What would you like me to do?

Don't worry this is not a traumatizing post! Muz me himmat hi nahi hai!! I can never match Leena's imagination.

Dekho Runak sorry Jhand couple already barbad ho chuke hai... but unfortunately I started writing an FF using these manhoos characters. I wanted to show character development in them without changing their core traits. But I am thinking of ignoring this common "tharakpan" trait in these two and basing it on this one shot I wrote for that night and how it ends for the purpose of my FF...

The confession night: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jhanak/5356986/the-confession-night

As we are already traumatized by this new development, I think that is the best thing to do! But I wanted to hear thoughts from the readers on this. If you really want me to address this , then I shall try my best...

Originally posted by: vira76

Don't worry this is not a traumatizing post! Muz me himmat hi nahi hai!! I can never match Leena's imagination.

Dekho Runak sorry Jhand couple already barbad ho chuke hai... but unfortunately I started writing an FF using these manhoos characters. I wanted to show character development in them without changing their core traits. But I am thinking of ignoring this common "tharakpan" trait in these two and basing it on this one shot I wrote for that night and how it ends for the purpose of my FF...

The confession night: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jhanak/5356986/the-confession-night

As we are already traumatized by this new development, I think that is the best thing to do! But I wanted to hear thoughts from the readers on this. If you really want me to address this , then I shall try my best...

First of all, I like your DP. Very apt for the real lead of the show.

Secondly, do you really want to do an aftermath scene for this? Isse aise hi ache rehne do. Sometimes writing more makes it less memorable. Jaise Leena mata ne story mein kiya. I Like your OS as is.

Your DP is sooo apt for the upcoming scenario .....we are going to get that a lot.......

And is it about your os...??

It was a beautiful os ..I loved it...

I want you to keep it as it was....it was complete in its own way..... beautifully.. sometimes too much afterthought makes things less memorable...

Just my opinion

If it is in your FF where you want them to address that night and talk about it and acknowledge how beautiful it was to them emotionally ..then go ahead..I would love to read...I want confession...and every phase of their relationship in that ff

Originally posted by: vira76

Don't worry this is not a traumatizing post! Muz me himmat hi nahi hai!! I can never match Leena's imagination.

Dekho Runak sorry Jhand couple already barbad ho chuke hai... but unfortunately I started writing an FF using these manhoos characters. I wanted to show character development in them without changing their core traits. But I am thinking of ignoring this common "tharakpan" trait in these two and basing it on this one shot I wrote for that night and how it ends for the purpose of my FF...

The confession night: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/jhanak/5356986/the-confession-night

As we are already traumatized by this new development, I think that is the best thing to do! But I wanted to hear thoughts from the readers on this. If you really want me to address this , then I shall try my best...

Vira, Please continue and lets get atleast confession through....and their after confrontation , breakdown, i need to see all this in your writing .

And DP is superb 🥰😍

At least in the alternate universe lets enjoy their proper union and confession. Please continue.

This is for my FF … but I guess you are right Leena ko usaki karane do! 😒 the devil ki amma

Originally posted by: Anusha16

First of all, I like your DP. Very apt for the real lead of the show.

Secondly, do you really want to do an aftermath scene for this? Isse aise hi ache rehne do. Sometimes writing more makes it less memorable. Jaise Leena mata ne story mein kiya. I Like your OS as is.

Originally posted by: vira76

This is for my FF … but I guess you are right Leena ko usaki karane do! 😒 the devil ki amma

If it is for your FF then please continue