Originally posted by: tgota92
The writing is definitely Mustafa biased. You see his arc building and a darker turn coming. The catalyst for this turning point - him being called a thief in his own house - was given to him by the writer.
Sharjeena is just kind of there, providing support for HIM and being there for HIM. So yes this criticism absolutely makes sense to me. I love them together but Sharjeena doesnât have an arc as such. Sheâs been pretty consistent throughout whereas itâs Mustafa whoâs underdone the most change. Itâs actually drastic change that you see happening.
Parts of writing really do annoy me. Farhat Ishtiaq is definitely more logical than most writers but by no means is she flawless or writing a balanced story here. Itâs only the Sharjeena Mustafa bond thatâs balanced and fresh with the performers doing it justice and beyond. Baki there are definitely issues in the story. Sharjeenaâs character, Adeelâs arc, the marriage premise, Sharjeenaâs annoying dad. These could have been better written