Vote For The Best Eid Story!!!

Assalam-o-alikum,

Well thinking what happened to all those stories and to those warnings??

Lets solve the First problem: STORIES!!

They are here:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pakistani-serials/128658/eid-contest-entries-no-comments

You are the Judge!

Read all the stories, and without thinking of the writer, cast your vote in this thread. Each person can only vote for ONE Story.

While judging, keep all your friendships and all your dushmans at one side. And vote for originality and creativity.

ONCE YOU HAVE POSTED YOUR VOTE, YOU CANNOT EDIT THAT POST TO CHANGE THE VOTE. ONCE ITS THERE. ITS FINAL!

I HOPE I CAN TRUST YOU ALL!

Voting ends on Friday 25th 2005!!

Now the second thing: WARNING!!!

Well, woh kuch bhi nahian tha. I actually got angry at the responses I got in the avatar contest, which is still pending, and then this Eid story. So I posted a warning. I was seriously going to raise warnings, but then, I thought NAAAAA, its ok.

So this time, you all are saved, but next time, I might not change, or you don't give me any chance to post a warning.

So anyways, Stories of seven people are in your Hands!!

May the Best Story Wins!!!

Regards,

PSF's Development Group.

All the stories are really nice.

But since I have to pick one, I will vote for Amreen's Eid story. It was very detailed and well-written (took time to read 😆). It was funny too, had some comedy and overall was a sweet and consistent story. My fav part was:

[quote]Jab mei saivyaan le kar aayi to wo living room mei ammi ke saath beitha tha, aur maine darte huye jab bowl aagay kia to mere haath ko dekh kar muskoraya aur kaha ke dekhein aapke mehndi ka rang to mere bazu par bhi charr gaya, mai apni strict ammi ka reaction dekhne jab palti, to bohat zoor ki bell ki awaaz aayi aur mei apne khwab se jaag gayi!![/quote]

The ending was surprising too. I guess everyone daydreams in class.

Again, gr8 stories everyone! I enjoyed reading them all.

WOW, Sonya, I am surprised to see you here!!

keep visiting! 😊

finally, i finished reading all stories. everyone wrote so beautifully👏. urdu is a beautiful zabaan and i understand every word of it. i can speak urdu too.

now i am in a tough position. to vote for just one is very difficult. but i know i have to so...........

my vote goes to amreen. because i loved reading the entire story in urdu. it was so romantic. i actually picturised sharmayi huyi amreen's henna palms and farhan's smile😳😳

i also want to mention that my eyes were moist when i read these lines written by farhana 'haye meray Allah kahan gaya mera bachpan aur meray maikay ka aangan jub na koee fikar thee na pareshani'. beautiful lines.

i don't know if you guys have heard jagjit singh's 'kaagaz ki kashti'. it goes like this

i think members from PSF shouldn't be allowed to vote, ppl from other forums should do coz i cant choose 1 story, all are good and well written (except mine, its just rubbish) 😃
plz Saba. Plzzzzzzzzzzzz 😳

hahha aji dont say tht urs was gud as well and u were the 1st 1 2 submit it...u encouraged us all

yea i dont think PSF pplz shud vote

see Saba everyone agrees with me

No guys, you have to vote.

No excuses.

im really confused which 1 2 choose
there all soooo good
can i hve sme help plzzz!!!

All the stories were awesome but since we have to choose one i'll choose Amreen's story 😊 ..