs

Riddz sat down next to ammy; both were still in disbelief shock

Mrs Kira: ok students, u guys have to make a project

After hearing the word project everyone moaned

Class: ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Mrs Kira: stop moaning guys

Mrs Kira: where was i, oh yeah, project and you have to get in pairs, the project has to be a part of your body

Mrs Kira: but the good thing is that today is Monday and u have to start this project on Wednesday

All: YES

Mrs Kira: ok so plz pick your partners

Riddz didn't know anyone in her class, ammy moved out of his seat and went to his friends but his eyes were just fixed on riddz

Ammy and his friends were talking but ammy's eyes were just fixed on riddz

One of ammy's friends: hey ammy want to be partner

Ammy was thinking

Ammy: no i have someone else

Saying this ammy left his friends and started walking towards riddz

Riddz: (to herself) why is he walking towards me? What does he want? Why do his eyes sparkle?

Ammy: mmmmm hey can i sit here (pointing at the sit next to her)

Riddz: yes sure

Ammy sat next to riddz

Ammy: sooo do u wants??????

Riddz: want what??????

Ammy: would u be my?????? (Sweating)

Riddz: be yours what???

Ammy: would u be my partner??????????

Riddz was in total shock

Riddz: (to herself) OMG the total hottie of the whole school is asking me to be his partner, OMG what do i say????????????????????????? YES or NO

Ammy: is that a yes or no????????

Riddz: hmmmmmmmmmm

Ammy: ok I'm guessing it's a no (really sad)

Riddz: no, oops i mean yes

Ammy: yes what

Riddz: yes i'll be your partner

Ammy: realllly, well I'm ammy

Riddz: I'm ridhima everyone calls me riddz

Ammy: (to himself) an Indian WOW

After the whole class came to know that ammy and riddz were partner all the girls were totally jealous

Girl: omg if SHE comes to know she'll be really mad

Girl 2: I feel so sorry for riddz

Girl 3: especially when SHE comes back from UK

Riddz was really happy that she was paired with ammy, and ammy was on cloud 9, he never ever saw a girl like riddz in his entire life

Ammy: ok then where shall we start are project

Riddz: how about we meet at the BENZ CAFE and we can start there

Ammy: ok then will meet at the Benz

Ok, let's get back to our ashly and rith

Ashly and rith are sitting together in their art class

Rith: do u know how much i hate this teacher

Ashly: you're not the only one

Mr Stack: STOP TALKING

Ashly got a heart attack

Ashly: OMG he scared the life of him

Girl: not the only one

They both laughed

Mr Stack: STOP LAUGHING

Rith: what's up with this man?

Ashly: he doesn't have a life. That's what's wrong

Ashly and rith started laughing but then they stopped

Rith: ok let's get back to work

Ashly: yeah

Ashly was drowned into rith's eyes

She was thinking of how to start out a conversation

Ashly: sooo how about going to the cinema???????? (She said closing her eyes)

Rith saw her eyes closed and thought that they were gonna be more than good friends

Rith: ummmm sure

Ashly: so tomorrow

Rith: NO (came the answer straight away)

Ashly: WHAT

Rith: i mean not tomorrow how about Wednesday

Ashly: ok Wednesday sounds good

Ashly: (to herself) why did he say NO for tomorrow why the day after????????. Well anyway why do i care I'm just glad his coming to the movies with me

Rith: so what we going to watch

Ashly: how about STEP UP 2

Rith: wow i really wanna watch that movie

Ashly: same here

Rith: yeah and the new soundtrack sounds amazing

Ashly: yeah i love T-pain and flow rida's new song LOW

Rith: yeah it's tooooo good

Ashly: they sound sooo good

Rith: yeah and it's got lots of dancing as well

Ashly: which is better

Rith: yeah so shall i pick u up

Ashly: (oh no mom) no will meet at the BENZ CAFE

Rith: (confused at her behaviour) ok so THE BENZ it is

Ashly: yep (blushing)

Ashly walked out of her sit and went to get some paint but her hand wouldn't reach that high up

Rith: (smiling) wow this girl is something

Rith got up and walked right towards ashly, ashly was sooo busy trying to get the paint that she didn't realise that rith was standing behind her and sooooooo close to her

Rith: shall i help (he said in a shallow voice)

Rith's breath was talking over ashly's body

Rith skimmed his hand upwards to ashly's hand

Ashly: (shaky voice) hmmmmmmmmmm

Rith under trapped ashly's fingers into his and got the paint down

Ashly was blushing like hell

Ashly: (to herself) OMG he was sooo close to me, wow and we go in the movies OMG what's gonna happen then

Rith: U k

Ashly: I'm fine thanks

Rith: thanks for what? (Teasingly)

Ashly: (blushing) for helping me get the paint

Rith: (smirking) it's ok

Ashly left from there she couldn't stand so close to him anymore

Well WOW that was a good start for ashly and rith then now let's go to our hatred people, yap Vanessa and zac

In gym class Vanessa got all the balls in after seeing zac's face her whole day was spoiled

Mrs Louis: Baby V (really loudly)

Vanessa got really embarrassed

Baby V: yes mrs (walking towards her)

Mrs Louis: Vanessa haven't u got GYM now

Baby V: yes Mrs Louis, i just need to get changed

Mrs Louis: ok but come quickly

Vanessa left the gym and went to get changed

Zac was totally mad at her he wanted big time revenge cause he hated her to bits

But for now he just wanted to ignore her

Just then Vanessa came in wearing a white tracksuit

Zac friends were taken back,

Friend 1: wow she is sooo cute man

Zac: what's wrong with u guys?

Friend 2: man, u have to agree that she looks hot

Zac: yeah but???

Friend 1: but what! Look at her

Friend 2: she looks really cute

Zac: wellllllllll

Mrs Louis: ok guys today will be doing obstacles

All: ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Mrs Louis: stop ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhing

All started laughing after hearing ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhing

Everyone started to go around the obstacles; Vanessa was in front of zac, both were really mad at each other, Vanessa was climbing the obstacle to get to the other side but she missed a step and fell right into zac's arms

Baby V: ahhhhhhhhhhhh

Zac: shhhhhhhhhhhhhhh open your eyes MISS

Vanessa opened one of her eye and then the other one

Vanessa was really embarrassed, and that too being in zac's arms

Baby V: I'm sorry

Zac put her down gently

Zac: it's ok

Zac: look can we talk

Vanessa was really confused

Zac: don't worry i won't rape u {laughing}

Vanessa giggled

Baby V: yeah sure

Zac took her to one side of the gym

Both of them were staring into each other's eyes

Both: I'M SORRRY

Both: you sorry why????????????

Vanessa and zac were laughing their heads off

Zac: ummmm so can we start again

Baby V: sure

Zac: so, hi I'm zac

Baby V: hi I'm Vanessa but u can call me baby V

Zac: well it's nice to meet u baby V

Baby V: you too zac

They both shook hands giving it a truce

Well the rest of the day well, ashly, Vanessa and riddz were in the same class in all except from the 3 classes above (art. Science and gym)

But there was one class where ashly Vanessa riddz, rith zac and armaan will be t but they don't know that cause this is the first time in east high school that there is cultural pathway and that's the cultural pathway with id dancing singing music and drama aka acting, all together, but this lesson only comes once a week its either on Thursday or Friday.

Well it was almost the end of the day none of the girls saw the boys.

Ammy, zac and rith are best friends

Outside college

Ammy: hey zac

Zac: hey ammy, where's rith

Just then rith came running

Rith: hey guys

Ammy: so let's go then

Just then the girls came out of the school

Riddz: today's day was a good day (remembering ammy)

Ashly and Vanessa faced riddz

Both: GOOD DAY

Baby V: what's wrong riddz u Hate College remember

Riddz started blushing

Ashly: ohey what'd wrong why u blushing

Riddz: me blushing no way

Well the girls were talking the boys back was facing the girls, which made riddz bump into ammy

Riddz: ahhhhhhhhhhhh

Ammy turned around as quickly as he could

Ammy: gotcha

Armaan caught her by her waist

Rith: u ok

Ashly: hey rith

Rith: hey ashly what's up

Zac: u guys know each other

Ashly: yeah we met today

Ammy: second time today

Baby V: second time for what?

Ammy: i saved her from falling down

Riddz was blushing sooo much, ashly and Vanessa saw it right on her face

Riddz: thanks again

Ammy: no probs

Zac: ammy we need to leave

Rith: yeah come on man

Ammy: ok (to riddz) i'll see u Wednesday

All: Wednesday (except ammy and riddz)

Riddz: ummmm nothing lets go

Baby V: ok

Ashly: bye

Riddz: bye (to ammy)

Ammy: bye

The girls left

Rith and zac: ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Ammy: what

Both: nothinggggg

Ammy: guys break it up

Both: break what up???????????????? (Giggling)

Ammy: ok let's go home

Rith: yeah dad will be wondering where i was

Ammy got sad after hearing this

Ammy: (to himself) i wish my dad and mom were like that

Zac: hey u oks ammy

Zac said interrupting ammy's thoughts

Ammy: nothing lets go

Rith knew exactly what was going on in ammy's mind

Zac went to get his car

Rith: hey ammy u ok

Ammy: rith u know me too well

Ammy gave rith a sweet hug

Rith: hey u always have me

Just then zac came with

Zac: hey guys, if your LOVESSSSSSSS done then can we go

Both: shut up zac

Zac: ok come quickly

They girls reached their homes

Well let's go to Vanessa house first OK

Vanessa's heart was still scared

Questions were racing through her head

"What's my mom gonna say"

Vanessa got into her house it was 4 now

Vanessa: hey mom (shaky voice)

Mom: hey sweety, how was your day

Vanessa was relieved

Vanessa: fine mom, mom I'm really hungry can i have some food

Mom: sure sweety, go get changed and i'll put u some food

Well thank god everything went well in Vanessa's house let's go to riddz's house

Riddz: MAMA

Padma: OMG what's wrong why u scream so much

Riddz was in her room watching T.V

Riddz: i'm hungry

Padma: this girl will never change

Riddz: i know mama

Padma left the room

But riddz was still thinking about armaan

Riddz: why is he so cute?

She remembered how they first met, how he saved her from falling down and how now they were partners for the project

The same thing was going on in armaan's head

He sat there all by himself in his room; his parents were gone out again

His parents never gave time for him

But today instead of thinking of his parents he was thinking about riddz how she smiled in class how she tripped 2 times and how he caught her from falling. And now they were partners.

This made him sooo happy.

Well zac was on his date with his so called GF Tania

Let's see what happens on his date

Zac sat there all board hearing Tania talk and talk for ages

Zac: sooooooo how was your day

Tania: well i woke up at 7 i ate breakfast i went to change i was thinking of wearing red but i wore orange, then i took my care but i was thinking of asking my driver to drive but i felt like driving today then i was gonna miss a turn but i didn't but then Shania called we talked about the party we had and what will be doing today (and Tania went on and on talking)

Zac: (to himself) great why am i stuck with her

Zac: ummmm i'll be back

But Tania was still talking and talking more like blabbering

Zac slowly sneaked out of the restaurant and drove back home

Zac: OMG this girl is gonna kill me

Well for rith everything was going well he was sitting with his family having lunch or dinner

Hmmm so let's see what ashly's up to

Ashly sat there waiting for her dad to come; finally it was 7 she waited for 3 hours

Ashly ran and hugged him

Ashly: dad i missed u

Dad: same here dear

Dad: come here i need to tell u something

Ashly: yes dad what's wrong

Dad: sweety

Ashly's mum came too

Dad: sweety, well i'm really sorry

Ashly: for what dad

Dad: for leaving u these days

Ashly: it's ok dad

Dad: it's not sweety. So i have a small gift for u

Ashly's dad gave ashly a 3 slips

Ashly: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhh (screaming in joy)

Ashly: u mean it dad

Dad: yeah why not

Ashly: wow 3 slips, so baby V and riddz and come 2

Dad: yeah

Ashly: thanks dad

She hugged him

Mum: u happy now

Ashly: really happy

Well its night and all our 6 sweeties had a sweet sleep

In the morning hulchul as usual as the girls houses

And they all met at the Benz cafe

Riddz: come on let's go

Baby V: why are us o excited????

Baby V: wait i know why

Both: ammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmy

Riddz: guys' plzzzzz (blushing)

Both: ohey hoye

Riddz: stop it

Ashly: ok let's go

The girls didn't see the boys the whole day but the boys saw the girls

But never said anything

Zac didn't feel anything towards Vanessa and neither did rith for ashly

But armaan wanted to speak to riddz and so did riddz but they stopped themselves cause if they meet each other then they won't be able to stop themselves from going into their la la land

The day got over really quickly it was just a plain day, riddz missed science today, well not exactly science but ammy aka armaan

THE END OF THE DAY

The girls were in ashly's car

Ashly: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhh (screamed)

She put the break, the girls jumped up

Riddz and Vanessa: WHATS WRONG WOMEN

Ashly: OMG i forgot to tell u this

She gave them the slips

Both: OMG

Riddz: who gave it to u?

Ashly: my dad

Baby V: omg that's so cool

Riddz: this is the hottest carnival in town

Ashly: yeah and its tonight

Baby V: oh no mom

Ashly: don't worry i got that sort out

Riddz: how's that

Ashly: i told my dad to call both your parents and tell them about this and they allowed u two to come

Riddz and baby V: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Man: shhhhhhhhhhhhhhh no screaming on the road

Ashly: and who is he, the no screaming police

The girls laughed

Ashly: so what time shall we leave?

Riddz: how about 8pm

Baby V: yeah 8 sound ok

Ashly: ok i'll pick u guys at 8

The girls got home they started going through their wardrobes

They got their perfect clothes (will show the pic later of the clothes)

Ashly first picked up Vanessa

Ashly: omg Vanessa u look amazing

Baby V: so do u

Ashly: OK let's go pick up riddz

Baby V: yap sure

Then they went to pick up riddz

Riddz: omg u look beautiful

Ashly: NO way u look breathtaking

Riddz: thanks

Riddz: baby V u look totally hot

Baby V: sooo do u

They got to the carnival

(All kinds of carnival pic)

Riddz: omg it sooo beautiful

Ashly: sooo agree

Baby V: omg

Riddz: what's wrong?

The girls turned around at the same time the boys turned around

All: OMGGGGGGGGG

The girls and boys stood there in shock.

Riddz and armaan checked out each other

girls clothing.

ashly clothes

Sequin V Ra Ra Skirt Broken Glass Corset

vanessa clothes

Distressed Bleach Denim PelmetSeamless Boobtube

riddz clothes

Precap

They stood there in shock

He took hold of her hand, he kissed her neck, she turned around he pulled her back and he pulled her hair down, she moaned in sweet pain, he kissed her centre of her neck.

She danced along with him to the fast music; all were having e time of their lives

Well first who is this SHE?

What does gonna happen?

What's going on in the precap?

Will they all be with each other forever?

For this u have to wait and read
Love Story of 6

and i'm realllllllly sorry for the late update
and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz comment bad or goood i don't mind at alll

😊swansea😊

Edited by swansea - 17 years ago
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šŸ‘ šŸ‘ omg it was great. its soo interesting i loved it. cant wait to noe who the 2 ppl were. plzz continue soon
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hey u r truely a good writer...u should publish ur stories n then wait n watch the whole world will love 2 read ur stories😊

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