FF: Arzu Ki Rahein-(Update pg. 150)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys,

Many of you know me from my last FF. I promised that I would start another one soon, but as u can see it took me sometime😆. I don't know if u guys will like this one as much as u liked the last one (those who did read it😳) but here I go anyway writing for the people who requested me to start another one😳. I will be using the same names as I did in the last FF but characters will be changed. The two changes that I think are worth mentioning before hand are that chinu will be vidya's brother and vidya's dad's character will also be included in this FF.

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Vidya and her family are at the city airport waiting to collect their luggage. Vidya's parents look at chinu and vidya who are standing next to each other and tell them that they should collect the luggage and than come out meanwhile they will go and look for the family that is picking them up. As soon as their parents leave chinu and vidya both start giving each other angry looks.

Vidya: I don't want to be here either ok so stop giving me angry looks

Chinu: But you did open your big mouth and ask for going on a stupid family vocation!!!!

Vidya: I didn't know dad was going to bring us to India' I thought we would go to Paris, Italy, or Milan.

Chinu rolls his eyes and says 'Milan IS in Italy you stupid it's not two different countries'

Vidya hearing that looks embarrassed but too proud to admit it and says 'whatever!!! U know geography is not my subject'

Chinu laughs and says 'neither is Math or Science or History or...' he is about to go on when vidya interrupts him and says 'look my bag is here, help me take it off of that thing'

Chinu: it's your bag u pick it up

Vidya: but it's very heavy I can't lift it come on help out your sister here

Chinu: no u ruined my summer I don't know how long dad is going to make us stay here and God knows why he brought us here

Vidya gives up and goes and tries to pick up the bag but she is struggling as chinu just stands there and watches until he sees a boy about vidya's age going up to her. The boy goes and stands next to vidya and says 'excuse me miss do you need help' Vidya smiles and is about to say yes when chinu comes from behind and says to the guy 'no she doesn't need help'tum phooto yahan say' vidya looks at the guy leaving and than sees chinu picking up her bag. Chinu after picking up the bag looks at vidya and says 'look vidya u are very good at persuading our parents or should I say fooling them'so u do something that we end up leaving soon from here'

Vidya: oh so u need my help now?

Chinu: Come on I just bought my own place back home'and I seriously don't want to be here.

Vidya smiles as she says 'don't worry chinu my brain has already started thinking of plans trust me we won't be here for more than a week'

The next scene is between Vidya's parents. They are still waiting for the family that is picking them up. Vidya's mom looks at vidya's dad and says 'I think we should have told vidya'

Vidya's dad: tum janti ho agar hum vidya ko bata detay kay we are bringing her here to get her married than she would have never come

Vidya's mom: par jhooth bol kay kya' or abhi uss ki umer hi kya hai

Vidya dad: tum uss ki side mat lo janti ho tum woh kitni shararti aur ziddi hai'ussey aik aisey ladkey ki zaroorat hai jo ussey sidha karey

Vidya's mom: toh bighari bhi toh aap nay hi hai

Vidya's dad sees the people that are picking them up and says 'ab bas karo lo woh log ah gai' Vidya's parents greet the two people who just came (parents of the boy that they are planning on getting vidya married to) Vidya's dad hugs the guy and says 'arrey khanna sahib aap nay toh bahut intezar karya' they start talking as vidya's mom looks at the Mrs. Khanna and smiles. Chinu is coming with most of their bags while vidya has her two bags and is far behind chinu. Chinu sees his parents and than overhears Mr. Khanna say 'hamari honay wali bahu kahan hai' Chinu looks shocked and than hears his dad say 'oh vidya, abhi aati ho gi' Chinu laughs to himself as he figures out the whole thing and than looks behind him to see vidya and than looks upfront again and says 'oh these poor people!!! Vidya in ki band bajane wali hai'

Edited by Arooj_007 - 16 years ago

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rainydays. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing ff. vidya's character makes me laugh 😆
plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OOOHH!! i was a big fan of your old FF as well....i love your style of writing...im sure im gonna love this one as much as the other....loved the introduction...amazing!! 😃

P.S: Won't be able to comment when you update coz of exams but i will still be reading them 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awesomee start.. 👏 i really like it.. please continue soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oooh yay. 😃 I'm soo glad you finally started another FF. 😳 I promised to be one of your first readers, so here I am. 😛 I gotta run right now, but I'll be back with my comments veryy soon! 😃

Edit:
Wow! That was a wonderful start. 👏 Chinu and Vidya's fighting was cute. 😳😆 And poor Vidya... I wonder if Chinu will tell her about her shaadi being arranged? 😆

I really loved it 👏 Please continue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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omG i was a total fan of ur other FF[tumharey Naam] and trust me i read it in one whole day all 155 pages of it!! NAD I definetly know UR guna ROCK dis FF also!!!
PLZ CONT SOON<3
BTW: im Tahmina or u can call me TamZ either one<3
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hahhahah vidya and chinu are sooo funny....typical bro and sis 😛
cant wait to see what Vidya is going to do 😆
btw love ur beginning 😊
plez continue soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wowwww...i'm soo happy that you have started a new FF, that i cant even express it in wordssss 😛..your other FF was the first one i read in IF and belive me i read the whole thing in one nigth..stayed up until 3 am to finish it..and it was worth it 😳 .. OKK back to this FF, AWSOMEEEEEEEEEE start.. cant wait for the next update..
PLSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS CONT SOON
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Posted: 17 years ago
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loved your other fic and I already think this one has had a great start! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG U!!! ur starting a new ff i am soo excited to read!! AHH u gt update soon lmao omg plz tell me she's getting married to sagar..its gona be jokes..as usual ur intro was amazing!!!! totally loving it...plz update soon=)) i am so glad u started a new ff!!

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