Soul Mates - ArShi OS

Wow Stuti really well written and intriguing story..The twist at the end made it even more interesting..Loved your style of writing..How Khushi feels a mysterious,magnetic pull towards the unknown man..Their banter was fun too! The OS is just so creative and good! I really enjoyed reading it.

Beautiful Cover by Titli!💖

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Well done partner, you nailed it, ASR as a ghost is lit Loved our ghostly conversations

Thank you for the tag

Originally posted by: --Priyaa--

Wow Stuti really well written and intriguing story..The twist at the end made it even more interesting..Loved your style of writing..How Khushi feels a mysterious,magnetic pull towards the unknown man..Their banter was fun too! The OS is just so creative and good! I really enjoyed reading it.

Beautiful Cover by Titli!💖

Thank you so much for the flattering comment. It's my first time writing an OS too . The twist was the only thing planned from the beginning... the rest was all just written to reach that point . I'm glad you liked their banter... I wrote out their first meeting and realized it was already over the given word limit ... which is why the other scenes had fewer dialogs progressively and more of silent communication . But I think it worked out well in building the mystery... so all's well that ends well (except for Khushi maybe ).

Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

Thank you so much for the flattering comment. It's my first time writing an OS too . The twist was the only thing planned from the beginning... the rest was all just written to reach that point . I'm glad you liked their banter... I wrote out their first meeting and realized it was already over the given word limit ... which is why the other scenes had fewer dialogs progressively and more of silent communication . But I think it worked out well in building the mystery... so all's well that ends well (except for Khushi maybe ).

Wow great to know it's your first time writing an OS too! For a first time writer you have written wonderfully! I liked the way you kept the whole mysterious vibe..I loved the twist that definitely made the OS more fun..Felt like a movie..🥰😄

Originally posted by: x.titli.x

Well done partner, you nailed it, ASR as a ghost is lit Loved our ghostly conversations

Thank you for the tag

Haha... I can see why you chose ASR to be the ghost... you seem to be surrounded by these otherworldly beings (including your boss ). I look forward to more ghostly conversations in the middle of the night (and perhaps even more team-ups 🤞🏼)

Originally posted by: --Priyaa--

Wow great to know it's your first time writing an OS too! For a first time writer you have written wonderfully! I liked the way you kept the whole mysterious vibe..I loved the twist that definitely made the OS more fun..Felt like a movie..🥰😄

I meant first time writing an OS... not first time for writing in general . I've co-written an FF before but the concept wasn't mine... I was merely helping the author continue it when they didn't have time... so I wrote according to their guidelines. Of course, this was a completely different experience .

I'm very verbose (as must be evident by my comments ) so writing something short is more difficult for me. I honestly spent more time editing this OS (to bring it within the word limit) than writing it originally .

Originally posted by: ssttuuttii

I meant first time writing an OS... not first time for writing in general . I've co-written an FF before but the concept wasn't mine... I was merely helping the author continue it when they didn't have time... so I wrote according to their guidelines. Of course, this was a completely different experience .

I'm very verbose (as must be evident by my comments ) so writing something short is more difficult for me. I honestly spent more time editing this OS (to bring it within the word limit) than writing it originally .

I can relate to this..My OS was way longer till I edited it.. I spent more time shortening and editing it too to fit it to the word limit..Yeah writing the OS was a new and fun experience for me too..😄🥰

I am a bit slow on catching up with the contest stories. Please bear with me. I will read the remaining stories and post my comments soon.

Cheers..